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This ability increases several times once Michael is covered in blood, where over 30% of his body has blood on it. Those three abilities increase to nearly ten times the normal level of a Demon his level.


Stepping in here quick, iv'e been hearing complaints about a power issue with this character and decided to take a look.

This line here, as well as some others in the application state that you double, triple and generally exceed demons of your own level. That means, no matter what tier we give you, you can perform 10x better, 50x better than that or whatever those numbers mean. So no, your not working on the level of a 2-2 demon, but one surpassing the tier we gave you. That, I cannot allow.

Revise those abilities and remove the defining numbers. Instead of saying 'I become 10x stronger' merely state 'I become stronger' otherwise you have created an overpowered character and I will have to override this approval and deny the application. I hope you can understand where I am coming from with this.

Apologies for an inconvenience caused.

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|Za Koa's Influence|

For example, an advanced Za Koa Skill user at two tier is capable of spreading this technique across an average battlefield in order to taint the surrounding vicinity around them in order to gain the upper hand in combat. These advantages include that all of their stats are typically doubled if the influence is not sealed away or fought with magic. So, going back to our two tier demon, he would be able to obtain a doubled increased in his abilities, powers, speed, endurance, reaction time, mental thinking, knowledge and so on and so forth. Users whom are Master in this skill can usually get triple benefits, and Grand Masters quadruple.

Along with those enhancement boosters, another advantage of Za Koa's Influence is that it can also alter the area around a demon in order to give them the upper hand. For example, our two tier demon will be able to dim the area around him into darkness in order to make himself even more formidable as demon's are naturally inclined to become more useful in the shadow's, being able to generate various toxins in the air in order to gradually wear someone down, create harsh acid rains, for the terrain they are on, turn an ocean-type battlefield into pure fire and things of this nature.


Firstly, here's another example where you state your power doubles. Very dangerous word: 'doubled. It means your no longer at 2 tier level as you state. Same as before, please fix this to a fair level.

Secondly, I do not agree with your example in the second paragraph. I'm fine with being able to change the area around you with power, but setting water on fire sounds a little daft, especially for your level.