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Sun Dec 23, 2012 10:27 pm
Only thing I see wrong is this and this.
A mile? And getting LARGER? Come on dude, that's too much for a little girl like this. I'd say a tenth of mile, IF THAT.
Fire Manipulation
Um... Do you mean she can manipulate fire? How well does she manipulate it? Is this an incomplete ability? Describe it in some actual content please.
Flame Shower
Another ability that Sigmund has gained via her Vollstandig is Flame Shower. Now, this ability is quite simple to a certain point. By placing her hands together, the flame inside Sigmund's closed hands begins to build greater and greater, eventually becoming to powerful for her own hands to contain. Releasing this fire from her hands, it begins to travel upward at high speeds into the sky. Doing so, clouds begin to form throughout a mile radius of the released point of the fire. Once the clouds have finally formed, rain begins to drizzle downward. This ability is a progression ability meaning that as the posts increase, this power becomes stronger when activated. This ability is activated until Sigmund either ends it or she can no longer say in Vollstandig. At it's most powerful, the winds act as a gale and causes all the "rain" to move at high speeds around the area it resides in, the fire becoming stronger and stronger as the posts pass by.
A mile? And getting LARGER? Come on dude, that's too much for a little girl like this. I'd say a tenth of mile, IF THAT.
Fire Manipulation
Um... Do you mean she can manipulate fire? How well does she manipulate it? Is this an incomplete ability? Describe it in some actual content please.
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