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Sun Dec 23, 2012 4:41 pm

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes: I have a few problems with the powers, so I'll state what I want changed below.

True Eradicator: The trump card attack wheres he lights a spark of energy on his index finger. Once enough energy is gathered, this spark may grow to the size of a small dark blue moon and is thrown towards the target. Typically, this attack is used to destroy many buildings or a small city or as a last-ditch effort to severly wound an opponent. When it hits something it almost like an big and massive explosion but it can be destroyed if it blasted in right in the center depending enemy's attack power or by a much stronger energy attack. However this can be charged into a much stronger attack which is called 100% True Eradicator which takes 3 posts to charge and the user must completely still when gathering energy for the attack. If the user is attacked the attack is no more which he have to do it all over again. The 100% True Eraidcator is made when he places his hands forward as he forms a sphere of pure white energy that has another dark blue sphere inside it that turns black in the center and has silver electricity flowing around it. If he charges the attack for a few seconds, it seems to take on a decagon shape, but most commonly looks like a circle. Once he fires it, it leaves a shot black trail of energy behind before it hits the target, very easily causing a medium but large nuke-sized explosion

With the tier of Sid, and the circumstances, he just can't use this type of ability. I'd like it removed, or have it dumbed down due to it's insane power.

Gauntlet Striking Power: When using these cyber gloves for punching, Xathis's striking power is increased by 50% percent. Because the cyber metal rings kinda lock the iramasha fingers allow enemies to feel his punches effectively with deadly pain.

Again, this is one of those "wut" abilities you have. I don't understand how this works when it's just a gauntlet that is attached to Sid's hand. It shouldn't effect his power unless there are some type of enhancements, which aren't present. Scrap this.

Cyber Weapons System Augmentation: A system within his body which actually upgrade his weapon attacks to a much higher level which almost acts like the affinity for hell. The cybernetics within him, Sid can potentially increase his power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, he can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread he's in. But, in addition to that, the robotics augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said cyber iramasha; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

I feel the same way with this one as I did the Eradicator one. It just doesn't seem to fit his power level at the moment, so dumb it down or scrap it.

Tier:3-5



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Sid Iramasha [APPROVED, 3-1] Empty Re: Sid Iramasha [APPROVED, 3-1]

Sun Dec 23, 2012 5:07 pm
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Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Tier: 3-5

Approved, and again, REMOVE

Cyber Weapons System Augmentation: A system within his body which actually upgrade his weapon attacks to a much higher level which almost acts like the affinity for hell. The cybernetics within him, Sid can potentially increase his power by five times just by having it around them. In some instances, in fact, he can even rise one tier level if enough consumes them for the duration of the thread he's in. But, in addition to that, the robotics augments not only their power abilities but the inherent and magical abilities of said cyber iramasha; giving improved versions of their abilities or completely new ones altogether.

Just for now.



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Sat Sep 13, 2014 8:25 am
Moving this to archives since there's an updated & approved version of 'dis app.
https://www.platinumhearts.net/t10005-sid-iramasha-sid-67-approved-1-3


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