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Hidden's app
Fri Sep 03, 2010 11:28 am
Name:Tabarah
Age: 99 ( 10 at the time of his transmutation, appears to be 16 )
Gender:Male
Personality: Quincy: Tabarah is the kind of person where you first meet you think " wow, hes an ass" but when you get to know him he opens up to you more about his life and feelings about stuff which is unusual for an alchemist to do. when Tabarah makes friends he wants them to try out some of his W.O.P stuff ( Work In Progress Stuff ) and if they like what he has he"ll make the original complete and put it on his shelf's and then make one for his friends. he also hates when people tell him what to do.
Null: since Tabarah mvoed out of the quincies his personality changed so now hes Real nice to his friends and everyone, even if hes in the middle of an important potion.
Appearance:
Null Tool/Weapon:
these are what he used to handle dangerous and harmfull chemicals, like acid.
Chalk -each color chalk represents each element.
Red- Fire
Blue- Water
Green-Nature
Brown - Rock
Black- Darkness
Yellow- Air
White- Holy
Orange - Ancient art of Blood.
this is his signature weapon and tool it is a left glove( my character is a lefty), he uses this for everything alchemy-related, this glove is called the glove of berserkers, since he found it on the ground next to some chainmail on a dead berserker.
Tabarah also has a silver blob where it can transform into anything, depending on if its combat,enchanting, etc.
Purity Level of Reiatsu:Pure
Quincy/Null tools:1 Seele Shneider, 1 Black Monolight, 1 Black heart,2 Silver tubes, 1 Prism, 1 flask, Chalk
leaves,water,fire,lightning,stone.blood.
he uses this to handle the tools.
Alchemy:
Alchemy:
he can use all the basic enchants
Brennender Stahl: A basic enchantment, the luqidified Reiatsu is used on a weapon made out of metal, or even bullets in a magazine by skilled users. Scorching hot flames engful the weapon, and a unskilled user can even burn himself. Though if used with care, the Null can withstand his own flames without taking damage.
Härtende Schicht: The first technique that is able to be used in permanent enchantments, this hardens the weapon up to a new level. Swords become sharper and harder to break, Quincy Weapons can withstand more energy before breaking, same to the weapons of a Null themselves. Without completely Pure class Reiatsu, however, the technique will run out eventually.
Zitteraal-Schicht: This coating of Reiatsu gives the weapon or object a shocking surprise. Giving of a constant current of electricity, this can be quite nasty, since it can cause numbness or even nerval damage in living things. This technique requires more control and is very difficult to be used to enchant something permanently.
Own enchants -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Flame burst - Flames come out of the gloves towards the enemy ( goes as long as 12 inches) the flame can burn your enemy to death .
Sand Burst - Sand comes out of the glove at the enemy, this can be used so when you use sand burst it can blind the enemy leaving you open to attack.
Wind Blast - power full wind comes out of the glove at the enemy picking him/her up and throwing him afar, useful so you can hide or run away from the enemy.
Nature enchant- the wepaon is covered in Powerfull Poison Thorns, each attack may have a 20% chance of injecting poison into the enemy.
Upgrade- This technique reshapes objects to something higher class, while they still have the enchants , etc on them.
Skill Levels:only edit these after your tier was given!
Enchantment:
Transmutation:
Potion Creation:
Null Weapon/Tool Usage:
Quincy Tool Usage:
History/Background:
Tabarh was born without parents, in a Place Where Quincy's rule over all type of population, Tabarah didn't like being a Quincy because it was boring, he really enjoyed Magic/Alchemy, he enjoyed magic/alchemy so much he read books and learned about it day in and day out. Tabarah was ranked high, in the top 5 of Quincie's , Tabarah thought " if i don't like it might as well be the best" Tabarah had a Different, Complex kind of thinking then anyone else, Tabarah often spends his time as a Quincy hanging out with his friends , but since hes a left handed Quincy people told him to use his right hand , careless of the way Tabarah fires the arrow, they did not want him to break the Norm, it would pose a negative effect to the people around him. He starte to Develop a Cold personality and started hating when people told him what to do. Later, Tabarah and his friends decided to "Escape" the Quincy life, since they all hated it, so they made an escape route to get out , the escape route had worked!, Tabarah and his friends finally escaped the horrible life of The "Quincy". 10 years later the Plague of transmutation had started, Tabarah liked to be a Null., so he caught the plague and became a Null.
Tabarah is Now a NULL.
3 years later, Tabarah and his friends wandered aimlessly, and finally they found the Null School. It is a School far far away from the Quincy corporartion , which they hate, the null school is a highly advance null school where alchemy is highy advanced than any other in the world. Tabarah and his friends got greeted to their Dorms and assighned their home room. Also Tabarah and his friends gave the Null Master , Chase their Quincy ranks and information , and there ranks got cleared from Quincy , but transferred to the Null School's as a Null. Since Tabarah was in the Top 5 , (so where his friends) they got the nicest rooms in the whole School, Tabarah has been given a Schedule of what he needs to do. Since this is an all alhcemy school you have the choice to just sit in your dorms ( top 5 only since they work the hardest ). So regular people have to sit in class and learn important alchemy that the top 5 has , but since Tabarah read books day in and day out about Magic/alchemy he gets to stay in his Dorm. thta means his friends need to learn since they didn't read all about magic/alchemy like tabarah did. Since Tabarah escaped form the Quincies his Personlaity changed , so now hes Real nice to his friends and everyone, even if hes in the middle of an important potion. 10 years later Tabarah and his friends learned all that they can from the Null school , so they graduated, Now Tabarah and his friends Set out on different Journeys all together, Tabarah, decides to go places and fight lots of people in tournament, and his friends will find other friends to continue their journey.
Age: 99 ( 10 at the time of his transmutation, appears to be 16 )
Gender:Male
Personality: Quincy: Tabarah is the kind of person where you first meet you think " wow, hes an ass" but when you get to know him he opens up to you more about his life and feelings about stuff which is unusual for an alchemist to do. when Tabarah makes friends he wants them to try out some of his W.O.P stuff ( Work In Progress Stuff ) and if they like what he has he"ll make the original complete and put it on his shelf's and then make one for his friends. he also hates when people tell him what to do.
Null: since Tabarah mvoed out of the quincies his personality changed so now hes Real nice to his friends and everyone, even if hes in the middle of an important potion.
Appearance:
Null Tool/Weapon:
these are what he used to handle dangerous and harmfull chemicals, like acid.
Chalk -each color chalk represents each element.
Red- Fire
Blue- Water
Green-Nature
Brown - Rock
Black- Darkness
Yellow- Air
White- Holy
Orange - Ancient art of Blood.
this is his signature weapon and tool it is a left glove( my character is a lefty), he uses this for everything alchemy-related, this glove is called the glove of berserkers, since he found it on the ground next to some chainmail on a dead berserker.
Tabarah also has a silver blob where it can transform into anything, depending on if its combat,enchanting, etc.
Purity Level of Reiatsu:Pure
Quincy/Null tools:1 Seele Shneider, 1 Black Monolight, 1 Black heart,2 Silver tubes, 1 Prism, 1 flask, Chalk
leaves,water,fire,lightning,stone.blood.
he uses this to handle the tools.
Alchemy:
Alchemy:
he can use all the basic enchants
Brennender Stahl: A basic enchantment, the luqidified Reiatsu is used on a weapon made out of metal, or even bullets in a magazine by skilled users. Scorching hot flames engful the weapon, and a unskilled user can even burn himself. Though if used with care, the Null can withstand his own flames without taking damage.
Härtende Schicht: The first technique that is able to be used in permanent enchantments, this hardens the weapon up to a new level. Swords become sharper and harder to break, Quincy Weapons can withstand more energy before breaking, same to the weapons of a Null themselves. Without completely Pure class Reiatsu, however, the technique will run out eventually.
Zitteraal-Schicht: This coating of Reiatsu gives the weapon or object a shocking surprise. Giving of a constant current of electricity, this can be quite nasty, since it can cause numbness or even nerval damage in living things. This technique requires more control and is very difficult to be used to enchant something permanently.
Own enchants -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Flame burst - Flames come out of the gloves towards the enemy ( goes as long as 12 inches) the flame can burn your enemy to death .
Sand Burst - Sand comes out of the glove at the enemy, this can be used so when you use sand burst it can blind the enemy leaving you open to attack.
Wind Blast - power full wind comes out of the glove at the enemy picking him/her up and throwing him afar, useful so you can hide or run away from the enemy.
Nature enchant- the wepaon is covered in Powerfull Poison Thorns, each attack may have a 20% chance of injecting poison into the enemy.
Upgrade- This technique reshapes objects to something higher class, while they still have the enchants , etc on them.
Skill Levels:only edit these after your tier was given!
Enchantment:
Transmutation:
Potion Creation:
Null Weapon/Tool Usage:
Quincy Tool Usage:
History/Background:
Tabarh was born without parents, in a Place Where Quincy's rule over all type of population, Tabarah didn't like being a Quincy because it was boring, he really enjoyed Magic/Alchemy, he enjoyed magic/alchemy so much he read books and learned about it day in and day out. Tabarah was ranked high, in the top 5 of Quincie's , Tabarah thought " if i don't like it might as well be the best" Tabarah had a Different, Complex kind of thinking then anyone else, Tabarah often spends his time as a Quincy hanging out with his friends , but since hes a left handed Quincy people told him to use his right hand , careless of the way Tabarah fires the arrow, they did not want him to break the Norm, it would pose a negative effect to the people around him. He starte to Develop a Cold personality and started hating when people told him what to do. Later, Tabarah and his friends decided to "Escape" the Quincy life, since they all hated it, so they made an escape route to get out , the escape route had worked!, Tabarah and his friends finally escaped the horrible life of The "Quincy". 10 years later the Plague of transmutation had started, Tabarah liked to be a Null., so he caught the plague and became a Null.
Tabarah is Now a NULL.
3 years later, Tabarah and his friends wandered aimlessly, and finally they found the Null School. It is a School far far away from the Quincy corporartion , which they hate, the null school is a highly advance null school where alchemy is highy advanced than any other in the world. Tabarah and his friends got greeted to their Dorms and assighned their home room. Also Tabarah and his friends gave the Null Master , Chase their Quincy ranks and information , and there ranks got cleared from Quincy , but transferred to the Null School's as a Null. Since Tabarah was in the Top 5 , (so where his friends) they got the nicest rooms in the whole School, Tabarah has been given a Schedule of what he needs to do. Since this is an all alhcemy school you have the choice to just sit in your dorms ( top 5 only since they work the hardest ). So regular people have to sit in class and learn important alchemy that the top 5 has , but since Tabarah read books day in and day out about Magic/alchemy he gets to stay in his Dorm. thta means his friends need to learn since they didn't read all about magic/alchemy like tabarah did. Since Tabarah escaped form the Quincies his Personlaity changed , so now hes Real nice to his friends and everyone, even if hes in the middle of an important potion. 10 years later Tabarah and his friends learned all that they can from the Null school , so they graduated, Now Tabarah and his friends Set out on different Journeys all together, Tabarah, decides to go places and fight lots of people in tournament, and his friends will find other friends to continue their journey.
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Re: Hidden's app
Fri Sep 03, 2010 1:29 pm
I do not like what I see...
Lets go over what's wrong, shall we?
1. You put LITTLE effort in making your app, ESPECIALLY at describing the attacks/ tools.
2. How the hell han you handle dangerous materials with freaking steel gloves, Those AREN'T made for Alchemy, but for COMBAT.
3.Your character has a similar age to Gernard. (Guessing you use chalk to draw up elemental attacks.) the elemental chalk is based off the idea of Gernard's glove. He's a LEFTY like Gernard. He has a freaking PRISM like Gernard. His history is similar to Gernard's... Lets cut to the chase.
EVERY BIT AND ASPECT OF THIS CHARACTER WAS RIPPED OF FROM GERNARD!!!
Well what do you have to say about that? hmmmmmm?
You better redo this app now or I'm going to send this to the denied applications...
Lets go over what's wrong, shall we?
1. You put LITTLE effort in making your app, ESPECIALLY at describing the attacks/ tools.
2. How the hell han you handle dangerous materials with freaking steel gloves, Those AREN'T made for Alchemy, but for COMBAT.
3.Your character has a similar age to Gernard. (Guessing you use chalk to draw up elemental attacks.) the elemental chalk is based off the idea of Gernard's glove. He's a LEFTY like Gernard. He has a freaking PRISM like Gernard. His history is similar to Gernard's... Lets cut to the chase.
EVERY BIT AND ASPECT OF THIS CHARACTER WAS RIPPED OF FROM GERNARD!!!
Well what do you have to say about that? hmmmmmm?
You better redo this app now or I'm going to send this to the denied applications...
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Re: Hidden's app
Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:29 pm
wtf is genard? anyway i made this app i didn't steal from shit
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Re: Hidden's app
Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:17 pm
Look right herehere
If you read the ENTIRE thing, you will see that you ripped off from my character. Not only that, but you didn't even FIT the requirements for personality (2 Paragraphs) and history (4 paragraphs).
REDO THIS APP. I'm giving you three days...
If you read the ENTIRE thing, you will see that you ripped off from my character. Not only that, but you didn't even FIT the requirements for personality (2 Paragraphs) and history (4 paragraphs).
REDO THIS APP. I'm giving you three days...
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Re: Hidden's app
Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:25 pm
i didnt rip off i didnt know anything about tht app and also idk y im banned from chat.
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Re: Hidden's app
Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:47 pm
Your time is running out...
Edit: Sept. 7,
ok. DENIED
And good riddence...
Edit: Sept. 7,
ok. DENIED
And good riddence...
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Re: Hidden's app
Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:43 pm
memories... Back when Gernard was my main
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