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Kakeru
Kakeru
Nise no Eiyū
ZX's OTM
Joined : 2012-05-31
Posts : 1343
Age : 33
Location : Kagatsuchi

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Platinum Points:
Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Left_bar_bleue8700/99999Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Empty_bar_bleue  (8700/99999)
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Thu Dec 27, 2012 5:46 pm
The Ultimate Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination:Advanced.
  • Mental Deduction: Master.
  • Pain Endurance: Adept.
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: I still feel like the 300 yards is a bit much, but... as long as it's only can be used 2 times, and I want to make sure that people check this. Also, I'm re-reading through the abilities, Just want to know before I move this, is there a cool down between the times of opening and closing. Answer that then I'll move this or ask for more revisions.
Tier: 1-3.


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Kakeru
Kakeru
Nise no Eiyū
ZX's OTM
Joined : 2012-05-31
Posts : 1343
Age : 33
Location : Kagatsuchi

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Left_bar_bleue8700/99999Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Empty_bar_bleue  (8700/99999)
Tiers:

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Sat Dec 29, 2012 7:06 pm
Last thing I want a limit on how many times per thread each Spore can be used, and a cool between switching spore types. Sorry I know these are really good skills, so I feel like they need to have a break between you spamming these.


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Kakeru
Kakeru
Nise no Eiyū
ZX's OTM
Joined : 2012-05-31
Posts : 1343
Age : 33
Location : Kagatsuchi

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Left_bar_bleue8700/99999Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Empty_bar_bleue  (8700/99999)
Tiers:

Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.] Empty Re: Arietta, Moonlight Lady- [3-1: Vizard.]

Mon Dec 31, 2012 1:47 pm
The Ultimate Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination:Advanced.
  • Mental Deduction: Adept.
  • Pain Endurance: Adept.
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: I still reserve the right to deny if I see funny business. Although I feel it's better, any other mod can come in and deny as well if they see funny business.
Tier: 1-3.


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