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Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Wed Nov 28, 2012 11:59 am
• Name: Argharna Phellan
• True Age: 5,366
• Appearance Age: 8
• Gender: Male
• Orientation: He serves under the Cero Espada, For they are the only family of that he can recall.
• Appearance: He has short, wavy blue hair that covers his eyes. He wears a green hair pin with a blossom to keep it out of his eyes, but it doesn't like to stay very well. He stands at about 4'7", and weigh about 80 pounds. He wears a long, black robe (that barely fits), and black, 20 cm. sneakers.
• Bone Appearance: The skull, on the top-left of his head, shows his hollow heritage. It's in the broken-shape of a jackal.
• Hollow Hole: His hole is in the center of his chest, the center of his being.
• Reiatsu Colour: His reiatsu colour is bluish green.
Personality: Talkative, Anxious, Playful, Joyful, Inappropriate, Admissible, Outgoing, Cruel, Childish, Obnoxious, and All-Around Overbearing.
He is really bubbly and anxious to start the day. He needs to find some excitement to calm himself. Whether its messing with the espada, playing with the hollows or find a nice soul-reaper to kill. Fun is fun. You could easily find him putting a bunch of hollows in the meeting room just to see the other espadas' faces, then running away as not to get in trouble. He even killed one of them because they would not play with him. It was very messy, it took almost a month just to clean it up.
• History: He was only eight-years-old when he died. He had been battling with cancer for most of his life and hadn't gotten to do most of the things other kids did. His big brother played with him most of the time, but it was easy to see he wanted to be with his friends instead. He knew he was a real burden on his family, so he tried his best to die as fast as he could to ease their suffering.
When he died, It felt horrible,and sadly relieving, to leave his family, it was for the best, or, at least, that was what he told himself. This hollow that had found him said It was the right thing. But soon after, the boy found that all he wanted was his soul. He had tried to run from him as long as could, it had been six months, but he had finally trapped the boy spirit, and devoured his soul.
five thousand years later, he had grown stronger, found that hollow and destroyed him for what he did. It had been so long since his death, that he had completely forgotten his life and believed he had always been this way. He soon felt he had no purpose anymore and wished to die, but only by his own hands. So, reaching for his mask, broke it off and became the Arrancar he is today.
• Sealed Zanpakutô: It is actually a pair of Twin Daggers. with a red and black hilt. They represent pain and suffering, together, they are an apect of death. Talia, representing Pain, and Alana, representing Suffering, are the names of Argharna's Zanpakutō. they are childish, like argharna, but Talia is more talkative and upbeat, whereas Alana is more depressing and silent. They still find themselves alongside another one of Argharna's pranks,though. In resureccion they become the fearful Craa and Pee'an, Hatred and Demise.
• Racial Abilities: Cero is a highly powerful and relatively swift energy blast that can be fired from various body parts, such as mouth, tongue, hand or fingers. Only Menos, Arrancar, and Vizard have so far been shown to use Cero attacks, and it appears that stronger entities can use it more efficiently and forcefully. Cero also requires some time to be used effectively, so the enemy must be either not moving or busy with something else, or too badly wounded to even simply dodge it, with the exception of a few Cero techniques and users. Additionally, there exists quite a number of variations of Cero, which are usually unique to the Arrancar using it.
Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat", Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Hollows and Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo.
High-Speed Regeneration is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs. Only Menos-class Hollows have demonstrated this ability. Ulquiorra states that most Arrancar gave up Regeneration for far greater strength. Argharna kept this ability and it is enhanced by his previous ability in rearranging his reiatsu.
Hollow Shot is a blast that some Hollows have been seen using, it appears to be comprised of reishi.
• Unique Abilities: Argharna can manipulate his own reiatsu as well as the energy around him. He can reorganize it anywhere in his body up to 80 percent to supercharge specific limbs, anymore and he could potentially kill himself. Focusing most of it in his legs and he can run at the speed of sound. Focusing it through his arms and each swing becomes a deadly blow, causing death to a low-level runt and severe damage to a high-rank Shinigami. If he needs to, he can spread it through his body so it can become like heavy armor, boosting his defense.
• Resereccion Name: craa and pee'an, formerly Talia and Alana
• Resereccion Release Phrase: In all life, there is Pain; Yet in death the Suffering does not end! Crape'anlion!
• Release Actions: Argharna takes his daggers and places them side by side. Then concentrates the reiatsu within himself and his Zanpakutō and combines them together to become one long, double-sided great-sword.
• Resereccion Appearance: Two daggers become one in resureccion, they become a double-edged sword. one side is blood red and the other is as black as night. At first glance, it looks cartoony and childish, but the ones who are on the other end of this sword soon regret dropping their guard.
• Resereccion Abilities: The blood red side controls how much pain Argharna takes in as well as how much his opponent receives. The black side absorbs his opponents energy and feeds it to its master. He can then use that energy to boost his own power as well. Feeding off the enemy is so tasty,especially a nice soul-reaper.
Red Side: As He slashes and the pain is shared between them, the more slashes that hit the opponent, The more damage they take, and is the same amount of damage he takes in the battle. It's a very sadistic way to watch the person suffer, although he gets to feel the share of their pain in the match so he knows how dangerous the pain that he's causing and what to do to help him make this even more painful. This can be represented by this scale.
Damage Scale:
[1 Hit minor damage.]
[2 Hits Starts to cause more than shrug off damage.]
[3 Hits Medium Amount of Damage.]
[4 Hits Severe Damage.]
[5 Hits, Possibly paralyzing Damage]
[6 HIts Very Damaging to possibly death dealing damage]
Black Side: As more damage is dealt to the attacker the more it can heal from the red side dealing damage. This is represented by this scale, when it heals him though the healing doesn't reprocate on to the attacker being this is how he takes pleasure in killing his opponent, and feeling his pain then the joy of being able to bear it, and laugh in their faces as they beg for death.
Healing Scale:
[1 Hit minor scrapes and cuts damage.]
[2 Hits Deep Lacerations, or near severed limb pain..]
[3 Hits Medium Amount of Damage.]
[4 Hits Severed Limb Damage]
[5 Hits, Possibly paralyzing Damage]
[6 Hits death dealing damage]
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• RP Sample: Argharna wanders the desert of hueco muendo in search of his next play-mate. He spots a giant bull hollow, how wonderful of a game this will be. Running towards the hollow, he trips on his robe, alerting the unknowing player of Argharna's first move. Stampeding towards him, the boy releases a powerful cero blast obliterating the bull hollow. Saddened by such an easy game, Argharna sets off to find someone else to play with.
As he wanders through Hueco Muendo, he ponders his place in this world. Is this his destiny? To serve the Espada and kill thier enemies. What was his life like before all of this? For Argharna had forgotten all about his life before becoming a hollow and then an arrancar. He had even forgotten his name. He had been Argharna Phellan for so long he couldn't comprehend being anyone else.
As he stared into the ceiling of hueco muendo, he'd heard a voice calling to him. He couldn't remember this Arrancar's name, but he recognized him as being number before he actually saw it. This arrancar had been looking for him. Apparently there was a meeting being held and he needed to be present. Those meetings were always so boring Argharna could not bear them, but he did as he was told and went back.
As the meeting was going on, Argharna zoned in and out. He never particularly cared for any of these meetings as they tended to be about the Soul Society, or Invading the Human World in order to establish power and domination. He never cared for the details, he just wanted to start the action already. He heard phrases like "We shall send in numbers 8 and 4 first," or "We can't wait any longer, we must go now," and Argharna sat up and was ready to go. But they would turn to and scold him for acting like a child. He hated being called a child, but he always listened to them for they knew what was best.
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Wed Nov 28, 2012 12:35 pm
Note, You can not have skills filled out till you are approved by staff and given a tier. also no first person stuff in app.
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Thu Dec 06, 2012 3:53 pm
Moving to WIP!
Looks incomplete and stuff! So moving this, just post when you're done!
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Thu Dec 06, 2012 10:22 pm
I'm done
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Fri Dec 07, 2012 9:02 am
I'd say this is a bit far from completion...Anyway.
Err a Few Issues, one you need a way longer RP Sample or in general everything needs to be explained with more words, and more detail.. At least 2-3 Paragraphs long. And you need to remove all forms of First Person as in I, me My Etc. Then you skills with your Ress.. Needs some more description and maybe how much damage it can heal and such. You need to really do this app much farther than you have, but if you need help just ask someone okay?
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Thu Dec 13, 2012 8:52 pm
how is this, I tried to explain in more detail how he's childish.
Then I'm not sure if his ability to drain 5 points of energy for every 30 seconds is reasonable or OP
Then I'm not sure if his ability to drain 5 points of energy for every 30 seconds is reasonable or OP
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Thu Dec 13, 2012 9:44 pm
Okay, Let's start this a bit less confusing.
You only have 5 things for personality please make it 10.
This is my suggestion for your resurrection, because I like the idea really I do. so i'ma help you out
Red Side: As He slashes and the pain is shared between them, the more slashes that hit the opponent, (Mind you clean shots.) The more damage they take, is the same amount of damage he takes in the battle. It's a very sadistic way to watch the person suffer although he gets to feel the share of their pain in the match so he knows how dangerous the pain that he's causing and what to do to help him make this even more painful. This can be represented by this scale.
Damage Scale:
[1 Hit minor damage.]
[2 Hits Starts to cause more than shrug off damage.]
[3 Hits Medium Amount of Damage.]
[4 Hits Severe Damage.]
[5 Hits, Possibly paralyzing Damage]
[6 HIts Very Damaging to possibly death dealing damage]
Black Side: As more damage is dealt to the attacker the more it can heal from the red side dealing damage. This is represented by this scale, when it heals him though the healing doesn't reprocate on to the attacker being this is how he takes pleasure in killing his opponent, and feeling his pain then the joy of being able to bear it, and laugh in their faces as they beg for death.
Healing Scale:
[1 Hit minor scrapes and cuts damage.]
[2 Hits Deep Lacerations, or near severed limb pain..]
[3 Hits Medium Amount of Damage.]
[4 Hits Severed Limb Damage]
[5 Hits, Possibly paralyzing Damage]
[6 Hits death dealing damage]
You only have 5 things for personality please make it 10.
This is my suggestion for your resurrection, because I like the idea really I do. so i'ma help you out
Red Side: As He slashes and the pain is shared between them, the more slashes that hit the opponent, (Mind you clean shots.) The more damage they take, is the same amount of damage he takes in the battle. It's a very sadistic way to watch the person suffer although he gets to feel the share of their pain in the match so he knows how dangerous the pain that he's causing and what to do to help him make this even more painful. This can be represented by this scale.
Damage Scale:
[1 Hit minor damage.]
[2 Hits Starts to cause more than shrug off damage.]
[3 Hits Medium Amount of Damage.]
[4 Hits Severe Damage.]
[5 Hits, Possibly paralyzing Damage]
[6 HIts Very Damaging to possibly death dealing damage]
Black Side: As more damage is dealt to the attacker the more it can heal from the red side dealing damage. This is represented by this scale, when it heals him though the healing doesn't reprocate on to the attacker being this is how he takes pleasure in killing his opponent, and feeling his pain then the joy of being able to bear it, and laugh in their faces as they beg for death.
Healing Scale:
[1 Hit minor scrapes and cuts damage.]
[2 Hits Deep Lacerations, or near severed limb pain..]
[3 Hits Medium Amount of Damage.]
[4 Hits Severed Limb Damage]
[5 Hits, Possibly paralyzing Damage]
[6 Hits death dealing damage]
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Fri Dec 14, 2012 11:14 am
Thank you for being so patient with me, and for the good ideas and support. I hope i can make you proud with this character
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Re: Argharna Phellan (Arrancar)
Fri Jan 18, 2013 11:09 am
Moved to OLD WIP due to the expiration of the two week period!
If you would like this moved back post here or ask a member of staff in XAT.
If you would like this moved back post here or ask a member of staff in XAT.
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