Koga Yomisuke [Approved; 2-1+*]

Basics

Name: Koga Yomisuke (Character name.)

Gender: Effiminate male

Age: 1000

Personality

Koga is a Quiet, Shy, and Innocent Soul. Despite what happened to him in his human life, he is always happy and always willing to go and help others whom he trust's a lot...always putting their lives before his, He will usually always wanna make you happy when your sad if your his companion. and no matter what he likes to have a good time and is known to be quite the partier when the moment call's for it, though one side to his persona is that if you do cross him he can be quite cold and scary, and even angry and psychotic, But usually that's never the case and koga doesn't make friend's with anyone he believes has bad intentions or harbors goal's of betraying him he always usually make's sure to always ensure the friendship over time, but he's not above making new friends everyday at all. Which is what most people like About the Shy Shinigami. if anything is in reason, he'll join in it and always do his best to impress..., he's also usually popular...though much to his absent mindness to some of the male's in the soul society, Due to his Choice of cross dressing and or the peculiar way he wear's his shinigami outfit, Which in the case that we speak of it...is worn similar to nemu's....All in All koga's a good kid with good intentions and a kind heart.


Appearance

Appearance:



Height: 5"1

Weight:

Eye Color: Purple/Red-ish Mixture to them...

Hair Color: Brown

Zanpakutô


Zanpakutô Spirit: fubou geshoku



Koga's spirit is the Creature he's sitting with in this pic it's a Star like Dragon creature with two huge Feet that come out of it's bottom Area and and protects koga as a shield


Sealed Zanpakutô :

In The Sealed State of his Zanpakutō Koga has a beautiful Katana with a white sheath and sash and beautiful white hilt


Shikai Description:



When Koga's shikai come's into play the area around him will become crystalized diamond's that come around him fully as the blade appears by his side(the one in the picture)



Shikai Abilities:


Okuso- The First Ability of Kogas Shikai allow's for him to Create a Area in which he Can Heal A ally of his and give them a 10x burst in energy when he pushes himself hard enough. not only this he can allow the ally to hold the blade and give it an offense power Ala The Crystal Diamond's that can pierce opponent's. He Can Also Defend Himself As Well Since he summons fubou. He Can have Fubou negate aerial attack's And Fire them right back at the opponent with equal or more energy. Not only that. if an opponent was to make a direct Attack. They Would get Sucked into kogas spirit world or get sucked in only to get thrown back out.



Hatsukoi-In Koga's Second Shikai He Will sing a lovely Song in Which the Lunar moon is shown or at least appear's over Koga. With this he will continue to sing the song as t he moon rotates, With this he creates a strange illusion in which if he is to be attacked he can disappear and create clone's of himself using the moon's Shining reflective light that will chain an opponent down. it will not hurt them but it help's for a distraction to help his ally's out. Hatsukoi Also Negates Any attack Sent at Koga instead letting Fubou take the damage or deflect it. it can be noted that he can continue his healing with the song as well. raising it up by 20


sensabanbetsu- In Sensabanbetsu Koga Will Have Five Statuette's Surround his Ally's and Pick them Up. When he does this he Will Allow his energy to be sent in through them. through a wide range. Not only does it do that. the statues work as a defense As that like fubou they can Suck in attack's and send them right back at an opponent. as well as stop opponent's in their track's who make direct attack's or slow them down by sounding off Huge Siren Like noise's that messes with their brainwaves





Release: With a Great love For My Allie's Fubou Release The Power to Save Our World

Bankai Description:


Bankai Abilities:

1. In This Stage of Bankai the sword's float above Koga and then a huge surge of sound is jolted through out a ten mile radius of the Area he is in. With this Koga gain's Long Cat ear's. As Well as Marking's on his forehead and arm's. he gain's claw like protrusion's from his claw's as well. in this form He has two type's of poison's two of them being in Separate Claw's. One poison is Like soi fong's Suzumebachi in where Koga will wait for opponent's to come near him in which he then scratches them over five time's. if The Five time's are Made. Then The Opponent will Suffer from these symptoms-temporary bleary vision, heavy breathe, a bad sense of direction and if Even more. Deadly. He Can Also Send A Siren's Song and send huge soundwaves through the air. as well as have his crystal's guard him from being attacked


2.In This Final State of Koga's bankai he is Able to bite his alley's with his fang's. When he bite's them, if an ally has been killed he can revive them back to life. However this take's up a huge amount of reaitsu and can be deadly if he performs this one too many time's. another effect is you are weakened greatly he can give you Back the energy and wound's you suffered and heal them greatly. Also Giving you Energy shoot's in the form of ball's that appear behind you. these energy shoot's can be split between each ally and heightens their power's back up Fully




(Your sword's abilities now that it is in its ultimate stage)

Background

History/Background:


Koga was born in a Lovely Home and born with an effiminite Body and face. which led doctor's to believe he was a trans-gender child who had both gender's. Growing up his Mother would usually dress him up in all type's of cross dressed clothing. much to the chagrin of his father. Later while going to school. he would be teased daily and pranked on about how much he was either labeled as being a homosexual. or being too girly for a woman. and having a Male Lower Part that made him non-attractive to a man. going Home he would tell his father. but in reply he would tell him he deserved it for acting in such a way. Koga was Just an Innocent Teenager, Who wanted to just be friend people and not cause any harm to anybody. He Loved his Mother alot. and always tried to go and make his father happy despite him always looking down on him like he was a simple piece of trash



~Tragedy Strikes~

Imagine this Song Playing








One Day a prank would go too far. as a girl and some of her friend's had a few guy's Come and beat up on the boy. he strongly fought back until. one of them became unstable and stabbed Koga. as well as slicing his ear off. Koga screamed in agony as he fell to the ground in pain. trying to get up to escape the male also sliced his achilles heel making him immobilized. he decided he wanted to have his way with Koga and dragged him to a room. He Raped and also continued to stab koga to death. So much it caused all of them to Puke. After it was over. the girl's and others ran out while the latter was killed by koga countering him in some way or another Koga left a message for his mother and father that night and wrote a letter for the morning. posting it to his favorite doll that was left by his hand. the blood dripping onto the letter he used that to write the letter. giving his goodbye's never to be seen in the human world again. from that day... That Was Koga's Tragic Fate. His Parent's mourned his death greatly and wondered what he himself couldv'e done to stop it feeling like he was a failure to his Son. the mother went through a depression for the latter part of her life. and still does till this day. the father had a funeral for Him. and from there. koga would still be remembered. Among many. after this tragic Day



~End Tragedy~


After That he became a shinigami and appeared in the soul society. however he would have a cold attitude towards most. living on his own and for scrap's. it wouldn't be till he met wil that he would become more happier and have a much more different attitude towards people. though it can be noted. However That he Has come to hate the human race or at least a good portion of those that use to torment him. Though now he's happier, and has realized it was just those people and not all human's. so koga will continue to protect them. in his time in soul society, he became pretty good friends with An equally prettier Male, Toja. Renji and a few other's and would eventually ascend to Captain...




[/b] ( You can write about their life on earth, then their history as a shinigami.)

[b]Extra Abilites: One Peculiar Ability though used ina comical context, is one of xiexing's ability's to cross Koga's Gender from Boy to girl, often causing comical and wild expiriences for the Shinigami..., though genrally, in serious context koga is quite skillful at picking up on certain thing's despite his innocent personality he can be quite the Smart Master mind in battle or using certain strategies when the situation calls for it.



(This is if they have a high intellect or something like they are a very good researcher or scientist)

Roleplay Sample:


The Way of Life is given to others who planned to live it at their fullest. But sometimes life end's too early. Tragic, Yes that's a Way to explain what has happened to this young Boy. as he stand's out on top of a rooftop in the city looking upon the human race. he watches them with slight annoyance. hoping for them to all die. His appearance was that of a female. having Long beautiful flowing hair wearing two lovely ear ring's. his black eye's fixated on watching the human's as they walk. He Sighed. "Humans....I can't hate all of you..." he said to himself as he grumbled quietly eating a pocky stick. "After all mother treated me the best, she cared" he thought as he moved his Pocky stick around in his mouth as he sat back and got back up. Moving his Dress Around he Jumped down and continued to walk past them. His Name Was a boy's name. given the Name Koga Norio. His mother gave him a nickname. Norin-Rin. he smiled quietly as he remembered that nickname. he then sighed remembering his parent's till this day he wishes he could be reunited with his mother and Father. he Also had the urge to find the girl's who brought the pyscho guy's as well as the other male's to beat him up. and the other who would Kill Him. continuing to move into the town. Koga slowly sang a siren's song as he continued moving past the people. the people coming around him and clapping. He Blinked... "Humans" ..... Humans and their emotions. Humans....Humans Are not Bad. Animals Yes. But here he was a stranger. and they surounded him and clapped to his beautiful Song.

Chaozi
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ok.... there are a lot of Brackets and unnecessary words in this application. Do you mind going through and getting rid of those? Plus the coding is pretty scruffy with some repeated words and broken HTML.

Also, u say She is a girl but your personality is full to the brim of "Him" and "His" which is rather confusing seeing as a lot of your power descriptions say "She" and "Her.

Try to stick with a single gender when making the app at least. Nevertheless, I can see there's an ability that changes gender, but do you mind adding something in reference to that in the "Gender" section to avoid such simple confusion.

Well, Koga is a trap. Or well...a constant genderswapping person...an it.

One Peculiar Ability though used ina comical context, is one of xiexing's ability's to cross Koga's Gender from Boy to girl, often causing comical and wild expiriences for the Shinigami..., though genrally, in serious context koga is quite skillful at picking up on certain thing's despite his innocent personality he can be quite the Smart Master mind in battle or using certain strategies when the situation calls for it.

So this explains most of it, though it would be best if you picked ONE gender to speak with unless you're using Xiexing's ability.

Fixed~

well apart from the typos that are still there and some of the "his" on the same line as "her", ill approve the app seeing as their not exactly going to hold an application back.

Approved at 2-1

moved to 2-1+ for vice captain rank

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Moving to archives due to missing activity check.