Raienzo Grance

Name: Raienzo Grance
Age:[i] Real Age: 1 ( Appearance 18)
Gender:Male
Appearance

True Form/any Differnt form:

Personality: Raienzo Akuma has many conflicting personalities that try to take control of eachother every second of every day causing a state of insanity in his being. In his normal form, Raienzo's most oftenly used personality derives of a lazy and uncaring type of person who could care less about anything in the world. Although, he won't hesitate to kill any that aggrivate him.At times, his personality could change at any givin moment that could varri highly from the last.
In his true form, all the seperate minds that make up his beings combine into a being of pure insanity that sees no one as an ally. Only as an enemy. His mind is too mentally fucked up in this state that he can no longer speak at all. He only kills without even making a sound. He knows no fear or any emotions really except for pure-insanity.

History[i] In the blood-drenched, corpse filled darkness of the deepest depths of the burning hell demons resided in, the souls of countless victims of the damned gathered together in a small pocket inside the center of a giant mountain of bone and dead bodies, Over time, these souls began to manifest themselvs into a phisical body. The best characteristic of each soul was implimented into it and new life was made. The sins of the literal millions of damned souls piled up with-in the life-form as well. This resulted in the creation of a being so demonic that it had even some demons quivering in fear from the energy-force being dispursed around the area. Once the creation process ended, a demon pretaining a humanoid body was left stuck in the center of the dark pocket. As he awoke from his long creation, another bone-chilling wave of energy filled the area. Cracks started to form along the rocky outer-layer of the mountain from the force of the demonic energy source alone. As the newly made Satanic being opened his eyes again, the entire mountain began to colapse and cascade, caving in on it self from the pressure of the energy.As it felt, dust filled the area in mere seconds. From this dust walked out the one who would end life as was known to the pathetic life-forms of the world. The demon's eyes glowed red with the power of the seven sins filling his body.
After his creation was completed, The demon began to venture through the burning realms of hell. His power rapidly continuing to grow as eac moment passed. The sins manifesting his existence constantly fought for power with-in his body causing a state of insanity with-in the being's mind.
After seven months of aimlessly wondering hell, the demon of the seven sins started to develop abilities from the millions of souls making up his body. Through these powers, the demon managed to tear open a rift through space into the world of the living by using his extreme power to it's highest at the time. Through that rift, he ended up in the center of the Menos Forest where he resides now with all of his insanity. Just recently he had developed a humanoid form and made a name for himself as well as gain a slight stability over his mind while in the humanoid seal.


Powers:
Ultimant Form of Regeneration- Raienzo has developed the ultimant form of instant-regeneration that surpasses that of any life-form. From any damage from small cutts, to having his entire body blown apart, he can regenerate back in mere seconds. This is so afective, that the only way to actually kill him is to blow his body apart then blast it to oblivion again WHILE it is regenerating itself. Due to the rapid rate of regeneration, that is almost impossible to do so.
Teleportation- Raienzo is able to teleport at such extreme speed that it can rival the speed of even the most skilled and fastest shunpo or sonido users. This can also be used in rapid repitition without a break making Raienzo able to teleport so often that it could appear that he was at several places at once.
Extreme Strength and speed- Raienzo has extreme strength and speed that combined make him one of the ultimant close-combat fighters in existence. His strength is so great, even in humanoid form that he can catch most energy attacks with strength alone and throw them back. His speed is also high enough to make a sonic-boom if he moved at full-speed. In his true form his strength and speed triples making him basically unmatched in strength and barely ever matched in speed.
Reversal- This ability allows Raienzo to reverse the affect of any mind-control,reiatsu/reiroka draining or cutting off techniques and abilities. Once a connection is made between him and someone or something trying to control or drain his energy, Raienzo counteracts the affect and trys to control the person or thing and or drain or cutt off their reiatsu and reiroka instead.
Dimensional Rift- This allows Raienzo to focus his energy around his hand and chop through the fabric of space it self opening a dimensional rift that works like a garganta, but can lead to any location no matter what barrier or restrictions are placed on it.
Shapeshift- Raienzo can shapeshift his limbs into any weapon in existence and adapt those weapons to his own power making them FAR stronger then normal. For example, he could make his arm into a machine gun that fired bullets as strong as zanpakto at five times the speed of sound ( 1600 kilometers per second_
Senses- Raienzo has no sense of pain much feel at all. Because of this he can ignore any poisons amoung his body or any injuries he takes. This is also mainly due to his high-case of insanity.
Self Sustained- The last aspect of Raienzo's powers is that he is self-sustained. He has no need for air, food, water, or anything along those lines. They are merely a luxury to him.




Skill Level: Powers:
Skill Level: Hand-to-Hand:
Skill Level: Speed:
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Likes: Varris ( Got millions of personalities..don't feel like typing all that_

Dislikes: Varries.

Fears: Varries.

Weakness: Raienzo's main and really only weakness is the durability of his body. It is easy to damage by attacks if not blocked.

Role Play Sample:
http://bleach-serenity.forumotion.com/battle-area-f55/old-vs-new-dellapero-t573.htm ( I'm Dellapero in that_

Heya Chaozi will be checking this app over today, and im gonna point out a really obvious thing: Your character is Very Overpowered. Here are just a few examples.

Ultimant Form of Regeneration- Raienzo has developed the ultimant form of instant-regeneration that surpasses that of any life-form. From any damage from small cutts, to having his entire body blown apart, he can regenerate back in mere seconds. This is so afective, that the only way to actually kill him is to blow his body apart then blast it to oblivion again WHILE it is regenerating itself. Due to the rapid rate of regeneration, that is almost impossible to do so.

It is never impossible to defeat somebody so your regeneration MUST be toned down. Just mentioning the word impossible is a very risky thing to do.

Teleportation- Raienzo is able to teleport at such extreme speed that it can rival the speed of even the most skilled and fastest shunpo or sonido users. This can also be used in rapid repitition without a break making Raienzo able to teleport so often that it could appear that he was at several places at once.

Stupidly fast eh? Not everyone is superman and we all get tired be it Shinigami or Demon.

Shapeshift- Raienzo can shapeshift his limbs into any weapon in existence and adapt those weapons to his own power making them FAR stronger then normal. For example, he could make his arm into a machine gun that fired bullets as strong as zanpakto at five times the speed of sound ( 1600 kilometers per second_

Now I like this, problem is that its again too strong. Far stronger than a normal weapon? That would be acceptable if it was as strong as you have said. Five times the speed of sound is stupidly fast and is too overpowered so tone this power down quite a bit please.


Apart from those notes, the app is pretty sweet. Fix what ive suggested and we'll see abotu Approving this guy