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Lars Darsha III [Approved, 3-2+] Empty Lars Darsha III [Approved, 3-2+]

Sun Sep 30, 2012 12:39 am

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• Name: Elysian Darsha III
• True Age: 16
• Appearance Age: 16
• Gender: (Male
• Orientation: freelancing

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• Appearance: Elysian has short, spiky, black hair and blue eyes. Although his and eyes can change color along with his emotions and actions in battle. Going from blue when in defense and red when in attack. He wears a jedi-like getup and has a tight shirt that goes has short sleeves and a turtleneck like piece that covers his neck and at times the lower half of his face when his chin is down. His pants are long and puffed up as they get down to the his calf’s and they cut off at the bottom of his calf’s. His boots are about an inch away from the small opening of skin. He also has a pice of clothing on his waist witch hangs down to about the bottom of his legs.

• Bone Appearance: Elysian’s bone is located on both him arms, going from his elbows to the tips of fingers, it is almost like a gauntlet he uses for his hand to hand combat. Only thing is he can move his fingers freely even though they are basically bone. Almost like a glove to him, his finger tips are sharp to he would stab someone using only his hand easily and kill them. The knuckles of his hand are shaped like sharp diamonds to ensure damage when used in battle.

• Hollow Hole: Elysians hole is located in the center of his chest. Same as his parents.

• Reiatsu Colour: Elysian’s Reiatsu is a bright crystalline sky blue.

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Personality: Elysian is a rather unique wolf, his past much reflects his personality but to an extent. He is somewhat of a cold speaker and often acts as if he had never had a friend in the world. His face is a tight expression of disinterest and his eyes are always blank and cold. His is a nice guy on the inside but is also in a way a jerk to those who are rude.
He has no happy side that is known and he always just seems hurt to those who may see him. Elysian is however willing to open up to someone he knows he can trust but since he has no one to do that with he is always closed up and separated from others around him.Staying in his little solitary bubble. But overall he is very polite and shows everyone respect except those he believes are scum. Given his past he has a high standard from respect and never speaks disrespectful to those above him. He is considered a pretty boy to some and his accent is often charming in a way primarily when he speaks Italian.

He acts often as if he has no interest in anything and seems rather detached from conversations. The thing is about him he would much rather listen to the problems of someone else and act as a tool of stress relief than talk about his own feelings. But if someone was to be nice to him and perhaps accept him for him and worm their way under his armor than maybe he will open up and share his deepest darkest secrets. But this is unlikely considering he trust no one and is always on edge from his recent past. He is honorable and is always willing to protect others who cannot protect themselves, he is actually shy but covers this up with his ‘cool’ attitude witch al lot often see as a disguise.

Elysian is civilized more than anything. He is a cold blooded killer even though he never really stands up and shows it. When drama breaks out he still stand with no real expression and simply try to talk things out. Using his intellect and charms to resolve a problem or even get his way. He is sly and manipulative and has his own way of doing things. He would much rather take a beating in front of a crowd and not fight back, then afterwards when you’re walking at night he will meet you there and slit your throat. He is not to simply be assumed as harmless simply because he is civilized, after all. Not everything is as it seemed, nothing is true, everything is permitted. He also has a softer side and loves to sing. His voice is beautiful and it’s when he sings he is at his most vulnerable for all of his true feelings come out.

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• History: Elysian was born an Arrancar, his parents both died when they were about 30 years of age and a they pulled of each other’s mask. After this they decided to travel together and after a few years fell in love and had a child. When Elysian was born he was raised being taught how to fight. After the years of growing up he showed exceptional talent in martial arts given his Hollow Heritage lied in his arms. Growing up his parents went through the trouble of making sure he was polite and respectful at all times. He never really made friends or had any family his whole life so he made due with talking to animals and insects most of his childhood. Soon after he turned 14 his mother was killed by his father who was angry at her after an argument about the life Elysian should have lived. And he lost control of his temper. His mother being the peaceful women she was didn’t even attempt to fight back to set an example for Elysian. After this his father decided take Elysian to the world of the living. Once there Elysian’s father never really bothered with him anymore, sulking over the loss of his lover he never really did much of anything. So Elysian grew was alone ever since, not being one to really socialize he kept to himself and just became a blank person.

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• Sealed Zanpakutô: Elysian’s sword is a fairly long one, it is silver at the blade and the case and handle are red. He doesn’t have a specific place he holds his sword to he pretty much carry’s it around by hand. The blade has a rather interesting design on it, much like its case. The handle is made up of his mother’s bone that Elysian crafted.

• Racial Abilities: Elysian’s Cero is an almost like white electricity originating from his hands. When he shoots it it has a rather interesting effect to have streams of electricity that can reach out about 10 feet from the source. His Bala is similar and has the same effect but with more range since he fires each one about 2 feet from each other. His Sabido is slightly strange considering the way he uses it. He can only use this ability wherever his sword or any weapon he possess is located. So if he were to be in battle he would throw his weapon in the air and let it fall behind his target, then sidestep to his weapon and follow up with a counter, a useful but limited ability.

• Unique Abilities: Elysian holds the power of telekinesis, he uses it only when needed and for his weapon if he can. He has a multitude of weapons such as swords, spears, maces and axes constantly at his disposal. They are invisible however and they are always around him as if to make a shield. Making it hard for almost anyone to hit him, once his shield is hit the weapon hit appears for a brief moment before becoming camouflaged once again. When he wields each of these weapons they grow out of camouflage and are visible.

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• Resereccion Name: Kage

• Resereccion Release Phrase: Mother, give me your power. And grant me forgiveness.

• Release Actions: all of his weapons that are camouflaged begin to spin around really quickly as he releases his sword they all spread out as a red aura surrounds him.

• Resereccion Appearance: When he goes into this form he takes on the appearance of his father’s resurrection. A full suite of armor that is rather thin. (Almost like light armor) going from the bottom of his face to his feet.

• Resereccion Abilities: When he goes into this form he takes on the appearance of his father’s resurrection. A full suite of armor that is rather thin. (Almost like light armor) he is faster and stronger than normal. He attacked with ferocious strength and his ability to slow down time and move freely. But can only do this for about 1 post before it shuts off. the ability is useable once again 10 post afterwards.

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(Leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Will Skills

  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills

  • Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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• RP Sample:

Life, it was something that always interested Elysian since he was an child still learning the ways of life, or in his case death. How it was all an endless cycle that Arrancar apparently defied. It is said you only live once, that there are no second try’s. But if only that theory was true, he wanted to believe it was. But ever since the death of his mother what he believed was right and wrong no longer mattered to him. But he tried to get by, walking around, nothing worth doing with his life but something worth doing with his time it seemed. Elysian lied within his room inside his small apartment. Or at least it was small to him. His room was practically as empty cup before you buy it at a store. The only thing inside his room was a large chair that looked almost like the chair a king would sit in. his darkened room somewhat always making him seem gothic and in a way just depressing by the way he sat in it. His leg was crossed over his other one and his elbow rested on the arm of the chair with his hand pressed into his face. His eyes were closed as if to be dreaming about something long forgotten. He thought of his past, his mother if anything. For he had no other memories worth remembering except for her. The way her long beige hair flowed through the wand as if it were a gentle stream of crystalline blue water. Her red eyes always seeming to seep into the inner parts of his soul, deadly yet always soothing. Her heart was as fragile as his and she showed him more love then his once sided father. Always having to see things his way. And given his mother’s rebellious attitude that is probably why she died in the first place. But even in death she never seemed to lose her mental hold on Elysian. Now Elysian always tries to do right, doing what his mother would have wanted even though his father was constantly breathing down his neck.

Elysian sat there for a long moment, his thoughts drifting him away into a land in his imagination. But his thoughts were soon disturbed when a pound on his door awoke him from his trance like state. His blue eyes opened and scanned his dark empty room. His sword sat next to him leaned up against his chair. He didn’t have a specific place he kept his blade so he carried it around with by hand of sometimes his telekinesis. “Get up, you know what time it is.” His father’s deep voice boomed from the other side of his door. Kage blinked and sighed to himself, Elysian uncrossed his legs and stood from his seat. His breath low as he grabbed his sword and made his way for the door. He indeed did know what time it was. It had been a regular thing since Elysian was about 5 years of age. He had started doing it with his mother until he was ten, then his father took over with his training. Sparring was every Monday and every Friday. It was a regular thing with him and every time he seemed to lose witch frustrated Elysian deeply. Always losing and always being looked down upon angered him, primarily because it was his mother’s murderer who he was trying so hard to beat. Elysian reached for the door and slide it open. Opening his solid white door and walking out into the hallway. His stance symbolizing that of complete disinterest as he walked down the stairs and into the living room. The room was pained with white walls and furniture as red as blood. Sometimes Elysian wondered if that’s what was on it, he didn’t know nor did he honestly care.

Elysian made his way to the front door, his heart rate getting a bit faster as he took his first step outside and saw his father standing below the stairs about 20 feet away from them. Elysian swallowed as he stood at the top at the stairs that looked like they belonged to a corporate building in the city or something. Elysian’s father looked at him and smiled slightly. His father was wearing a black outfit and a long coat with a hood. His sword was located on the hump of his back, something he never even had to use in a match against Elysian. He always stuck with his fist in a fight until he needed his weapon. His Hollow hole on located on his shoulder and his bone was on his neck. Looking as if it were a color on a dog. Elysian closed his eyes and waited for his father to give the word. And sure enough they did. “Elysian, the game has not changed. The match does not end until you may one successful attack on me, or you are unable to continue, are you ready to begin?” his father said with a smile. Kage had never pulled of a successful attack before. Sparring always ended with him being knocked out. His mother was always gentle and a match was over then she believed he was done. But that luxury was lost at age ten. Elysian opened his eyes and nodded, once he did this his father got into stance and put out his hand, telling Elysian to bring it. And bring it he would.

In an instant Elysian was in the air and falling like an angel from heaven, his sword in hand but not yet released. Instead his leg was erect and his foot was aiming for his father’s chest, falling from the sky like a rocket aimed for the stars and beyond. One he was about an inch from his father his leg was suddenly grabbed at his father dodged the attack with ease, grabbing Elysian’s leg and threw his arm to the side. Tossing Elysian back onto the stairs like a baseball. His eyes widened at the surprise in the speed he was thrown, quickly Elysian threw his legs back beneath him and recover before he hit the stone stairs behind him. Elysian’s feet his the stairs but at an angel where he was basically standing on its sides as if he were on a wall. With great force Elysian catapulted himself from the stairs and back at his father who was still in the same position. As he did he threw his legs out again and followed up with a mirage of kicks that his father dodged with ease. Elysian fell to the ground and then threw countless fist at him so fast it was like setting off an SMG. But as always his father simply but his hand out and followed the path of each punch and blocked them with the palm of his hand. Elysian was beginning to get frustrated and lost focus. Suddenly there was a pressure inside of Elysian’s gut and his father kneed him in the stomach. Elysian’s body jerked forward as he thought about throwing up but didn’t. taking about a split second for him to react Elysian threw himself to the ground and twisted his body in a 360 degree angel in an attempt to trip the one leg his father was standing on. But as he leg went in for the sweep, the dirt on the ground following its path as dust seemed to rise, his father threw his other leg down and stopped Elysian’s leg with the bottom of his foot.

Elysian then looked up and pushed himself up in an attempt to whack his father with the hilt of his sword. But as he did his Father moved behind him and suddenly there was pressure on Elysian’s neck as his father’s bit muscular arms found their way around it. Elysian’s father squeezed hard in an attempt to choke him out and in reaction all he could do was hold on to his father’s arm and try to worm out of it. But apparently his father wasn’t going to loosen his grip anytime soon as he tightened. Elysian then dropped his sword at his feet as he gasped for air and clawed at his father’s arm with his sharp claws that were located on his arms, his hollow heritage making some use for once. But after a few seconds his vision grew blurry and his air was completely gone. Soon his arms went limp and his eyes lowered to see his sword below him at his feet. His mind telling him to give up, but his heart telling him to get his ass in gear. And it was with that single notion Elysian slipped his foot underneath his sword and tossed it up with his leg. Tossing it into the air in over him and behind his father. And within a few second Elysian teleported to his blade behind his father and out of his grip. Taking his sword by the handle and throwing the case into his father back. He heart bone crack as his father was flung into the stairs and made an imprint in them as the stone broke with contact. He looked at his father as he sat on the stairs laughing at something. It took a moment for Elysian to realize he had won until his father gave him a thumbs up and smiled. Elysian hesitated for a moment before he took his normal stance and looked at his sword. And with a smile and looked at his father. For the first time in his life.


Last edited by Kagay on Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:38 am; edited 1 time in total
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Sun Sep 30, 2012 10:14 am
Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [x]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Advanced


Comments/Notes: See Below
Tier: N/A

Just a single thing that gets me, but it's not too bad.

He attacked with ferocious strength and his ability to slow down time and move freely. But can only do this for about 10 seconds before it wears off.

Although we're okay with manipulation of time here as an ability, we don't usually deal with motion of 'time' in posts--each post is usually worth about 6 or so seconds (but it's extremely variable), and it's easier to deal with saying it works for 'x' posts, rather than 'x' seconds. Only change I ask of you, thanks.

Also, do you mind fixing up your avatar so that it's a bit thinner? It stretches the sidebar a bit much. Thanks~

Other than that, great!

~Dai
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Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:38 am
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Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:43 am
Alright, I'll approve this.

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