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The Arrancar
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Tue Aug 17, 2010 4:30 pm
ARRANCAR

Name: Javier Cadena
Age: N/A
Gender: Male

Orientation:Freelance

Appearance: He has dark skin with dark green eyes. His hair is short with dreadlocks of a black color. He wears his arrancar apparel in a different manner, such as the absence of sleeves apparent with torn and tattered ends with a tail jacket reaching the ground. Of course, this is the only alteration as the rest of his appearance is that of a normal arrancar.His zanpakutou is also attached to him in the form of a scorpion tail as he carries around a zanpakutou belonging to a soul reaper that is unable to be released since the original owner died.

Personality: Javier is highly sadistic, but at the same time isn't one that succumbs to blood lust. He seems to wonder what it's like to be human, but alas he buries those thoughts through sleep, eating, or conflicts. Javier can also be seen as a keen apiration, highly analytical most of the time as this is highly useful in battle and casual situations. He pays attention even though it doesn't look like it. At times, he can act a bit flirtatious and perverted around females and will be more than happy to smack one around if they get out of hand to keep his pimp hand strong.
Infact, he will mostly do this with fairly everyone who pretty much pisses him off. After observing much of his arrancar and hollow bretheren, he decides not to fall into the stereotype of being full with blood lust, but who doesn't like a good fight? It has been said that Javier has been possessed by his inner hollow, proving to be the result of a failed vizard in controlling their power. Even with the hollow taken over, Javier has kept his inner conscious and reason but took on the cross personalities of his original self and his hollows, though the hollows show to be more influential and dominant. When the oppertunity presents itself, he will try his very best (or not) to kill his opponent after toying with them.
He's loyal to his comrades to the very end until he knows that something's disturbingly wrong in their actions. He doesn't like a traitor, nor does he like to betray those he's allied with unless it's for a logical reason. Javier is well aware of every action that he commits and prefers to train alone.

Abilities: Able to cling to any surface, not including slippery ones.

Sealed Zanpakutô: In Appearance (A scorpion tail made of bone that's eight feet long.)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner

Release: Wrap and Eradicate

Resurrección: His outfit becomes slightly morefitting and turns red and black. His arrancar clothes become full and restored, with no rips or tears as it almost seems like a robe. His face is also changed abit. He has markings just belowhis eyes that resemble the fangs of a spider, one beneath each eye. They are rather wide and colored red with an outline of black.

His hair also becomes longer, wild and untamed. His hair color also becomes the thickest of the color black with a slick sheen. His mask fragment is also changed upon transformation, disappearing from its usual place and sprouts from his back as four pairs of legs with four of the appendages on each side. The legs are jointed as they are arched up and the second half of the legs are arched down to resemble wings.The bone fragment, which are shapped like a spider's legs, are covered in a thin layer of flesh and tissue.

In between the pairs of legs are thin, organic tissue that "webs" them together. It's something like webbed hands or feet, but with the bone fragments instead to enable gliding or flight. Since the fragments do come from his back, it does tear through the back of his fitted robe like arrancar attire. His collar is laid comfortably against his shoulders and collar bone with no intention of being fully extended upward. Infact, his new clothes are covered in organic tissue with the apparent veins that sometimes pulse from certain parts.

There are also small, micorscopic hairs on himself that can pick up the vibrations in the air and on the ground. His eyes are almost the same, except that his irises turn into a dark red color. The inside of his robes have the same material as the exterior, but having black linen. Else where, his bone fragment seems to sprout along the arms, through the skin, and come out through either the wrists or the top of the hands as bone like stingers as a type of weapon or zanpaktou as a result of him releasing his hollow powers. These stingers are about two feet long and extremely sharp, covered in the same living tissue.

Unlike the color scheme of his attire and body, the bones remain white, which is also unlikely with the bone fragments that sprout from his back. His hakama,or pants, are also fitted to his legs for more manueverbility, being red also. However, they are tucked into his new, pointed boots that are kneehigh. The main color is black while the sub color is about red, the said color being around the rim and at the point or toe of the boots. These boots replace the sandals that he usually wears as an arrancar.

On his hands are also small bone claws that resemble the spider, though they may be used as weapons, he usually use them to cling to walls and such. All in all, his released powers grants a fitted organic outfit that resembles his original body and to give him more manuevebility.If the robe was ever to be opened up, his upper abdomen is revealed. There is a tight, long sleeve shirt. It appears to be almost spandex,but this shirt is actually more organic tissue that covers him, or a second or third outer skin if you will.

The tissue that's been mentioned, is akin to his own hierro, but tougher even with his aforementioned steel like skin growing in defensive capabilities whilst releasing his resureccion. This skin has constantly flowing spiritual energy that regulates this second skin, compressed internally, on the contrary to the casual hierro. Of course, even withthis in mind, the skin is no morethana second skin other than it being a resemblance of his old hollow like manifestation. Above this second skin is a body like structure that resembles the main body of a spider hugging around his mid section, thorax and all. Strangely, the spider doesn't have any flesh wrapped around it, or tissue as this covers up his hollow hole.

His teeth are also sharp, a bit jagged also. His robes and what not, are long and elogant that reaches slightly past his knees and each of the bone legs expanding up to six feet long that could fold in when not used. He has small holes on his wrists that act as spinnets, capable of shooting web embued with spiritual pressure to make it hard to get off since it's extremely sticky.

History: Javier, believe it or not, was born as a human at first. He died at birth, however, and didn't have too much memory of what his life was like. He was then carried off into soul society in the hands of a female shinigami. She felt so sad, and even cried that a baby had died at birth, though the cause was unknown. He was adopted by the said shinigami and on that same day, he was kidnapped by hollows.

How he survived had seemed a bit far fetched, but here's the story. The infant was raised by the hollows due to the fact that he had a hint of spiritual pressure. They figured if they raised him to be stronger, they would split him several ways and they would become stronger. So these hollows were able to convince and kill foreing individuals that came near the infant. Bye the time the baby was grown up, being about three hundred years of age, he was given a weapon to defend himself incase the hollows weren't around to defend him.

What was for lunch? Dead hollow carcass! Yum! Amatsu, his name before changing to Javier later, fed on the dead hollows. He vomitted on the first few days as he wasn't used to the taste and his body kept rejecting it. However, he convinced himself that he had no choice, so he developed a fond for hollow flesh. The three hollows that cared for him grinned. They were basically fattening him up to gain more and more energy so that they could become stronger than any other hollow.

After two hundred more years, Amatsu had honed his swordsmanship skills, which were completely unorthadox. His fighting style was unpredictable at first until adapting to the ways the shinigami fought after observing a shinigami in the forest of menos fighting some hollow. With this, his skills became more refined along with his spiritual pressure. With each victory he had against hollows that wanted to kill him, he tore off their masks completely and made a collection.

There was a new hope for him..an unexpecting kind of hohpe. A team of shinigami raided the forest to rescue Amatsu. He had no place to run away from them since the forest was a dangerous place. The hollows that catered to him had took him hostage and were going to proceed to eat him, but its head fell off by a strike from a vice captain. Amatsu blanked out and brought to the hospital. He went into the shinigami academy for private lessons so that he may enter the Gotei 13. His fighting style remained unorthadoxed, his melee skills exceeding the current students of the academy, but he knew not a single kido.

He compared the kido to cero due to the nature of both attacks using spirit energy to attack the target, though with kido, it's carried out in more ways than just attacking. It could heal and bind people. When taught kido, he became well known for using kido and was admitted into the Kido Corps for his skill. He was afraid of fighting using his sword since he had a problem of being judged with his way of doing things. After he joined the kido corps, he became the Grand Kido Chief, where he created dozens of spells to defend against tyranny.

He was training with vizard in the real world to unlock a power like no other in order to defend Soul Society against the invasion of the Bounts. Infact, he was the only shinigami who actually fought while the others secured important people and location. Defending successfully, he took the bount to the real world to allow him to heal in order to form a friendship. Everything was nice and "Dandy" afterward. The Bounts were the least of the problem afterward, however..

At the time, hollows weren't much of a problem, but rather the shinigami were. In short, he stopped a captain from running away. He punished and killed the captain that planned on being hostile and rogue. He believed that letting a captain up and leave would leak important information about the captains and Soul Society itself. The other captains looked down at him for it since the captain he killed was apparently the son of another. Ultimately, he was found guilty and was sentenced to jail to have his powers sealed.

Long before hand, he had several shinigami to trigger attacks on several points within Seireitei as he predicted as much. He fought his adoptive brother, Mical, before leaving Soul Society after leaving him almost dead. During the battle, however, he felt something within him awaken. During training with the vizard, he assumed that an attack from him must've hit his soul chain, but not to the point where he lost his powers. It barely scratched it, slowly corroding. He thought his inner conscious or the "other him" was Hyroku, a person who claimed to be him in another life, but this was infact an inner hollow that slowly ate away at him from the inside.

He was too late to call for help..his zanpakutou was destroyed and his inner hollow took over. He opened a garganta once turning into a hollow and resumed his life living as a savage. He eventually lost his shinigami powers and became a full on hollow as he devoured his zanpakutou spirit and digested it. becoming stronger, but could no longer wield it since it was exchanged to quench his thirst for power. He turned into a gillian after eating a few hundred hollow, gaining swift dominance as he acquired a special mask to show said dominance. He continued to fight and feed until he was at least adjuchas level, his chain of fate completely gone now as a hollow hole appeared where it used to be.

The adjuchas appeared to be a humanoid like figure with very large arms and chest, complete with scorpion claws and a large scorpion tail.. He was jumped by a bunch of hollows, where he fended them off easily until he encountered more than one adjuchas, about ten. They all bit and clawed at him, in which he roared in pain before an explosion of spirit energy erupted. He was beating his chest as he punched the ground, a shockwave striking the surrounding hollows and "shattered" them into pieces before he ate them. The reiatsu became overwhelming and cracked his mask. He held onto his face, clenching on to the mask before it was being chipped away by brute force and his spiritual pressure.

A new being emerged..an arrancar. Amatsu was no more, he became Javier, Javier Cadena.

RP Sample: Javier Cadena was walking through the forest of menos. He had sealed his hollow powers in the form of two gauntlets with brass knuckles. He walked through the forest, looking for victims because he was just being a total jerk at the time. He had nothing else to do, so being a jerk was a good alternative.
As he walked through the forest barefooted, he came across a group of Gillian.

He walks up to one of the Gillian, tapping them on the foot as they looked down. Its mask was very odd. It appeared normal..but the top of the mask was in the shape of a cowboy mask, complete with an accent that was picked up when the Gillian spoke.

"What in the hell is tappin' my foot!? Oh, an arrancar..I assume you work with those above the surface, sir?"

Javier Cadena laughed at his accent.

"What's with your stupid ass accent!? AHAHAHAHA!"

The gillian shot a burst cero, obviously it wasn't enough to cause any grave injury, but Hyroku jumped to the side to avoid it whilst laughing.

"Wow..you talk funny for a hollow.

The Gillian had responded, the other gillian looked to see what the commotion was about. The gillian with the accent had yelled at the arrancar.

"Why must you be such a jerk, lil' boy!? I swear I outta stomp the living cow crap outta you, but me and my pals are worrying about other things at the moment!"

Javier's interest was piqued.

"What happened?"

The gillian responded.

"Well, not like it's any of your business, but rumors have it that half of the Espada were killed. The Espada are made up of the ten strongest arrancar in existence. They'll turn you into tuna and feed you to the cats. But since the Espada are weakened, we're going to plan an insurrection so we can be the next generation of arrancar!"

Javier laughed again. The accent of the gillian really tickled him. The gillian was pissed off now as he fired a cero along with the other nine hollow. Javier channeled reiatsu into both gauntlets and launched his fists forward, punching the grouped cero blasts and dispersed them. He grinned as he began to speak to the Gillians, making it short and sweet.

"My turn."

With a malicious grin, a navy blue cero emerged from his fists, incinerating the lower halves of the gillian. They all roared in pain as Javier regained his upstraight posture, shaking his head.

"You guys are way over your heads..this is why you don't mess with arrancar. I'll show them what a real arrancar is..step aside boys."

He walked by the disappearing hollows, they all yelled at Javier from behind.

"You fool! You'll be killed! You stand no chance against them! You won't even be lucky enough to be a fraccion!"

The western accented gillian shook his head and interuppted them.

"Stop it. If there's anyone that'll carry out our ambitions, goals, and dreams..he will.."

All the gillian disappeared, and so did Javier..
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The Arrancar Empty Re: The Arrancar

Tue Aug 17, 2010 8:22 pm
Denied.

1) You cannot fill in your skills
2) Your history is full of errors. Here are the ones I was able to find:
  • Hollows wouldn't give him a weapon. In fact, its like a guard giving a prisoner his gun.
  • How did the Shinigami find where he is?
  • I'm sorry, but I don't think you're capable of being an ex-Grand Kidou Chief
  • Vizards didn't exist or were not known of when the Bounts were created
  • Also, you're not Ichigo, so you didn't lose your Shinigami powers, so you wouldn't have the chain "Attackable"
  • You can't just "lose" your Zanpakutou and have your inner hollow take over
  • You can't become a full hollow by your Inner Hollow devouring your zanpakutou spirit.


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Wed Sep 01, 2010 1:59 pm
Moved to denied applications and once you make Tsubine's corrections we will overlook your application again.


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