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Re: Chuchuri - Nature Iramasha [Approved 5-4]
Sat Sep 01, 2012 8:41 pm
• Chuchuri was created in a thunder storm over Karakura Town on September 7th, 2405.. She knows onlyy slight Japanese since another orphan found her and tried to raise her.
• At two years old, a Sister found Chuchuri saying "Chu Chui" over and over by the park bench. She took her to the orphanage she worked at, naminng her Chuchuri.
• At four, Chuchuri had a small squeaky hammer toy that she always has with her. Its a small kendama toy. Little did anyone know that this was her Seishin Buki that had comme from her fear of the dark.
• At six, the orphanage burned down with her and everyone escaping. Chuchuri was never seen again by the workers. At this time, she started calling her 'toy' Pikohan or Pow Hammer..
• Now nearing her seventh birthday, Chuchuri lives in Karakura Park, barely ever sleeping due to her fear of the dark. Shes also taken the entrance exam to Karakura Higj at age six, hoping to find someone like her in the school.
Fix this, I do not want any bullet points in anyone history, your application will be denied immediately because of this.
Your form as well as nature powers aren't active at the moment I am assuming. State that in the application and if anything put a
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Re: Chuchuri - Nature Iramasha [Approved 5-4]
Sun Sep 02, 2012 5:57 am
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Beginner
- Focus: Adept
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Re: Chuchuri - Nature Iramasha [Approved 5-4]
Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:18 pm
Sorry dude. 12 sentences in History, minimum is 15. Denied until extended to minimum requirement.
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Re: Chuchuri - Nature Iramasha [Approved 5-4]
Mon Sep 03, 2012 8:26 pm
> okay changes were made, moving to approved.
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Re: Chuchuri - Nature Iramasha [Approved 5-4]
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