Mammon - Greed (NPC) [APPROVED, DEMON, 2-1]

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Name: Mammon

Age: Unknown

Gender: Female

Personality: Mammon is quick to grab whatever she wants, without any concern for her sisters. Her motto is "monopolize through greed". Therefore, she is usually the main cause of any arguments between the sisters. However, among the sisters, she is the most honest about her own feelings, and is the one most likely to try and please the opposite sex. She is greedy, but a hard worker, and will stop at nothing to capture her target's affections for all eternity. Once she decides she wants something, she will sacrifice anything and everything to get it.

Appearance



Tier: 2-1

Race: Demon

Brief History: One of a group of relatively strong demons, these seven sisters were found and attacked by none other than Mariyah himself. In a quickly-fought battle, they found themselves completely overwhelmed, and easily consumed by Mariyah. However, for some reason, these seven sisters managed to not only retain their personality, but work out a way back into the world, fusing themselves with Mariyah and introducing a new Ressurrecion with their abilities.

Associated Character: Mariyah Baishun-Otoko

Powers:

Stake Form: Like the rest of her sisters, Mammon is capable of being summoned as either her physical form, or in the form of her "stake", a long projectile weapon that can be quickly summoned and fired off without warning, before disappearing. Even if captured within a field that prevents teleportation, it will always disappear and return to Mariyah's body.

Sword Art: As with the rest of her sisters, Mammon can fight in her physical form, using a summoned purple sword to do battle.

Greedy Consumption: When summoned into battle (physical form), Mammon is able to add to Mariyah's power. If any target within 50 metres of Mariyah is buffed by an ability, that buff is automatically copied and placed onto Mariyah's body at the same time. It only lasts while he has Mammon summoned, and it can't increase him past any limitations that the ability transferred has.

(i.e: If someone were to apply a speed boost to themselves and they stood within that distance of Mariyah, he would also gain that speed boost, but only proportional to his original speed)

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• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [-]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
  
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Comments/Notes: The Greedy Consumption seems to need revising just a bit. The way it's worded sort of confuses me. I know you did this while you were really tired, but please just take a second look and then I'll come back and approve once it's changed. <3
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I think Dai means that anything that gives something beneficial to anyone that is 50 meters away from Mammon is then eaten up (Copied) and then given to Mariyah to grant her additional power. Basically Mammon's power is to copy powers that give a buff and give it to Mariyah as well.

Added an example. Does that make it a bit easier?

• Name [X]
  
• Appropriate Age [X]
  
• Gender [X]
  
• Appearance Present [X]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [X]
  
• History is of appropriate length [X]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [-]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [-]
  

Comments/Notes: YEP YEP!
Tier: 2-1