Re: [THEFROST]'s Communication Thread

[THEFROSTHead Admin]

I'm thinking of making the 5th power for Lex, but I don't want to make it too crazy but make it worthwhile as well. For now, I have the idea that this fifth power allows Lex to 'claim' a summon. A summon would be a creature that is designated to whoever managed to make a contract with it. I have the creature and its name and everything (small vixen animal who is a sentient being) but I want to make sure that her abilities are fair and within site rules. I have some ideas, but I feel they might be too broken or the idea itself might be too broken, since this power was going to allow Lex to obtain other summons within this specific species. Any suggestions?

As far as summons go, I'd probably either make it a specific power or NPC. As with anything on PH, just make sure its abilities are balanced, fair and something you'd want to play against. If something is overboard, staff will more than likely tell you. However, I saw you made a power upgeade, so this might be a moot response. So, I won't go into too much detail. If you still have this idea, then just paste the power.

Just asking for you to look at my tech for now and say would you think it is alright so far?
Link!

I've already got staff on it since I'm busy with quite a bit.

[Nix ShraikEstablished Member]

So, I'm just dropping this in because I think you or Blade, as I have a feeling this needs Admins approval to go through ^,^' Plus, you have one of the best knowledge what I want to do with "Sabers" and why I need this guy. I intend to use him as something like a voice for "Sabers" founders, because in the near future I'm not planning on trying to make something THAT important! I just can't figure the powers out T^T

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t14299-dustian-shraikfinished#91284

[THEFROSTHead Admin]

So, I'm just dropping this in because I think you or Blade, as I have a feeling this needs Admins approval to go through ^,^' Plus, you have one of the best knowledge what I want to do with "Sabers" and why I need this guy. I intend to use him as something like a voice for "Sabers" founders, because in the near future I'm not planning on trying to make something THAT important! I just can't figure the powers out T^T

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t14299-dustian-shraikfinished#91284

I'll be sure to have a moderator check it fairly soon.

[KadeDemon Innovator of Violence]

Since Eric's mad demon powers that means Vanitas, Zorin and Kairaa are gone too.
I want Vanitas, Zorin and Kairaa into be put into the archives.

Vanitas
Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11434-vanitas-shinichiro-npc-finishedapproved-0-3

Zorin
Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11432-zorin-blitz-npc-finished1-1-0-4

Kairaa
Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11433-kairaa-incendio-npc-finishedapproved-1-5-1-1

[KadeDemon Innovator of Violence]

Since Eric's mad demon powers that means Vanitas, Zorin and Kairaa are gone too.
I want Vanitas, Zorin and Kairaa into be put into the archives.

Vanitas
Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11434-vanitas-shinichiro-npc-finishedapproved-0-3

Zorin
Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11432-zorin-blitz-npc-finished1-1-0-4

Kairaa
Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t11433-kairaa-incendio-npc-finishedapproved-1-5-1-1

[THEFROSTHead Admin]

On my mobile, but I did those for you earlier before I left for work. Consider the deed done.

[KadeDemon Innovator of Violence]

I'm making new NPC warriors

Zaine is active and approved
Eric still needs to archive

Link: https://www.platinumhearts.net/t13848-eric-zarathos-host-0-2-spirit-0-4-class-s

[THEFROSTHead Admin]

Everything is done and taken care of.

[ShinryuEstablished Member]

Yay I'm backs

Anyways, I think my thing got buried so I'll just refresh it but

I'm curious to your thoughts on Delilah's current state of her abilities, both thoughts and what is ok or needs change

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t14194-delilah-ckahrymhiohnne-rakshasa-of-slothwip

When you get the chance

[THEFROSTHead Admin]

Impact Event: Delilah's skin is incredibly pressure and impact resistant. Already durable to pressure being at the Earth's core, Delilah remembers only once being knocked out for a few minutes near the early time in her life, when the Meteor that wiped out the dinosaurs smashed into her and sunk her to the bottom of the ocean. A few minutes later she remembers waking up after that. The size of the meteor however demonstrated that Delilah's body can handle up to 200 Megatons of force before it damages her and can render her unconscious.

I'd reduce it to 20 megatons because that seems like a bit much for a newer character. I could see it later on when she develops and becomes stronger through durability, but now right out the gate. Not unless this application was A+ material in terms of quality.

Lightened hyperdensity: Due to Delilah's time at te Earth's core, Delilah's own energy and flesh was compacted and bond, repeatedly, over her stays and eons within the core. As a result, her skin in addition to being damage resistant, is also extremely hard. Even without her Akumo Kyoda, Delilah's skin is comparable to a diamond in it's density and compact design, not altering her weight to mass ratio but still giving her such dense molecules in her energy and cells that they are difficult to cut and break, as well as even the slightest of contact with her being painful due to her rigid structure.

I'd probably lower the durability to saying it is stronger than titanium for the same reasons listed above.

Sharpened flesh and energy: Due to Delilah's diamond skin as well, her own energy and flesh is also greatly sharpened. Each piece of her skin having the sharpness of a diamond, as well as if she ever chooses to flex her spiritual pressure, it will slice and dice those that it touches.

Diamond = titanium

Inertia Distortion: Delilah's skin has a very unique capacity tied to her apathy. If Delilah doesn't want to move from where she is, she doesn't. Or rather, she is able to alter the field of inertia of herself and what she's in contact to to literally glue herself to a location in space or an object. And no amount of physical or energetic force can remove her from it. This allow's Delilah to be, quite literally, the unmovable object. This force can also be applied to an individual she clings onto however, that individual is capable of removing her, though it takes a lot of effort to do so.

I fail to see what Inertia has to do with apathy. And since this deals with supernatural manipulation, I'd say these changes are done through her energy and can be undone by them as well. Otherwise, I will have to deny this power as we do not allow things which are unstoppable. @ the no amount of physical or energetic force.

Magnetic Persona: Ever since the dawn of time, for reasons even unknown to Delilah, things are attracted to her. In particular, living things. Dinosaurs, rats, people, hollow. Her energy is naturally hyperattractive to things weaker than her and even to those resistant to it, will often still find it unusual and confusing why they find her attractive or interesting. It has a constant draw of 5miles and has been known to be the start of several cults. All of which she has outlived.

I'd list out the resistance those on the different sides of the willpower spectrum are to it. Along with making it counterable if need be.

Impervious: A key part of Delilah's existence is the inability of the things that tried to kill her, to be able to in fact, kill her. A major reason for this is because her body is incredibly impact, pierce, and heat resistant. This isn't a true imperviousness however, her body is so significantly resistant to changes in pressure or temperature that she was once praised as a Goddess of the Earth by the Greeks, Mayans, and african tribes for her inability to be affected by volcanic eruptions, desert heatwaves, and even once had a pyramid built on top of her cause she refused to move. Frequently, she naps at the Earth's core cause she finds it cozy.

I'd list how resistance it is based on skill, tier and strength. Via percentage. No more than 50-60%

Superior Physiology: At this current time and all throughout her history, Delilah hasn't found a poison, invasive organism, or toxic energy that has negatively affected her body. And, unlike most beings, she doesn't have an immune system. Instead, Delilah has learned that her aura to make things do nothing also affects diseases, poisons, and lethal energies that enter her by simply making them sit around and do nothing inside her till they either die or pass through her body.

I'd just say that her body is resistant to toxic energies, but not immune. And then list the percentage of what degree it is resistant to each different element.

Opasnost' Inversiya: Delilah's own dislike for effort has caused her to deal with combat in a very unique manner: By converting the harm ratio of an object or energy into an inverted intent. By modifying the transtemporal intent surrounding a mass or energy that isn't sentient, such as a blast or a projectile, Delilah can convert it's intent to harm into an intent of harmlessness equal to it's current level of harm, and vice versa for a harmless intent into a harmful one. As such, she can convert a blast coming towards her into a cool breeze or into a kitten, the what it becomes being completely random. And she can equally turn a pillow into a hammer or blast. One important note about this technique is if used on something that's already affected, it will revert to it's original state. By simply pointing at the threatening or nonthreatening object or energy and saying "No Thank You.", will cause the conversion process to proceed. The level of conversion is also equivalent to the present level of intent. The more harmful the intent, the more harmless it becomes. As a result, this can cause more powerful attacks to be converted into equally nonharmful equivalents. And vice versa for nonharmful equivalents.

I'd limit this to 1-2 usages per turn. Along with that, I'd make it suck up more of her energy when used. It should also be limited to a 50-100 meter range. Furthermore, it should be coutnerable in some way or another or made visible to the opponent through something like an aura of light engulfing the object. And if overused, I'd recommend putting in drawbacks. As this needs more limitations.

Promedleniye Matritsa: Delilah's desire to not deal with things in the immediate future can cause her to put them off till later. This force even affects things around her and coming towards her, such as attacks. By simply saying "I'll do it" and stating how long from now she will do it, Delilah can alter the temporal juxtaposition of an attack coming towards her. This can cause her to either receive damage at a later date if it is melee related or, if a projectile, lock it in a temporal vortex attached to a specific time, orbit, and direction. In example, she can say in ten seconds and for ten seconds, that attack will vanish from existence and then, reappear ten seconds later. With a specific direction, she can change the pathing it takes upon re-entering existence and even attach it to orbit a target so, even if they move, it will still be able to redirect towards them. This technique however can only be used on up to 2 attacks per post and can only be used 8 times per thread. Using it in back to back posts also makes Delilah prone to falling asleep for 1 post.

I'd increase the amount she is sleeping for 1-3 post.

Budet Pozhirat': Delilah's own will to not do anything is so severe, it alters the will of those around her over time. Because of this, anyone engaged in combat with Delilah will notice a change in their mood, own power of will and focus. Because of this, every 6 posts someone remains in combat with her will cause her opponents Willpower and Focus to be lowered by one tier. Abilities that resist against this take 2 posts longer per tier loss. This technique cannot be used at the same time as Boyevoy distrofiya. Using this causes Delilah to take a nap ever 3 posts, though it's still active while she naps.

How exactly does this process work? Is it done through her energy? Does her will have a sort of energy that influences the area around her or what? Furthermore, how long does it take to recover? Can someone defend against it? Or counter against it?

Vitaliy Demotivatsiya: Delilah's own apathy has a single offensive use in the form of her Vital Motivation. This causes her being and her apathy to affect those in combat with her on a cellular, molecular and atomic level as time goes own. By infesting her nature into them, an opponent's own functions will cease to continue the longer they try to stay in combat with Delilah. In 5 posts, motor functions, sensory functions, and spiritual control functions will begin to weaken and falter. In 10 posts, this will permeate into maintenance and homeostatic functions, such as organic systems and necessary energy complexes, causing them to slow. Within 15-20 posts, motor and sensory and external energy manipulation will be reduced several. And each post after 20 causes some vital functions to either slow or cease. At 30 posts however, her essence will permeate the subatomic and subphotonic particles of the being and cause them to cease in their bonds, causing the entire being, soul and all, to cease existing

This is great and all, but where are the drawbacks? Limitations? Cooldowns? Resistance? Counter-play? I'm not seeing it with this.

Godly Endurance and Stamina: Because Delilah has literally spent Eons upon eons of doing as little as possible, this in turn has caused Delilah's body and energy to become obscenely efficient and extremely massive in it's storage. Her body and energy compensated for the energy it never used by storing it. And storing it. And storing it. As a result, Delilah is she so choose to in a fight, could unleash her maximum strength for the entire period without exhausting herself or her energy. And while it isn't truly limitless, her reserves are so vast and her body is so efficient and storing and using it, that it often seems like she never tires, despite the fact she is always napping. Because of this, Delilah can exert the full potential of her powers, aside from their own limits, indefinitely while in combat. If she ever chose to. Which is unlikely.

I'd remove the godly bit and replaced it with high.

Temporal Relocator: Simply put, Delilah if she finds that moving to a location is too much effort, will simply will herself to that location, as well as the location itself. Delilah's energy is able to capture a space of 15yd spherical radius around her and instantly move them to another location of her choice. One can negate these with their own energy or other teleportation deflectors of sorts. However, those that don't within the field are often transported with her, whether it's her intention or not.

I'd simply limit this to 1 usage per post.

The Kitty Cuteness Method: Delilah's own obsession with kittens has manifested itself so intensely that she is able to mimic their actions and mannerisms perfectly when she so chooses. She does this so well that it also manifests in her energetic presence and magnetic aura. Causing those that she inflicts the Kitty Stare, Kitty Nuzzle, Kitty Roll, And Kitty knit upon to be overwhelmed with a sense of cuteness and d'aww. This can be resisted with a stronger energy pressure or through a stronger will than Delilah's Those afflicted by the d'aww will find themselves more likely to do Delilah's errands for her.

As long as it can be resisted on some form or another, I'm fine with this.

The Mew: The Mew is Delilah's secret weapon. Her capacity to mimic kittens so so acute and her energy is so infestive into the ability, it allows her to generate a perfect kitten mew of adorableness. Those that are within earshot of the tiny mew find themselves so overwhelmed with cuteness that they are often temporarily mesmerized, finding themselves unable to do anything for a brief moment or moments that lasts between 1 to 3 posts. This technique can be only be used once per thread. It will always, at minimum, cause a pause in the next post. It can be resisted to lower it to a momentary pause through willpower and energy or reach it's maximum potential of 3 posts of utter d'awwage.

I'd agian work this off the will system and other counterplay methods such as barriers and the sort.

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