Sssso I want an upgrade..

Fri Jul 20, 2012 8:08 am

Name Of Character: Doctor Kabuto Hebi
Link To Character Profile: *W*
Reasons For Upgrading: If you must know...

I do solemnly swear never to piss Raiki off at me in a thread. Ever.

That thread... christ. Just... christ. The Doctor kept trying to fight him, but nothing he could do was working. This alone I think is worth quite a good bit.

A lesser known but still interesting thread.

Welp, I enjoyed doing this thread. I got to freak Redd the f$@# out multiple times, show off the Doctor's personality, and do some demon world gravedigging. All in a day's work. *w*

In addition, I believe his intelligence is already extremely high due to his nature, so this is also kind of a balancing thing.
What Are You Upgrading:

1. Mental Deduction to Grandmaster.

2. (IMPORTANT) The following is already in his application. However, no one has checked it. Here's the stuff.

Alternate Personality: Doctor Franken Stien

Emotion: Deep within his mind, there lies another part of Dr. Hebi. It is unlike anything else one could imagine for the doctor. It has a specific... sense. A sense of peace. It's addicted to peace. However... in the way that it is addicted, it also wants to constantly shatter that peace. Essentially, in every bit of Yin, there is Yang. Similarly, in every bit of Yang, there is Yin. However... Dr. Hebi has neither Yin or Yang. This personality is his version of Yin and Yang; his absolute lack of normal emotions has this personality within it; completely overrun with emotion... to the point of Madness. This madness is... strange to say the least. It wants to destroy; and yet it also wants to protect. It is an essence of balance. If this balance was ever broken... then Dr. Hebi would enter into his other form. This personality was named by Dr. Hebi himself, who discovered its existence within his own body and named it after one of the most famous Doctors of all time.

Two Sides of Insanity...

This form is chaotic. It destroys anything that crosses it... or protects it. In any case, when it is created, it is bound to end up destroying something. Or, on the alternate side, it could merely have Dr. Hebi's normal personality. Similarly, Dr. Hebi could keep his normal personality or change to Doctor Franken Stien's. However, this form has always been sealed, due to the fact that Dr. Hebi has never had to deal with emotion before. Because.... in reality... Doctor Franken Stien is the true Dr. Hebi. If Dr. Hebi hadn't been experimented on all his life, Stien would be his normal self. Severely unscrewed, but also caring about his surroundings. Stien has two states: Yin and Yang.

Yin: When Stien is in a state of Yin, he is determined to protect. He'll fight and attack until he is utterly destroyed. Yin is focused completely on one single task; normally for the benefit of someone else. Yin is much calmer than normal, talks evenly as if he is completely sane, and doesn't use any of Dr. Hebi's snakes. However, it is as just or even more so intelligent and observant than the doctor himself, which is truly saying something In retrospect, he much prefers to use Mu, who is the only reason he has remained so close to the top of Dr. Hebi's conscious... even though he's a dormant personality. He is incurred when something... anything... that Dr. Hebi has come to actually care about comes under threat. It is non manipulative unlike the Doctor, is free of his gold addiction, and discards his cloak when he fights. If this personality is activated; as it is currently dormant, it could randomly surface in Dr. Hebi's life, allowing the Doctor a more carefree attitude and a kind of goofing actions with those he interacts with, a bit like his normal personality but without the manipulative parts. He doesn't care for experiments so much as just being alive, and is a carefree soul. However, it also has a small connection to Yang; if the stress is so great, it will use absolutely ANYTHING it can to complete its objective.

Yang: When Stien is in a state of Yang, the Doctor's inherent madness comes completely to the surface. He destroys everything around himself, not having any care for objectives or what he is trying to complete. When Yang is dominant, Mu refuses to assist the Doctor, and so only the Snakes and Edotensei can be used by Yang. To say that Yang is a little unstable is quite accurate. He talks coldly, calculating to his opponetns; however, he rarely actually regards his observations, often casting them aside. In addition, he permanently keeps a truly disturbing smile on Dr. Hebi's face. The Doctor is extremely dangerous in this state, as Yang lets out all of the body's natural power all at once, completely disposing of any and all limiters the Doctor has placed upon his own body. In fact, his very activation results in a dark red field of energy to completely surround Dr. Hebi's body, and his hands and feet are permanently triggered in Reiatsu Scalpel state. Yang cares nothing for the Doctor's body, recklessly using it until he has destroyed any and everything around himself. Yang is also completely dormant; however, there are a variety more ways that it could be activated. The most primary is when Dr. Hebi actually gains a desire to harm something out of an experiment, or when he actually loses his will. IF he seeks power, Yang will awaken. IF he is about to die, Yang will awaken. Yang has remained close to Dr. Hebi's consciousness partly due to Mu's holding of Yin; and also partly due to the fact of its very nature that makes it want to be destructive and top; although the Doctor keeps it... and by result Yin... Sealed by the gold that he snorts. Yang also has a small connection to Yin; if he actually has something he cares about, and that thing is in his way of destruction, there is a large chance that he will stop being in Yang and return to his neutral state.

Stien State:

If both Yin and Yang have been awakened in the Doctor's body and mind, he can use this form. This is... in effect, his Holy Hellish Angel State. He is not an angel; however, that is what his blood tries to say he is. As a result, he does not have normal forms, instead having Dragon Doctor Mode and such. However, if he had been allowed to develop normally, Stien State would be the natural progression of his body. In Stien State, his entire body reutnrs to what it should look like without having been in the Snake's cells or outside influences. He can still use his snakes and such as before; however, Hebi goes inside of his body, changing the colors of his torso to look like he's wearing clothes made of cloth sewn onto his body. On his head appears a very large screw in addition his his hair lying perfectly flat on his head and the strange marks around his eyes vanishing as his eyes return to being circular as opposed to slits; this screw is very interesting. It allows Dr. Hebi, while in his own mind, to chose weather he would like to enter Yin or Yang state. By turning it clockwise, he enters Yin; by turning it counter clockwise, he enters Yang personality. Unless he has tamed this form, which he has not yet, he will be predetermined what personality he is in. Interestingly, if someone else were to grab the screw sticking out of his head and turn it one of the directions, as long as they have some hold over Chaos Energy or an EXTREMELY powerful reiatsu, they could change Dr. Hebi's personality.

Hebi: Scythe Form: Hebi IS his phishing buki, after all. However, in this state, Hebi becomes quite strange. It shoots out of Stien State's mouth, looking like a black snake made of energy almost like a tongue before it finally turns into a scythe. This scythe has a very large polearm, with a great blade on it and a small back blade as well on the polearm's other side. Hebi, being what it is, also has conscious control of itself; while it will mostly allow Dr. Hebi to control it however he wishes, it will also do other things as well. For instance, it can turn back into its normal form, acting like a shield to take a hit for the Doctor, or moving the blade, as it can see from any part of its entire scythe area. However, there is one downside to this; if Hebi sacrifices itself to take a hit for the doctor, he is stuck in Stien State... until he breeds another Hebi from the old ones corpse. If the entire snake is completely destroyed... Dr. Hebi will never leave Stien State unless he has a Selve turn completely into another Hebi, which takes 3-4 months. HE becomes a master of using this scythe, as it is in reality Hebi itself, using a fighting style that tends to use the scythe for defense and then using hand to hand combat on his opponent, unless he feels it better to do something otherwise. The scythe is... for all intents and purposes, unbreakable while it is in a scythe form. As long as the attack would not completely kill Dr. Hebi himself in Stien State with one blow, it would not break from the force used against it.

Power Stock: While in Stein State, Dr. Hebi is one hundred percent a melee fighter. That is to say that his entire capacity with his own energies and Mu is completely stored inside of his body, granting many different effects. For one thing, his skin is beyond the harness of diamond, taking extremely powerful explosions, deadly sharp blades, and an immense amount of strength to harm. However, despite the weight caused by making it so extremely tough and dense, it is just a testament to the amount of strength that he has that he can maneuver it at extremely high speeds, maintaining it comfortably. In addition, his speed itself vastly increases, allowing him to move at speeds that would set most humans on fire and not harm him in the bit, racing above mach five from his running alone, looking as if he is moving at shunpo speeds normally. His strength is such that he could lift up a skyscraper and throw it at an opponent if he was not also dealing with his own body; as it is now, he has enough strenght to knock out a good sized house with a punch at one of the walls, completely decimating it with the sheer amount of force produced.

Spirit Shock: However, there is another interesting trait that his enter has created. Because it is so contained, if he charges it into one single body part, his raw spirit energy forms into a strange kind of dark red sparks. These sparks are... special. If anything makes contact with the sparks when in Stien State, the person will feel whatever their power source is being completely obliterated. However, what this is similar to saying is that the person's very... soul comes under attack. There are few ways to fight this; as attacking someone's soul is... interesting to say the least. If the person is less than advanced in at least three areas of their will sheet, and has a pain endurance of adept or less, their entire body will feel like it is bursting as internal destruction occurs all over their body. If their Pain Endurance is above adept, they will still feel what seems like their core being being attacked by the shocks; however they will not have major ruptures and instead simply large amounts of pain. However, if they have a grandmaster in their willsheets under willpower or focus, and have at least advanced in mental deduction and the other trait, they will feel no pain whatsoever. However, there will be another effect upon their body. Their very mind will feel as if it has been shattered; they will enter a state very much like Doctor Stien's Yang; a type of madness and their minds unstable. All in all, only someone with an immense amount of willpower and courage can truly resist its effects; In which case, they will only feel the Doctor's attacks become more effective when they are charged with Spirit Shock. Another interesting fact is that between any two limbs of his body that are within one foot of one another, he can run a current of Spirit Shock along the space and send its effects at a heightened ratio through whatever touches it. However, there is a simple way to stop it; just dodge. He can only use it with hand to hand combat, as he can't charge it through Hebi, and his limbs will always stay the same size.

Limit: However, there is something else about Stien State. While he has entered it, all of Dr. Hebi's power is within his body. This means he can't generate snakes, he cannot use Edotensei unless he has all the things for it already out, he cannot perform summonings, he cannot use Mu's power, and etc. He also cannot change to any other form except his normal form after entering Stien State. When he powers down, Hebi returns to its strange black snake-like energy stream before going back to Dr. Hebi's mouth and down his throat. Then, his skin returns to looking snake like as the snake goes out of him once more in its normal state, and his body's power returns to its normal frequency as the screw goes back inside of his head and his hair becomes more unkempt once again.
Any Extra Notes: I really like Stien state and would like to see Dr. Hebi be able to use it OwO
Approved By: (ONLY THE PERSON WHO APPROVES THE UPGRADE WILL PUT THIS HERE! WE WILL EDIT YOUR POST AND ADD OUT NAME HERE!)

Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:25 am

I'm going to say no to his GM in Mental Deduction.
Stein form is approved, though.

Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:38 am

Gonna say thanks here mostly because you're not on xat.

So, thanks.

-will just have to keep working with his main antag then- =w=

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