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Taichou
Taichou
神 Glorious Asian
神 Glorious Asian
Joined : 2011-04-12
Posts : 831
Age : 27
Location : Human Realm

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Platinum Points:
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Meilin Soan Empty Re: Meilin Soan

Sat Jun 16, 2012 6:46 pm
Firstly, I'll like to point out that you made my day with a typo.

Naturally it can freeze intimate objects with ease. Say a house or something.

Seriously, that made my day. I'll just like to point out that intimate is not the same as inanimate. c: Now, on a serious note, the numbing agents that your Shikai imposes lack some description. It's likely that it's from the ice but does the numbing effects last the whole time? Is there any way to perhaps get rid of it? Also, how big are the ice dragons? Are they massive or human-sized?

You also left the ability "Ice Cavern" empty. Was this intentional or forgotten? Overall, the main problem is just the lacking description for the numbing agents and other things I have mentioned... which is not that much.

On the other hand, your personality is lacking ONE sentence. Yeah, people are picky about that. :< Well, either way. Fix those stuff and alert me. c:
Taichou
Taichou
神 Glorious Asian
神 Glorious Asian
Joined : 2011-04-12
Posts : 831
Age : 27
Location : Human Realm

Member Info
Platinum Points:
Meilin Soan Left_bar_bleue10/100Meilin Soan Empty_bar_bleue  (10/100)
Tiers:

Meilin Soan Empty Re: Meilin Soan

Sat Jun 16, 2012 10:53 pm
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CHEERS!

Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: Fantastico.
Tier: 2-1+

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Tsubine
Tsubine
Ye Olde Guarde
Joined : 2010-07-09
Posts : 3946
Age : 30
Location : Gracemeria

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Meilin Soan Left_bar_bleue7380/100Meilin Soan Empty_bar_bleue  (7380/100)
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Meilin Soan Empty Re: Meilin Soan

Mon Jun 18, 2012 11:49 pm
THIS MEMBER IS BANNED AND THUS THIS IS ARCHIVED


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Meilin Soan Empty Re: Meilin Soan

Wed Sep 19, 2012 4:14 am
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Moved into Old WIP!
Just so that you can organize it!
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Meilin Soan Empty Re: Meilin Soan

Wed Oct 10, 2012 10:25 pm
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Archiving this!
Because he is perma-banned.. for real!
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