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"Can I... Can I cry on your shoulder for a moment... Please?"
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» Name: Meilin 'Exciteiaro' Soan
» Titles: The Excitable Myrmidon
» Appearance Age: 15
» True Age: 20
» Gender: Female
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» Personality:
Mia is soft spoken, timid, shy, and meek, but can be super cheerful and bubbly at random occasions. She was at one point extremely strong-willed, but after both of her parents passed on and were reincarnated this disappeared. She was sent to live with her abusive aunt which assisted in developing into her fragile self, due to the beatings and broken bones. Mia was sincere and thoughtful, but rarely laughed. Sometimes Marth and Kyo could make her smile, but she rarely laughed. She was oddly serious, though without meaning to be.
However, she had a deep compassion for others' well-being, of which has made many become warm towards her. Whenever she found anyone hurt, she would stop and ask if they were okay. If she could do anything to help them, she would every time. She is oddly attuned to the emotions of others, usually knowing exactly how someone was feeling and why after only spending a small amount of time with them. When she was being sealed up for the battle against her Inner Hollow, she could tell that Stefan was worried about her, wither he believed it himself or not.
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» Zanpakutō Name: Ancient Lady Frost Dragon (Shimo Ryū Kodai - 婦人古代霜龍)
» Reiatsu Color: Crystal Clear, a tint of deep sea blue but if seen its reflective of things around it.
» Zanpakutō Spirit Personality: Fujin Kodai Ryu is a gentle, polite, and courteous woman whom believes treating all of the people she can support with lots of recognition, respect, and courtesy. She is constantly lecturing Mia in said courtesy in hopes that Mia may gain a bit of courage to talk with others. Fujin Kodai Ryu is very brave to protect those she loves and materializes if she sees fit to fight along side Mia.
Her speech patterns are also very slow, seemingly pausing to always consider the correct words and to not sound offensive.
» Inner World: The inner world of this Vizard starts within an underground cavern, of which the walls are covered in a blue ice on one side and a type of red ice on the other, half and half. From the entry point, one can walk onward for days if the two Zanpakutō Spirits whom reside here do not wish to see those who may have entered. If one walks and is welcomed, two paths appear as a fork in the cavern. The First Trial, of which consists choosing a path to Shikai. When the Cavern's tunnel splits, the two paths are covered in a single shaded color of ice.
The left path, consists of red ice and leads into a red frozen wasteland resembling frozen blood. Blue crystal and ice pine trees form multiple forests that could be considered a labyrinth. Within this forest, your since of direction vanishes without a trace, wither you will it or not.
The right path, consists of blue ice and leads into a city with icicle skyscrapers and clouds of red ice and crystal along with a red misty fog everywhere. This city has maps everywhere and is easy to navigate but even so, finding your way could be difficult as your sense of direction is removed and the maps do not list north south east or west. This city seems to glow with magic as a light source.
The Zanpakutō Spirits that reside here are as such, the red path has the male Ancient Frost Dragon spirit while the blue path has the female Ancient Frost Dragon.
Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: The blade in her hands within the appearance photo.
» Release Phrase: Deep Freeze! Fujin Shimo Ryū! (Lady Frost Dragon - 婦人 霜 龍)
» Shikai Appearance:
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» Shikai Abilities:
» Dragon Twister - In use, Mia chants the words 'Dragon Twister' (or out loud..) in her mind to send three Ice Dragon in s spiral fashion strait towards an enemy, of which have a homing missile type of control with insanely high response times that can be increased if Mia uses one or two of her hands to control their path.
Each dragon has a chill factor that may freeze whatever they touch on contact to an extent, as well as creating sub zero temperature in a five foot radius of the dragons.(Separate and as a whole.) The dragons can also release a icy breathe from their mouths at any time or when Mia/Mia's Zanpakutō will's it. The twister's resemble a blizzard like tornado.
This breathe instantly numb's anything it comes into contact with but is easily avoided unless you are right infront of the dragon or dragons using it. This breathe also may freeze sections of the affected's body and coat them with ice. Naturally it can freeze inanimate objects with ease. Say a house or something, that or obliterate it if they happen to smack into it. The dragons themselves are Chinese styled and over eighty foot long and 15 foot wide. Note a good day when you look one right in the red glowing eye eh?
» Ice Slash is an icy waves of spiritual pressure released as Mia slashes her Zanpakutō that has a bow shape or tsunami shape depending on if this was used in the air or on the ground. The attack releases sharp ice blades that can cleave through steel with little to no effort. There is also a trail of ice spikes and icicles left behind in its wake.
These create sub zero temperatures and well as fire needles of ice that may begin the numbing process if they touch the target entities directly. (Skin.)
Naturally, all Mia's attacks have a numbing agent in them as well as sub zero temperature change. This cold also slows body reaction time but speeds up Mia's as she is unaffected by any of her own attacks or abilities. The numbing effects cannot be removed unless the ice that gathers on the target it broken off or removed. Do note, the more ice that gathers, the harder it becomes as well as heavier and if you fail to break it of before the tenth post, you may be stuck where you are due to how heavy said ice may have become. By post twenty, the target may be frozen to death in an Ice Coffin.» Bankai Appearance:» Bankai Abilities: (What type of additional abilities does your character get in Bankai? Please describe them in 3 paragraph's; six sentences each)
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» Inner Hollow Description:
Meilin Xing Chen
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» Inner Hollow Personality:
Meilin is an energetic woman, not easily intimidated. She loves to fight, and is more sadistic than Mia could ever dream to become, loving to prolong her opponents suffering. Also, she has no qualms over killing innocent people, though tries to refrain from it in order to avoid making her 'Queen', Mia angry. She does have a playful side however, and is kind to the people she likes or respects, though earning her approval is generally easy, as Meilin is a rather accepting person.
» Inner Hollow Powers:
Cero is a form of attack used by Menos, Arrancar and Vizard. As a standard energy blast, it consists of firing a powerful blast of concentrated spiritual energy at the target. While in most cases it is fired from the mouth, some Arrancar and Vizard are capable of firing Cero from their hands, fingers and other parts of their bodies. This often requires the user to under take a specific pose. Mia is able to concentrate this power into her Zanpakutō to create explosion of power in ever slash over her sword. Creating cero blades that ae large in diameter and can cleave through solid steel. This also can cause explosions on contact with the blade.
Acidic Touch: Many Hollows, like Shrieker and Acidwire, have displayed this ability, although Rukia implies that all Hollows possess this power. When a Hollow grabs a Human with their hands, the spot where the person was grabbed is shown to get burned as if acid were poured onto it. This was shown when Orihime was grabbed in the leg, and on the wound on Chad's back. These wounds seem to allow the Hollow's reiatsu to seep into the person, causing great pain to the victim. The wounds can heal if given enough time though, and it is unknown if this ability works on Shinigami or other spiritually powerful beings.
High-Speed Regeneration (超速再生, Chōsoku Saisei; lit. "Ultra-Fast Regeneration") is the ability that allows a Hollow to heal most injuries very quickly, with the exception of the destruction of the head or vital organs.
Garganta (黒腔 (ガルガンタ), garuganta; Spanish for "Throat", Japanese for "Black Cavity") is how Hollows and Arrancar move to and from Hueco Mundo. Kaname Tōsen, Kisuke Urahara and recently Mayuri Kurotsuchi have also demonstrated the ability to use the technique. It literally tears open the dimensional fabric separating the worlds, revealing a tunnel of whirling, torrential energy that must be focused and solidified to create a discernible pathway.
» Inner Hollow Reiatsu Color: Ocean Blue with streaks of violet and baby blue.
» Hollow Mask Appearance:
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» Vizard Powers:
- Power Augmentation
- Enhanced Spiritual Power
- Enhanced Strength
- Enhanced Endurance
- Enhanced Durability
- Mask Regeneration
Bala (虚弾 (バラ), bara; Spanish for "Bullet," Japanese for "Hollow Bullet") Bala is an Arrancar alternative to Cero. The technique hardens the user's Spiritual Pressure and fires it like a bullet at high speeds. Although it is weaker than a normal Cero, it moves about twenty times faster and can be fired at a much higher rate, but the damage is much the same. Stronger Arrancar can also fire a more powerful Bala, while retaining its twenty-fold speed. Mia's Bala are.. very unstable and tend to blow up in her face. No it does not feel good. Though when working they are orange or violet in color. The likely hood of her attention span keeping the focus to use Bala without it exploding in her face is jjuusst aabbooouuuttt... zero. Her use of this (SUCCESSFULLY) is extremely rare due to her Inner hollow (Whom she calls Shar Shar) laughing her ass off ever time she fails.
Frost Bitten Reiatsu -
Mia's reiatsu quickly begins to lower the temperature's in the area far more than Reiatsu normally would. The Reiatsu creates ice crystals on the affected person's bodies, effectively weighing them down as well as possibly making parts of the affected 'bodies' go slightly numb to completely numb. This may slow the bodies reaction time as the higher Mia goes into the stages of her Zanpakutō's release and longer she is in each stage, the heavier, denser, colder and more covering the ice on the affected person or persons becomes due to prolonged exposure.
Also, needles form under large patches of ice and possibly begin to drive under the skin of the affected, giving a higher chance of Frostbite and freezing to death as this ice combines with the blood of the target very slowly. This may freeze the blood stream, leading to death. This specific ice is unaffected by heat unless extreme and must be 'broken off the body' or dug out of the skin as extended exposure may freeze one to death and possibly even freeze the heart.
This does not have any effect on Mia.
In Shikai, the ice gathers on the 'targeted' enemies at a fixed rate. The rate of which the Ice gather on a target could take as little as five seconds to a hour depending on power difference. Do keep in mind that the closer one is to Mia, the quicker the ice gathers and the heavier it becomes. Clashing with Mia's Zanpakutō speeds up the freezing as well, doubling the speed every clash.
In Bankai, the ice's rate in which it gather has sped up immensely. It no longer is little flakes to quarter sized gathering. The ice covers like a slate of stone, forming large plates that overlap each other. Through this, the weight gain is multiplied by each 'layer' of ice as well as the temperature.
_____________________________________________» Resurrección Appearance:In Resurrección, Mia's hollow releases herself into the state you see behind Mia. Mia's eyes glow red while her skin bleaches out and a hole appears were her womb would naturally be located.
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» Resurrección Abilities: (When a character ascends to this state, they at their peak power. As such, you will need to post at least 5 paragraph's describing their powers.)
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» Background: Mia grew up in Arlington, Virginia. She was often picked on by others due to her general fragility. People often called her "kitten", saying she was just as fragile and just as stupid as one.
Mia was actually once a very strong person, but became shy and introverted when her mother and father passed away, leaving Mia and her fraternal twin brother Marth to live with their Aunt Chelsey, who ran a flower shop, and was also both verbally and physically abusive to young Mia but not Marth whom she had fallen in love with.
During the school day, Mia was bullied and at home, she was beaten and ridiculed for being fragile, something she has no power over. almost everyday after school, Mia's brother Marth would find her crying and alone under a bridge or in some alley in the city. The only thing that propelled young Mia forward was the hope that her Knight in Shining Armor would arrive and save her from this horrible life of being hated and beaten like she was nothing. That knight did finally come, her brother Marth had grown tired of her Aunt and killed her as she was beating Mia again one day. Marth held his sister close as the police were told that the aunt was very abusive, even in front of guests whom had become witnesses.
They were happy, they had a home and they could take care of themselves.. but it would not last.
Two years after her death... Chelsey.. the Hated Aunt came back.. as a Hollow. She slaughtered Marth for betraying her 'love' and ravaged Mia for stealing the man she loved. They were bound to this place by a Chain Of Fate, but luckily, a shinigami captain had been in the area off duty. Momo Hinamori purified the Hollow, Chelsey.. but the Gates Of Hell opened.. and took her into its pits with its chain ablaze with violet hellfire.
Mia and Marth sat there, Mia's body fragile even as a soul was bleeding as Momo performed a Konso on her and Marth whom held each other tight as they vanished into the Soul society.
Upon entering the Soul society as 'pluses' and were living together again for a number of years(17). During this time, Mia and Marth have =entered the Seireitei Shinigami Acadamy and began as a Shinigami. Finding her calling in Zanjutsu and Hand to Hand Combat, but still decent with Kidō Mia was progressing well, until an unfortunate accident occurred. During her first training mission, a hollow of all things attack her group and all but herself, Marth and Kyo were killed. Mia ran away, leaving her friend Kyo and brother Marth behind. Her cowardice noticed by the Hollow and it ran to follow her.
Grabbed by the neck, Mia couldn't run. Mia couldn't do anything but struggle or wait for death. Marth and Kyo being to far away to even assist her as her neck broke in the Hollows grip. Mia lost conscience then, entering her mind and dream scape. She beleived to have awoke in the arms of her Captain, Lloyd Reed who just smiled at her and ordered her not to move since her neck was broken, but his tone was.. slightly different. Mia's body has also gone numb due to a virus that her Captain of all people surely had spotted in some way. At least thats who she thought it was, unbeknownst to Mia, her mind had been playing tricks on her. She was infact watching Stefan Soan walk away after slaughtering the hollow that harmed her.
Mia again woke up some time later, unable to move her body which was bound and casted in several places. She had taken much more damage than she believed, a crushed left hand, left leg broken in four place, a right knee cap busted, her neck broken, several ribs broken, and her right side had been burned by the hollows acidic touch along with her neck, chin, back and breasts. She seemed to be in Seireitei's squad four hospital and many officers surrounded her, using healing Kidō as she awoke.
Seven months later she was fully recovered and began to train again, her cowardice getting her thrown into the Fifth Division under Captain Hinamori whom assisted her slightly in her abilities.
Mia was called for another mission. This time, another hollow appeared, she would finally call upon her Zanpakutō in this battle and gain a quite bit a bravery from Frossia as Mia called her partner and friend. The word went out, "Deep Freeze! Fujin Shimo Ryū!" (Lady Frost Dragon), this time slaying the hollow and gaining confidence about herself.
Though it was for not, as she raged to combat her inner hollow in front of Captain Hinamori whom defended herself from Mia's hollowed state one midnight dreary. Mia's battle lasted hours and she had to be subdued, Lloyd Reed and Momo Hinamori using Kidō to keep her state pinned down. But Mia won. She used her full potential and comboed the hollow into submission whom called her 'Princess' as if mocking her.
Mia signed resignation from Seireitei temporarily and left back to her home in the world of the living. Here she encountered a demon who was beyond her level, it beat her down and as it was about to slay her.. he appeared once more.
Stefan Soan killed the demon before her with little effort, but Mia had never had a chance to use her mask or Shikai. Using Kidō Captain Hinamori had taught her to heal, she recovered her wounds enough to challenge Stefan, but she mainly did this because of her wanting to prove herself.
The challenge accepted, Mia dawned her masked after activating her Shikai. Not yet being able to use Shunpo which Stefan noted, it was hard for her to even keep up even though Stefan didn't use Shunpo. She lasted for some time, but blocking and never getting even a slight attack in. The battle lasted about twenty minutes before she had taken too much and collapsed to the ground, exhausted.
Her green haired crush/role model of osrts then walked over to her leaning over her with a smirk. His next words shocked Mia so much that after he asked, she was speechless. He was impressed by her. He wanted to adopt the fifteen year old girl and train her under him. "Whatever just hurry up."
Those words, Mia jumped up and begin to follow Stefan Soan. Officially on record, Mia is MIA or Missing In Action.
_____________________________________________General Skills
- Durability: Adept
- General Speed: Advanced
- Strength:Adept
- Weapon Skill: Beginner
Racial Skills
- Hoho: Adept
- Cero/Bala/Kidō:Beginner
- Zanjutsu: Advanced
- Hakuda:Adept
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» Role Play Sample:
Training Day with Redd Tsuken Posts:
The young Ravenette was running quickly to her training session with Redd Tsuken, seeing as she was already thirty minutes late she was panicing on the outside as well, though with good reason! It was her first student as a new Captain and she was late!
"A bad impression already! Please move!"
Her voice called out as she ran to the Squad Five Dojo, her panicing heart so caught up in this irriational behavior that Momo didn't remember she could use Shunpo. Her legs jumping her small form over potted plants in the area as well as people as she hurried onward. Several of her Sqaud member's jumped out of the way as she ran by at high speeds, influnced by the panic as she tripped and slapped into the door to the dojo, ripping through its bamboo and paper form as she felt her student release spiritual pressure and welcome her. Momo was sure seeing his captain slam through a door and onto her face would throw anyone for a loop.
"I'm sorry I am late Tsuken-san! I forgot about this and was sketching Rangiku-chan!"
She apologized while little Momo's eyes looked at Redd sheepishly.
post after
The ravenette emale's eyes were locked with the man, Redd who was shorter than her. Both waiting after she had called out the words to start. Then Redd moved, a quick grab and draw of his sword, belted to his right side as he pushed off the ground forward. Momo's quickly becoming airborne after her stance change to backflip away three times. Her eyes locked onto his sword which was now drawn, her lesson's from.. Aizen of all people coming into play.
Remember, don't watch their eyes. Watch their blade Momo. Never look away from it unless you can keep one eye directly on the opponents blade. Aizen's voice came into her head, echoing her lessons. She remembered Aizen for only who he SHOULD have been. Her left eye watching Redd's feet as her right watched his blade, the clang sounding from the Zanpakutō clashing as her attempted to drive her sword upwards to her left. Momo caught the action red handed and quickly drew her blade down to Redd's Zanpakutō's guard, in an attempt to push him down. This was only a feint however as Momo quickly pushed his blade harder and unlocked the swords before crouching while he was possibly distracted by the power difference and spinning to hit Redd in the side of the waist with the but of her Zanpakutō.
This action followed by pushing away from him into a roll and finally a one handed hand stand to get back on her feet.
"alright!"
Momo said as she stood up quickly, sensing a flurry of attacks she quickly enter her guarding stance and began to block attack that could be coming.
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Firstly, I'll like to point out that you made my day with a typo.
Seriously, that made my day. I'll just like to point out that intimate is not the same as inanimate. c: Now, on a serious note, the numbing agents that your Shikai imposes lack some description. It's likely that it's from the ice but does the numbing effects last the whole time? Is there any way to perhaps get rid of it? Also, how big are the ice dragons? Are they massive or human-sized?
You also left the ability "Ice Cavern" empty. Was this intentional or forgotten? Overall, the main problem is just the lacking description for the numbing agents and other things I have mentioned... which is not that much.
On the other hand, your personality is lacking ONE sentence. Yeah, people are picky about that. :< Well, either way. Fix those stuff and alert me. c:
Naturally it can freeze intimate objects with ease. Say a house or something.
Seriously, that made my day. I'll just like to point out that intimate is not the same as inanimate. c: Now, on a serious note, the numbing agents that your Shikai imposes lack some description. It's likely that it's from the ice but does the numbing effects last the whole time? Is there any way to perhaps get rid of it? Also, how big are the ice dragons? Are they massive or human-sized?
You also left the ability "Ice Cavern" empty. Was this intentional or forgotten? Overall, the main problem is just the lacking description for the numbing agents and other things I have mentioned... which is not that much.
On the other hand, your personality is lacking ONE sentence. Yeah, people are picky about that. :< Well, either way. Fix those stuff and alert me. c:
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