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THEFROST
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Platinum Points:
Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
Tiers:
https://www.platinumhearts.net

Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Empty Re: Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+]

Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:14 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept


Comments/Notes: "He's the first and most powerful demon summoner ever created yet he started to close his eyes and reflect on his past."

There are other types of demonic summoners out there; he isn't the first nor strongest. Remove or fix that.

"Hagokumo made the Dark Organization which funded and organized to bring both the soul society and Iramash clan down. "

Make that into a team and I'll be fine with the history.

"With Haggis's training, Hagokumo had learned to control it when used it almost like an explosion of 10 mile radius."

If you use that, make sure it's somewhat straining to blow up ten miles at his power. I'd suggest it being a situation where he is above average; rather then all the time.

Tier: 1-1+ whenever fixed.


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Platinum Points:
Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Left_bar_bleue99999/99999Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Empty_bar_bleue  (99999/99999)
Tiers:
https://www.platinumhearts.net

Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Empty Re: Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+]

Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:31 pm
Accepted.


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Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+] Empty Re: Hagokumo Masada [APPROVED 1-1+]

Sat Jun 29, 2013 7:55 am

«MOVING THIS TO ARCHIVES»

Seeing how I approved a new version of this earlier in the month, and the fact it's taking up space in the Approved Ziamichi Board, I'm moving this into archives as you have two apps of the same character in approved.


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