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Kenshin
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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Comments/Notes: Denied for now, your absorbing Reishi is not allowed, only Quincy can do that, as well as absorbing techniques that other people use, basically causing their techniques to not work if you use your powers, is god mod. Change your powers, make the history a little bit longer and then I will regrade the application.
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Kenshin
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Age : 32
Location : Hilliard, Ohio

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Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:30 am
Gravity as well as the whole time space thing are a no go, the other stuff i actually really like, with the Kinetic energy thought you aren't allowed to take it from a biological entity. For a person's powers, stealing the Kinetic energy from that you would have to put in a weakness as well.

History looks good though, can't control gravity or space/time. That's about all i see wrong with the next powers though, fix this and we should be in good shape


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Kenshin
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Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:32 am
By the way, in my opinion, any power is good as long as it has a good enough weakness to the power. That's one thing I have learned from RP.


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Sun Jun 03, 2012 6:24 pm
Okay with this character now, i do like the abilities. Just clarify a few things for me, with his Bankai in that time space thing, it's only anything that enters it, correct? Meaning things that are already inside of the thing are not effected, correct?

Also with that they don't slow down much, correct? Only a fraction of a second slower then their normal speed correct?

Also

"FASTER then a flash step user could cover a mere dozen meters or so. For all intents and purpose, this is as close to instantaneous movement as one can get without actually teleporting. "

That part you can't have, you can't be faster then a flash step user, if you want something like I have in which it doesn't make you faster, you just cover a lot more distance with a flash step, then that is fine. But you cannot use this in rapid succession like you could a normal flash step, put a cool-down time of greater then 4 or 5 posts and this ability will be okay to use, in my opinion. But this doesn't mean you can move faster then a flash step, just remember that.

Fix those things/clarify and I think that will be the last thing for what I have to say.


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