Re: ZX (Shinigami) [Approved; 1-1+]

Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:03 pm

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Mental Deduction: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Pain Endurance: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Focus: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Comments/Notes:

Hienkyaku I have a problem with, Shinigami are unable to use a Quincy technique because of the fact that they cannot absorb reishi at all. Anything to do with gathering Reishi with a Shingami cannot be used.

Also cannot have the overwhelming amount of elements that are with that skills for the sword that ZX will be using, either pick one of those or make the elements at least all the same or revamp them a bit.

Also if your going with anything in your bankai about being half a step between master and grandmaster then you must get approval from someone other then myself, mainly the admins.

Also Final: Faineru Kyouten: I have a big problem with, making it rain like that, maybe only in a very small like 20 meter radius or something like that, but a half mile is way too much. You cannot dodge rain no matter how fast you are.
Tier:

Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:14 pm

Ahh I didn't know that was quincy tech. >_> -Never read about them I can just rename it and make it more shunpo basedand on it's speed level.- done.

Okay, Although that's his style of using a huge ass amount of elements, it's to simulate those elements, not to actual produce them

And Faineru Kyouten's "Rain" Isn't exactly a Rain so to speak it's just a lot of plasma bullets being shot around. and I'll make the Aoe much smaller.

-Done in a sec.-

Wed Jun 20, 2012 10:28 pm

Application Checklist

Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Will Skills

Willpower/Determination: Advanced
Mental Deduction: Adept
Pain Endurance: Adept
Focus: Advanced

Comments/Notes: We already talked about everything in PC. ;D
Tier: 1-3+

Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:30 pm

This is the new Phantom Tech that's going to replace the Internal Reactor.

• Phantom Tech: Tachyon Drive

• Phantom Tech Abilities: 3 Step Harmonizer Function (Gauntlets, Sword, and Armor) Kinetic Back-Feed system Derives the kinetic energy generated by Tachyons as a power source when not harnessing the Tachyons directly. This in short means that the energy created by the Tachyon Drive is used as a power source first then used in various applications.

• Phantom Tech Powers: Creates the Tachyons used in and out of battle, Able to Siphon the reactive energy around him without problem. Can be used in battle for eight posts before needing a three post cool-down. The synchronization with his Gauntlets, Armor, and Sword allows him to balance out the usage of the energy created and used.

Sun Jul 08, 2012 7:17 pm

Everything looks pretty awesome to me. Approved

Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:49 pm

Coming from the upgrades Page. He's 1-1+ and new skills

He's a 1-1+ Shinigami with now full updated skills.