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JJ
JJ
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Sat May 12, 2012 4:58 pm
  • Name Of Character: Moryukuna Len Washi
  • Link To Character Profile: Len-Len!
  • Reasons For Upgrading:

    Final Review Week.

    MOAR THREADS.

    What Are You Upgrading: I decided to take out the 3 number in his soul state one; I want to expand with his colors as he goes through his soul states. Adding in Red Len.

    Red Appearance

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    The most noticeable change of Len when he enters into Red form is his hair. It has extended in length, all the way to his back in the back, and to eye length in the front. He has a few large groups of strands that are blown with the wind in the front, which typically keeps them out of Len's eyes. On either side of his neck, he has large strands that extended down to his abdomen.

    Interestingly enough, he has natural golden highlights at the tips of his hair as well, so it goes from crimson to gold. His attire in this form is… kind of odd. He wears a white cloak, buttoned with two buttons at the top of his head, which acts more like an over coat that only works for his sides. It covers his arms, and has a pocket on the outside of either arm. Underneath the cloak it extends out black material on the wearer, with the consistency of cloth. It also gives him the last bit of sleeves that he needs for them to reach his elbows. The cloak is outlined in gold.

    His pants are black in color, and are pulled up just past his belly button. He wears red shoes, which his baggy pants push against. On either leg of the pants, he has a pocket with golden tabs on it. Around his waist, he wears a golden-colored belt, with a silver insignia in the center of it. Around each hand, he has strapped on gloves, that go from his wrists to the base of his fingers.

    On his back, he has a single large scabbard. Inside this scabbard is a quite odd blade. This blade is roughly two feet in length, the hilt adding on another foot. The back of the blade has a golden pummel; and at the top of the hilt it has small golden rings that line the horizontal handguard. The blade itself is dark gray in color, and is decently curved for such a small blade.

    Red Abilities

    Colors of the King: This form's power… is truly in its intimidation. Or rather, through the act of intimidation. That is… it is very difficult to explain. Basically, through an act of extreme intimidation, he is able to fire a large bolt of "Force" onto the consciousness of his opponent. The Force overloads the consciousness, attempting to send it into unconsciousness. If that fails, it also causes other effects to happen as would happen if a person suddenly was driven into overdrive and then stopped.

    So, if Red Len opens an eye wide, as he takes a single step towards his opponent, his posture acting like he will crush his foe, a burst of his energy as this "Force" would fly out, pulsating from Len's body in most directions. However, he could also attempt to focus it on that one target, a considerably more difficult task to accomplish, but possible. The Force slams into the opponent, overloading their consciousness. Now, they are able to mostly resist the unconsciousness of it, but as the force passes, they find they have a blinding headache, their senses feeling overwhelmed as they were able to suddenly reach a high peak and then have it desert them having them overloaded for a moment and then nothing, their balance impeded by a similar effect, which could make standing difficult for them.

    However, for the most part, the Colors of the King only effect those that are of equal or lower tier to Len's own (which is most.) Those that are higher than his own will feel a minor headache, and perhaps some balance issues; but outside of this, they will be fine for the most part. Those that are of basic human level will almost always be knocked out instantly from this effect, unless their Focus or Determination/Willpower is of adept level or higher. In fact, most beings with less than adept Focus or Willpower that are weaker than Len tend to be knocked out by this effect. Otherwise, the weaker the opponent is, the more this will effect them.

    Furthermore, it takes quite a lot of energy to activate Colors of the King. Len can be left gasping and breathing for air just to have it effect a small room of teenage humans into unconsciousness, so this is not a very easy ability for Len to utilize. However, it has another interesting ability. Any reishi that is effect by the Colors of the King is supercharged with energy, for better or for worse. So, the farther that the Colors of the King have to travel before they hit their target, the less effective it tends to be.

    Goldslasher: His blade is literally, Freddie (Deathrender) and Goldrender fused together. It is quite an… interesting sword. For one thing, it applies its tripling effect to Len's body permanently while he is in this form, meaning that he can drop the sword or even have it taken; and he will still be the only recipient of its effect. In addition, Goldrender's suctioning ability now occurs whenever he moves his body; as his entire body gradually draws in small amounts of the reishi around him, refilling his energy supplies and allowing him to fight to the limits of his body.

    However, those are not all that Goldslasher does. In addition, it now has the strange habit… of lighting on fire. This is fairly basic fire, red in color. Whatever it strikes into, it both cuts and attempts to burn. The fire is roughly two thousand degrees Fahrenheit, enough to keep the blade alight past its hilt, and not easily go out. However, there is one very, very interesting property about the sword. How well it can burn, while it is underwater. As long as Len has the will to keep it going, this flame will never go out. It will even increase in temperature as much as it needs to sot that it will keep burning. This means that even attempts to diminish and destroy that single flame… increase its power. However… it is also a tell tale sign of when Len has been broken. When he snaps, the flame goes out completely, in addition to his very body no longer working, as all the fight goes out of it.

    There is one other interesting fact about the flame. If Len's determination should return to him after the flame has gone out… Well; for one thing, the tripling effect? It becomes a five times increaser to most all of his abilities; he can take quite a few hits, deal a large amount of damage, move at higher rates, and react much faster than before. In addition, the flame around Goldslasher will burn twice as bright and hot as before. So, if he is fighting on a team, it is usually best for someone to revive his will if they can.



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Sat May 12, 2012 5:00 pm
Approved, he is now bumped up to tier 4-3.
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Silly! I'll move this to approved then!
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