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☨Basic Info☨

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Name: Zabuza Momochi
Age: 600
Gender: Male

Shifter Appearance:
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Zabuza is a tall and noticeably muscular man with pale skin, short spiky black hair, brown eyes, and small eyebrows. He was normally seen wearing bandages like a mask over the bottom half of his face. Under his mask, he had a relatively narrow jaw line and jagged-teeth, a trait he shared with his fellow Swordsmen. He wore his forehead protector sideways on his head, and prior to his defection from Kirigakure, donned the village's standard uniform and flak jacket.

After his defection from the Kirigakure demon squad, he was seen shirtless, with his chest only covered by a belt to which he attached his Kubikiribōchō, wearing baggy pants with the striped pattern typical of Kirigakure and mimetic wrist-warmers extending up to his elbows, with matching leg-warmers. Sometimes he wore a sleeveless black shirt and matching pants, complete with a waist-guard, and yet again, Kirigakure's striped wrist and leg-warmers. Other swordsmen of his generation wore attire identical to this, implying that they might be clothes related to the group. While donning this attire, much like his fellow Swordsmen, he had bandages loosely tied around his neck like a scarf.

True Appearance: N/A Zabuza's true Demonic form has never been unlocked it is unknown why for some strange reason. Though some see it as Zabuza is already in his true demon form and just does not know it.

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☨Personality☨

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Personality:
Zabuza was initially portrayed as aggressive, arrogant, cruel, cold and ambitious, willing to become Gatō's thug to gain enough funds to start a second coup d’état on the head of the Kirigakure squad, and kill anyone who stood in his path, including plotting to kill Gatō once gaining enough funds from him. He willingly uses his own men and others as pawns to fulfill his ambitions, as he raised Haku to be an efficient tool to be discarded when he had no use to exploit; although unlike future villains, he was blunt about the purpose that his recruits were needed for, lacking the manipulation of pretending to be kind to inspire loyalty.

He is an observant adversary who is able to analyze his opponent's techniques after seeing it once, but becomes overconfident if he sees the technique as useless. In his last moments of being with the members of his family, it is revealed that he cared deeply for his student Haku, and after being convinced by a friend, he almost sacrifices his life to kill Gatō, and almost dies wishing he could join Haku in the afterlife. However, he seems reluctant to speak or hear about it, telling whoever does so to shut up. Some have also noted that Zabuza had hesitated for a moment before the thought of slashing through Haku to get to opponents during their battles. This is stated to have been different in the past before his meeting of Haku. As back then he would of no cared about a partner.

Zabuza is one that tends to be very aggressive with most people. This is because of his demonic nature and rising. As the Kirigakure demon squad is a special demon family/ group. And they raised Zabuza to be an assassin. And so because of this they made him aggressive so that he would show no mercy to his targets. This also do to Zabuza’s anger issues with people. Though Zabuza is not always aggressive, as he only tends to be this way when he is not in a good mood, or is in an assassin mode. This is because Zabuza’s aggressiveness tends to come from his anger problems as he has problems controlling his anger.

Though Zabuza does have a good amount of honor, as he would not attack an opponent un armed (this means ready to battle as not all fight unarmed) unless it was a paid assassination. Zabuza is also one who honors his promise. As Zabuza will never break any promise that he has made with anyone. Though Zabuza is one who cares very much for money it does not completely control him. As he will not just break a promise he has made with someone for money. Unless the promise he is breaking has a good reason for him to break it, and he is getting a good amount of money for breaking this promise. Though Zabuza still tends not to break promises no matter how much he is paid. This is because Zabuza was made to be very loyal and always go through with his promises even if it ment that he would end up dead.

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☨Background☨

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History
On a silent night in the Demon world in a very special place, on a night like no other as the air was filled with mist. And the sky was almost as bright as day. As the full moon shined brightly lighting up the sky, in this small demon village. As everyone in the demon village staid in silence. And only the wind could be heard for miles and miles. This was a very strange thing. As normally this village could be heard all through the night as they practiced their assassination techniques. This is because the Demons of this village where all trained assassins, known as the Kirigakure Demon Tribe or Squad by some. And the demons of this village took their demon training very series. As most of the younger Demons trained every second they got. And night time was one of the best times for the demons to train.

All of this was because on this night, a demon like no other was born into this family. This Demon would be given the name of Zabuza Momochi. And this Demon would be unlike the others of the Kirigakure Tribe. This made a lot of the high members of the tribe take a liken to Zabuza. As they saw great potential in Zabuza and suggested that he start the Kirigakure assassin training early right after this year’s class training ended. This was a very strange thing as Zabuza would only be 6 years old at the time he would start his training and the average age was 9 years old for a demon to start the training. But since they saw great potential in Zabuza they let him go to the final exam of that year’s class. As the exam was putting all the students into a giant area and letting them fight to the death for three days and three nights.

So to let Zabuza watch the exams they let him go into the area with a special guide that was to keep Zabuza safe. But during the middle of the exam, this guide would go to accidentally lose Zabuza in the exam area. This would have Zabuza lost in the Exam area with all the crazy students trying to kill him. And so Zabuza let his true demon nature take over and killed every single one of the demon children hat had tried out for the exam this year. And to top it all off Zabuza did it all in one night. This was something that had never been done, especially by a Demon that was not even in the exam. And on top of that Zabuza was at least three years younger than all of the other students that had taken the exam. As well as he had no demon assassin training yet.

This made the higher ups of the tribe go wild as what to do with this young boy that had just assassinated a whole class of semi trained assassins with no training what so ever yet. And after months of arguing over what they would do with Zabuza, the higher ups came up with an idea. That Zabuza would undergo special intense training so that he could become a big asset to the tribe leader. So Zabuza would undergo years and years of training till he became a great Assassin, even said to be the best in the demon world by many. As most of the world knew of Zabuza’s first assassin which he was hired to kill a man by the name of Nat’s. A demon well known in the demon world for the things he had done to help the earth out.

Zabuza had been paid by a few low level demons that where trying to take over small parts of earth. As Zabuza silently killed the man demon Nat’s by decapitating him. This was something that was done in front of a crowd of people. But it is said that Zabuza did it so silently and swiftly that no one even saw him do it. And it took another five years to find out who did the assassination of Nat’s. As Zabuza really did not care about everyone knowing that he was the one that took down the demon that he thought as a trader. Though this caused Zabuza to get into a fight with a very well known Demon in the group Sin fall by the name of Tindera. As Nat’s was the guardian of Tindera for a short period of time. This also led to many many fights that ended with these two destroying many places.
This would lead to Zabuza meeting a Demon by the name of Amos who was known for his biological experiments. Amos would even go to help and advance some of Zabuza’s ability and tricking him out with some good DNA. This would lead to a double cross by Zabuza’s old mentor and tribe leader. As he saw Zabuza as an upcoming threat to his power. So he sent Zabuza on a backstabbing assassination. But In the midst of the assassination, Zabuza managed to catch his assassin and get the info that he needed out of him before he decided to kill him. Zabuza would then try and assassinate his old mentor, but in the attempt Zabuza would come to fail in the attempt.

But Zabuza would manage to escape the tribe and make it out into the demon world. And during this time Zabuza would come across a boy by the name of Haku. Zabuza would take this boy under his wing. This young boy would become Zabuza’s prodigy. As Zabuza would train the boy into become a deadly assassin like himself. Haku and Zabuza would then start to take their own private assassins. As theses would help Zabuza fund for his next assassin attempt on the tribe leader. As Zabuza had started to lack in funds ever since he left the tribe.And became his own private assassin. One of the most important assassin jobs was from the pay of a human thug by the name of Zabuza. And the job did not end how Zabuza planned. As in the end Haku was left supposedly dead, and Zabuza had almost died himself. This would lead Zabuza to go and hide out in the demon world honing his abilities.

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☨Powers☨

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Natural Abilities: [i]
Enhanced Strength: Zabuza’s strength is something to not take likely. As Zabuza I easily able to keep up with some of the strongest of Demons in physical strength. This is because strength training was something that Zabuza had to due on a very daily basses. As Zabuza was trained to be able to even assassinate some of the biggest and strongest of targets. Meaning that Zabuza would need the pure strength to be able to compete with some of his targets. Though not all of Zabuza’s strength comes from his training. As a lot of it is due to the experiments that Amos Kane did on him. As Amos aimed to help Zabuza become a better warrior so that he could destroy his clan leader. Zabuza’s strength was also gained from him using his giant sword. As over time Zabuza has came to be able to swing the sword as though it was a butter knife to him. While most others would have a hard time even picking the sword up like he does.

Silent moving: Zabuza was trained all of his childhood life to be a perfect assassin. And because of this training Zabuza has come to be able to move as silent as the mist that he is known for. This is because as a child silent moving was something that was very important to become an assassin. And so Zabuza took his training to become silent very important spending all of his spare time training so that he would be able to move without making a sound. This is because silent moving did not come natural to Zabuza. As Zabuza has a very large body. Making it naturally hard for him to move silent. But through his training and the extra help of Amos Kane, Zabuza is not able to move so silent. That it is said he only makes a sound when he so chooses it. And this is almost never.

Tactician: Though most do not see Zabuza as one to be able to come up with ideas on the battle field. Zabuza is very capable of doing so. This is because during Zabuza’s assassin training one of the most important lessons that he learned was how to plan the perfect killings. As when being an assassin one must be perfect when killing a target if they want to stay on the down low while doing so. So because of all the training to be a perfect assassin Zabuza has become one who is able to make perfect plans. This makes Zabuza an even more hassle on the battle field. As Zabuza is able to come up with perfect battle plans as though it was nothing to him.

Increased Speed: Zabuza has great speed due to his training as an assassin. This is because just like silence speed is something that is also needed to be an assassin. So speed is one of the things that Zabuza spent a good portion of his time as a child training. This allows for him to silently move up on his opponents in a heartbeat for a quick kill so that he can finish them off. Though Zabuza’s speed does not just come in running it also comes in the way he uses he giant sword. Though most would have a hard time even picking up the sword let alone moving it, Zabuza is able to move the sword like it was a piece of paper. Zabuza is easily able to swing the sword as well as maneuver it and change the direction with the slightest turn of the wrist.

Water Expert: Zabuza is one with the element of water. As it is his home element, as Zabuza is easily able to control the element as though it was one of his own limbs. As well as turn his body in the element itself. As Zabuza has shown many times that he is very capable of turning his body and parts into the element of water. Zabuza’s mastery of water is something that is said to be legendary. As Zabuza has become able to pull thousands of gallons of water just out of the air moister. But the main thing of what that has gotten Zabuza well known among the other demons of the demon world. Is his ability and control over mist. As Zabuza is one who is very well capable of just using the mist to kill his targets. As Zabuza’s control over the element of water and mist has got him the nickname “The Demon of The Mist’.

Weaponry Skills: Zabuza has trained in many different weapons so that he could become a very versatile assassin being able to kill with almost any weapon known to man. This makes Zabuza a foe to be reckoned with when it comes down to fighting with weapons. This is because like a good little boy. Zabuza spent a lot of his training time playing with all different types of weapons so that he could become better at killing with whatever he had or could become of use to him. Though Zabuza’s main weapon is that of the Sword. Though Zabuza is one who prefers huge giant swords as they better suit himself. Though he is just as capable of using regular size swords and weapons.

Hand to hand fighter: Though Zabuza does not tend to fight people with his bare hands it is something that he is very capable of. As a good assassin should be able to use their body just as good as any weapon they may be able to kill with. Because of this Zabuza was forced to train in the ability to fight with just his bare hands. This makes Zabuza one who is able to fight just with his bare hands. Though Zabuza is not the best at fighting hand to hand, he is able to keep up with some of the best.

Chaos Energy: Zabuza has a very strange ability that is unlike other demons. One of the strange experiments that Amos Kane did on Zabuza was reconstructing Zabuza’s DNA with that of an Iramasha. As Amos took small parts of DNA from an Iramasha and added them to Zabuza’s on DNA to see what would happen. Zabuza managed to get the ability to control chaos energy from the DNA merging. This makes Zabuza a demon that is able to control chaos energy just like he was a demon Iramasha. Though it took a few years and more DNA reconstructing Zabuza has learned to use Chaos energy as well as any Iramasha of equal tier to him.

Ice Manipulation: Due to Zabuza advanced water and small ability of the element of Wind Zabuza has become one who is able to control and manipulate ice as well as make it out of thin air. This allows for Zabuza to have a back up element when his water abilities cannot be used. Though his ice will probably be weakened if Zabuza is unable to use his water powers. Though this power is not near as good as Zabuza’s water control, since Zabuza did not gain this power till after he had his experiment done by Amos. Though the main reason of this ability was because Zabuza became able to manipulate wind.

Wind Manipulation: Due to Amos experiment on Zabuza, he has become able to use the element of wind. This is not a element that Zabuza is well at. But he is able to control the air around him to a decent ability using it to send blast of air at targets as well as other things that is possible through the manipulation of air. Though the main reason that Zabuza uses this ability is so that he is able to turn water into ice by manipulation the air and wind to freeze the water to become ice. Though Zabuza is not always able to use his wind manipulation ability to its full power. As it is not a element that Zabuza is good at.

Unique Abilities:
Water Abilities:

Others:

Kubikiribōchō ("Decapitating Carving Knife") is a massive broadsword shaped like a giant butcher knife. The blade itself has two cut outs, a circle close to the top and a semi-circular one nearer the handle, that aptly fit the sword's purpose of decapitation, as demonstrated many times by Zabuza in his assignations. The latter notch allows a strap to be wrapped around the weapon, making it easier for the Zabuza to carry. It’s extremely long handle is also detachable to further aid transportation and then reattached when required for combat.

As the blade of the sword itself being six feet, and the handle being 3 feet. The sword also weighs about 250lbs. This is something that gives most people a problem when picking up the sword. But Zabuza is easily able to do so. The sword also has its own abilities, this being its ability to reform itself using the iron harvested from the blood of its victims. This regenerative process takes place almost instantaneously and is capable of bringing the weapon back to its original condition no matter how severe the damage is, from a simple chip or nick to a complete separation of over half the blade.
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☨Skill Sheet☨

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[i](DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)


Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


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☨Role Play Sample☨
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Thu Apr 19, 2012 2:25 pm
Once Zabuza has entered the mirrors, it's possible for him to move between the mirrors at the speed of light.

I don't think I even need to say anything, besides no. Needs Changed to something more believable and easy to understand.

Water Mastery: Zabuza is one with the element of water. As it is his home element, as Zabuza is easily able to control the element as though it was one of his own limbs. As well as turn his body in the element itself. As Zabuza has shown many times that he is very capable of turning his body and parts into the element of water. Zabuza’s mastery of water is something that is said to be legendary. As Zabuza has become able to pull thousands of gallons of water just out of the air moister. But the main thing of what that has gotten Zabuza well known among the other demons of the demon world. Is his ability and control over mist. As Zabuza is one who is very well capable of just using the mist to kill his targets. As Zabuza’s control over the element of water and mist has got him the nickname “The Demon of The Mist’.

Weaponry Mastery: Zabuza has trained in many different weapons so that he could become a very versatile assassin being able to kill with almost any weapon known to man. This makes Zabuza a foe to be reckoned with when it comes down to fighting with weapons. This is because like a good little boy. Zabuza spent a lot of his training time playing with all different types of weapons so that he could become better at killing with whatever he had or could become of use to him. Though Zabuza’s main weapon is that of the Sword. Though Zabuza is one who prefers huge giant swords as they better suit himself. Though he is just as capable of using regular size swords and weapons.

He can't obtain a mastery out of no where, you don't even know his tier yet. At least take out that he is a Master in both, he can be good, but not a master. Not yet, at least.

Chaos Energy: Zabuza has a very strange ability that is unlike other demons. One of the strange experiments that Amos Kane did on Zabuza was reconstructing Zabuza’s DNA with that of an Iramasha. As Amos took small parts of DNA from an Iramasha and added them to Zabuza’s on DNA to see what would happen. Zabuza managed to get the ability to control chaos energy from the DNA merging. This makes Zabuza a demon that is able to control chaos energy just like he was a demon Iramasha. Though it took a few years and more DNA reconstructing Zabuza has learned to use Chaos energy as well as any Iramasha of equal tier to him.

... No.

Now, other than that, everything else is either related to the above, or you're fine in it. I would like for you to do ONE Thing for me though. I wish for you to add posting limits to most abilities, if not all. We can't really get a grip on how long these abilities last, how many times they can be used, and so on and so forth. I'd really appreciate it. Other than that, I liked the app, just edit and make fixes and I'll recheck.



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Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Master
  • Focus: Advanced


General Skills
  • Durability: Adept
  • General Speed: Advanced
  • Strength: Adept
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Za Koa Skill:Advanced
  • Demon Magic: Advanced
  • Shadow Movement: Adept
  • Akuma Kyōdo: Adept


Racial Skills
  • Chaos Energy Skill: Adept
  • Chaos Warp: Adept
  • Seishin Buki Level: Adept
  • Race Control: Adept


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  • History is of appropriate length [x]
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«CLEARING OUT STUFF IN HERE NOW»

Alright, I'm going through and clearing out characters in Demon's. And being that the likes of Elendril has left the site, I'm going to be moving this into archived characters.


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