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Niaunin/Naruto, both male and female forms.

| Z I A M I C H I |
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BASIC || I N F O R M A T I O N
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Name: Niaunin Uzumaki
Gender: Both
Age: 12 of age. [look varies]
The Host Race: Human


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PERSONALITY || TRAITS

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Personality: Niaunin or Naruto as they call themselves, is a strange person. Well strange in the fact that the smile on their face never seems to go away : and that the internal cheeriness never fades. There's always that never wavering hope : the most noteable fact about Naruto is the stubborness they carry. That stubborness is so strong that at times, they've even done things they should seriously not be able to do. Childish prankster, and not very serious a lot of the times, Naruto seems to be a cheerful bugger, rarely showing what they really feel inside. In fact, few people had the chance to see what was behind that facade of pure happiness. Naruto in fact, is a bit more observant then first thought, and in fact the happy is mostly a delusion on their part. But it seems that this more serious and calculated part doesn't appear as much, being only slightly developped. However, this part plays in the feelings of abandonnment and loneliness that the child feels.. so who knows where it could go?

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BACKGROUND || THEIR PAST
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Background/History: 似合う or Niau, to become. That could be taken as 成る or Naru, which means the same thing. 人 or nin, adult. Instead, transfer it to 人 as to, person. This is the first part of Niaunin's or Naruto's, struggle with their name. Of course, the child never liked the name Niaunin. And that was the name an orphan, such as they, held. 渦巻 or Uzumaki, whirlpool. A name given to the child by the one that brought them to the orphange. Niaunin doesn't know what happened to that person : one fact was clear, this orphange.. was strange. The child felt hated, but it figured soon enough it was just because of the stigma. Without knowing too much, the child grew, and that family stubborness seemed to keep itself in sight. In the end, Niaunin [CALL ME NARUTO DAMMIT!] still kept their head above water. Slowly learning their powers and the world around them.. this child has a bright future ahead. More then likely for sure.

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RP || SAMPLE
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Roleplay Sample:


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THE BEAST || WITHIN
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Risu in her non-battle look.


Ziamichi Spirit Name: Risu Naiteki

Ziamichi Personality: Risu is a very quiet person : almost never interrupting Naruto's daily life, it seems this is via sheer obliviousness rather then choice. Risu prefers to pretend at their own life in a sort of mirror world, and seems to not too much care on the moments were their worlds seems to be blending. In all, Risu seems to be of the type that ignores their host rather then help, or be negative. Neutral by nature, the delusions in which Risu surrounds herself seem to keep her from being any sort of distracted, or dragged into reality. Which is the immense dislike for being interrupted : Risu does have her pride, at the very least.

Should she be awakened for battle it seems that her attitude changes : she is fearless, reckless, and most of all, without morals. If she has to win, she will. She will survive no matter what : that was the lesson she learned at the hands of mortals.

Ziamichi History: Risu doesn't like to acknowledge her past. A rampaging spirit, it was never defined what she was : instead, she just mowed down whatever bothered her. One day, she is shamed to admit, she was bested by a few mortals. And that's what reasulted her in being sealed in this.. brat. Not that she minds : now she can spend her days doing what she wants, without worries of the outside world. Although, she'd love to know what happened to those mortals.. but eh, who cares?

In fact, Risu is the collection of different discarded fragments : when someone sheds a piece of themselves, or dies, or split their powers : that sort of deal. Her name means ''Inner Fracture'' which is simply describing the fact that Risu as a whole, is an entity of collected energies and discarded pieces of others. Over quite a long time, she developped, and took her time into forming : a force that lay beneath the radars for she was non-threatening. In the end, Risu never wanted to be a threat : but something commanded her that day, to wreck havoc, and this was her price, the end game.

Ziamichi Powers:

--Energy Mastery--
Risu is very adept with her energy. In fact, she had SO much that the seal to put her into Niaunin, is about 30 layers of spells and tricks, to keep the energy sealed. And this seal is even more maudlin, as it slowly takes her over-source, what energy is too much for her, and slowly adds it to Naruto's own. The fact remains that even with her over-energy being absorbed, Risu has enough energy to purely scare the shit out of anything. In fact, it's said that even Death doesn't want to go near her. Risu never had to use the full extent of her energy, but it's known simply that Risu has enough energy to take the earth, and make it into a pebble. By pressure alone. Needless to say, Risu never brought her full power to bear : but it's nice to know it's there. And not only does she have fuck tons of energy, she can also manipulate it : as in making pure waves of energy, changing the attribute to what she wishes, and all bunches of good stuff. Also, she seems to be able to adapt her energy type, into a myriad of different types.

BENEFITS || OF HOST
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Unique Traits:

-- Increased Energy --
Naruto has naturally more energy then the average person of their tier. Due to the current bond between Ziamichi and owner, this is only set at 2x the amount.

-- Sensing --
Naruto is surprisingly adept at sensing energies : and due to this, he can even tell gender differences in energies due to the different make up. He can also tell light differences between races, dependant on the energy sensed. It's just automatically popped into his mind, as if the knowledge was implanted.

Forms: -

Drawbacks: -

Control: 0

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THE HOST || POWERS
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Soul State Evolutionary Powers

Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Appearance: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)

Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers )

Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Appearance: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)

Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)

Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Appearance: (Optional. This will be at least 1 to 0 tier level characters, however. You may fill this out, but the app will ultimately be up to the staff member who reviews it)

Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities: (Optional. Leave blank if you do not want powers.)

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(THIS SECTION IS COMPLETELY OPTIONAL)

Chi Abilities

Powers

Chi Powers:

-- Sexy no Jutsu --
Well, one of Naruto's only techniques turned out to be not only accidental, but permanent. What happened is that Naruto combined his energies [as he was originally male despite the name] and some mystical spring water for a wish. Well.. turned out it was cursed water, and without warning, he spilled it over himself, along with his energy.. which activated the thing. So long story short, hot water allows him to be a guy, and cold water makes him a girl. So in a way, he crossed all gender bounderies.. and thus they are quite off, they'd like to think.

-- Shape no Jutsu --
Naruto surprisingly, can use Chi to regulate their apperance. This is basically a passive technique that requires little energy : it simply changes Naruto's shape and size to reflect an age. This does not change traits like eye or hair color, but simply changes their relative shape : such as going from an 8 year old looking child to a 18 year old matured form. Again, this only changes the age look, not traits.

Awakened Appearance: (Please Describe how your character looks when they are in their awakened state)
Awakened Powers: (Describe what type of powers your character gets from awakening.)

Fully Awakened Appearance: (Describe what your human looks like when Fully Awakened)
Fully Awakened Powers: (Describe what powers your human gets in this state)



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EXTRA || INFO
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Note :: the application may seem patchwork, but as the character develops, the loose ends will be tied up.

Ziamichi Class: (Ranging from E to the weakest and A to the strongest; With S being a special class of demons. Don't do anything to this, the staff will decide how strong your demon will be from how good your application is and how good your role playing skills are.)

Skills:
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced for each section
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced for each section
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept for each section
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept for each section
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

General Skills
  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Ziamichi Skills
  • Skill Of Ziamichi Powers: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Control Over Spirit: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Seal Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [J]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: JUUSENKYU
Tier: 3-1

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Adept
  • Focus: Beginner




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«-PREPARE TO BE REVIEWED-»



« Application Checklist »

• Let's Get Down To Business •

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


« The Willsheet Checklist »

• And Comments/Fixes •

  • Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  • Mental Deduction: Beginner
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Adept

«The Ziamichi Spirit's Willsheet Checklist»

  • Willpower/Determination:Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Adept
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced
  • Comments/Notes: This is apart of my massive check to give the correct Tiers/Classes to Ziamichi and their spirit's following their update a few months ago. If you have any issues with it, feel free to leave a post after this judgement is made.

    In addition to that, you should also probably add in the Ziamichi Sync-Rate into their skill sheet.

    "Sync-Rate: This refers to how stabilized and strong the connection between the two spirit's energy wavelengths, mental states and the overall union is. While the seal focuses on fusing the souls together, the Sync-Rate plays a much different role. Depending on how high their Sync-Rate is, they may see similar effects as the Vizard's Augmentation attributes when using their Ziamichi powers. That is, the better your Sync-Rate Skill is, the more enhancements your character may generally have when they unify with their spirit. While, if you had a lower skill in this section, you may not see many benefits in the stat boosters related to using these dual or triple powersets. To given an example, someone with an Advanced Sync-Rate will generally be able to better handle the fluctuation in power that come with wielding both theirs and the Ziamichi Spirit's energy; being that their two separate tiers. Ergo, they can see augmentation boost in their mental states, will skills, special abilities and so on. The higher you go in this skill, the more Synchronization is possible. A master or Grandmaster in this may even find a way to even temporarily boost their tier level by using the Spirit(s) and their own energy at the same time ."

    Lastly, you need to expand Naruto's history into another paragraph for it to be accepted.


  • Host Tier: 4-5
  • Host Class: E-
  • Spirit Tier: 3-1
  • Spirit Class: E+


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This has been in pending for too long! But due to the re-check, this character has TEMPORARY RP APPROVAL, but still needs to be fixed! Once done, simply post Here to get it checked!
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Moving this app to Old WIP since it has been 2 weeks. if finished please refer to This thread or ask staff to move it.
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