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Ravana
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Wed Jun 13, 2012 9:57 am
Taking a look at this app, I have an issue with the sealed ability. Because they are extremely weak, it would have to only last for one post, and would need a much longer cool down period. Not only that, but with the Shikai and Bankai abilities, this Sealed ability will have to keep these drawbacks even after other releases, and because it is not the main focus of the powers. That being said, I would allow for a two to three post duration in Bankai, but five posts seems a little much. Not denying the app, just asking you to fix that.


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Ravana Ichiro~Ex-Captain Vizard/Vizard Corps Co-leader~0-3+
Toshizo Hijikata~The Demon Commander~0-3+
Diablo Cortar~The Cutting Devil/Segunda Espada~0-3-
Albert Wesker~Biohazard~0-4++
Dracula Vlad Tepes~The Dark Lord~0-4
Okita Souji~Sexy and I know it~0-5+
Alfonso Gunter Reinhold~Evil Bastard~W.I.P.
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Ravana
Ravana
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Tue Jun 26, 2012 4:12 pm
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alright, hold on here. You cannot have all of your skills as advanced or half master... thingy that JJ approved for a character with a 1-2 tier. You need to have at least two adepts (total); especially if you you are going for that... whatever the hell master thingy that JJ approved. So, please fix this.


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+Characters+
Ravana Ichiro~Ex-Captain Vizard/Vizard Corps Co-leader~0-3+
Toshizo Hijikata~The Demon Commander~0-3+
Diablo Cortar~The Cutting Devil/Segunda Espada~0-3-
Albert Wesker~Biohazard~0-4++
Dracula Vlad Tepes~The Dark Lord~0-4
Okita Souji~Sexy and I know it~0-5+
Alfonso Gunter Reinhold~Evil Bastard~W.I.P.
Hanako Ikezawa~Malignant Tragedy~5-5*

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Iori
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Tue Jun 26, 2012 5:14 pm
I'm actually seconding ravana's opinion on this one. As a 1-2, you can only have but so much, and you definitely need some adept's in your list. All advanced - at least to me, is a no-no. So you can either fix that or have the app denied.

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