Tenzin: The Free Radical [Revision] [APPROVED, 1-3+]

☨ T h e D e m o n T e m p l a t e ☨
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☨Basic Info☨

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Name:Tenzin
Age:1000+
Gender:Male








[b]True
Appearance: Tenzin towers 60 feet in the air as a giant demon dog,
whose resilience to the elements are escond to none and most attacks are
inherently small scale in comparison to his colossal body. This form is
easier for him to house his incredible amount of energy.


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[b]☨Personality☨

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Personality:Quiet:
Tenzin rarely speaks. And if he does, it is only to someone he deems
worthy, or atleast that’s what he wants you to think. In reality he is
just too shy to relate to people in any way.
Calm:
He is calm at all times as it is his demeanor. There is literally
nothing that can shake his cool, even when he is scared or horrified,
his demeanor doesn’t change.
Sarcastic:
Assuming that Tenzin does talk to you, it means he’ll be sarcastic one
hundred percent of the time. That’s the only way Tenzin can show any
kind of affection. “In reality Tenzin is a very simple and
straightforward person. Even in terms of battle, you can beat him quite
easily if you can make him sit still.

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☨Background☨

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History:
Tenzin... what exactly is Tenzin?Why
doesn’t he cut his god forsakenly long hair? Why does he never speak?
Most importantly... why the hell can he control free radicals and cell
walls?

The Birth of Tenzin
In
the pits of hell there was a woman by the name of Hiruka. There was
nothing immediately special about Hiruka. She was average, incredibly
average, from her looks, to her voice, to her intelligence, to her
height and even her personality. One would even say she was dull. But
there was one thing that Hiruka hid from the world, it was her vast
intelligence. Ah, yes it was aforementioned that her intelligence was
average, however, there was one subject she had an insane amount of
understanding for. Chemistry. As a child, her idea of fun would be
solving equations on how to change O2 to H2O2 by way of Demon magic.
Though her lack of ability to create the energy to use the magic was a
huge hindrance. So she spent her days breaking down each step, trying to
find a way to make the equation simpler and simpler, until she finally
found free radicals. A free radical or an unpaired electron is a both
stable and unstable molecules. By creating the free radicals from Demon
Magic she was able to turn thin air into a solid, a liquid, plastic, or
even combustion. After 1000 years of notes and experiments she left her
documents and love for science, for a man. They spent about 20 years
together before she got pregnant. During those few month sof supposed
weakness, this man tried to find the woman’s documents. In the end it
turned out that he was from a rival demon family, tasked to use his wit
and his charm to seduce Hiruka and steal her notes and techniques.

It
turns out, they been watching her perfect her technique for 500 years.
Only after they had watched her dissolve a diamond in her hand and
reconstruct it into a crystal spear. However, that was child’s play when
it came to demons, the destruction of a diamond was a mere parlor
trick, it was the reconstruction that piqued their interest. She had
once visited the surface world to view chemists at work in order to
perfect her technique, however, she was ignored and continuously shot
down for her lack of physical degrees from a high end college. The
family of demons who had followed her noticed that something was strange
about the humans soon after. Within the next 2 days they seemed to age a
good ten years and die of a heart attack. They weren’t sure what she
did, but they did know that whatever it was, it was so simple as to
someone of her level and control of demon magic could do it. She could
kill a grown man by looking at him without leaving a trace. They were
quite interested in her secret. Thus they sent over there most
impressive demon, whom to the almost 100% average Hiruka was drop dead
gorgeous. Though she knew demons had the innate ability to change their
appearance, she very rarely did so. She hated the appearance of thus she
left herself in her natural state at all times. This man, however, made
her want to look beautiful so she tried to shift into the a gorgeous
woman... and failed, it seemed that after all her years of ignoring that
ability, she was unable to flex the under trained muscle that was
shifting. Embarrassed that she couldn’t change into a human appearance
she met with Danzo in her original form and he charmed her. Needless to
say she fell madly in love with him. A few years later she was pregnant
and it was at this time Danzo showed his true colors. He threatened to
kill her and the baby if she didn’t hand over the baby. She fell into a
deep depression and as she was going to give him the notes he attacked
her. He attempted to kill the baby as she was handing him the documents,
but she had been concentrating her kyodo on her womb since the day she
was fertilized. His attack bounced off her stomach and went through
her chest, but as she was going out, off of almost pure adrenaline she
added the H2O2 molecule to each molecule in his body, causing him to
combust on the spot. She was caught in the explosion but still survived,
using all of her strength, she crawled 15 miles across the demon plane
to her sister who helped her deliver the baby. She died 7 minutes after,
right after she passed along a quick to her sister and handing over the
documents.

Suzy
had been raising the squirt she was told to name Tenzin for 10 years
before she got sick of it. She didn’t want to have a child running
around the house she she called tenzin over to him and they had a
talk.She decided that she was going to send him to hell where he would
have to fend for himself. The kid had real issues when it came to
discipline and such, so she had given him a challenge. She said if he
could climb devil peak mountain 400 years she would give him a prize.
Being the naive boy that he was, he took her challenge. After a few
weeks of her pulling strings, she took him from Flow City to Forest
around Devil Peak Mountain. She gave him a “good luck kid” and left him
there with a sac with enough food for three days.

First Century: Survival

Tenzin
ran full force into the forest without even a glance back. He was
finally alone from that old ass bitch. She never let him do anything and
he was ready to take on the world. The first week was uneventful for
him. He learned the basics of survival as it was his demon instinct. He
learned to catch fish with his bare hands and hit a bird out of the sky
with a rock. He could start a fire and take refuge in high trees when he
slept. About the 2nd day of week 2 he was attacked for the first time. A
lesser demon had found him and his blood lust caused Tenzin to cower in
fear. Tenzin became a slave to the lesser demon known as Yatsubo among
his peers. For 3 years Tenzin was forced to steal food and cause
mischief along the ground level of the mountain.

“This
is NOT where I want to be. I couldve been halfway up the freakin
mountain by now. GAAAH what should I do...” Tenzin said as he paced back
and forth. Throughout his few years of being a petty thief he learned a
thing or two about fighting and even learned a little bit about shadow
movement from watching Yatsubo. One day Tenzin was sent on a mission to
steal a book on Za Koa from a house on the very bottom of the mountain.
As he was about to climb in through the window, he overheard two people
talking.

“I
heard there is a small group of demons that are trying to overthrow
Touketsu... HAHAHAAHHAAH” they shared a hearty laugh. “They think the
old man is some kind of slave driver or something.”

“Wow what idiots.” said the other demon before he caught wind of Tenkins presence and chased him off his property.

“You mean... you can overthrow somebody from power?..” and every since that day he had been planning the coup of Yatsobu.

After
a few weeks he got his opening. He saw that Yatsobu was sleeping on
his chair. He slammed a giant boulder that he got from the surrounding
area right on top of Yatsobu’s head. After a few seconds, the lesser
demons eye lids opened at the speed of a cat stalking its prey. His
glare glued Tenzin to his spot as he stood up and walked over to him.
“So you thought you could kill me hmm? After all the good times we’ve
had?” The demon said as he circled Tenzin.

“I
NEVER wanted to be here with you in the first place you creepy old
man!” Tenzin yelled, half in fear and half in disgust. The sweat was
slowly building on his brow and his breathing was becoming ragged. It
was just like the first time they met, the bloodlust kept Tenzin stuck
as if he was crazy glued to the ground.

“Oh?
But I could be a much worse master, really. Like Orobimaru I could have
fun with that cute little body of yours. Hm? Or I could even have had
you kill a man now couldn’t I?” He said, his voice was as smooth as
butter but as thick as honey. Each and every word stuck in Tenzin’s
head, it was true Yatsobu wasn’t really that bad of a master. “Face it,
you have no place in this world without me. So scurry along until I
think of something for you to do.”

“No...
I have a place! It’s by my aunt’s side! As soon as I climb this
mountain I’m gonna go right back to her and prove you both wrong!” At
this the demon gave a bellowing laugh that filled the cave with a sense
of disdain and amusement.

“Listen
brat. Beyond the base of this godforsaken mountain are things you
couldn’t even dream of. Palaces, monsters, criminals, people of power,
powerful people, castles floating in the sky. There are master of Za
Koa! Most importantly... there is the Shadow Fall.” The demon sputtered
out these words through giggles. “Your nowhere near strong enough to
make even 10 feet up that obnoxious landscape hm? It'll take you 10,000
years to climb it, why dont you just be a good little boy and go play
until i call you hm?”

“Shut
up. Shut up Shut up Shut up Shut up Shut up Shut up! I’m gonna do it in
400! And no ones gonna stop me!” Tenzin declared right before Yatsobu
stepped to him and backhanded him with enough force to send him flying
through the mouth of the cave. The boy skidded on the hard gravel
surrounding the cave for a few feet until finally coming to a halt. As
he was about to sit up he was grabbed by the collar and chucked into the
forest where he sailed through the air for 15 feet until his back
collided with a 200 hundred year old tree trunk.

“Who
the hell do you think you are punk. Hm? Think your special brat? Think
your worth shit? Let me fill you in on something.” The demon said as he
walked over to Tenzin and squatted in front of him. “In this world, you
are nothing. Your lucky to be acknowledged by your own pet. You came
from dirt, and your gonna go back to it sooner or later. So make things
easy on yourself and comply you little shit.” He said as he spit on the
boys cheek. A tear fellacross the bridge of Tenzin’s now muddy face as
he began to feel as though he was lower than the dirt he was laying on.
Until all he saw was red. His pride, was the only thing he had with him.
His anger was welling up from his gut, as if he had a volcano within
him. Tenzin picked himself up. He ran at Yatsubo with everything he had,
his battle cry ringing through the air. He attempted a kick at Yatsubo
which was easily ducked, however,there was a bright blue glow on
Tenzin’s leg and before Yatsubo could react, he brought his leg down
right on Yatsubo’s scalp, the same spot the boulder hit. His foot
collided with Yatsubo’s head and stayed there. Yatsubo shrugged, “Is
that all you got punk? Your gonna need something sharper to penetrate
this skin.” Once again, Yatsubo’s hand cocked back and unleashed an
unholy pimp slap across Tenzins face. Sending the boy sailing once
again. This time however, Tenzin flipped landing on his blue hued legs
and dashed toward Yatsubo. As he dashed Yatsubo disappeared, he turned
around and realized he ran right passed Yatsubo just off of his push
off. Was this the famous Shadow Burst he heard people talking about?
Yatsubo gave a smirk and a slow clap. “So you finally realize the fact
that you are a demon boy. Hm?” The man sad until he was met with a kick
to the jaw. ‘Kuh... fast..’ Tenzin then flipped in mid air as a spike
came out of his ankle and landed on the same exact spot, this time a bit
of blood trickling down his head. That set him off.

Yatsubo’s
eyes turned a deep read as his claws elongated. He clawed at Tenzin’s
stomach until it was just red ooze. Tenzin was about to lose
consciousness until he saw a silhoutte decapitate Yatsubo.

3 months later

Tenzin
woke up at the crack of dawn once again. After a few stretches his legs
gave off a prominent blue glow then disappeared, it appeared as though
there were multiple Tenzin’s on the field before he stopped, hunched
over and gasping for breath.

“Squirt!
Again! Faster! I better see 50 of you on that field for atleast 10
minutes! And what the fuck was that flash of blue?! I don’t want to see
your seal activate period! UNDERSTOOD?” The man with long silver hair
yelled from atop a roof of a house. “We wont start of this mountain
until you can at least maintain your Shadow Burst!”

“Yes
sir! Master Tak Sir! Understood sir!” Tenzin said with a slight smirk
on his face, as his legs gave another blue hue for a half a second and
his pseudo clones appeared once again.

“What’d
you say you little-?!?!” The man deemed Tak said. “I said DO NOT call
me Master or Sir! Do you understand me?!” The man yelled, his head
seemingly three times larger than a normal demons. His face was slender
and smooth with glowing red eyes and canines that protruded through his
top lips. He had horns and wolf like ears sitting at the top of his
head. He wore a completely white robe with sneakers. Quite unusual
around these parts. They’re much more comfortable’ he would always say
whenever he was confronted about it.

“Yes
sir! Master Tak Sir!” Tenzin said, once again a smirk prevalent on his
face as he continued his high speed shuffle around the area.

“Grrrrr......
brat.” He mumbled. “Never should’ve taken you in” his eyes looking out
of the corner of their sockets with his ears twitching.
~Very Short but IMPORTANT Flashback~

Tenzin’s
eyes regained their position as gateway from Tenzin’s brain to the
outside world again as they crept open, though each lid felt like a ton
of bricks. “Ah.. where...”

“Dont
move Squirt, you in mighty bad shape right now. It’s a wonder your even
conscious. Just close your eyes Merrium will have you patched right up,
no problem.” The man said keeping eye contact. Tenzin nodded and closed
his eyes.

“GAH!”
Tenzin said as he shot straight up, last thing he remembered was being
clawed open by Yatsobu. He shot up from the comfy bed and found himself
in new clothes that were about 10 X’s to large for him.

“
You did pretty well for a 10 year old” Ah man of about 6’0 walked in
with hair that was almost just as long. “Of course when I was your age
he wouldn’t have landed a hit.” The man chuckled as he flipped his long
silver locks over his shoulders.

“Are
you a woman?” Tenzin asked. “You look like one of those pretty ladies
on the cover of Master Yatsubo’s magazines. The ears and everything...
do you have a tail too?” Tenzin waddled behind the man and patted his
butt. “Guess not... and I’m 13 for your information.” Tenzin said as a
matter of factly.

The
man face planted so hard he made a hole in the wooden floor. “MY HAIR
IS SYMBOLIC OF STRENGTH! IT TRADITION WITHIN MY CLAN YOU LITTLE CUNT.
Ahem. Anyway, as I was saying, you got spunk kid. Hows about becoming my
pupil.” The man said, regaining his composure with each word.

“Sorry,
I have to get back to Master Yatsubo.” The boy said almost as if he was
a robot. He began to walk out the door in search of an exit. The man
looked at him in awe as he watched the young boy search around the
average sized house.

“Oh that slimy bastards dead.” The man said.

“What? how?” The boy looked at him in a mixture of excitement and confusion.

“... Car accident. So what do you say squirt? You and me?” The man said as he patted the boy on the head.
Tenzin’s
face went to being completely blank as he looked up the man and shot
one hand up to his face as if he was raising his hand halfway. “Sorry.
Raincheck, gotta climb the mountain. Thanks. Bye.” With that he turned
on his heel and resumed his search for the exit.

The man stood in the doorway for a while as he saw the boy walk straight with his head high unphased by his current predicament.

2 weeks later.

A
bloody pulp found its way onto the silver haired man’s porch.
“Merrium... he’s back. Lasted longer than i thought though, he really
does have spunk.” He said as a woman about 2 inches shorter than him
with short red hair and pearl like white eyes stepped from out of the
living room.

“Yes
dear... He really is just like him isn’t he...” she said with a small
smile. She attempted to place her hand on her husband’s arm.

“...”
His ears fell as he turned around and walked inside. Merrium let out a
sigh as she knelt down in front of the boy and put his head in her lap.

“Whatever
will we do with you...” She said as a single tear fell from her eye to
his face, his wounds beginning to heal instantly. “Please... don’t hurt
him too much...” She said as she attempted to stifle tears.

The next day.

“So
I see you came crawling back. Expecting help I presume?” the man said
with a haughty voice, once again flipping his luscious silver locks
behind his shoulder. Their eyes locked as they sat around the kitchen
table.

“Are
you sure you’re not gay?” Tenzin asked, with a that was still and
emotionless. This earned a tiny giggle from Merrium. The man face
planted through both the table and the floor.

“Look
brat. Let me just train you. Ok? You have... something. There’s
something... off about you. Your seal is blue, while most others are
red. Your 13 and your Shadow Burst activated on pure instinct. It’s not
much to work with, but it’s something. I can turn you into something.
Just let me...” the mans words were going 300 miles a minute until
Merrium put her hand on his shoulder and he went calm.

“What
Takahashi is trying to say is, he can get you up that mountain if you
just let him train you.” She said, her voice like butter, but with a
feel of satin. Her smile was warm and her hair was radiant, as if it was
on fire. Her face was that of a doll, flawless. Tenzin found himself
lost in her bright but deep orange eyes. “Are you okay? Your face is
red.” She bringing her hand up to hide her smile.

“Are you an angel?” He said the only difference in his expression was his eyes.

“No sweetie, but...” she turned around and let loose 5 foot wide red wings, akin to that of a swans, “you were close.”

His
jaw went agape and his eyes bugged out. “You show those off whenever
you get the chance don’t you.” Tak said under his breath. “ I guess I
should explain those... haah.. ok well start with me. I’m the last of
the line of the Yamainu clan. Hence... the ears. Merrieum here is from a
clan of Phoenixes... somewhere... over there. She can’t tell me. Clan
secret or something.” He gave her a sideways glance. “Enough of your
secrets woman. Tell me.”

“Tehe” she said with her hand covering her mouth as she turned and walked down the hall into the bedroom.

“Grrrrr....” The silver haired man’s throat rumbled as if it was the beginning of a storm. “Anyway so about training...”

“Ill do it.” He said as he got up and walked outside awaiting further instruction.

“Oh..
uh right.” He said following the boy out. “So we’re going to work with
what you know first. 12 hours a day is going to be working on Shadow
Movement, mostly Shadow burst, but there’s a lot more to it than that. 5
hours out of the day you will be working on Za Koa and Demon magic.
Merriuem will be teaching you demon magic.

“Gotcha.”

100 years later.

Tenzin
is about 5’5 now, his hair as a little passed the base of his neck.
After a few seconds the field was full of Tenzin’s who seemed to be
interacting with each other. “Good. Next.” They all disappeared in the
blink of an eye and Tenzin walked over to a tree. After cracking his
neck he took a horseback stance and punched the tree. After a punch
that was definitely not visible to the human eye the tree cracked and
fell in four places as the grass around Tenzin within a 3 foot radius
was flattened. “Good. Level two.” Tenzin walked over to another tree
and in the blink of an eye 4 sizely holes went up and down the 20 foot
bare tree. “Impressive. Level three.” Tenzin walked over to another dead
tree. He resumed his stance, and flexed his index finger. He then
jabbed his finger into the wood and the tree with a violent shake,
became swiss cheese. “Meh. You should be able to do that all the way
around the tree not just ¾’s... but... I suppose its better than
nothing. Now I want to see your Black Inferno Blast.” He said as he
chucked a pebble 50 feet into the sky. Tenzin shot a thin black beam
that hit the rock and kept going until it was out of sight. “Good. All
right, I want to see Za Koa Controlled mode.” Tenzin nodded as he
focused on his palm and created an orb of the same blackness. As he
stretched his hands apart his palms turned blue and the orb had taken
the shape of a pure black katana. “Tap.” He tapped alive tree with the
sword, it began to erode from the spot in which it was tapped. “Stab”
The boy walked to another tree and pushed the sword in about a foot
deep, the tree died instantly, its leaves turned into rain. “Cut” The
boy walked over to the last remaining tree in the area and gave it a
shallow cut on its side as he appeared behind it. The tree fell on its
side as the area in which it was cut had lost all color and began
decaying. The blackness disappeared as Tenzin fell to his knees gasping
for air. “Ah your Za Koa is coming along nicely. But you still have a
very long way to go. Next is Conjuration. A puppy.” Tenzin summoned a
small healthy puppy that seemed to be an all white siberian husky with
red eyes. “Good. Wings.” As the puppy dissipated Tenzin seemed to sprout
crow wings. “Fantastic. Honey you did a great jooob!” He called back to
the house.

“I
know” could be heard from somewhere in the house followed by a tiny
giggle. Without warning Tak picked up his leg and circled it around so
that it landed right on Tenzin’s chest. Neither of them moved from that
spot as Tak let his leg drop.

“Kyodo... check. Not able to block a sword yet are ya squirt?” The man said with a half sneer.

“No,
but I can make one.” Tenzin said, his face was as robotic as ever. As
two spikes elongated from the top of his wrist and extended over his
hand for about 4 feet. “

“Geez...
lighten up runt.” The older man said with, disdain lacing his voice.
“When will you lighten up?” Tak said while plopping his fist down on
top of Tenzin’s head attempting to stifle a chuckle. When nothing came
he sighed and walked back up to the house. “Get ready, tomorrow we’re
gonna begin our trek up the mountain. On the way i’ll teach you the
basics of our clan’s martial arts. By the time we get to the top, you’ll
be a pro.” Tenzin’s mechanical appearance remained as icy and
unwelcoming as it was the day he was found. He nodded and went inside to
begin packing. His journey was about to begin.

Year 200

“Squirt.
Have you learned to use your brain seal yet?” He asked the boy. He knew
that it was quite uncommon for demons to even think about, let alone
use their brain seal but he wanted Tenzin to be able to use it in
conjunction with his Shadow Burst. It would also help him with his
control over Za Koa, giving him a clear view of the Za Koa and even an
intimate connection with it.He knew Tenzin wouldn’t be able to actually
enter the negative realm, but just seeing it would probably help.

“Why
would I be able to do something you can’t even do. Fool.” Tenzin said
without batting an eye towards his mentor. Tak gave him a sideways glare
as he crossed his arm.

“Asshole.” He mumbled.

“At least I don’t sniff them.” Tenzin said with a sneer on his face.

“IT’S
A LEGITIMATE GREETI- *ahem* Fuck you Tenzin.” Tak said as he looked up
at the mountain which was littered with floating rocks around its
zenith.

“Why are we going around this mountain? Isn’t it faster for us to just go straight up?” the boy said as he clicked his tongue.

“Yes.
But theres a guy around here who can help you along with your Za Koa
way more than I can. And his demon magic is much better than Merrium’s.
The last time I saw him he did this weirdo thing where he controlled
gravity. It was strange. Uncomfortable. Quite uncomfortable. Which
reminds me. I think that it’s time for you to establish a field.” Tak
stated.

“A... field?” Tenzin asked. His curiosity was piqued.

“Yes.
A field. How should I explain this.... A field... is. Hm. Think a
nervous system outside of your body. Most demon’s have the innate
ability to sense and learn their surroundings, but a field, well, a
field gives you the ability to basically see anywhere within that field.
You can send your Za Koa out by sending it through the air around you.
The bigger your field, the better your Za Koa, I want to get you to at
least a mile, that’s where I am currently.” The man sneered” If you
become good enough at it. I mean REALLY good you should be able to
appear anywhere within your field, think of it as instant transmission.
Ah. I’ll tell you what your father told me. Think of it as your
territory. If you don’t want somebody in it, kick them out. And if you
can’t... get stronger. But first we need to start small, how well can
you control air Tenzin?”

“Control...
air? I can’t control any elements. You said we’d learn that along the
way.” Tenzin said as his eyes widened at the slightest. Was it
excitement? Or something else.

“Oh... that I did. Well alrighty then I guess I should give you the run down. What are you Tenzin?” The old man asked.

“A demon.” The boy said with a tone as flat as pancakes.

“Right,
and as a demon you have a natural affinity to fire. Which is why your
going to learn how to use water.” At this Tenzin rose an eyebrow. Tak
just kept talking. “You are going to be able to conjure water out of
thin air using demon magic. I’ve been on the battlefield. Trust me,
there is nothing that throws an opponent off more than a demon who can
splash water in your face at 10,000 psi. Not fun. At the same time
you’ll be practicing air. We can practice your field or territory while
you manage to change air currents. Just simple redirection now, you’d be
surprised how handy air can be. Redirection, air blades, oh and my
favorite, air domes. It’s this neat little trick where you capture
someone in a sphere of Za Koa charged wind and suck out their oxygen.
Quite effective against fire.Trust me as a demon, you’ll want to be able
to nullify fire, fire can be a bitch.” Tak said as he placed his hand
over his crotch and winced subconsciously. ‘Fire crotches should be
ILLEGAL’ Tenzin could have sworn he heard a tehe from somewhere, it
sounded oddly enough like Merrium. “Right so as you can see, we have a
lot to cover, while we search for this guys house. Lets do air while
we’re walking. See if you can levitate this rock with air. No magic. And
I’ll be putting these seals on you, we could do to increase your basic
stamina as well as Za Koa stamina. It’ll also help with Za Koa control. ”
With that Tak put pieces of pre-made paper with a language much older
than either of them on it and slapped them on his torso and the
surrounding five appendages where they all seemed to dissolve into his
body. “These came straight from Merrium’s clan. Those crafty bastards.”
He said as Tenzin fell to the ground, forming a 20 foot crater in the
shape of his body. “Oh right, I guess in terms of the Demon world’s
gravity. That would be about 40 times stronger. Oh and if you feel like
your going through Za Koa exhaustion... you probably are, the seal is
causing Za Koa to constantly run through your body. Do not worry, if it
gets too bad, I’ll help you... Possibly. Chop Chop we have ground to
cover and Territory to practice.” The man said as he left the boy in his
crater.

“I hate you...”

Year 300

“...You
crazy old man.” Tenzin said as a field of Tenzin’s seemed to be
fighting each other, though no sounds were made. “Do you know how stupid
I look right now?” He said as one of the Tenzin’s ducked a kick.

“Ok
fine, stop. I’m surprised at your progress.” The man said as Tenzin
stopped. The boy had went through a gigantic growth spurt as he was now
6’2 a little taller than his mentor. “How many organisms?”

“12,648. Not including bacteria.” Tenzin said without batting an eye.

“Ah...
I missed one.” The man let out a huge sigh. “I can’t believe you made
it to a mile radius in one hundred years. You little prick. Blue
slice.” The man said as a slim slither of water appeared before Tenzin
as he grabbed it and sliced through a tree about 30 yards away with a
quick flick of his wrist. “Black snap.” The water immediately flashed
black and then back to blue as he snapped the whip at a tree and it
instantly died. “Clear cut.” The man said as Tenzin made a sweeping
motion across his body and... nothing happened. Tenzin then walked to a
tree 40 yards in front of him and gave it a light shove as it seeming
hopped off the base of the tree trunk and landed right behind it
standing straight up, leaving the bulk of the tree standing up behind
the stump. “A cut clean as any swordsman. Run.” The man said as the boy
appeared before him almost instantly. “Only about Mach 1. Well we’ll see
how fast you are when the seals come off. Hows that liquid nitrogen
temperature coming along?”

“It’d be easier to work on if you took off these damn seals.” Tenzin said through his teeth.

“Good
news, we’re here.” Tak said as the reached a humble little hut that
seemed to appear before them as if it was a mirage. “Time for you to
meet, the demon magician Zabidi.”

“Sounds like a circus act.” Tenzin said.

“Shut
it.” The man said as he turned th intensity up on his seals from 140 to
180. But this time Tenzin didn’t budge or have any outward changes.
He’s the one who will help you with your Za Koa manipulation.Your demon
magic will become... formidable after at least 10 years with this guy.
So... bye. Ill be back to pick you up in 50 years. I have something to
take care of.” At that Tak turned on his heel as a man with an imp like
face and stature hobbled out, his hands were laced with a golden ring on
each finger.

“Ah.
Welcome. I was told a lot about you young boy. We are going to have a
lot of fun together... hehehehe”. Tenzin turned in the direction in
which Tak disappeared in, his twitching a bit.

‘What have you done old man...’

50 years later.

“Tenziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin~”
a deep bellowing voice could be heard in the morning air, 20 times more
annoying than any rooster could ever be.”Time to go sweetie!!” The man
cooed as the air in front of him appeared to shift and .1 seconds later
Tenzin appeared before already walking towards the mountain.

“Lets go you old coot.” He said as he walked, but something was odd, it seemed that every step he took had something missing.

“Are you teleporting constantly?” The man with now platinum silver hair asked in disbelief.

“Am I?... Sorry, I have too much energy. That... thing told me that this would help drain it if i was ever feeling too antsy.

“Exactly.... how big is your territory?” The man asked scratching his head.

“Two
miles radius and and two miles high, three if I’m concentrating on it. I
can see and feel everything within it... but I can’t teleport passed 70
feet.” Tenzin said as he began teleporting further and further away
from his spot with each step, but still walking in the same direction.
‘...
He’s much stronger than me.’ The man came to the conclusion when he
realized that even his Kyodo was on a completely different level. He had
created a monster. For the first time in Tak’s life, he was scared.
“Well up the mountain you go.” The man said and as he said it Tenzin
squatted for a second as his legs flashed blue and shot up causing the
man to be blown back by the sheer wind pressure of his movement. By the
time the man recovered he could see Tenzin was on the level of the
Zenith of the mountain, seemingly standing on foot with the Zenith of
the mountain, he let himself fall as he then appeared before Tak looking
into his eyes. “That was anti- climatic. The seals?” The teenage demon
said as he gave his first whole hearted smile.

The
man reached up and patted the boy’s head. ”First go home to your aunt.
Spend 500 years their then come back. We’ll take them off then... Im
proud of you son.” The man said with a tear streaming down his face.
Tenzin could feel the pride radiating from the man and couldn’t help but
feel a tear run down his own cheek. He actually did it.

“Thanks... Dad.”

Birth of the Free Radical.

“You
mean to tell me my mom was a mad scientist?” Tenzin’s cold expression
pierced through his aunt’s soul leaving her feeling quite uncomfortable.
“For lack of a better word.... yes.” The woman said as she tried to
avoid of the gaze of the once little boy who was now a dashing young man
whose hair dragged along the floor when he walked.“And she left all
these documents to me, in order for me to continue her studies?” he said
now tapping the giant vanilla folder.“....Yes.” the woman said.. now
squirming under his piercing golden eyes. “And my biological father may
in fact be alive somewhere.” The boy said as his expression remained
unchanged. “....” The woman nodded as Tenzin stood up and left the room,
the chair turning to splinters as he walked out.

The
boy spent the next 500 years learning all the information his mother
left him about free radicals. At year 500 he had gotten to the point
where he could turn oxygen into gold in 10 seconds. He could turn his
own skin into diamond in supplement to Kyodo. He finally got his seals
removed and felt as though the world was in his hands.

Present day
Tenzin
can be found wandering the different planes without much care. He goes
in search for clues of his biological father.
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☨Powers☨

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Natural Ability:

Egregious
Amounts of Energy: Through about 800 years of training with seals that
constantly sucked on his life energy, stamina, and Za Kao, once they
were removed he found that he had incredulous amount of energy that he
has to constantly burn off. If he sits still for too long he starts to
experience incredible amounts of pain as the energy starts to affect him
on a cellular level.

Shadow
Burst: Tenzin has taken the Shadow Burst to insane levels. He is able
to reach Mach 6 in sheer running speed, though it is unnecessary due to
his use of teleportation. He is able to control his shadow burst due to
900 years of continual practice, on any part of his body, Usually his
hands and his feet. He mixes it with his fighting style Inu-do. He is
able to use it on his brain in order to come up with a solution or
absorb information faster, but it takes a heavy toll on his brain. He
can only speed up his brain process in that way; off the battlefield. He
also has the Shadow Reaction time. Thanks to his tumultuous training
with Shadow Burst, he has gained the ability to sense other people’s
Shadow movement and predict their path. The same applies to those with
flash step and other things as such. It’s not as though he can see
them, unless they are that much slower than he himself. His brain has
just gained an extra sense for things that disappear out of sight, as he
himself does it quite constantly his brain has gained the ability to
predict speedy movements. This is not true for things that are much
faster than him. For example,Mach 7 or up or the speed of light.

Water:
Through use of Za Koa enhanced demon magic, Tenzin is able to pull
water molecules out of the air and use it as a whip. The water whip is
dangerous, as its crack has enough force to crack a diamond, and he can
move the water itself fast enough to cut through thick steel. He is also
able to flick pellets of water faster than any gun with enough force to
penetrate a tree. He also uses water as a way to combat fire when it is
used on him. IF he is ever in this situation he has the option of using
the steam that is created from the high evaporation rate of the water.

Territory:
Through use of Za Loa enhanced demon magic, Tenzin is able to control
the air around him within a 70 feet. He also has the ability to control
the air currents around him within this area.The most practical use for
this is wind blades. Through the use of a sweeping motion, Tenzin is
able to send a blade of wind forward, and only forward up to 500 mph.
Tenzin has mastered the art of Territory, which is a beefed up version
of knowledge of his surroundings. By allowing his Za Koa to flow on the
air currents within his domain, he has essentially created a second
nervous system. Within his domain he can feel everything that occurs,
which causes a problem as it may cause an information overload. Thus he
usually either keeps it off or within a 70 foot radius. He is able to
lower the intensity of the movements around him but not by much. Within a
70 foot radius of his domain, Tenzin is able to teleport or instantly
transmit himself as if he was walking. This is through use of Demon
magic and can only be done within his domain.

Body
Manipulations: Instead of using a sword Tenzin can produce hardened
spikes from any point in his body. He can add a crystalline property
through use of his control over free radicals. He tends to stick to
spike and blades.

Black
Inferno Blast: Water Whip ext.: Tenzin’s Black Inferno blast has been
tampered with for roughly 900 years. He is able to conjure a whip out of
it and even hide it within his water whip though not completely. The
water whip flashes black but only for a split second. He can shoot it
from 1mm in diameter to a 20 foot diameter as a full powered blast. He usually uses water as a catalyst as it helps him control the dark energy. Though, he is quite capable of doing it without water.
Black
Inferno Blast: Armor ext.:It is also possible for him to turn into into
a sword, and full body armor when he is in a pinch by releasing the
energy through every pore in his body. He can also control which pores
he leaks the dark energy through. Say if he only wanted to have it cover his hands or arms, etc.

Akuma
Kyodo: Tenzin’s Kyodo is strong, though he usually supplements it with a
diamond like crystalline thanks to his Free radicals.

Unique Abilities:

Free
Radicals: Tenzin has one Unique ability, and it’s the control over
Free radicals through use of Demon Magic. Simply by adding or
subtracting a molecule from the various compounds around him, he is able
to completely change the chemical or biological makeup of anything he
sees. through 500 years of nonstop practice, he is able to change skin
into diamond, or create gold/plastic out of thin air. He uses Demon
magic to affect the environment around him in the simplest way. The
catch is, he has to come into contact with the person or object, and
they must be within his domain. Due to ethical reasons he refuses to use
it on people themselves, but he has no problem rusting a sword by
heavily oxidizing it or even causing fragility within its molecular make
up. The actual amount of energy it takes to do this is little. The
process is simple thanks to demon magic, all he does is add a molecule
or subtract a molecule from whatever his target is. The variation of
energy that he uses has to do with the size of the object. The more he
has to change the more energy is consumed. In order to save himself the
trouble he will only change things on a small scale. Say he wanted to
topple a building, he would turn concrete beams into quicksilver instead
of oxidizing the whole building it then watching it crumble. One should
have difficulty telling the amount of energy Tenzin puts into his
disruptions.

Whenever
he attacks a small portion of his target, the free radical will cause a
chain reaction. Say it is an opponent much weaker than him. There is a
much bigger chance that there will be a chain reaction.Why?The process
can be negated depending on how much the enemy knows about the molecular
makeup of the the item in combination to how much energy is spent. If
the opponent knows which molecule Tenzin is targeting they have a
higher chance of stopping it, but the easiest way would be to know how
much energy Tenzin is expending. It’s like balancing a chemical
equation. Equal exchange, there can’t be more energy than Tenzin and
there can’t be less energy expended. If there is less energy, nothing
would happen. If there is more energy one of two things could happen.
Tenzin would succeed in adding the molecule, or the process would fail. This depends on the item itself. If it is something such as air wind water or earth or molecules of the sort the success chance is high, but if it is something bodily or pertaining to the person themself then it is low. This is why it’s also dangerous for those who
are stronger than him to try to counteract the free radical. Tenzin
does know the molecular makeup of water, fire, magma etc. This also
includes magically controlled elements. Tenzin would be able to stop
fire, electricity,water, etc. leaving it as pure harmless energy. Tenzin
knows the molecular makeup of anything he can shapeshift into. This
means demons, humanoids, and animals. If it is something with a heart
and lungs, there is little difference in its molecular makeup. However,
Tenzin does not know the molecular make up of things such as bacteria,
or space rocks. If he has enough time he is able to deduce these things
by process of elimination. Just because he knows the molecular make up
does not mean he can change the molecular make up. For things such as
steel, bare skin, and cloth. He is able to disrupt the molecules by
sight. Tenzin is able to spread chain reactions on surfaces he is
used to such as land, water and earth for 20 feet maximum. The bigger it
is the longer it takes. This is proportional to how much energy he
spends. If he wants it done in an instance, it requires more energy,
however, if he takes a 1 or 2 post charge up, it takes the same amount
of energy as a normal disruption.

The
speed it takes to disrupt things he is familiar with is instant, For
things like a hierro he would have a charge up time of about 2 posts
while touching the area.Though there is a disturbance in air pressure
for a split second, about .5 seconds to be exact before the reaction
occurs. If it is a repeated attempt on the same item the disturbance
goes down by .1 seconds per post attempted, until it is eventually
instantaneous. This does include air water and earth.
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☨Adjustable Demon States☨

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Adjustable State Appearance:None

Adjustable State Benefits:None

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☨Skill Sheet☨

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[i](DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

• Za Koa Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Demon Magic: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Shadow Movement: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

General Skills

• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  

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☨Role Play Sample☨
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Role
Play Sample:Zen chuckled in his mind as the man had fallen for his
trap. Zen easily predicted the movements of the man. A sword only had
but so many ways it could move, and Zen could predict every single one
of them.

Zen could see his muscles twitch and could tell he
was going for a low horizontal slash. There were only but a few
ways a sword could move, and that was why battles between blades were
constantly drawn out. The constant clash between the two pieces of metal
were only a claim to how easy the movements were to read, and that
anyone who was trained well enough could use this knowledge to their
advantage. Vertical slash, Horizontal slash, Diagonal slash, Pierce, Zen
could use each and everyone of these moves to his advantage, even with
feints
thrown in, swords were still two dimensional. As the man bought his
sword in the sweeping motion Zen easily picked up his foot and stomped
on the sword as it was right under his foot, effectively either snapping
it or making the man drop the sword to the ground due to the force the
boy brought down the powered thigh. He then stepped into the man with
his opposite foot. Quicker than any brain could send a signal, careful
not to leave any openings, Zen twisted his body and extended his fist
for a
punch
aimed at the vizards solar plexus. If the move hit, there was enough
force behind it to send the man flying back, as well as winding him. If
the attack missed, Zen wasted no time taking the sword and stabbing it
all the way into the ground until just the hilt was showing. He stood
over the sword as he waited to see the next move. But Zen hadn't said
anything, he just stood there in a defensive position, wondering what
his opponent would do without his sword.

He turned this into a brawl, and that's how he liked it. Fist to fist, man to man.

And...

Zen
was already ready as the man stepped in front of him. It may seem as if
he had disappeared in front of the untrained eye, but Zen wasn't a hand
to hand specialist for no reason. He easily re-directed the first punch
from the blow in his defensive stance. The man's move's were
photographic, he had no little tactics when it came to hand to hand
combat, speed and power wasn't goind to beat years of solidified and
honed skill. Charging into Zen before knowing what he could do, would be
costly.

As
the man re-appeared or rather ran quickly at him, Zen was already
forming an counter attack in his head, his left hand was already in
motion before the man reappeared before him, and as the man released the
punch , Zen reading his movements swatted it to the side with his
opposite hand. This meant, he took the opposite hand that the Vizard
attacked with on his body and redirected it by chopping it to the side.
If it was Tadashi's left hand it would be Zen's right and vice versa.
This caused the Vizard to over extend as his arm was going across his
body, and while Zen was doing this, he was also dropping his stance
lower. Keeping his center of gravity under him, as to make sure he
wouldn't move, especially if the Vizard attempted to throw or kick him,
Zen was what was now called the horse back stance.

The
hand Zen used to block his opponent's initial punch was taken back a
few inches to ensure full defensive safety, if his opponent did in fact
attempt a kick or a grab, his hand was there to immediately stop it. He
took his chambered hand and went to work. Zen's eyes were already
traveling and relaying information faster than almost anything with his
enhanced brain power, and he could already see the trajectory of each of
his shots and the damage they would cause, and over the course of the
next .5 seconds, his fist was a blur. Taking use of the over-extended
mans momentum, he landed another blow into his solar plexus, this would
definitely air him this time as well as cause him to pause for breath.
Bringing his fist back, the next punch was straight to the kidney,
kidney shots caused extreme pain, and the risk of rupturing something.
As he chambered his fist again in his counter, he accelerated the object
that was his fist, into a side punch aimed at the man's temple. This
meant that as the man was in front of him, Zen moved his fist forward
but instead of a frontal punch in which the arm is straight it was a
side punch in which the chamber came from moving his fist in an arc, as
his palm would be facing the opposite direction of the man's temple, if
the hit to the temple connected it could possibly cause a knockout, or
at least disorientation. And finally Zen brought his hand back, he had
his elbow drop a little lower as he angled his fist, putting it right
under the moving man's chin, he then launched it upwards into the man's
chin, if this had hit him it would cause his brain to rattle effectively
causing him to see star's. Each punch was strong enough to send the man
flying back, even if blocked, however, he completed each punch so fast,
that the mans mass hadn't had time to react and thus all punches would
have landed if uninterrupted until the last punch sent the man hurtling
up into the air in a perfect 180 degrees for at least 100 feet.
Unmoving, Zen decided to be more on his guard. The man was now fairly
unpredictable, seeing as how he was more feral than calculating.

Zen
was ready for whatever, the man was going to through at him next. And
Yin was watching from inside, ready to give him aid if he needed.

(ugh...such disgusting rping.)

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Comments/Notes:

Alright... Looks good for the most part, two or three large things to look at, some minor things here and there.

Personality. You only have 9 sentences.

Shadow Burst. Mach 10? That's roughly anywhere between 6,850 to 8,000 mph, on average 7,700. In other words, it is too high for a natural power.

ELEMENTS. If you would look at the elements list, you would see that you can manipulate only up to adept in two elements. So, as you have 3 listed, and two as "Mastery", that requires review.

Territory.Is simply too large. Tone that down quite a lot in radius. A mile radius where you can mess around and move yourself however you want at any time?

Free Radicals.For such a dynamic and important ability, being his only unique one, I feel that it does not have enough explanation. What energy does it cost him to do something so ground-changing? Can it be resisted by energy? What if the item is special? And what about the elements themselves?

Tier:Fixing required first.

Well... the other issues are all fixed; the only thing left is free radicals.

here is more energy one of two things could happen.
Tenzin would succeed in adding the molecule, or the item would cease to
exist as the overload of energy would cause the very molecules
themselves to disappear. This is why it’s also dangerous for those who
are stronger than him to try to counteract the free radical. T

No. You cannot force something to stop existing or success. If it goes like that, end it in success or failure; you cannot simply say that it is gone from existence, no matter what the object is.

Tenzin also has the ability to utterly decimate the undead and demons of much lesser stature, as he used corpses to practice on, and he already knows the molecular structure of the undead. Things brought back from the dead have little to no effect on him.

All living things are made up of different energies to an extent: therefore, most of this is invalid.

For things such as hierro, he would have to touch it, and that
only affects the spot where he touched forward. If he poked an arm he
would be able to change the molecules where he touched and continue
straight through as if it were an arrow.

While I do appreciate you addressing this issue, again, no two hierro are the same, so he would have to try many times before figuring out enough about one to affect it.

Similarly to the enchanted items: They may not even be made up of molecules. You may just want to limit him to earthly elements and make this MUCH, MUCH easier on yourself.

Other than that, checks out. 1-3+ when fixed.

A P P R O V E D


ALRIGHT! GOOD JOB BRO!

Tier: 1-3+

• Willpower/Determination: Adept
  
• Mental Deduction: Adept
  
• Pain Endurance: Advanced
  
• Focus: Adept
  

As part of my little clean up of the approved application section i will be moving this app to inactives. ask staff to move it back to approve or refer to This Thread