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- JJRower of Rock. And Souls.
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Re: Nature Iramasha Of The Crystal Glass Mirrors
Tue Mar 13, 2012 3:13 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Good job! You did it! Only thing... the glass shards are gonna have to be about 1-2 inches long, as any longer and it would be like a veritable bloodbath o_o.
Tier: 2-2+
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Adept
- Focus: Advanced
Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
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- JJRower of Rock. And Souls.
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Re: Nature Iramasha Of The Crystal Glass Mirrors
Tue Mar 20, 2012 5:04 pm
Application Checklist
- Name [X]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
- 10 sentences for personality [X]
- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Just make sure you play fair ^_^
Tier: 2-1
Will Skills
- Willpower/Determination: Adept
- Mental Deduction: Adept
- Pain Endurance: Adept
- Focus: Advanced
Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
- Buddha
- Buddha
- JJRower of Rock. And Souls.
- Joined : 2011-03-03
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Re: Nature Iramasha Of The Crystal Glass Mirrors
Wed May 16, 2012 2:13 pm
Reapproved, 2-1+.
Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
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Re: Nature Iramasha Of The Crystal Glass Mirrors
Fri May 18, 2012 4:20 pm
Okay, no no no NO.
Sorry If I'm over stepping but this application is frankly, crap. I've seen newbs do better then this. There is SO much wrong that it's just enraging.
1. Do you even have JJ's permission to use his last name? If not, no.
2. That age? Denied. You were formed during the Volcanic explosion of Pompeii : find that year, and add 400 to it. That's it. You are NOT cleared to have a former identity or anything like that. So don't even try.
3. Your personality makes references to James. Got that cleared with JJ? No? Then take it out.
4. your abilities are all over the place. And your history explains nothing : hell there's nothing on your file that explains why you have so many nature cells, or even a bunch of the crap you have out.
5. If you aren't using that second post file, just hit edit and blank it out. Seriously.
Just no, definitely you need to re-work this app. So moved to WIP until I see better changes.
Sorry If I'm over stepping but this application is frankly, crap. I've seen newbs do better then this. There is SO much wrong that it's just enraging.
1. Do you even have JJ's permission to use his last name? If not, no.
2. That age? Denied. You were formed during the Volcanic explosion of Pompeii : find that year, and add 400 to it. That's it. You are NOT cleared to have a former identity or anything like that. So don't even try.
3. Your personality makes references to James. Got that cleared with JJ? No? Then take it out.
4. your abilities are all over the place. And your history explains nothing : hell there's nothing on your file that explains why you have so many nature cells, or even a bunch of the crap you have out.
5. If you aren't using that second post file, just hit edit and blank it out. Seriously.
Just no, definitely you need to re-work this app. So moved to WIP until I see better changes.
- JJRower of Rock. And Souls.
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Re: Nature Iramasha Of The Crystal Glass Mirrors
Fri May 18, 2012 6:00 pm
Archived upon request.
Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense.
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Re: Nature Iramasha Of The Crystal Glass Mirrors
Sun May 20, 2012 9:59 am
Unarchived. Please refer to modding above.
Also - Illya has been reserved and Irisavel's share has not been approved. So please remove those.
Also - Illya has been reserved and Irisavel's share has not been approved. So please remove those.
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