Shenro Kenshosaki [APPROVED, 2-1+]

General Information

Name: Shenro Kenshosaki
Age: 29 years old
Gender: Male

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Overall Character Information

Personality: On the surface, Shenro displays an immature sort of personality. He is decidedly stubborn and strong-willed, frequently letting his pettiness and vindictiveness get the better of him, he is somewhat selfish and remarkably self-absorbed, generally acting more out of self-interest than any sort of philanthropy as well as taking several opportunities to stroke his own ego. He is largely hostile towards figures of authority and feels little incentive to follow orders with which he disagrees, earning him the distinction of being a loose cannon of sorts. Shenro is also rather quick-tempered, resorting more often to steel-fisted violence than calm negotiation to settle disputes. He has a reputation for being foul-mouthed and is an incurably sarcastic cynic, only too happy to bluntly and harshly relieve others of their comfortable delusions regarding god, reality, or their own self-importance. Shenro has also displayed a propensity towards impatience and an inability to sit still for long, which perhaps contributes to his love of travel.

However, for those few people who have made an impact on him, Shen shows his deeper nature to be one of marked selflessness, unflinching loyalty and great compassion. As someone who has had to suffer greatly at such a young age, Shenro cannot ignore the true suffering of others and becomes sympathetic upon sensing pain and resolve in people's hearts. Though his solemn advice to such people is often tempered with brusque criticism, it is only because he genuinely wishes to place them on the most direct path forward. As one who has to struggle with a maimed body, he urges those with healthy bodies to use their strong legs to move forward, and as one burdened by the mistakes of his past, he stresses the necessity of people taking responsibility for their own errs. Though he will intervene on behalf of the oppressed if he concludes that a situation has called for it

Appearance: Shenro has light blond hair, blue eyes, and a stubble beard. He wears a black bandanna, black gloves, large gray boots, a light blue vest over a black shirt, and a striped blue scarf hanging from a belt under a long beige trench coat with frayed hems. The coat is fused with AMP technology from Karakura Super Best Buy. Shenro's foot size is a gargantuan 33 centimeters (about a foot long). His l'Cie brand is on his left forearm.
Over the years, Shenro no longer wears his bandana, vest or scarf and now has a shorter beard and slightly longer hair. He now wears a dark red shirt under a dark gray trench coat with notably more frayed hems. His hair is now swept back and exposes his ears. He also bears a new Pulse l'Cie brand of an unknown fal'Cie on his left arm, but closer to his elbow, being only half-shown.
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Natural Abilities
Taijutsu Master: Shenro's true dream is to become a ultimate MMA kickboxer who uses only taijutsu, despite having had very little talent for this, as well. Master Gouken has specially trained him to reach this goal, teaching him a number of forbidden techniques in the process. The most basic of these is his strong Fist style of combat, a martial art style focusing on external damage. In doing so, Shenro has become a taijutsu master, as he has only trained in that form and has therefore almost perfected it. Shenro is shown to be very fast even with the weights on his legs, but his true speed was first shown in his very first kickboxing bout.

Hand to Hand Combatant: Shenro was much of a loser back then. But after being trained by Master Gouken, Shenro became a novice fighting machine. Put his anger which his punches from all the years being bullied. During the years, his punching power had improved. The strong powerhouse has become very proficent with his striking power using many styles of boxing, muay thai and judo with his striking. His fighting technique is somewhat ruthless, using his speed and reflexes to quickly take out his opponents.

Strong & High Reiatsu: Shenro has intensely strong and high levels of spiritual energy during his trainings. During his fights with some hollow he notices the first time, it would actully spike his strength making his punches stronger. During training, Shenro would test the limits of his reiatsu allowing himself to got the extre mile to make it grow. He doesn't even know how powerful he is....Yet he continues to evolve into a well trained reiatsu user.

Spiritual Awareness System: During his first encounter, Shenro started seeing the monsters like shadows for the first time. Then finally discovering his reiatsu powers, Shenro started seeing detect the approximate locations of spirits and Hollows. The more that he trained with his powers the more his spirit awareness started to grow gaining a better sense of people and their power.

Drawback Anti-Venom System(DVS): Unknown to Shenro, A lot of experimentation was done his heart and vital organs when Project DeathShire was first created. This was make sure that Shenro is completely immune from the many causes to prevent illness, diseases, toxins, poisons and various syptoms from entering his sytem. But because of this his attack and ability powers took a turn for the worse for his different forms like Stage 1 and 2. On the bright side his abilities weren't affected that much. Like Stage 1 and 2 he doesn't have to worry about using his reiatsu that much his strength, flying and speed ability dont use that much reiatsu. Unlike Stage 3 and Full Awakened Form which takes 1 posts to unlock both the transformation and the ability powers. The ability powers for Stage 1 and 2 can lasts for 11 posts which have 8 cooldown period before using again. Thus Stage 3 and Full Awakened ability powers can last for about 23 posts and 17 posts cooldown. The attack powers which he can attack instantly which have 2 post cooldown if a weak or medium strong. The Destructive attacks which take 2 posts to charge will take 7 post cooldown. The Very Powerful Destructive attacks might take 4 posts to charge and then attack with on the fourth posts which some might take a 8 posts cooldown or he cant use the attack again.

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Soul State Evolutionary Powers

Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Appearance: Mark of the Dragon is one of the first powers that he ever created. Shenro created this from the thought never being afraid of being bullied anymore. The Mark of dragon appears as a long dragon tattoos on his arms. The tattoos will cover his shoulders Then they starte glowing and then his knuckles start glowing green meaning the spirit of the dragon is inside of him. Not only that his eyes will start glowing green too. Dragon scales will to form around his jawline, fingers, and his muscles will start to bulk up

Soul State Evolution Stage 1 Abilities: Increased Strength: Because of this mark of the dragon, Shenro's physical strength and muscle mass has increased. The dragon tattoo's start pulsating which reconstructing his muscular system making the little guy stronger. His punches & kicks are strong enough to strike an opponent with enough force to have them sent flying with enough force to destroy building.

Flaming Tail Whip: A standard bull whip attack when a thread of air condenses into reiatsu flame energy making a whip from his finger. The attack itself doesn't do much damage it design to hurt an enemy or lose their momentum. This was Shenro's first attack that he ever created though.

Firebuster Beam: The attack is almost similiar to cero being shot from the mouth. The attack starts off which his eyes changing color as he starts growling gathering energy. Air and energy particles started forming a ball, Shenro started yelling and the ball unleashing a powerful blast of concentrated burning flame energy at the target. However, the techinque itself has a flaw the ball if it destroyed then the attack weakens in strength. Making it easy to dodge, block or destroy it.

Dragonite Punch: The user's fist is engulfed in flames as his reiatsu is condense making his hand stronger. The move in itself acts like a jumping flame uppercut which the user spins and rockets upwards with some horizontal movement as well, knocking the opponent to the ground with much tremendous damage when the enemy hits the ground. This move is an excellent anti-air move, as it usually hits nearly all aerial attacks, this attack is very deadly. If an enemy has shunpo or faster speed then the attack wouldn't hit.

Spiritual Flame Buster: This being his ultimate attack; Because it will hurt as more then it hurts him. The attack starts with Shenro looking at his hand remembering the many friendships he had. Then his reiatsu will engulfed his hand as the flames will empower his hand. Thus also his speed will be increased in the duration of this attack. He charged fast at his enemy punching him the gut hard first; then axe handling the enemy to the ground. Then unleashing his enpowered flame fist delivering blockbuster punch to the enemy inflicting massive damage. With a blast radius of 5 feet.

Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Appearance:

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Soul State Evolution Stage 2 Abilities: Superb Flying & Gliding: Because of his new wings, Neko Shenro had been given the ability to fly around to wherever he wants to do. Also he can glide around to different places or location depending on the air quality or if it a breezy/windy day. However this wings can be destroyed easily because their almost identical to bird wings. Once their destroyed it will take him two weeks for them to regeneration back to normal.

Enhanced Speed: Because of his new form, Neko Shenro's speed is enhanced making him faster then regular humans or cats. The neko powers seem to enhanced his natural agility to the point where his reaction time became sufficient enough to anticipate high-speed attacks and counter them. By using both hands and feet, Neko Shenro can actually generate the same speed of shunpo being able to get away enemies or preparing new counter attacks to his advantage.

Claw Smasher: Neko's Shenro's basic attack. By channeling his reiatsu within his claws, Neko Shenro's claws with start turning red. Which Neko Shenro can give off an energy claw slash which is powerful enough to tear through flesh, armor perhaps even a sword. When he uses this technique one hand must be used for the full power of this attack if both hands are used the attack powers is split in half. If the enemy attack's stronger then his fingers of the hand of which he used the claw slash will start bleeding.

Enhanced Spiritual Flame Buster: An enhanced version of the Spiritual Flame Buster, Neko Shenro's fist will start glowing blue then it be engulfed in a blue aura flame. Then Neko Shenro will start charging at his enemy delivering an blockbuster punch to the enemy's stomach unleashing a huge explosion. With a blast radius of 25 feet this would called a stomach killer meaning the enemy would be extremely hurt from the attack. If the enemy has enough speed to dodge the attack, he still feel some of the effects of the explosion but it would mean major trouble for Neko Shenro.

Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Appearance:

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Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities: Immense Strength and Endurance: Within this form, Shenro had develop an unbelevable amount of strength from his fights with hollows within his other forms. From the mark of the dragon the energies of the various ancient dragons and harness within his muscles making him into a much stronger & powerful human being. Their strength has become his own within this form. He can easily block grand rey cero or Kidō Hadō attacks up to #53 with ease. However the armor cant handle anything higher of number #53 because it can damage both armor and flesh. Because of the dragonoid armor, Shenro's endurance has greatly increased making him able to take attacks to endure the pain afterwards. The dragonoid armor has a strong reistance because of the fused dragon skins which was created to make the armor.

Augmented Speed: Because of the newly developed form, Shenro's augmented speed is faster then any average human or shinigami. The Dragonoid part of the armor can help him anticipate attacks and use the speed necessary to counter them. Dragonoid Shenro can actually devleop a level of speed that can easily keep up with that of shunpo or sonido, even capable of appearing behind his opponent and attacking.

Augmented Flying: Unlike his Neko's Shenro form, Dragonoid Shenro has gain dragon wings which he can create from his own reiatsu. Dragonoid Shenro had been given the ability to fly around a faster speed then before. Also he can glide faster to different places or location depending on the air. However this wings can be destroyed easily because their almost identical to dragon wings. Once their destroyed it will take him a week to re-create them.

Arm Razoroid Swords: Black sharp blades that extend from the dragonoid's forearms; they can bend and lengthen at will, folding into short spikes, or extending into meter-long swords. These blades vibrate at an extremely high frequency allowing attack any weapon and cut some objects with ease by interfering with molecular bonds. They actually similiar to zanpakutos but little stronger to hold they own against shikai or bankai formed zanpakutos. However their durability is almost like a regular sword they might handle attacks for period of time. Yet their start to crack yet break which it will take a while for them to regenerate depending on Shenro's reiatsu.

Shadow Cammouflage: The reiatsu within him warps light around Shenro and projects a hologram of the wall behind it over top of the bent light, rendering him invisible. Whenever, Shenro wants to get the upperhand on an enemy or when he wants to hide from an stronger opponent. Which is basically useless if the enemy has sensing powers. However, it is not perfect, as when the user moves, there will be a man-shaped, "bubble" in the air, and laser sights will be refracted by the field. It will dissapear completely if it comes in contact with water of any kind.

Razoroid Eye Beams: From his red eyes, Shenro can generate small reiatsu reserves which his eyes will start glowing red. Then he can shoot precise red laser-like beams shot from both eyes. The eye lasers can be used for various attack procedures like nullify weak attacks and small projectiles. The damage from eye beams are strong which can really hurt weaker enemies and 50% hurt stronger ones. It can block with stronger attacks or stronger defenses yet it can't handle against higher Kidō, stronger shikai, bankai or grand rey cero.

Darkness Ravager: The rage blast technique. The Darkness Ravager is a powerful condense reiatsu blast technique. To use it, the user starts by charging an ball pure reiatsu in their hand. Then, they draw their hand forward and fire the reiatsu sphere in the form of an energy wave at the opponent, inflicting a great immense amount of damage. The size of attack is almost big watermelon but the attack itself is mid-strong dealing only various scratches and big wounds when it explodes onto an enemy. It can be blocked and dodged easily.

Nova Spiritual Flame Buster: The true & deadly version of the Spiritual Flame Buster. The atack starts when Shenro raises his hand up in the air and then closes his eyes for a few seconds. The reiatsu from him starts to go through and empowerment state engulfing his right fist both flame and plasma energy. Finally he gets into a fighting stance charging up the power of the fist. Suddenly, Shenro charges towards his opponent with a energy charged punch, if it connects it will release a tremendous explosion with a blast radius on 70 yards. This can cause xtreme damage the punch itself feel like a dragon's mouth ripping apart flesh when it connects. Yet it can't kill a person it but design to hurt. However if the first punch isn't successful then the attack is over with. Leaving Shenro helpless again any attack comin his way.

Nova Hell Fire Darkness Ravager: The augmented version of the Darkness Ravager technique in the pure unholy fire form. First, Shenro prepares use the Darkness Ravager like normal, but charges it with more power. Then, while it is being prepared, some of the massive reiatsu is released as streaks of red electricity. Finally, Shenro brings his hands forward and fires the attack at the opponent, inflicting a massive amount of damage. The damage from the attack can actually destroy half a baseball stadium that how large it is. However an strong opponent might feel 75% of the damage if they have the defense to block it. But it also his fingertips will start bleeding and some parts of his body go numb temporary.

Dragon's Awakening:

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Chi Abilities

Powers

Chi Powers: Chi Blast: In order to use this the user must be calm to be in a state of true focus. Using chi energy to his adantage. The Chi Blast a is a very powerful chi energy wave shot from one hand, with the other arm supporting the one that is firing the attack. Depending on Shenro's chi energy will determine the strength of the chi blast. If he was distracted by anything then he would lose control of the chi focus and the attack itself would be weak as a feather. However if Shenro is focus reallying focusing his attention on the opponent and no one else. Then the attack is stronger and can cause enough damage to weaken an opponent.

Universal Tools: Chi Energy can be transfered into objects following complicated spells, rituals or other methods which can give birth to miraculous items that posses massive spiritual power on their own. For example, previous Fully Awakened Humans have created powerful weapons, items and tools for new generations to use that can have many different abilities, powers and effects. It's all up to the user how they create the tool.

Yang Surge: Most people on Earth call it this, but a Yin Surge is a powerful blast of white light that is released from your body's life energy. It can take any kind of shape you wish, however, upon hitting something it will not only do large scale damage similar to a Grand Rey Cero, but it can even accelerate energy across a 2000 meter area in order to make some people or objects more vibrant, bright and a general sense of upward energy is felt in the effected area. When this happens, it can increase the users own powers for a period of three post. Not only that, but if a soul is killed by this, the chances of them becoming a hollow is lessened greatly.

Yin Surge: As to be expected, a Yin Surge is the exact opposite of a Yang Surge. When this attack is used a powerful blast of black light that is released from your body's life energy. It to can take the shape of whatever you wish and cause massive damage, but in it's effective area of 2000 meters it can cause a mass silence within the area, deep darkness to be visibility seen and an overall slowed feeling. When this happens, the users abilities will be boosted just like the Yang Surge.

Geppo: Being that there powers somewhat evolve around the Yin and Yang, moon step would be their form of flash step, high speed movement where in the case of tier you will be able to keep up with the Shinigami's flash step. Yuèqiú bù thought does have one thing that is different from the Shinigami's flash step because it makes no noise.

Vindeca "Heal": Using Chi in order to get their bodies to the best shape as possible, using the chi flowing in there own bodies they are able to regeneration faster then the normal human beings this doesn't mean their bodies heal instantly, it's almost like the Shinigami, there bodies can heal faster then normal humans can, this doesn't pertain to any injuries like a cut off limb, they cannnot regeneration a arm or a thumb or anything, these are flesh wounds to the body.

Tekkai "Iron Mass": Training themselves as much as possible along with the Chi in their own bodies they have formed a almost 'perfect' body where their muscles are so close together that they have higher endurance then the normal human, also with using this they are able to form Chi on their own skin, this is constantly active, and is a lot like the Arrancar's own Hierro.

Fully Awakened Appearance:

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Fully Awakened Powers: (Describe what powers your human gets in this state)
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Background

Background: There is no telling if Project Deathshire was born normally or bio engineered to be a deadly killing machine. An secret organization within Karakura town someone high up the chain of command gave the order and thus the project began. Project Deathshire began with many of scientsist experimenting with various blood samples of shinigami and hollows. The process of the experiments had deadly results with a few scientists being killed thus the creations were destroyed. Dr. Karla Crane finally decided to try an new breakthrough which she experimented with human blood and combined the other stolen bloods along with it. The test subject started out a blood sample then by stroke of luck it started growing as Project Deathshire was forming into a human baby. The project was success but somehow it was shutdown by members of the soul society but the good doctor hid the project in a undeground bunker. The doctor was killed by a Shinigami it seems the soul society had finally killed the dark organization hellbent on bringing them down.

Years later, Yusuke and Yomiko Kenshosaki were actually digging around searching for a wedding ring. Yusuke actually fell into the underground bunker trashing the security number pad and enter inside where he found a little baby. Yusuke couldn't believe his eyes telling his wife that he found something as his brought the baby out of the bunker. Yomiko thought who would leave a baby like that in a bowl of water and limitless supply of oxygen like that. Yomiko gave the baby his name Shenro....Sherno Kenshosaki.

Even though Shenro Kenshosaki is the son of Yusuke and Yomiko Kenshosaki. During his childhood, Shenro had a unlucky streak hitting him right in the face. Because of his size, he was constantly bullied at grade school because the guy was the biggest nerd. Everyday, Shenro would have to plan how he was going to escape people trying to hang him by his underwear to a flag pole. He always wonder why bullies would pick on him at school, Shenro was diagnosed with fuluboros cancer at birth. The only cure which was experimental at the time felt like a curse could have saved him would change his life everything. The experimental cure did save him by the doctors told his family to have monthly checkups. Being bullied everyday took his toll, Shenro would always come home with a black eye and his father had enough. Yusuke took his son to a Karakura dojo this is where he met with Master Gouken a fighting master. Master Gouken started training Shenro to how to defend himself against bullies by training him certain ways of taijutsu. Returing back to grade school, Shenro finally dealt his personal demons and finished grade school with a decent average. People started seeing this former little nerd in a new light, Shenro started gaining new friends and respect. In his mind, Shenro thought things were actually getting better when in the past it was fucking worse.

Growing up, Shenro Kenshosaki started becoming an loyal & local resident of Karakura town. Shenro tried his best helping the community anway he could with problems even helping the police with bad situations. This led to him finding other teenagers like him with the same grueling problems he went through as a kid. Ayame Katsuragi, Valin Krauser, Sidney Ayanami and Shenro Kenshosaki became close friends. Shenro and new friends formed a pact which this team would help fight bullying and help people hopefully to put an end to it once and for all. The pact was called "Urban Rivals". Their greatest victory came to when the team actually defending a shopkeeper's diamond store from robbers. Shenro's taijutsu skills came in handy dealing with the punks. They started taking out the deadly gangs around Karakura town hoping to bring the peace back to the community. Shenro thought the team was undefeatable until about four months later. Sid went missing her family didn't know what happen she just dissapeared. The remaining members of the pact went off to find her, Shenro found her locket. Then he a monster cover in blood which seemed to have human hair in it's teeth, Shenro thought the worse had happen. Valin rushed over seeing some shadow monster about to attack his friend pushing the guy. The hollow attacked with an cero blast completely killing the human making his bones extra crispy. Shenro was frozen in fear as the hollow was making his advances back on his prey.

The hollow thought Shenro was only to go a light snack and then turned it attention on some school children. Shenro was afraid but he heard children screaming but he was greatly afraid of the white monster. He knew in his heart that this wasn't the master would do things, Shenro needed to be a hero. The hollow was charging at the school children, Shenro yelled at the monster "Hey you white candy cane bastard come and eat me already". The hollow turned his attention back on his former prey again charging at him. Shenro was afraid but something just snapped within his mind all those times being bullied doing nothing about it. He started getting angry as the hollow was dead set to kill him, Shenro thought enough was enough that he wasn't going to be a victim anymore. He gave a hard blockbusting punch to the hollow as the creature was trying to figure out what happen. Some weird energy tattoos appeared on left arm and it was glowing formed into a shape of a bear. The punch seemed to catch the hollow off guard thinking his meal had hot sauce to him. Shenro punched the hollow again with the power breaking his hollow mask and then it started running away. He thought this power was unbelievable but he didn't wory about that because two of his best friends were gone. Days later, Shenro swore that he would use this weird powers against these creatures honoring the memory of his friends.

After a few battles, Shenro finally mastered the arts of taijutsu his master was pleased with him at that point. The guy had ideas with using his taijutsu with these strange power it would be his ultimate combo. He started fighting within an MMA organization for money which almost the world champion until he was defeated. During his final bout with the reigning heavyweight champ, an espada group attacked the stadium things turn bad to worse. Shenro used his powers to fight against the threat but still he was no match against them it allowed some people to escape though. The head espada took care of Shenro beating the living crap outta him still the espadas were killing humans for sport or giving them to hollows for devourment. At that point Shenro felt hopeless, just then a strange power started flowing within him the espadas sensed that the human was still alive. Shenro couldn't explain it like his whole life flashed before his eyes seeing lost images within his mind. A unbelievable burst for reiatsu exploded out of him like a giant balloon then he took on a new form. He attacked the espadas noticing the changes of his form his power & strength were incredible, he could actually take on these creatures. The espada group had enough and escaped as Shenro thought something had happen to him, he wanted some questions answered.

Four years later, Shenro was captured by a shady group of people and when he awoke the guy found himself strap to a bed. A new organization known as the "Dark Nebula" had found the original Project Deathshire programs. The founder of the organization Jacob Marlowe explained that Shenro was important to the organization they wanted him to work for the government. Shenro refused at the time but after a little convincing choices, he decided to work for the organization. The Dark Nebula organization sent Shenro to do a few extermination missions of some hollows to see how strong he was. The organization was impressed after some hollow kills that Shenro was perfect to spread their message around. During a search and destroy mission, Shenro was trying to gather information about hollows attacking karakura town. He was attacked by a strong hollow having his arm ripped off as the monster devoured his arm. Shenro managed to kill the hollow but the organization thought the experiment needed to be uprgaded so this won't happen again. Shenro went through an assortment of test exams to increase his knowledge most of them were actually easy and some were mid-hard. The doctors started restructing his body as a lot of tubes of wires were being placed on the human subject, Shenro was crying a little bit. They replaced his torn arm with cybernetic replacement arm which was fused little bit to his broken torn shoulder. Jacob thought enough was enough but the director wanted something more to be done as the test subject was taken & placed into a containment tank. Dr. Sherry Cornelius began using her scientific experimentation lacing Shenro's bones with an metal known Neo Adamantium. Shenro was actually brainwashed by having microchips being implanted within his brain and sent on various death missions and their assassin. Bascially whatever the organization wanted done they would sent him to do the job and make some lies to media about treason or people would were enemies of the state. After each mission, Shenro was subjected to advanced memory cleaning and even had false memories of unknown events implanted. Sherry thought the Dark Nebula was making this bio engineered human into the ultimate killing machine. During an argument with the doctors, Shenro slowly started to regain his memory and wonder what the fuck was going on like his brain was a little on fire. He walked over to a file cabinet as saw his name on the file and boy was that file heavy for some reason but he began looking at the file readin the contents. Shenro shockingly discover who he was & what the organization had done to him and started getting angry over some horrible facts. He wanted out from the organization and told the director that he could go to hell and rot finding out the secrets of the organization. Jacob Marlowe ordered his extermination squads that he wanted Project Deathshire terminated but thanks to their training & knoweldge. Shenro made short work of the guards beating the living crap outta them then focusing his anger as the director. At that point, Shenro had won actually punching the guy hard in the chest thinking this monster was going to so much then his life once he's done with him. He exposed Jacob's secrets to the media as the Dark Nebula was shutdown permanently, Shenro reunited with his family. The government helped into taking out the Neo Adamantium out of Shenro's body thinking it would return the human back to social life.

Shenro hopes to put this part of his past behind him and start new again hopefully his family and friends could forgive him for being gone for so long. During one of his battles, Shenro met up with a shinigami healer which actually helped regenerate his arm with some zanpakutō ability. The human express his gratitude thinking these shinigami were actually helpful in doing something after all. He began to have some mutual respect for all members with the Soul society but do they know that he's Project Deathshire.

Yet things took a turn for a worse a vizard was harassing some local people near a mall, Shenro was first on the scene. They fought a hard battle but the vizard overpowered him while people were getting hurt, Shenro was about to get hurt. Hagokumo a demon spirit who was killed by a ziamichi was trying to find another body before dying. He saw the human getting beat the snot out of by the vizard, the demon summoner helped. Hagokumo used Judas Destroyer instantly killing the vizard while taking out a human's body. Hagokumo helped Shenro to his feet, Shenro didn't know what just happen as the demon tricked the human into being a long lost friend. With the right mainpulation, Shenro bought it and helped the injured people yet the demon. Thus life went on......

• Durability: Advanced
  
• General Speed: Adept
  
• Strength: Adept
  
• Weapon Skill: Beginner
  

• Spirituality: Advanced
  
• Valor: Adept
  
• Perception: Beginner
  
• Motivation: Adept
  

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Comments/Notes:

Bullet Headbutt: The Mega Toro attack which can cause a violent perhaps a massive stomach ache. Neko Shenro charges with blue reiatsu energy surrounding him, speedily dashing straight to the enemy with the force of a bull (meaning he starts running like a wild bull), and head-butts the enemy in the stomach. Which the force actually starts a chain reaction within the enemy stomach causing them to fall down for mere minutes(1 post). This allow Neko Shenro a chance to escape or plan for another attack. This is like Neko's Shenro's get the heck outta here trump card.

Hmm... so according to this, you would immobilize the slow Radioactive just by headbutting him for an entire post.... Sorry, but no. You can't treat all characters as the same; you have to honor how they're different in levels of power in regards to your attacks.

Soul State Evolution Stage 3 Abilities: Immense Strength and Endurance: Within this form, Shenro had develop an unbelevable amount of strength from his fights with hollows within his other forms. From the mark of the dragon the energies of the various ancient dragons and harness within his muscles making him into a much stronger & powerful human being. Their strength has become his own within this form. He can easily block grand rey cero or Kidō Hadō attacks up to #88 with ease. Because of the dragonoid armor, Shenro's endurance has greatly increased making him able to take attacks to endure the pain afterwards. The dragonoid armor has a strong reistance because of the fused dragon skins which was created to make the armor.

Yeah... um... NO. You can't just shrug off a Kidō of 88 damage without at least spending SOME energy yourself. That needs to be toned down.

Arm Razoroid Swords: Black sharp blades that extend from the dragonoid's forearms; they can bend and lengthen at will, folding into short spikes, or extending into meter-long swords. These blades vibrate at an extremely high frequency allowing them to cut through almost any material with ease by interfering with molecular bonds. They actually similiar to zanpakutos but little stronger to hold they own against shikai or bankai formed zanpakutos.

They may be fast and sharp; but cutting most materials is Godmodded. Plus, you don't explain what happens if the material regenerates itself; or if its molecular bonds are stronger than your sword.

Razoroid Eye Beams: From his red eyes, Shenro can generate small reiatsu reserves which his eyes will start glowing red. Then he can shoot precise red laser-like beams shot from both eyes. The eye lasers can be used for various attack procedures like nullify weak attacks and small projectiles, as well as cripple opponents and damage other objects. The damage from eye beams are very strong which can kill weaker enemies and really hurt stronger ones. It can block with stronger attacks or stronger defenses.

Alright, assuming you can automatically kill ANYONE with a power just due to its effect is not allowed. You also seriously need to say what effect that level of a blast has on him; if it needs a charge up and cool down, etc. As well as how much energy that kind of blast takes out of him; I'm assuming it would be an immense amount.

Darkness Ravager: The rage blast technique. The Darkness Ravager is a powerful condense reiatsu blast technique. To use it, the user starts by charging an ball pure reiatsu in their hand. Then, they draw their hand forward and fire the reiatsu sphere in the form of an energy wave at the opponent, inflicting a great immense amount of damage.

I NEED DETAILS! How big is this thing, and WHY can it do so much damage if it's just pure energy?

Darkness Barrier: Shenro's reiatsu starts to engulf him when it fully covers his body then the reiatsu creates something like a big energy shield. The energy shield can used protect them from weak, mid and strong attacks. This is a result of using very strong reiatsu manipulation to compress the energy to the point of being hermetically sealed. The shield lasts for about a post which he needs to wait for about 3 posts to create another one. If ane enemy can quickly hit Shenro when forming the barrier then the defense power of the barrier is weaken allowing enemies to attack which Shenro's will feel the power of the attack causing him to a strong nose bleed.

Tell us what you need to destroy the thing once it's up; as nothing is truly able to block everything.


Nova Spiritual Flame Buster: The true & deadly version of the Spiritual Flame Buster. The atack starts when Shenro raises his hand up in the air and then closes his eyes for a few seconds. The reiatsu from him starts to go through and empowerment state engulfing his right fist both flame and plasma energy. Finally he gets into a fighting stance charging up the power of the fist. Suddenly, Shenro charges towards his opponent with a energy charged punch, if it connects it will release a tremendous explosion with a blast radius on 70 yards. This is a instant killer because the punch itself feel like a dragon's mouth ripping apart flesh when it connects. However if the first punch isn't successful then the attack is over with. Leaving Shenro helpless again any attack comin his way.

...no. Just no. You cannot kill a person just with the effects of the attack. Downtone that. Not to mention you DON'T NEED TO KILL your opponents; you have to remember, these are people's characters as well, and they care about them!

Nova Hell Fire Darkness Ravager: The augmented version of the Darkness Ravager technique in the pure unholy fire form. First, Shenro prepares use the Darkness Ravager like normal, but charges it with more power. Then, while it is being prepared, some of the massive reiatsu is released as streaks of red electricity. Finally, Shenro brings his hands forward and fires the attack at the opponent, inflicting a massive amount of damage. However an strong opponent might feel 75% of the damage if they have the defense to block it. But it also his fingertips will start bleeding.

We need to know how large it is; also, for such a strong attack as it seems, it has no energy cost other than bleeding fingertips? You need to extend on that.

Nova Destroyer: The flame bomber technique. The Nova Destroyer is a powerful attack in which Shenro manipulates his reiatsu to disrupt the ground. Almost like lighting a match under the ground of his opponent. With a swift upwards motion of the hand, Shenro can create a massive atomic explosion that has the potential to cause an almost endless crater in a desired area nearby. But it a major flaw the tehcnique can be sensed meaning if the enemy can sensed where the attack. They have better of dodging it countering with a strong attack.

I see nothing in the app to justify this attack. You never use radiation before; where does this sudden power to do it come from? Again, how much damage does it actually do? And last... an endless crater...? That makes it sound like you're pouring out energy that it feels strange for a human to have who isn't even in their final stage.

This would be his most final and deadly attack when he nearly beaten to death and he yells. He starts dissapearing and the sky starts turning red thus various dragons start emerging from the sky. Then they start forming energy as the energy forms a balls and the ball starts growing in shape of a medium sized planet thus the the great dragon appears from the sky. At this point, Shenro has summoned the the legendary dragon of fire named known as "Dragon Knight Sin Lucifer". The dragon finally descends on the ground and looks at the opponent. The Dragon knight has strong hierro and armored defenses making it almost impossible to attack. Then the dragon's head focus then energy into the opponent which shoots up a an apocalyptic massive fire beam at which is called Black Sabbath. Thus after the attack the dragon will dissapear and Shenro will show major signs of both fatigue and pain. The Black Sabbath attack is almost impossible to dodge an opponent will be some of opponent's body will be burned if dodge. If it connects and hits an opponent the enemy will engulfed in the flames of both fire and plasma. No point of stop, drop and roll because of plasma flames will completely burn the flesh.

First off, where do these dragons suddenly appear from? How do they know to come? Then, for the actual power bit of it... Almost impossible to damage? No. Just no. Almost impossible to dodge? Double no. Fire that you can't even put out once it gets on you?




as for history... Did you have permission for Urahara? Or to have him called hero of Karakura? If not, you need to change those parts or get permission. That is all.

Tier: Unavailable.

I've fixed the history removing the Urahara and People's thing yet removed some moves and made the changes.

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Comments: Play fair...

Tier: 2-1+

• Willpower/Determination: Advanced
  
• Mental Deduction: Adept
  
• Pain Endurance: Adept
  
• Focus: Adept