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THEFROST
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Joined : 2010-06-03
Posts : 19582
Age : 31
Location : Purgatory

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Tue Feb 14, 2012 11:46 am
Application Checklist
  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [O]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes:

Appearance: Check to make sure that this character is not faceclaimed as it seems like a pretty common one that would get reserved fairly quickly.

Vasto Lorde:
which it took the form of vasto lorde

No, no AND no. Take any mention of "Vasto" or "Vasto Lorde" out of your history.

Canon Characters:
High Swordsmen Specialist: He was trained by both Barragan Luisenbarn and Syazel Granz. Jacob Tu Ramirezoshecka has become an experienced sword specialist. He was shown to face off against an espada becoming highly proficent with his sealed Zanpakutō. Jacob was able to face against his stepfather Barragan when he was young but easily was defeated. Growing up, Jacob was shown to fight at an espada's or shingami captain level his mastery of his Zanpakutō weapon was trhough his solo trainings. He was striving to become a protector to his kind and his brother pull his full focus when fighting with sealed weapon. Jacob is also know to empower his weapon able to give off black energy slashes with his blade.

I want you to either modify this to remove any Canon references, or just remove it altogether as you cannot simply have canon interaction without admin approval OR the approval of the person whom is playing this character. If there are anymore of this in your application, I highly suggest you remove it.

Tier: TBA when changes are made.

Will Skills
  • Willpower/Determination: Adept
  • Mental Deduction: Advanced
  • Pain Endurance: Advanced
  • Focus: Advanced


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Joined : 2011-06-07
Posts : 2656
Age : 27

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Jacob Tu Ramirezoshecka Empty Re: Jacob Tu Ramirezoshecka

Wed Feb 22, 2012 8:57 pm
Im sorry, this is not fixed, I can still find references of "Vasto" in the History, remove it please.



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Wed Oct 10, 2012 10:38 pm
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Okay moved into Archives!
If you want it back, feel free to ask! It's just been sitting around way too long so yeah.
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