I need to know....Because it came up again

Going a bit hard there, don't you think Pockeh?

I truly don't believe most of that was necessary, and I've been known to go off the wall myself. However, I agree that some of his ideas suck at times, but he has been trying to make progress from my point of view. And, if someone is willing to try and better themselves, I will not mock them and I will attempt to help you out of this rut you are in, Kade.

Why does your stuff get blwon down from time to time? Well, from my experience, you simply tend to make some absurd over-stereotypical badass powerful person. By this, I mean you just try to create horrible cliche'd character, horribly powerful/god mod powers and generally try to ass pull your way into things at once.

I remember something about you making a whole new edition to Demon's, making a new demon god other then Touketsu and a whole shadow org without so much as a hello to other staff members or even the site itself as to what you were doing. Therefore, that leads to another problem, communication. I really do hope you can fix your xat problem so you can blend in more with the community, talk to people dialy, get advice, get tips and basically become one of us in a sense as we spend alot of time in there bonding and getting to know everyone. It's apart of why we have lasted so long, yanno?

Back to the role play point, though. I'm not sure which training room it was, but from what I saw in your rejection last year, it was simply too...Dragonball Z like. I remember there being problems with you randomly gaining a tier or something as well; my memory isn't too good with what happened, but it was good enough for me to rage alongside Matthew if it was that Hyper Bolic Time Chamber crap.

As for grammar? That's relative at points. If you want to better yourself in that reguard, simply say things how you would out loud or in your head. If you feel it sounds stupid, then retype that shit. Additionally, if you cannot spell something, google a site called "Word Hippo" and look for correct spellings of any word you need to. You will also be bond to find some sites on google with a little searching that will help you increase that as well.

Moreover, the structure of your post should also be fixed. Maybe after five sentences or around five hundred to one thousand characters, you should seriously think about spacing out your post like you did in this compliant thread so it looks nicer, easier to read and good on the eyes. Along with that, you should also look into figuring out how to stylize your post to make them even more easier on the eyes, experiment and find what looks good for you. If you need help, you can always request in the Help Board.

Lastly, this is also partly my fault @ those people since most of them apart from Hiro are just plain shitty, ended up betraying us and leaving. So I take the blame for that and I hope you can find more active Role Players in the future or someone to make your PH alot better. So I can't fault you on that one, but it would majorly help if you came on the xat and one of us were able to mentor you in our ways.

All in all, though, if you got anything else to add go ahead and contact me or something. Also, take the others advice's and man up a bit, but thank you for putting effort into staying here and being apart of the site.