Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]

Mon Jan 23, 2012 8:35 pm

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Name: Austin Enki
Age: ???
Gender: Male
Appearance: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2] 2285f32d0c3d99f59870137fb214a4ae1227141285_full

Nature Iramasha Type: Earth

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Personality:

Respect & Honor/ Austin one who sees a person's honor as something they should consider for the honor of somethings is special sometimes for him it is just being alive as he was created by nature and energy and holds respect for power the energy and almost all living things as they all have the honor of being here. With such respect for nature Austin has always been repaying the earth one way or another with healing destroyed land to it's former glory or all those who wish it grave harm. When he is meet by demons he will feel as if demons don't belong on earth and feels as if he should repel them and send them away from earth as for other Iramasha other than nature he also feels doesn't belong forcing him constantly on the inside to make him feel like his allies are foes of the earth. But his Honor and pride of other living things have kept him in check but if nature is disturbed by one of this forces he might become very distrusting of them and see them as a foe.

Caring/ As said before Austin cares for all living things spirits or not he considers all creatures of nature and hold balance on earth at least those of earth origins but those born in Soul Society or demon world he senses as if they are not mixed in with the nature of earth and are unfamiliar to both himself and nature but accepts them because they life only on a lesser level. This feeling of the earth around him also makes him go nuts in the soul society since it is completely away from his element completely earth and exiles most of his moves because they are based on how the earth is shaped and formed.

Mentor & Guider/ Austin is the ideal Mentor as he has patient attributes that can go on for years as the earth and the land moves slowly he likes to be like the earth since it was what he was once apart of as such he can also be very tolerant of certain thing like failing to complete something as he sees in training nothing should truly be rushed. With his general aspect of respecting someone easily you can tell he can be your friend quite easily and thus is his charisma with any students or followers he may have.

Serious Combatant/ While training is something he can take lightly true battle is strangely the other way around as a fatal thing such as death can happen in it. He can be quoted at some point telling someone. "Training you can screw up a hundred times and it's alright but the battle that you fail once mean loss, capture or even death."

In Place/ Austin likes to be where he needs to be as he likes for everything to be happy and alive as he walks into a woods he'll see nature run it's course but as he approaches a city he watches as most of nature fades away to the giant homes of humans but as time has gone on the humans have been pushed into tight space by hollows and demons and at a point he felt sort of like should he of thanked them or knock them out on the spot and kill them for as the humans had to retreat there were many of them killed for the cost of nature.

Unity With Others/With other nature Iramasha he can definitely be seen with a much nicer mood for some reason but it must be rather nice for him to be around others of his kind most guess when they finally notice.

Environmentalist/Much as Austin has a concern for nature he takes a threat to it as even a offense to himself and any other kind of human being if you would of guessed with his age he might of started the whole idea of speaking up for plants. Who would ever know, heck few people know how it even started anyway or lie that they did.

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Background: The Beginning/ Austin was born on a very famous place known to most civilizations but as this place is also filled with myth but it is truly has some truth to it. As records show that in Roman and Greek times there were gods and goddess but many dismissed it as myth but there was truth in it as Austin was born on the mountain called Mount Olympus as he eventually learned of his ability to be able to shake the earth the humans called him a god and the legends of monsters and heroes to kill them was somewhat true as it was unknown to most but very few humans could see spirits and with such they could see demons, iramasha, hollows and hollows and they didn't keep quite but told stories of what they've seen and mixed many of the true detail up since they didn't fully know what anything was. But one thing was certain that Austin was a god to them as he made the earth rumble like their own god and this continued on into roman times but most would notice him to always be in the same spot on Mount Olympus and called it the home of the gods which was somewhat true since it was Austin's home. As for now in his life he didn't need his powers very much unless something threatened him to attack and was left in peace as he gained unknowingly the respect and curses of Greek and then roman people.

The Time/ Austin was at one point laying on top of the mountain and then came a power that was quite unlike any he had felt before in his life and a hollow of great strength appeared it seemed to be quite tall and if he knew what to call it would be a gillan but more of them came and to be exact 5 arrived on the mountain and by their size this was going to his most difficult task yet. He took in with his instincts to take in as much energy as he could and eventually through from the earth a weapon was put in his hand from the earth and seemed to be a ball with a chain connected to it. with it he took the new weapon and tested it out but he didn't know how he should use it but with success he launched the ball on his first shot and hit the hollow dead center of their mask instantly ending their troubles.

But the other four were unhappy about lose of their ally and began to charge ceros, and Austin didn't even need to be told to know he wasn't suppose to touch or be touched by them which proved to be very beneficial but these hollows now learned to dodge Austin's weapon he swung it at them and eventually result in entering his first state. To which his power increased immensely from it and could tell he could take these guys down now one at a time hopefully. With his new found power he called upon the mountain itself and it released many hands of rock that held each of the hollows in place as he released a deadly barrage of attacks at their masks as he defeated each of them and the hands sunk back into the mountain and as the hollows were killed another new person had arrived to the seen and from inside his gut Austin knew this person was like him but he was still different from him. The saddest thing was that through out this entire time Austin didn't even know when he was born or even the current time since he was isolated allow on the mountain so it is uncertain when he came into existence but it was certainly during the Greek's time maybe at the end as he remembered only seeing the Greek in power on a few occasions.

Before Now/ After Austin had meet James he decide to join him but told James that if he leaves this place he won't be moving from the next place they stop for a long while with such case the very next stop it was the place Austin would be fore the next 50 years just sitting there reading or training when needed and if he felt James's power he would very much rush to his side in combat. After those 50 years Austin did move again but he followed around with James for a few days before he returned to his usually stopping point and once again stayed in the same place for a very long time to which he only left when needed but this lasted 10x longer for he stayed at the same place for 500 years in total but in his spar time Austin practice his unique abilities and worked on nature spells this eventually gave Austin a large amount of spell in his mind to use not only for himself but even all nature iramasha. Even through he really didn't move around much he still proved to be skillful within the are that was his home. But the time reached 500 years and he moved on to bigger and better things staying there for excessive amounts of time and during that time he also gained his second for which impressed even himself by gaining. But nothing very important really happen to just Austin in this time period but was welcomed by James any time that he traveled with him and enjoyed it and in the time he did move it was usually with other Nature Iramasha, maybe that why he ever moved from his spot for without James he probably of never left Mount Olympus, his original home and birthplace.

Now/ Currently Austin has been very active as he has decided to set out any other nature Iramasha out there in the open world as they may be like James and discovered by humans and taken in or like him and barely reveal himself to the outside world. The trill of finding one and the locations he has come across are truly the motivation to his now constant traveling but without success he might run low on hope of searching. But that time hasn't come yet and is something that can't be mentioned yet as it hasn't happen as that is the future not the past. So we go forward to the present "Now".

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Seishin Buki Name: Serpent Ball

Seishin Buki Appearance:

Seishin Buki Abilities: While this looks like a average ball and chain to most it actually has a few unique traits to it.

While Austin can use his Seishin Buki with just pure brute strength he can also focus chaos energy on it to make it movements quite unpredictable. Also the Chain of this ball can extend and retract at will it seems as when he launches it he seems to always have just enough chain while it far seem like it does take much effort in pulling the ball back at him. Also within a past if he can get close enough to the ball he can repair the chain with i for some odd reason it break.

The material that makes up this ball of metal is quite unique as it can match the strength and durability of steel quite easily even through he claims it's material is completely made of just the earth. But he might just be telling the truth and improved the material to it current strength.

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Nature Powers:

Earth Purification/ While this might not sound like he can do much with this but Austin can give the soil in the earth the nutrients to grow food and grow new plants but surprisingly this will also speed up the production of minerals and metals in the land as well such as Iron, Titanium or even the thing nearly everyone loves Gold.

Earth's Claim/ While standing still and walking Austin can call upon the power of nearby ground and sand to create two hands in which case he case use to fight with against bigger opponents than himself and even trap others. This ability can always be in use and the hands may regenerate If they've lost a few parts but also he can still operate them with his mind even if he' s temporarily lost his own arms.

Quicksand's Rising/ Against those who can't fly and this that can only operate on the ground, Austin can open up a pond of quicksand having a 10 ft. radius to suck in and slow down those who threaten him but also leave them sitting ducks for his viscous attacks. This takes natural aspects of quicksand and will act instantly pulling on the victim and the more they struggle the more they could get stuck but it can be quite easy to escape if your character can fly as their movement upward might just save themselves if there smart enough. (Requires Adept Strength to escape)

The Earth Heals Itself and Nature/ With over a course of 3 posts in a thread Austin can heal and restore any nature iramasha their power by sinking them into the earth by manipulated ground changing into quick sand in back. Once in the ground a process in which Austin calls the ground to bring forth what the NI requires to heal since the earth can contain all the thing needed to heal a NI even himself but he may only use this once a thread every four thread on himself and If it's done on himself it only lasts one post and it has 75% of his injuries healed and power restored while others get 50% each post under. (Note for each form they've entered the following is decreased by 10% for Austin 25% decrease.

Earth Movement/ This is Austin's own custom version of a flash step and chaos warp mixed with his element earth. As long as his feet are touching earth he can in a sense teleport himself anywhere on the earth's surface once a thread aka. meaning he can use this to enter any thread on earth except in the sky and sea but to pinpoint a exact location to go to he must sense a energy source there as such due to the ability of the NI to sense each other he can come to any of their aid on earth but once they leaves the literal planet surface he loses this ability completely.

The Earth's Cover/ With this ability Austin can force earth around a object or himself to reduce or completely endure a attack or two as this armor last 2 posts and fades into the ground for three posts and he can target himself and another with this ability but the cooldown between each are separate on using it on himself and a opponent. This armor should endure adept strength attacks and with stand one adept cero.

Recovering/ Unlike most Austin's recovery absorbs his element at alarming rates but as such doesn't regain much energy even with such effort. But with it as Austin would dig a tunnel into the ground or be sucked into some kind of way into the earth he'll begin to absorb all the energy in from all the ground surrounding him giving him a normal recovery rate but this rate in unlike the one caused by his other healing ability.

Manipulation: Earth, the ground

Aura: Austin's Aura and blood is tan

regeneration: Austin consumes Dirt, Clay and Sand but can also consume but need much more of it. Asphalt and Concrete.

Nature Cells: Reptile Family- preferably snakes

Ranmyaku Blast: Austin's Blast takes the form of a regular blast from normal Iramasha but Tan in color most will notice through that his attack hits the ground in front of them instead of them but it's effect of going this causes the attack to explode with a wave of sand rising on the foe to 12 ft. and will reach out 20ft. in front of itself.

Nature Spell(s):

All Earth and certain others:

Earth Risen Volcanic Eruption/ With Earth Iramasha they can force the earth to throw out lava like a volcano and get many things by where it comes up but as for Fire Iramasha they need to literally call the lava to break through the surface. 3 times a thread uses.

Earth Risen Water Geyser/ Earth iramasha force hot water up the earth and release it similar to a geyser and can leave serious burns to those who are touched by it if not immune for some reason. As for water iramasha they need to force the water to break through the earths surface. 3x thread

Earth Risen Spreading forests/ this move can be used by Earth iramasha to help plants grow by manipulating the ground to give plants nutrients at quick speed and allows for a quick growing rate. As the for Plant iramasha they manipulate the plants to spread their roots farther and absorb nutrient at a increased rate. 3x thread

Earth Risen Striking Flash/ As the knowledge that lightning starts in the ground and as such will certain conditions such as clouds in the sky to create a bolt of lightning to strike down on a target or two. Earth 1x Thread, 3x Thread Lightning 2 post cooldown.

Earth Risen Steel Columns/ As the ground compacts the steel and iron to form 5 columns of it or a steel user themselves does it while forcing it above to the surface but either way the columns provide for energy to steel iramasha, protection and a way to trap those who can't fly since these amazing columns are ranging from 60-80 ft. tall. 2x Thread Earth, 3x Thread Steel.

Earth Risen Cloud Fog/ Earth iramasha force clouds of air, moisture, dust out of the earth through created tunnels to blind those on the battle field for escape and can plague the field for three posts as can cloud iramasha as long as they strike the ground or are nearby ground tunnels. In the ground their are many pockets of air for a cloud iramasha they must use energy to help influence the air to break free of these pockets and come on to the field. 2x Thread.

Earth Call Meteor Strike/ Earth Iramasha and Moon iramasha can pull forth rocks out of space and plague them onto the battle field and have a rather large one target specifically one person. Usually their are 14 of them in would call these down by gravity exerted by the earth and improving it on those objects with energy while for 2x Thread

Earth Call Rising Bodies/ Al through Earth iramasha can call corpses out of the ground to the surface above only a rot Iramasha actually gets advantage to this one as they would usually consume the dead to become stronger. 3x thread.

For all of the above for these abilities to work they must focus on the ground below them and focus their energy and force any of their element to come forward from the ground. This ability doesn't have to be 100% all the time through.

Earth only:

Earth Risen Stone Wall/ With this spell Earth Iramasha can pull a sort of protective wall in front of them against certain abilities. It is made of pure stone that rises out of the ground and can come to a maximum height of 12ft, length of 10 ft. and width of 2 ft. 2x Thread.

Sandstorm/ Even through many don't notice because how little their is of it but earth Iramasha can call upon a sandstorm merely anywhere except on a island of ice or in tundra area. These storms can make it harder to breath, see and maybe even move. The Storm circulates around the battle field with Austin or any other user the center of the storm being the power source. Attacks that would normally get rid of the storm only stall it for a post because over the three posts the users energy is powering the storm still. 1x thread lasts for 3 posts.

Sea to Surface/ With this ability Earth can rise out of the ground a small island in middle of anybody of water to which they can use for abilities or anything they really wish that involve earth. They can also expand on this island if given the proper amount of time. it starts of 1,000 ft in all directions, expanding at a rate of 200 ft. a post used to expand it. 6 post cooldown.

Rising Earth/Due to disadvantage with those who wish to roam into the sky Earth Iramasha may create a 500ft. Plateau to stand on to decrease the distance between them. The Plateau is a distance of 2,000 by 500 meters. It looks like a long rectangle with it's corners cut off. 1x thread

Austin Only:

Earth Tide/ By forcing the earth to rise up Austin can create a sort of moving hill that is broken apart becoming a single wave of destruction for anyone caught in it due to the rocks and stones that would punch and slam into if successful. 4 post cooldown.

Earth Dummy/ Due to how he like to move around very little Austin can create a dummy to take his place out of the earth and it has not special effects except some basic motion with it's arms and legs or even swing around a fake version of his Seishin Buki. They are not very fast at all moving so slow that it may only equal 10 mph hour if lucky and are only as strong as the material they are made of but look like exact and I mean exact replicas of him. 2x thread, 5 post cooldown.

Impact ground drop/ With this ability Austin can make the ground around a opponent or himself fall in a good 5 ft. or 7ft.To make this happen Austin will hold out his hand and clench his fist as a signal to which it will happen a few seconds after this signal It makes a crater from the ground sinking down itself to distract a opponent and momentarily stop them as they need to get out of the crater. 3x thread, 6 post cooldown.

Earth Storm/ With rising stones rocks and maybe even a boulder Austin can raise them from the ground and toss them all at a opponent at once causing a storm of earth to fly at them. Roughly 100 rocks are used of a large size as they are probably ranging from size of a softball to a soccer ball and can be noted to have a single rock the size of a wrecking ball in the mix. 2x thread, 2 post cooldown.

Chaos Moves:

Chaos Soul- Same as normal Iramasha but his copies are made of earth.

Chaos Warp

Chaos Link

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Earth Surface's Return

Command: Earth's Surface's Return: Shaking Below

Description: In this form Austin gain armor made literally from the earth from stone and rock as he enters this new state. the armor is shaped in such a way that it allows him to move normally with his arms and legs but can extend to cover his arms or legs for a certain amount of time. (explained in armor extension)

Austin's Claim/ A improved form of Earth's Claim to which Austin some up 10 hands of earth to smash at his opponents and hold them in place maybe as he releases crushing blows.

Armor Extension/ With Austin's Armor of rock and stone, he can make it extend and shrink at his will to protect himself and can even form a helmet like object around his head. of course this stuff isn't the best protection against things like ceros but it can do a good job against melee blows.

Enhanced Strenght/In this form, Austin can be noticed to have much more strength then naturally in his basic form making able to break down wall and easily break the bones of a natural person without even trying but due to this when in the presence of many people he attempts to tone down this so he doesn't cause any surprise accidents.

Earth Tsunami/ With a slam of his fists into the ground and causing waves of energy and vibration in the ground a large 30 ft. wave of rock and stone will raise up in front of him spreading 50 ft. to reach out 100 ft. to reach his opponents and cause heavy damage. 2x Threads.

Earth Shatter/ With focused chaos energy, nature energy and strength, Austin can shatter most spiritual and physical barriers. The cost of this ability can drain Austin quite a bit so he may use it once every so often in a serious situation. Drawbacks of do this is that Austin has also severely injured his arm to a point to where it is no longer usable for combat and can be noted as it is covered in blood from all the force he's put into the single blow.This ability can only be used on a single barrier. 1x Thread.

Violent Second Barrage/ Within a very moment if gotten close enough to the opponent, Austin's speed increases quickly as he delivers 30 punches in 5 seconds and then grabs onto the person and then tries to toss them really anywhere. Just like as within a moment under the surface of the earth, tectonic plates rub up against each other and in a very moment they can move at amazing speeds until they get caught up to each other again. 2x thread, 8 post cooldown

Earth's Surface's Strike

Command: Earth Surface's Strike: Glory of Ancient Times

Description: In this form the color of aura that surrounds Austin changes depending on what ability he's using and will be told in the ability. Also he gains bronze roman legion armor to show his heritage to humans of where he was born and his respect to roman culture.

Ancient Summoning/ It is uncertain how Austin performs this ability as he enters this form he can pick a ancient wonder in the world or was once in the world and bring it forth this might be a manipulation of space time or even just the earth's reconstruction of it but the confusing part is how for the great pyramid it is filled with dead bodies or the hanging garden has tons of plants but Austin says that the earth calls forth the needed materials and recreates the wonders as it also gets plants from across the world to be added or bodies in the ground but you'll find that a ancient wonder is filled with power by it's age but with how it's form. They all have similar effects that increase the power of a certain Iramasha but have a special second effect. ( See Great Pyramid for the example of power increasing effect.)

The Great Pyramid/ Raising forth the great pyramid it is filled with dead bodies that can give plenty of energy to rot iramasha and can be used for protection as energy of the wonder and Austin forms a spiritual dome to protect it from spiritual attacks like a Gren rey Cero. As it is learned that having this wonder in the presence of a rot Iramasha will increase it's tier by a + but will make Austin lose a tier level for each rot iramasha increased. as such example: Rot: 1-1+ --> 0-5 Austin 1-2+ ---> 1-3+. This can also only effect those below his tier and 1 above his own but can not make a rot Iramasha to above 0-3 even if he's 0-2 or 0-3 himself.

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Great Bablyon Bath/ Raising this great bath pool, Austin gives his power to water iramasha and rushes in water from the earth to constantly keep this thins reserves full but this great bath can also over flow with water very quick giving it's access to to water Iramasha across the battle field but can also become aggressive and grab at foes and even pull them into to the pool and drag them to unconscious or even death. The way the pull a opponent in is if they are very close to the pool a hand will reach out latch on to one of their limbs and begin to drag them in and under.

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Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2] Roman-baths-City-of-Bath--007

Hanging Garden of Bablyon/ This great Garden raises from the earth to greet all plant iramasha. Stretching out all of their flowers and roots to spread as far as they can across the battlefield. These flowers can spread a toxic gas to make one of three effects happen. Sleeping effects could kick in for 2 posts, Their strength might wear down a skill level or they might even have a skill level of their speed drop.

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Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2] Hanging-gardens-of-babylon1

Tower of Babel/ Bringing forth this tower that is meant to touch the heavens and the clouds is brings the battlefield to the sky above as it raises from below the enemies feet and while this tower stands it's able to give every race even those who aren't able to ability to fly but if taken out of the 50,000 ft. reach of this tower then the user will instantly lose the ability and possibly fall to their death if not careful. But also this tower improves Lightning Iramasha and gives them a boost to their lightning abilities if they can reach the top of the tower and allow for them to use multiple ranged abilities at once like firing blast and creating a lightning bolt from the ground and clouds to strike the opponent. The final effect that allows for increase of power to cloud and lightning iramasha is that it calls clouds and lighting to swirl around it's top.

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Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2] Toweofbabel-tn

The Great Fire Of Rome/The ancient look of Rome rises from the ground only to be set to fire that will fed the energy of any fire Iramasha and the fire reaches such a high level of power from all the fuel the city gives him it feeds of it's own heat that it creates a large fire elemental that takes the shape of a dragon and will burn anything on contact meaning don't expect not getting a burn fighting this monster in close combat. The Dragon is a estimated size 500 ft. tall and is about 3000 degrees hot Fahrenheit

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Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2] Burnrome

Mount Olympus/ Earth's own source for power as this amazing mountain raises to give all earth Iramasha except Austin a tier boost but if Austin is the only earth present this will boost his power instead and give him access to his abilities that have a certain amount of times per a thread a extra charge but he can only use this for 3 moves and for other earth iramasha it will some two earth replicas of themselves and they will be able to use their basic abilities and nature spells.

First Blast Furnace/ This mighty furnace raises from the earth to serve all glass and steel iramasha as it raises from the ground with replicas of Austin to operate it as it brings form plenty of metals to each of the glass or steel iramasha present on the battlefield. It can also bring form unique equipment of steel and other metals or standard stuff like swords, shields and spears. But one unique equipment a post or ten standard equipment a post. If the Furnace is attacked it will usually have various replicas of Austin protect it and if a certain ability the furnace could absorb it for heat and power. The equipment they make are just as they appear and noting more and clones will continue to attack a target once threatened and will not unless so. the clones are the teir of 4-1+ currently.

All of the wonder give temporary Tier boosts none of these are permanent and end when the the wonder is gone. Also wonders still around until destroyed or Austin has left this form. Also they can only be called upon once a thread and Austin can only enter strike form to use the wonders 2 times.

Use of all abilities.

Evolved Seishin Buki: Ten Serpent balls of death

Description: These balls operate just like the previous one but now allow for focused power and high combo to add on with Austin's enhanced strength but also their might be other effect to this Seishin Buki, he hasn't pursued yet.

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Class: Spirit of the Earth

Skills:
(DO NOT FILL THIS OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!)
0 Tier is allowed 1 Master, 2 Advanced
1 Tier is allowed 2 Advanced
2 Tier is allowed 1 Advanced, 2 Adept
3 Tier is allowed 1 Adept
4 Tier and below only get beginner.

These rules apply to both General and Racial Skills

General Skills

Durability: Advanced
General Speed: Adept
Strength: Advanced
Weapon Skill: Adept

Racial Skills

Chaos Energy: Adept
Chaos Control/Warp: Advanced
Chaos Blast: Adept
Chaos Sync: Advanced

Nature Control: Adept
Nature Spells:Advanced
Nature Energy: Adept
Element Control: Advanced

Sat Feb 04, 2012 4:12 pm

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Comments/Notes:

EDIT: Are you sure the changes actually went up on the site? I'm down to five of them now, all the same as they were before.

Alrighty, looks fine for the most part. However, there are some parts giving me some worry:

The Earth's Awakening/ At one point in thread Austin can command the current techtonic plate he is on to have a earthquke that he could have shake the entire thing or just the portion closest to the fault but the point is in a city of any sort that he chooses as the center of this earthquake will reach the richier scale as a 9 put he was sure that buildings in 2400's could handle earthquakes but people still probably can't and with such can distract many people even foes on the ground.

Alright... 2 or three problems with this... first, by "at one point in thread" do you mean once per thread? Secondly: A size 9 earthquake is HUUUUUUUUUGE, FOR AN ENTIRE QUAKE. Either this uses a TON of energy, or is just too powerful. Especially considering that would mean he could go and basically destroy all of Australia's major cities in an afternoon.

The Grand Finale: The Rising Earth/ With this ability once a thread Austin can form a montain by forceing the ground to press itself together and travel upward. This mountain if destroied for a unknown reason will contain all the thing needed to heal any kind of Nature Iramasha. He can only do this once a month as well.

Alright, how big of mountain, and unknown reason...? You mean if it IS destroyed by someone? And in RP time or in real life time for a month?

Earth Risen Volcanic Eruption/ With Earth Iramasha they can force the earth to throw out lava like a volcano and get manythings by where it comes up but as for Fire Iramasha they need to literally call the lava to break through the surface. 3 times a thread uses.

Alright, I get this/these. I think. For all the ones with "Literally call the blank to break through the surface" WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT? Please give me an example, as I cannot see what you mean by that...

Earth Risen Cloud Fog/ Earth iramasha force clouds of air, moisture, dust out of the earth through created tunnels to blind those on the battle field for escape and can plague the field for three posts as can cloud iramasha as long as they strike the ground or are nearby ground tunnels. 2x Thread.

By plague do you mean a poison of some sort...?

Earth Call Meteor Strike/ Earth Iramasha and Moon iramasha can pull forth rocks out of space and plague them onto the battle field and have a rather large one target specfically one person. 2x Thread

About how many can they pull down at once? How does he get them down? Earth Energy?

Earth Call Rising Bodies/ Althrough Earth iramasha can call bodies out of the ground to the surface above only a rot Iramasha actully gets advantage to this one as they would usually consume the dead to become stronger. 3x thread.

Call bodies out of the ground... what do you mean by that? He makes earth things pop our of the ground? And if you are talking about CORPSES then please mention that, as normally they would decompose, so you need to tell if it just gets ones that haven't decomposed yet or if he can only bring up bodies that haven't completely decomposed.

Earth Risen Stone Wall/ With this spell Earth Iramasha can pull a sort of protective wall in front of them againist certain abilities. It is made of pure ston that rises out of the ground and can come to a maximum height of 12ft. 2x Thread.

Width/length of wall.

Sandstorm/ Even through many don't notice because how little their is of it but earth Iramasha can call upon a sandstorm mearly anywhere except on a island of ice or in tundra area. These storms can make it harder to breath, see and maybe even move. 1x thread lasts for 3 posts.

Area of the storm and how it can be cleared away. EX Could a Wind Attack disperse an area of it, at least temporarily? And secondly,don't most sandstorms just keep moving forwards? Or does yours stay still for three posts?

Sea to Surface/ With this ability Earth can rise out of the ground a small island in middle of anybody of water to which they can use for abilities or anything they really wish. They can also expand on this island if given the proper amount of time. 6 post cooldown.

Area of the island. For any abilities they wish, are you talking about EARTH abilities? If so, please tell about that. For the expansion, you need a d/s=time. Or in this case, area/speed=time. So, area of the island increased is equal to one post.

Rising Earth/Due to disadvantage with those who wish to roam into the sky Earth Iramasha may create a 500ft. Plateu to stand on to decrease the distance between them. 1x thread

Area of the plateau...?

Earth Tide/ By forcing the earth to rise up Austin can creat a sort of movin hill that is broken apart becoming wave of destruction for anyone caught in it due to the rocks and stones that would punch and slam into if successful. 4 post cooldown.

A wave or Waves? Also, what is the length of the wave at its full reach?

Earth Dummy/ Due to how he like to move around very little Austin can create a dummy to take his place out of the earth and it has not special effects except some basic motion with it's arms and legs or even swing around a fake version of his Seishin Buki. 2x thread, 5 post cooldown.

Endurance, are the dummies only as strong as the earth from which they were made? How fast are they? Do they have eyes, or are they just like a earthen silloutte of Austin?

Impact ground drop/ With this ability Austin can make the ground around a oppoent or himself fall in a good 5 ft. or 7ft. it makes a crater itself to distract a oppoent and momentarily stop them as they need to get out of the crater before they get hit by Austin maybe. 3x thread, 6 post cooldown.

Does he himself do ANYTHING to activate this attack? Does the ground sink in and down? Is it thrown up to the sides around the hole? And by that line at the end, is that a possible use of the attack?

Earth Storm/ With rising stones rocks and maybe even a boulder Austin can raise them and toss them all at a opponent at once cause a storm of earth to fly at them. 2x thread, 2 post cooldown.

Roughly how many rocks and of what nature? IE Big, medium, small, boulder etc.

Description: In this form Austin gain armor made literally from the earth from stone and rock as he enters this new state. the armor is shaped in such a way that it allows him to move normally with his arms and legs but can extend to cover his arms or legs for a certain amount of time.

You mean to say that it doesn't cover his arms and legs at first? And how strong is this armor, exactly?

Sand Cover/ With nearby sand and even some of it from his energy reseves Austin will summon a large amount of sand to consume his opponent or foes to hold them still perfectly but gives them a lot of resistance as Austin has to punch through the sand to get at them.

What does it take to bust out of the field?

Earth Shatter/ With focused chaos energy, nature energy and strenght, Austin can shatter most spiritual and physical barriers. The cost of this ability can drain Austin quite a bit so he may use it once every so often in a serious situation. 1x Thread.

Is it ONLY usable against barriers? Because breaking most barriers is quite a powerful punch.

Violent Second Barrage/ Within a very moment if gotten close enough to the opponent, Austin's speed increases quickly as he deilvers 30 punches in 5 seconds and then grabs onto the person and then tries to launch them. Just like as within a moment under the surface of the earth, tectonic plates rub up againist each other and in a very moment they can move at amazing speeds until they get caught up to each other again. 2x thread, 8 post cooldown

Launches?

Rolling Thunder/ Austin raises a mount nearby the mountain and within the same moment the mountain will begin to fall apart and rocks, stones and boulders roll down upon his foes. the mountain striking in appearence is 500ft. tall after it is fully raised. 2x thread, 3 posts.

Does it take an entire post then of complete focus to make? Also, 3 posts seems like a fairly small amount for making A MOUNTAIN, at least in my opinion.

Grand Finale: Earthquake Blasts/ Austn forces the tectonic plate to shake violently and as it does parts of the surface blast upward around everyone and even under them and will cause everyone involved in the thread/battle will be hit by some kind of rock or stone. 9 post cooldown

First, autohit. Secondly, what if the opponent is flying? Will a spike of earth appear out of nowhere in the middle of the sky? Third, he can use it more than once per thread...?

Great Bablyon Bath/ Raising this great bath pool, Austin gives his power to water iramasha and rushes in water from the earth to constantly keep this thins reseves full but this great bath can also over flow with water very quick giving it's acess to to water Iramasha across the battle field but can also become agressive and grab at foes and even pull them into to the pool and drag them to unconsinus or even death.....

How does it drag them under? How strong is the pull? will the ater rise beyond its own surface?

Hanging Garden of Bablyon/ This great Garden raises from the earth to greet all plant iramasha. Streching out all of their flowers and roots to spread as far as they can across the battlefield. These flowers can spread a toxic gas to make one of three effects happen. Sleeping effects could kick in for 2 posts, Their strenght might wear down or They might even lose 1/2 of their speed.

Toxic gas, all things related to that need more explaining. ALSO, the 1/2 speed, if you were to use that on Shadin, persay, the amount of speed loss would be insane. So, recommend some kind of limiter.

The Great Fire Of Rome/The anicent look of rome rises from the ground only to be set to fire that will fed the energy of any fire Iramasha and the fire reaches such a high level of power from all the fuel the city gives him it feeds of it's own heat that it creats a large fire elemental that takes the shape of a dragon and will burn anything on contact meaning don't expect not geting a burn fighting this monster in close combat.

How big is this dragon? How hot is its heat?

Mount Olympus/ Earth's own source for power as this amazing mountain raises to give all earth Iramasha except Austin a tier boost but if Austin is the only earth present this will boost his power instead and give him acess to his abilities that have a certain amount of times per a thread a extra charge but he can only use this for 3 moves and for other earth iramasha it will some two earth replicas of themselves and they will be able to use their basic abilities and nature spells.

Should probably have a limit to the number of Earth's it can effect, as having like 2o Austins running around would be rediculous. Just saying Austin as he is the only current Earth Iramasha. Also, TIER BOOST? WITHOUT EXPLANATION? ... so yeah.

First Blast Furnace/ This mighty Furance raises from the earth to serve all glass and steel iramasha as it raises from the ground with replicas of Austin to operate it as it brings form plenty of metals to each of the glass or steel iramasha present on the battlefield. It can also bring form unique equipment of steel and other metals or standard stuff like swords, sheilds and spears. But one unique equipment a post or ten standard equipment a post. If the Furace is attacked it will usually have various replicas of Austin protect it and if a certain ability the furance could absorb it for heat and power.

How strong are the clones? Are they allowed to attack without a threat after them? Is the unique equipment enchanted? Does it stop after a certain amount of time/posts?

FINAL NOTE: For all these things, is there a certain amount of posts they can be up? Is there a limit for only one or two at a time? One per thread? Cooldown? Does there effect stop upon destruction? Things like that.
Tier: Determined upon fix.

Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:55 pm

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Comments/Notes: Play Fair.

Tier: 1-3

Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Adept
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Advanced

Wed Jul 23, 2014 2:58 am

「ARCHIVING」

☓	Archived For Inactivity

Sat Aug 23, 2014 6:58 pm

moving to approved due to request

Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:37 am

«MOVING THIS CHARACTER RIGHT NOW»

Due to an update on the board, I am going to go ahead and move this character into the Approved Nature Iramashsa section to better classify other sub-races of Iramasha.