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Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
Mon Jan 23, 2012 8:35 pm
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Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
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Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
Mon Feb 06, 2012 2:33 pm
Application Checklist
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- History is of appropriate length [X]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
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EDIT: Are you sure the changes actually went up on the site? I'm down to five of them now, all the same as they were before.
Alrighty, looks fine for the most part. However, there are some parts giving me some worry:
The Earth's Awakening/ At one point in thread Austin can command the current techtonic plate he is on to have a earthquke that he could have shake the entire thing or just the portion closest to the fault but the point is in a city of any sort that he chooses as the center of this earthquake will reach the richier scale as a 9 put he was sure that buildings in 2400's could handle earthquakes but people still probably can't and with such can distract many people even foes on the ground.
Alright... 2 or three problems with this... first, by "at one point in thread" do you mean once per thread? Secondly: A size 9 earthquake is HUUUUUUUUUGE, FOR AN ENTIRE QUAKE. Either this uses a TON of energy, or is just too powerful. Especially considering that would mean he could go and basically destroy all of Australia's major cities in an afternoon.
The Grand Finale: The Rising Earth/ With this ability once a thread Austin can form a montain by forceing the ground to press itself together and travel upward. This mountain if destroied for a unknown reason will contain all the thing needed to heal any kind of Nature Iramasha. He can only do this once a month as well.
Alright, how big of mountain, and unknown reason...? You mean if it IS destroyed by someone? And in RP time or in real life time for a month?
Earth Risen Volcanic Eruption/ With Earth Iramasha they can force the earth to throw out lava like a volcano and get manythings by where it comes up but as for Fire Iramasha they need to literally call the lava to break through the surface. 3 times a thread uses.
Alright, I get this/these. I think. For all the ones with "Literally call the blank to break through the surface" WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY THAT? Please give me an example, as I cannot see what you mean by that...
Earth Risen Cloud Fog/ Earth iramasha force clouds of air, moisture, dust out of the earth through created tunnels to blind those on the battle field for escape and can plague the field for three posts as can cloud iramasha as long as they strike the ground or are nearby ground tunnels. 2x Thread.
By plague do you mean a poison of some sort...?
Earth Call Meteor Strike/ Earth Iramasha and Moon iramasha can pull forth rocks out of space and plague them onto the battle field and have a rather large one target specfically one person. 2x Thread
About how many can they pull down at once? How does he get them down? Earth Energy?
Earth Call Rising Bodies/ Althrough Earth iramasha can call bodies out of the ground to the surface above only a rot Iramasha actully gets advantage to this one as they would usually consume the dead to become stronger. 3x thread.
Call bodies out of the ground... what do you mean by that? He makes earth things pop our of the ground? And if you are talking about CORPSES then please mention that, as normally they would decompose, so you need to tell if it just gets ones that haven't decomposed yet or if he can only bring up bodies that haven't completely decomposed.
Earth Risen Stone Wall/ With this spell Earth Iramasha can pull a sort of protective wall in front of them againist certain abilities. It is made of pure ston that rises out of the ground and can come to a maximum height of 12ft. 2x Thread.
Width/length of wall.
Sandstorm/ Even through many don't notice because how little their is of it but earth Iramasha can call upon a sandstorm mearly anywhere except on a island of ice or in tundra area. These storms can make it harder to breath, see and maybe even move. 1x thread lasts for 3 posts.
Area of the storm and how it can be cleared away. EX Could a Wind Attack disperse an area of it, at least temporarily? And secondly,don't most sandstorms just keep moving forwards? Or does yours stay still for three posts?
Sea to Surface/ With this ability Earth can rise out of the ground a small island in middle of anybody of water to which they can use for abilities or anything they really wish. They can also expand on this island if given the proper amount of time. 6 post cooldown.
Area of the island. For any abilities they wish, are you talking about EARTH abilities? If so, please tell about that. For the expansion, you need a d/s=time. Or in this case, area/speed=time. So, area of the island increased is equal to one post.
Rising Earth/Due to disadvantage with those who wish to roam into the sky Earth Iramasha may create a 500ft. Plateu to stand on to decrease the distance between them. 1x thread
Area of the plateau...?
Earth Tide/ By forcing the earth to rise up Austin can creat a sort of movin hill that is broken apart becoming wave of destruction for anyone caught in it due to the rocks and stones that would punch and slam into if successful. 4 post cooldown.
A wave or Waves? Also, what is the length of the wave at its full reach?
Earth Dummy/ Due to how he like to move around very little Austin can create a dummy to take his place out of the earth and it has not special effects except some basic motion with it's arms and legs or even swing around a fake version of his Seishin Buki. 2x thread, 5 post cooldown.
Endurance, are the dummies only as strong as the earth from which they were made? How fast are they? Do they have eyes, or are they just like a earthen silloutte of Austin?
Impact ground drop/ With this ability Austin can make the ground around a oppoent or himself fall in a good 5 ft. or 7ft. it makes a crater itself to distract a oppoent and momentarily stop them as they need to get out of the crater before they get hit by Austin maybe. 3x thread, 6 post cooldown.
Does he himself do ANYTHING to activate this attack? Does the ground sink in and down? Is it thrown up to the sides around the hole? And by that line at the end, is that a possible use of the attack?
Earth Storm/ With rising stones rocks and maybe even a boulder Austin can raise them and toss them all at a opponent at once cause a storm of earth to fly at them. 2x thread, 2 post cooldown.
Roughly how many rocks and of what nature? IE Big, medium, small, boulder etc.
Description: In this form Austin gain armor made literally from the earth from stone and rock as he enters this new state. the armor is shaped in such a way that it allows him to move normally with his arms and legs but can extend to cover his arms or legs for a certain amount of time.
You mean to say that it doesn't cover his arms and legs at first? And how strong is this armor, exactly?
Sand Cover/ With nearby sand and even some of it from his energy reseves Austin will summon a large amount of sand to consume his opponent or foes to hold them still perfectly but gives them a lot of resistance as Austin has to punch through the sand to get at them.
What does it take to bust out of the field?
Earth Shatter/ With focused chaos energy, nature energy and strenght, Austin can shatter most spiritual and physical barriers. The cost of this ability can drain Austin quite a bit so he may use it once every so often in a serious situation. 1x Thread.
Is it ONLY usable against barriers? Because breaking most barriers is quite a powerful punch.
Violent Second Barrage/ Within a very moment if gotten close enough to the opponent, Austin's speed increases quickly as he deilvers 30 punches in 5 seconds and then grabs onto the person and then tries to launch them. Just like as within a moment under the surface of the earth, tectonic plates rub up againist each other and in a very moment they can move at amazing speeds until they get caught up to each other again. 2x thread, 8 post cooldown
Launches?
Rolling Thunder/ Austin raises a mount nearby the mountain and within the same moment the mountain will begin to fall apart and rocks, stones and boulders roll down upon his foes. the mountain striking in appearence is 500ft. tall after it is fully raised. 2x thread, 3 posts.
Does it take an entire post then of complete focus to make? Also, 3 posts seems like a fairly small amount for making A MOUNTAIN, at least in my opinion.
Grand Finale: Earthquake Blasts/ Austn forces the tectonic plate to shake violently and as it does parts of the surface blast upward around everyone and even under them and will cause everyone involved in the thread/battle will be hit by some kind of rock or stone. 9 post cooldown
First, autohit. Secondly, what if the opponent is flying? Will a spike of earth appear out of nowhere in the middle of the sky? Third, he can use it more than once per thread...?
Great Bablyon Bath/ Raising this great bath pool, Austin gives his power to water iramasha and rushes in water from the earth to constantly keep this thins reseves full but this great bath can also over flow with water very quick giving it's acess to to water Iramasha across the battle field but can also become agressive and grab at foes and even pull them into to the pool and drag them to unconsinus or even death.....
How does it drag them under? How strong is the pull? will the ater rise beyond its own surface?
Hanging Garden of Bablyon/ This great Garden raises from the earth to greet all plant iramasha. Streching out all of their flowers and roots to spread as far as they can across the battlefield. These flowers can spread a toxic gas to make one of three effects happen. Sleeping effects could kick in for 2 posts, Their strenght might wear down or They might even lose 1/2 of their speed.
Toxic gas, all things related to that need more explaining. ALSO, the 1/2 speed, if you were to use that on Shadin, persay, the amount of speed loss would be insane. So, recommend some kind of limiter.
The Great Fire Of Rome/The anicent look of rome rises from the ground only to be set to fire that will fed the energy of any fire Iramasha and the fire reaches such a high level of power from all the fuel the city gives him it feeds of it's own heat that it creats a large fire elemental that takes the shape of a dragon and will burn anything on contact meaning don't expect not geting a burn fighting this monster in close combat.
How big is this dragon? How hot is its heat?
Mount Olympus/ Earth's own source for power as this amazing mountain raises to give all earth Iramasha except Austin a tier boost but if Austin is the only earth present this will boost his power instead and give him acess to his abilities that have a certain amount of times per a thread a extra charge but he can only use this for 3 moves and for other earth iramasha it will some two earth replicas of themselves and they will be able to use their basic abilities and nature spells.
Should probably have a limit to the number of Earth's it can effect, as having like 2o Austins running around would be rediculous. Just saying Austin as he is the only current Earth Iramasha. Also, TIER BOOST? WITHOUT EXPLANATION? ... so yeah.
First Blast Furnace/ This mighty Furance raises from the earth to serve all glass and steel iramasha as it raises from the ground with replicas of Austin to operate it as it brings form plenty of metals to each of the glass or steel iramasha present on the battlefield. It can also bring form unique equipment of steel and other metals or standard stuff like swords, sheilds and spears. But one unique equipment a post or ten standard equipment a post. If the Furace is attacked it will usually have various replicas of Austin protect it and if a certain ability the furance could absorb it for heat and power.
How strong are the clones? Are they allowed to attack without a threat after them? Is the unique equipment enchanted? Does it stop after a certain amount of time/posts?
FINAL NOTE: For all these things, is there a certain amount of posts they can be up? Is there a limit for only one or two at a time? One per thread? Cooldown? Does there effect stop upon destruction? Things like that.
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Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:55 pm
Name [X]
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Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Play Fair.
Tier: 1-3
Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Adept
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Advanced
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]
Comments/Notes: Play Fair.
Tier: 1-3
Willpower/Determination: Adept
Mental Deduction: Adept
Pain Endurance: Advanced
Focus: Advanced
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Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
Wed Jul 23, 2014 2:58 am
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Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
Sat Aug 23, 2014 6:58 pm
moving to approved due to request
Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:37 am
«MOVING THIS CHARACTER RIGHT NOW»
Due to an update on the board, I am going to go ahead and move this character into the Approved Nature Iramashsa section to better classify other sub-races of Iramasha.
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Re: Austin Enki [APPROVED, NATURE, 1-2]
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