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Sun Jan 01, 2012 5:33 am
ARRANCAR

GENETICS

Character Name: Nova


Character True Age: 1030


Character Appearance Age:14


Character Gender:Male


Orientation:Cero Espada/Freelancing


Personality:Nova tends to like everything involving candy, but then again most people do. He is a short kid with a mind of teenager. He loves
to have fun,fight, and flirt even in his current size. He laughs and
smirks at people misery, and often plays pranks on them. He is always
doing something new, and causing mischief when he is allowed. He is usually always smiling towards all and helps out his comrades when
needed. He tends to turn sadistic toward the people he is fighting. He
gets cranky if he don't eat any candy for a certain amount of time. He
likes to act like a smart-ass to people he knows. He tends to walk upside
down as he talks to people. He likes humans for their souls and to hit on
human girls before he kills them. He tends to call other Arrancar his
brother or sisters depending on their race.



GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance

Nova (finished) [Approved 3-1] Eyepatchs

Nova has a small body, but is well build. He is about 5,5 in size, and has bright blond hair that comes down to eye level. He tends to wear loose clothing, and has a mark on his left cheek of a sun. He looks very childish, and people tend to think that he maybe a girl. He also has a eye patch on his left eye.

Bone Appearance:
On his neck

Hollow Hole: Around the side of his stomach


reiatsu Colour:
Red with black outline

ZANPAKUTÔ

Sealed Zanpakutô:
It is a small daggar sized sword

Racial Abilities:
Flexibility: He is very agile and flexible like a snake.

Flame Body:He is more resistant to flames, and can use it as a shield to protect himself from direct attacks

Eye patch: He hides most of his power within a eye-patch. So when he needs it most, he takes it off to gain his full strength.

Hide: He is advanced in hiding his power and reiatsu, very good that he could pass off as a human if he wanted to. Of course if there is someone of a stronger tier, or equal tier, then they might be able to find him.

Overflow: Once his eyepatch is off, he can bend spiritual pressure to his will. Then condense it into a sphere that he can implode, and then release to destroy most things within range. The size depends on the user, it could be the size of a football field, or just a small building. The amount of power varies on how much he wants to use. This takes much energy out of him, but does even worse to the enemy.

Paralyzing Fear: Nova can release a Evil Aura around his body, and cause his spiritual pressure to hinder weaker prey movement. The way it does is that it applies pressure on there arms and legs to cause them to feel very slow or sluggish.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name: I am the sun, Flash fire


Resereccion Release Phrase: Burn them to nothingness, Burst


Release Actions: He stabs the dagger into his left hand


Resereccion Appearance:
His mask covers over his face, and transforms him into a skeleton like monster. Soon his whole body takes on flames, and he pulls out his weapon out of his chest.


Resereccion Abilities:
Once Flash fire has been released his Sword can explode on impact. His sword can also be set ablaze to increase the power of the weapon, and get rid of unwanted trash by burning them to a crisp. The flames are stronger then the fire needed to burn a human, he can use weak flames at first to char or burn a part of the body. When he decided to increase the density of the fire, it power will just disintegrate a whole body. When he uses his full power the power can even rival a sun, but he will have to train more to get that type of power. The lowest heat would be about 400 degrees and the max so far would be about 1500 degree.

Flame Whip: By swinging his sword at a range, it can act like a flame whip to attack, and hold the target in place. The range depends on the user, but the longest it can stretch up to would be about 10 meters.

Flame wave: He can launch a indirect attack from the sword at a range, that will look like a shock wave of fire.

Flame Armor: He can make fire appear over his body, and act like a stronger version of Hierro

Fire ball: He can create fire balls in his hands, and they can chase the opponent like a heat seeking missile. The power varies, as the larger the fireball the slower it is but it has more power. The smaller the fireball, the faster it is but less power. A large fireball power can burn the whole body of someone, and leave them burned for quite a while. The smaller fireball power will just leave burn marks in a same area, where it hits. It will burn the target slowly, and inflict pain for as long as they move that part of the body.

Nova Burst: He can burst a small fire ball in his hand, and cause it to implode for a certain amount of time before it expands into a large ball of flames. The time of the wait varies from 5 seconds-5 minutes. The longer the time, the larger it expands to if held for five minutes it can expand to the size of a small-medium sized city like Chicago. The destructive force is also amped for the longer it is held, and will be as strong as a nuke if it is held for 5 minutes.

Sun's Judgement: His strongest attack that attacks the whole area at once. It summons flames from all over his body, and condense them to himself. Then releases them again to explode the whole area, and leave nothing behind to find. It is like another sun, and very powerful. The heat range is extended to over 4000 degrees.

DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
(what name does the second resserecion go by?)

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
(what do they say to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Release Actions:
(what do they do to release their final form?)

Dues Ex Appearance:
(describe what their Dues Ex Segunda looks like)

Dues Ex Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this final form grants them)

SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History:
History:
Human Life
He
had a good life growing up till he was 12, but that all changed when
he started to tell trick his friends into doing things for him. He
started
to cause problems along the with his parents as well , and
tricking them to believe that the younger brother broken things and
hanged out with gangs. When he was 15 he started to take his High-school
over by tricking other schools to fight each others for power, as he
used this to raise to power in the high-school. After he hit 17 he got
into a gang
that tried to rob all the banks, as he used other people to do his
bidding a police stopped him and questioned him as he was going to tell
the true about why he was here. He got shot by another group and the cop
got to cover and chased them down. Nova was on the floor bleeding as
something black came around him, and Laughed.Neon got up and told it why
did it care about what happened at all.It said that to become
stronger,you must die and go with me. Soon he felt himself leave his
body as the pain went away. Nova saw my body from the other side.The
black thing came at Nova and ate his whole soul, he never saw that
coming.

Hollow life
Nova soon
woke up from the blackness, In a spider body in the desert, and started
to walk around the sands. He came across a group black things and talked
to them as they told him he was a hollow. They started to say that you
need to become stronger by eating other hollows or souls. He joined
there group being the 4th member as they fought hollow after hollow and
ate their body whole. He was the first one to evolve, and take to the
next level. One of his brother was mad that he just got here a 10 years
ago and evolve before him since he was here for 20 years. He ended up
killing him and eating his body whole. Nova became the leader of the
group, as he would find the other hollow groups he would try to turn
them on their own group after all it was the survival of the fittest,
and over a 1000 years later he got to my last form before becoming a
Arrancer, he lead the same group of 3 to find a way to transform.

Arrancar
Nova
fought with them so long, and hard that he consider them his
family.
Then one day a group of before forms Arrancers came at us. Nova tried
to turn them on each other but they were smarter then that, and started
to attack. He took out most of them while my brothers were still
fighting, and then out of nowhere a hollow stronger then himself came.
He said to attack us, and soon knew that we couldn't win but then his
brothers went to hold him still. They said to kill them along with him,
and he did without regret. Nova ate all the enemy body's first, then
went to look at his comrades, and ate them as well. Nova then roared
loudly for all to hear but as he did his roar it sounded different like
human talk. He saw his hand that looked normal, and finally saw that he
was a Arrancar. He remembered most of his memories at that instant, and
smirked that he did indeed live like the hollow said. He then headed towards Las noches, and start his climb to power from thier.



RP Sample:

Hanataro would travel around the Seireitei, as he had some free time. It
was hard to image that he would still be around for this long, and not
have died again. Of course not everyone else was lucky, and he had to
remember his lost friends. He had decided to become stronger, and one
day become a captain in the next thousands of years or so.

He
had became somewhat more confident about his skills, and would go into
the combat zone. After all his healing was needed, and he had prepped to
become more of a field medic. He even volunteered to go with other
squads on there missions, and heal the wounded when there were some.

Of
course still being a squad four member, it was hard to not be looked at
as a weakling. He was much better at fighting now, but was still abit
of a screw up. He was going to change for the better, as he fist pumped
into the air with excitement. The next thing he knew, he had tripped
over a crack on the ground and soon fell on his face with a "thud"
sound. He lay there for a minute before he got himself up again. " Yup,
I'm going to need to work on that " With that he took off quickly back
to the squad four barracks, and look for something to take up his time.


Last edited by Star on Fri Jan 13, 2012 7:49 pm; edited 9 times in total


A life is such a good thing,But can be taken away so easily.
Hanataro,Yamada 3-1
Nova 3-1
Sakuya
Sakuya
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Mon Jan 02, 2012 11:51 pm
Application Checklist

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [O]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [O]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: Okay, so first off. The appearance is taken, check out the face claims to check for an appearance not taken. Secondly your powers are not explained enough so they kinda give a god mod feel. Let me give you a few examples to apply to all your powers.

Hide: He is advanced in hiding his power and reitsu, very good that he could pass off as a human if he wanted to
So first off, this can't be allowed. You need to explain a bit more, espcially tier wise because not EVERYONE will think he's passing as a human. Word it a bit better like how long he can keep this up for post wise.

Overflow: Once his eyepatch is off, he can bend spiritual pressure to
his will. Then condense it into a sphere that he can implode, and then
release to destroy anything within range
Okay, you need to explain how big this explosion will be. Give a range for it. Don't make it the size of the Grand Canyon either, please.

Fire ball: He can create fire balls in his hands, and they can chase the opponent like a heat seeking missile
This is a big no-no. You can keep the heat seeking effect but you NEED to explain how fast its going and how long it will last and if the damage reduces during the time its chasing them. Even the amount of damage it does (And please don't make it hella strong either..) otherwise it's considered god-mod.


Tier: N/A
Star
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Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:13 am
Edited


A life is such a good thing,But can be taken away so easily.
Hanataro,Yamada 3-1
Nova 3-1
||Tsukuyomi||
||Tsukuyomi||
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Posts : 426
Location : Seireitei

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Tue Jan 03, 2012 2:37 am
Application Checklist


Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Comments/Notes:
Spoiler:

How long is that range you're trying to accomplish ? Elaboration of how far it can extend to is needed.

Spoiler:

What's the maximum amount of time you can allow the implosion to happen for ? Also, Again, Description is needed for how far out the ball of flames expands to.

Tier: N/A until fixed





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Tue Jan 03, 2012 1:25 pm


Moving this application WIP until the changes completed.




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Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:41 pm
In need of checking!


A life is such a good thing,But can be taken away so easily.
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Nova 3-1
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Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:06 pm
Name [X]
Appropriate Age [X]
Gender [X]
Appearance Present [X]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
10 sentences for personality [X]
History is of appropriate length [X]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]

Comments/Notes: Thanks for making this an easy process, play fair, and have fun! Approved as long as no one has any problems with it.

Changes: Added Max temperature of flames, reduced radius and burn power of Sun's Judgement, altered Paralyzing Fear from "Unable to move", added energy cost for Overflow.

Fixed: Yes.

Tier: 3-1




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Wed Oct 03, 2012 9:03 pm
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