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Ginjji Akabane
Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:38 pm
ARRANCAR
GENETICS
Character Name:
Ginjji Akabane
Character True Age:
154
Character Appearance Age:
14
Character Gender:
Male
Orientation:
freelancing?
Personality:
GinjjiIs a freeacting Not a care in the kidna of man..Or Boy..Nobody really knows ~:0,He acts like a baby at times, And whines alot, But In all He is a very Behave Arrancar,
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
A Short Man, About 5'4" ,He always wears uniforms that consist of a white jacket, black sash, white hakama, black tabi and white zori that bear an opposing similarity to a Shinigami's zori; in essence, this uniform is basically inverted Shinigami uniforms, display more variation than those worn by shinigami however.
Bone Appearance:
Bottom jaw around his neck
Hollow Hole:
Neck
Reitsu Colour:
Black
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
Los Grito, In Which is a Long Katana that Has a A Long Orange Sheath and a Orange hilt,
Racial Abilities:
Ginjjis Abilites is to Summon Attacks of those Who have used them from the past, Rendering him useless, And Of cousre Altering the time line,(POwer can only be used after Ressurecsion) ( For Power to use this Scroll down)
RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
Los Grito
Resereccion Release Phrase:
Enteral cry
Release Actions:
Ginjji,Picking teh blade out of its sheath Would have to Stab his Sword into his Hole.After so Activating his Eternal Cry, Ginji Has to power to Create Liquids from His Crys Of Sadness, That in which has the power to Manipulate Black Matter,In Which if possible to Create Black Matter, One can Go To the Speed of light, And Beyond that, If one can Manipulate Black Matter, That person Can so MAnipulate Gravity, Which Withdraws The Power to Bring Such Items From the Past.Such As if Ginjji Would Use his Eternal Cry He would have access To Summon Those from the Past under his control ,But the only Handicap IS he can only Summon Living Creatures For a surten Amount of time
Resereccion Appearance:
Ginjji Now Would have been On all 4 With his mask Slideing down his back in a curved shape, His whole body Cover'd in Dripping Orange, In which seemed to be paint,His claws would be small Blades that Were Shapped into Cicle blades that went underneath the skin On each foot and hind leg.His face invisble but teh cry coming from within Wails Loudly.
Resereccion Abilities:
(explain the several powers and abilities this form grants them)
DUES EX RESSERECION
[No Dues Ex Resserection]
SKILLS
(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)
Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
PAST
History:
Ginjji Was born into the world of Hueco Mundo , A Beast that Was forced to kill others On instinct to stay alive, But later on when he met Nnoitra Gilga, He had no feeling to attack, Instead he followed him like a pet But Nnoitra Wasn't the kinda type, He threatened him and Somtimes Sliced at him With anger, Until Nnoitra Was murdered Which Resulted in Something That Ginjji Didn't fully understand.
He woke up the next morning inside of a What seemed to be a Destroyed Castle , He'd have a childs body and a Zanpakuto.. He couldn't understand what had happend. But from then on in He lived his life Searching for Nnoitra .
(Wasn't Feeling to heated on this one since i'm almost dead asleep )
RP Sample:
What seemed to be a child, Would have an Experience Man, Walking the plains of the Gusting sand. Holding a sword longer than his own body, Un-sheated ,The blade would have been Left Dripping Orange Liquids, That Burned through the sand and turned into a flat surface,He'd be seeming to be moving at a un reasonablely fast pase.The blade Held Infront of him. Moving as half the speed of a Flash step. He'd continue to slide into more Darkness, His eyes Searching the Dark Frozen night, As if he'd be looking for something that he'd lost, Like a child who Cry'd for a broken toy,He'd continue moving on..Forever..Enterally.
Truly Soulless
Re: Ginjji Akabane
Fri Dec 23, 2011 9:22 am
HOLY FUCK! THIS APPLICATION MADE ME WANT TO RIP MY EYEBALLS OUT, GOUGE THEM, SET MYSELF ON FIRE IN A BLIND RAGE AND GO SUICIDE BOMB A ORPHANAGE FULL OF BLIND DEAF CHILDREN! ALL IN THE SAME ORDER
Over exaggeration aside, holy shit, it's still bad No, really, this app is bad and you should feel bad. I'm going to list the reasons below and as stated:
- Bro, you are using emoticon in your application. Who in the world uses this in a serious matter when working on a character? Nobody. That's who. Not even our worse role players. Take a hint drop that stupid teenie-booper crap.
- Second problem, lack of information. Some sections of this terribly short application are lacking in required information or not enough detail in general. Go back and make a large majority of this profile longer before we even think about moving this from denied.
- Quality much? Your spelling, grammar, sentence structure and overall layout of this application is just terrible and I've seen grader schoolers do better. Do something about this if you want even an ounce of any future respect.
- WHY DID YOU MAKE THIS?
All in all, these are pretty valid reasons to deny an app that was worse then someone who actually made Goku from Dragonball Z on here. So please, think long and hard about this and try again.
Thank you, take my criticism with a hard cup of HARDEN THE FUCK UP , go sit in the corner to think about what you have done and have a nice day! Hopefully you'll come back a much better person from this hard bitch slap
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