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||Tsukuyomi||
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Joined : 2011-03-14
Posts : 426
Location : Seireitei

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Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-] Left_bar_bleue0/0Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
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Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-] Empty Re: Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-]

Fri Dec 23, 2011 8:36 pm
Application Checklist

Name [x]
Appropriate Age [x]
Gender [x]
Appearance Present [x]
Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
10 sentences for personality [x]
History is of appropriate length [x]
Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Comments/Notes:
Blood Skull Regenerator: Because of blood of gore unholy number of humans. Dark Wrath can quickly heal himself in a short amount of time but unleashing something called blood skull. When bones will start sprouting out and then starts sucking the air around which will started his healing. He can reheal his limbs but it takes a great amount of time(2 posts) to do that. He must stand completely still when doing this or the healing process stops.
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- How does the air have anything to do with the blood of the humans ? Please elaborate on that further, Doesn't make much sense to be honest.

Nerco Healing: A Nerco based skill actually where his hands started glowing and then the healing process begins. Yet he isn't a master of this skill meaning his healing powers might heal minimum, medium or large damage to wounds. However, Damien can't reheal his demon reiatsu or calm his fatigue when rehealing himself

-Another type of regenerative ability isn't really needed in my opinion, considering the limitations of this one in particular. If you had this one, You wouldn't need the other mysterious one. Change or Delete please.

Necro Shapeshifting: Truthfully, Damien can shift into anybody he wants to be male, female or monster. The process when Damien makes something called a necro cocoon and covers his body then the cocoon start cracking which meant the iramasha has shifted into someone else. To change back to normal , Damien must say "Rock, Paper, Necro Break" after that the iramasha will shift quickly back to normal self.

- Ok, I don't know where to begin. Would you get the abilities of say person when shifted into them ? How long does each transformation last for ? Can people decipher your real identity Because of your reiatsu signature ? So many questions about this ability.

Vol Sensing: Unlike his dark slayer form, Damien was given to ability to sense or detect people's spiritual power when it coming or what direction it coming from. It because of this ear antennas their broadcast directly to his brain giving him somelike a early warning sense of how powerful and strong the person or people are.

- From how far away can you judge a reaistu trace ? Can you depict their race as well ? Elaboration is needed.

....

I'm kinda tired of quoting things to be honest. Most of your powers need elaboration, or just to be discarded. Until then.

Tier: N/A



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Sakuya
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Joined : 2010-07-10
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Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-] Left_bar_bleue0/0Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-] Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
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Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:51 pm
Application Checklist

  • Name [X]
  • Appropriate Age [X]
  • Gender [X]
  • Appearance Present [X]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [X]
  • 10 sentences for personality [X]
  • History is of appropriate length [X]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [X]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [X]


Comments/Notes: Seems pretty good to me and the moves that were a problem have been removed.
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Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-] Empty Re: Damien Necrosha [APPROVED, HYBRID, 1-3-]

Wed Oct 01, 2014 11:29 am

«MOVING THIS CHARACTER RIGHT NOW»
Due to an update on the board, I am going to go ahead and move this character into the Approved Hybrid Iramashsa section to better classify other sub-races of Iramasha.


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Wed Feb 25, 2015 9:58 am
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Welp, I'm moving this character into the adoption section upon request.
You can find the request here in my communication thread:

https://www.platinumhearts.net/t7253p170-thefrost-s-communication-thread#85375


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