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Finished Kanda Yuu Phoenix_wright_hold_it



Enhanced Artificial Regeneration: Kanda can recover much faster than ordinary humans, Soul Reapers, Arrancar and is able to withstand the blood of Akuma due to a secret skill created by the Chan family. He is seen being able to rebirth after death ("approximately during 580 seconds"{One post} but this was , regenerate lost limbs, and even survive a crushed skull. His blood is also enriched with healing power, even allowing him to accidentally save a fellow Exorcist from a wound that had been deemed fatal.

Physical Prowess: Kanda is noticeably much stronger than the average Human's, Soul Reaper's and Arrancar; while his Zanpakuto and Innocense do enhance his power, when none of its abilities are activate he is able to cleave Tier 3 enemies in half using the blade alone, and rip libs off a Tier 4 with his arm's and leg's alone.

Speed: Kanda is faster than most other Human`s, Shinigami, Espada and Arrancar. Kanda can leap beyond average distances without spiritual power usage, though this may be attributed to his regenerative abilities, where such jumps on normal humans would result in damaged ligaments in the feet.
An Espada from lower than five usually are not capible of catching up to him, Akuma is the one exception, as they are matched in spiritual use but not physical.

Expert Swordsman: Though his strange Innocence Zanpakuto makes him already inclined to swordsmanship, Kanda is shown to be powerful with a blade in his own right. He has been seen using regular swords to hold off Tier 3 Enemies as stronge as 3-1+, and can use various forms of Japanese swords without changing his fighting style.
Wind Ability; The Eight Illusions Sixty-Four Palms - With the 360° field of vision, the user envisions an Eight Illusions circle. Then the enemy within this circle is hit with a series of violent blows. By striking sixty-four of the Spiritual points throughout the opponent spirit energy System, their Spirit energy flow from thier soul is stopped, making them unable to even active Shikai/Bankai or use Mid-level Kido, Shunpo.
Wears Off In: 6 Posts.

Once someone is within range of the user's field of divination, the user assumes a extreme speed stance and begins to deliver the attack:

First, two consecutive strikes to make two. Second, another two consecutive strikes to make four. Third, four consecutive strikes to make eight. Fourth, eight consecutive strikes to make sixteen. Fifth, sixteen consecutive strikes to make thirty two. Sixth, another thirty two consecutive strikes in succession to make a total of sixty four strikes.

Each set of strikes is done at an exponentially increasing pace and strength. The attack not only disables the enemy but also knocks them back with every set of strikes.
Cool Down: 10 Posts
Kaichi: Ichigen (界蟲「一幻」 English: Underworld Creatures, First Illusion) : Kanda swings his sword and releases a small swarm of supernatural silver dragon-insect type creatures that devour his opponents. (No appeance change yet)

I don't like ANY of this. A LOT of bad wording, OP, illusionary implications.. and just a WHOLE lot of NO.

Hakka Tourou (八花蟷螂, lit. Eight Flowers Praying Mantis): Using Nigentou, Kanda quickly slashes the enemy eight times. The slashes collectively resemble a flower.

Needs to be a listed way to dodge/block. Saying it WILL do this to the enemy is a no.

Eight Illusions Air Palm

This technique is similar in practice to Eight Illusions Palms Cyclone Hell, but has a specific target rather than a general area. To perform it, the user precisely pinpoints the enemy's vital points with the Shouka and releases a high-speed palm thrust. A "vacuum shell" compressed using the Spiritual Pressure of the user is formed to attack the opponent's vitals from a distance, blowing them off their feet with tremendous force before they even notice they were hit.


Erm... no. This isn't going to work. Drastic edits here needed to dodgability, power, and wording.

Bakuhakuzan (爆魄斬, lit. Explosive Spirit Slash): Kanda needs Sangenshiki to be active to use this, and makes a slash that seems to create small explosions and is strong enough to kill a Tier 3 in three hit.. Kanda can also use it with the Fifth Illusion Style.

UH, HOW ABOUT NO. You are NOT allowed to say that X will KILL *ANY* tier-level in a number of hits.

Level Two Enhanced Artificial Regeneration: Kanda can recover much faster than before, his arms can regenerate in a mere two seconds. Legs 1 second.
He is able to rebirth after death ("approximately during 100 seconds now that Resereccion has been used. Basicly his next post) ,regenerate lost limbs, and even survive a crushed skull. His blood is also enriched with healing power far more than before.

Nope. That level of regeneration is an ABSOLUTE nope.

Kuzu-ryūsen (Nine-headed Dragon) (九頭龍閃)

The “Nine-Headed Dragon” is a formidable technique which utilizes Shinsoku (lit. God-speed) to the fullest extent; dealing nine strikes to the most fundamental targets of swordsmanship (Kara Take, Kesa Giri, Saka Gesa, Hidari Nagi, Migi Nagi, Hidari Kiriage, Migi Kiriage, Saka Kaze, and Tsuki), all at the same time. These points are the focus of the technique as they make up the basis of one’s guarding stance, regardless of style or weapon. So with the Kuzu-ryūsen, attacking all nine all at once, guarding and dodging becomes virtually pointless. It should be noted, that this move was not created for actual combat, but as a byproduct in the creation of the secret; as an initiation for the secret. If the initiate can overcome their master's nine dragons, then they would be ready to acquire the secret. Unlike the multiple strike attack, Ryūsōsen, all nine strikes of the Kuzu-ryūsen carry lethal force. However, weight and power play a critical aspect in the effectiveness of the technique. This means, even if the move is executed without flaw, the force behind the technique will differ from wielder to wielder depending on their class in weight and arm strength. Essentially, a "lighter" Kuzu-ryūsen would be overpowered by a "heavier" Kuzu-ryūsen.

I don't like, at all, how this is worded. Too much talk of lethality and that thing about guarding and dodging being pointless? Uh.. no.


Ōgi - Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki (天翔龍閃)

The Amakakeru Ryū No Hirameki is battōjutsu that surpasses Shinsoku. This is the key to defeating the Kuzu-ryūsen. Because the Kuzu-ryūsen is a charging technique that cannot be blocked, an attack must be made before the Kuzu-ryūsen arrives, thus the true nature of the final technique: the Amakakeru Ryū No Hirameki must be faster than a regular battōjutsu in order to hit the opponent. The secret behind the technique lays in an additional step with the left foot. This single step alone adds instantaneous acceleration and weight to the sword changing the god-like speed of Hiten Mitsurugi Battōjutsu to "Beyond god-like speed".
However, this extra step is difficult to take as one of the fundamental teaching of battōjutsu states that one should step forward with the right foot as to avoid cutting their own foot with the attack. As such, the additional step forward with the left foot can spell certain death for the swordsman, as it takes precise timing to coordinate, as to not lose any momentum while drawing; it requires the utmost concentration, that can only be obtained by one's desire to live.
There is another secret to this technique. If the initial strike is avoided or blocked, the force of the unusually fast slashing motion displaces the air around it, generating a vacuum in its wake and sucking the opponent in. As this happens, the body is spun around for a second strike, the previous action adding force and momentum to the swing, making the subsequent strike far stronger. This is the true power of the Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki. As Kenshin's teacher Hiko Seijuro said, Even if you were able to avoid the fangs of the flying dragon, the gusting winds strip away freedom of movement, and the claws would rip you apart.
"Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki" is so fast that its implementation can be successful even when the enemy's strike has actually reached the user's body, as in Rurouni Kenshin manga volume 14. As depicted, Shinomori Aoshi's signature Kaiten-kenbu Rokuren attack has actually begun to cut into Kenshin's neck when Kenshin released the attack, and blows Aoshi back before he can even finish. The invincible attack "Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki" is the final technique of the Hiten Mitsurugi Ryū.
In order to perform the attack flawlessly, the user must be in peak physical condition and there must be nothing inhibiting their application of the technique.

The title this fighting style is given is called "Ultrasonic Sword Style". the speed is of the heaven's and only someone who is alive and has years of experience, knows the he must protect his friends, and is truly good at heart can use these. It is impossible for evil to use this style. As the heaven's created it for the lone warrior with the title of "Hiko Seijūrō" to be used by.

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Finished Kanda Yuu 23272_112899222063046_9234_n

Stone Skin Barrier - This ability coats Kanda in a white colored stone of which protects him from effects of projectiles. This also hinders movement to were he can not move but does not slow down his Sonido, forcing him to rely on Sonido for around 30 minutes to move(7 posts). The longer the use, the more defensibly capable the stone becomes and the less heavy it becomes. Eventually not hindering movement at all. If used before Dues Ex, it will take massive spiritual power to activate(thus the 7 posts...). Though after a dues Ex release, it no longer requires much spiritual power to maintain unless majorly cracked or broken.

One per fight, and cannot be cancelled out unless spiritual power is completely stopped in the area.

e_e I don't even know where to start with how wrong that is.

Dues Ex Abilities: (All Forms)

Curse of The Lotus: This ability activates instantly when in Dues Ex and is permanant. This gives Kanda's Regeration, Speed, Stamina, Strength, Durability and Defense a large boost. By using the curse on his chest.


Dues Ex Abilities: Dark Innocence Knight

Dark Nightmare Fog - a dark fog spreads across the entire area of battle for two posts. this allows Kanda's body to heal in secret as this blocks sensing and spiritual use for all within. This cannot be escaped as its range is 0 - 55000 FT. Its a spread of high desity reiatsu. While in use it will cause delusional type eyesight and slows your mind to body reactions barely. But enough to throw anyone off. This also affects Kanda during use. If absobed by anyone but Kanda, these effect will multiply tenfold. (Tier 1-1+)


Dues Ex Abilities:Black Innocense Assassin

Complete Stealth(Constant): This ability renders Kanda completely Silent. Footsteps, breathing, even his reiatsu cannot be sensed. But his presence can. Enemys that have a hard time sensing people will not have good chances. This requires reiatsu and uses extensive amounts.

Sonic Thrust - Using a gust of wind created through manipulation, Kanda can achive Sonic speed for this strike alone. This is an imapil technique at sonic speed, always aimed at vital organs or vital muscles. (Stomach, Tendons in the wrist, legs atc)
Though dodge-able by enemies who can sense his presence. Anyone that can't... eh. Shit day eh?
(Tier 1-1-) No cool down but cannot be used in rapid succession without crashing into something probably. No rapid succession though.

Lightning Striker - Kanda uses lightning to electrofy his blade and body. Then moves swiftly for a barrage of lightning punches, kicks and slashes. Cool down is 2 posts.

Super Sonic Thrust - Is a long range and Super Sonic speed modifacation of Sonic Thrust. This can be used to send a large in width and height (150x150ft) Sonic Boom at the enemy with wind behind it moving the same speed to throw the enemy away. Easily avoidable. 1 post cool down.

Dues Ex Abilities:Black Flare Dark Paladin

All abilities can be used in this form. No exceptions. This is his Final attempt to win.

Thunder Explosion - This is a large sphere of lightning being throw an an enemy, but encompasses about 450 ft in the sphere range. The sphere does NOT have to make contact and cancels out Spiritual pressure of everyone but Kanda in its blast range for one post.
The sphere, once thrown and at Kanda's wanted range, explodes. Thus creating a outward expanding sphere of lightning moving at 200ft per 3 seconds with lightning and plasma raging inside of it and then explodes to a blast range of 1000ft. Plasma races out in all possible directions while lightning strikes outward from the core. Ending in a large divine size lightning bolt strikes directly at the enemy. This is a massive attack that can be used if enough spiritual pressure is left. Reishi is also a sunstitute but no where near as powerful.

Plasma Hellpurging:

In this ability, Mugen is used to slash the air or ground to create waves of plasma to be thrown at the enemy. Creating a 'fog' of high heat plasmatic mist in its wake. The burns reach Tier 0-5-.
Mugen can also be thrusted into the ground to create pillars of plasma that shot towards the sky from below ground.


Plasma Lotus Petals:
This ability is not melee. this is a projectile.
Kanda spins Mugen in circles at high speeds then suddenly the blade splits in two. One is for melee, the plasma clone is for projectiles.
The Plasma blade turns into Lotus petals and fly at the enemy at around 100ft per second. The do not cut, the petals burn the enemy extremely with heat while sucking out reiastsu slightly, thus when the blade reforms. Kanda takes the extra energy.
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Plasma Manipulation: Plasma can now be applied to all abilities list in RESSERECION and Normal.

Halberd Skin:
Kanda's skin is now coated with Electricity and Plasma. The plasma is an extremely heated shield over his RESSERECION ability Stone Skin Barrier. Halberd emits lightning and thunder strikes occasionally. These strikes are unstable and unpredictable in power. (Tier 2-1 to tier 0-2, depending on time before 'Thunder' and the Lightning Strike.) Directect contact with his body now electrocutes anything it touches. (Tier 2-1+ in shock to Tier 1-1 depnding on if the enemy touched Kanda or Kanda punched them or something in contact with his body touched the enemy(/ies).
A byproduct of this is Jamming. This jams 'waves' in general, not allowing them to reach Kanda. Sound for example could not reach him unless he removes that specific 'Jammer'.

Mind Fuck Block - this renders kanda unable to be mind Fucked or mind attacked in general by Momma U. '_' Added just for kicks lol.




DUES EX RESSERECION Second Form: Black Innocence Assassin


Finished Kanda Yuu 131603864152


Honestly, at this point I'm not even going to bother with history. The powers of this app either need a COMPLETE overhaul, or at LEAST a HUGE toning down. And please. please. please. don't directly rip off shit from Naruto without at least renaming it. This is a Bleach forum after all. -.-


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Until powers are fixed, or completely redone...


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I envy because of the heart.
I glutton because of the heart.
I covet because of the heart.
I am prideful because of the heart.
I sloth because of the heart.
I rage because of the heart.
Because of the heart...
I lust for everything about you.


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Comments/Notes: Ok. Some things need to be mutually agreed on.
"Halberd Skin:
Kanda's skin is now coated with Electricity and Plasma. The plasma is an extremely heated shield over his RESSERECION ability Stone Skin Barrier. Direct contact with his skin now electrocutes anything it touches. (Tier 2-1 in shock to Tier 1-1 depending on if the enemy touched Kanda or Kanda punched them or something in contact with his body touched the enemy(/ies). "

As long as you agree that this ONLY applies when he touches the opponents skin, and he uses it fairly, it will be fine.
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Thunder Explosion - This is a large sphere of lightning being throw an an enemy, but encompasses about 450 ft in the sphere range. The sphere does NOT have to make contact and cancels out Spiritual pressure of everyone but Kanda in its blast range for one post.
The sphere, once thrown and after three seconds, explodes. Thus creating a outward expanding sphere of lightning moving at 400ft per 2 seconds with lightning and plasma raging inside of it and then explodes to a blast range of 1000ft. Plasma races out in all possible directions while lightning strikes outward from the core. Ending in a large divine size lightning bolt strikes directly at the enemy. This is a massive attack that can be used if enough spiritual pressure is left. Reishi is also a substitute but no where near as powerful.

Afterwards a large lightning bolt of ungodly proportion strikes the enemy. with 1000000000 volts of power."

... No billion volt of power. Try about 100,000. And I would prefer if this were made EVENT ONLY, so that it's fair.

All in all, PLAY. FAIRLY.
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