- Atomic_StormStarter Member
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Arrancar Application
Thu Nov 17, 2011 4:38 pm
GENETICS
Character Name:
Uliquiorra_AS
Character True Age:
356 years
Character Appearance Age:
29
Character Gender:
Male
Orientation:
freelancing
Personality:
A heartless Beast with no mercy , his sword is his soul and doesnt like losing in any battle always challenging life and supperior in everything never surrendered to any body , Favores only his friends and not even all of them likes helping his friends some times friendly but when it gets to serious he loses his humor and becomes a stone that stands in the way of the enemy brave no fear of anything but hes fearsome and could risk his life to defend a friend or save him
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
Bone Appearance:
Head
Hollow Hole:
Middle Of Chest
Reitsu Colour:
Blackish Green
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
Racial Abilities:
Cero
Personalized Cero
Hollow Summoning
Cero Sincrético
Negacion Beam
Hierro
RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
Resereccion Uliquiorra_AS
Resereccion Release Phrase:
Murushierago!
Release Actions:
Releasing his sword he gets more anger and rage and directly attack with no waiting at a high speed depending.
Resereccion Appearance:
Resereccion Abilities:
Cero Oscuras:
Using a powerful dark cero,he hits his enemy with a powerful force destroying thire defence maybe.
Lanza del Relampago:
he gathers his reiatsu and chucks a spear at one enemy.
Segunda Etapa:
he will taps into the power of his second released form.
SKILLS
Left to Edit As note Said
General Skills
Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Racial Skills
Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
PAST
History:
he started when he was an hollow turned to a gillian then to a espada/arrancar until he gained enough power to use the Resereccion form and the Cero Oscuras he had alot of trianing till he reached the level he aimed and succeded and he still needs to live a future and complete his destiney.
RP Sample:
Attack XD
Character Name:
Uliquiorra_AS
Character True Age:
356 years
Character Appearance Age:
29
Character Gender:
Male
Orientation:
freelancing
Personality:
A heartless Beast with no mercy , his sword is his soul and doesnt like losing in any battle always challenging life and supperior in everything never surrendered to any body , Favores only his friends and not even all of them likes helping his friends some times friendly but when it gets to serious he loses his humor and becomes a stone that stands in the way of the enemy brave no fear of anything but hes fearsome and could risk his life to defend a friend or save him
GENETIC LOOKS
Appearance:
Bone Appearance:
Head
Hollow Hole:
Middle Of Chest
Reitsu Colour:
Blackish Green
ZANPAKUTÔ
Sealed Zanpakutô:
Racial Abilities:
Cero
Personalized Cero
Hollow Summoning
Cero Sincrético
Negacion Beam
Hierro
RESSERECCION
Resereccion Name:
Resereccion Uliquiorra_AS
Resereccion Release Phrase:
Murushierago!
Release Actions:
Releasing his sword he gets more anger and rage and directly attack with no waiting at a high speed depending.
Resereccion Appearance:
Resereccion Abilities:
Cero Oscuras:
Using a powerful dark cero,he hits his enemy with a powerful force destroying thire defence maybe.
Lanza del Relampago:
he gathers his reiatsu and chucks a spear at one enemy.
Segunda Etapa:
he will taps into the power of his second released form.
SKILLS
Left to Edit As note Said
General Skills
Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Racial Skills
Perquisa: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Sonido: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Cero/Bala: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hierro: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
PAST
History:
he started when he was an hollow turned to a gillian then to a espada/arrancar until he gained enough power to use the Resereccion form and the Cero Oscuras he had alot of trianing till he reached the level he aimed and succeded and he still needs to live a future and complete his destiney.
RP Sample:
Attack XD
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- TsubineYe Olde Guarde
- Joined : 2010-07-09
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Re: Arrancar Application
Thu Nov 17, 2011 4:55 pm
....No. Just no.
Comments/Notes:
Tier:
EHEREM.
To start off, you can't use an existing canon as an original character (or even use part of their name like this). Now, Ulquiorra is a canon that is taken here, so you can just remove anything related to him and his powers. The personality is ONE sentence, the history is ONE sentence, and the fucking RP sample is ONE GOD DAMN WORD. Read threads and see how we RP here.
Application Checklist
- Name [O]
- Appropriate Age [X]
- Gender [X]
- Appearance Present [X]
- Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [X]
- Appearance is Not Claimed [O]
- 10 sentences for personality [O]
- History is of appropriate length [O]
- Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [X]
- Powers are described reasonably enough [O]
- Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [X]
- Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[X]
- RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [X]
- RP Sample is 10 sentences [O]
Comments/Notes:
Tier:
EHEREM.
To start off, you can't use an existing canon as an original character (or even use part of their name like this). Now, Ulquiorra is a canon that is taken here, so you can just remove anything related to him and his powers. The personality is ONE sentence, the history is ONE sentence, and the fucking RP sample is ONE GOD DAMN WORD. Read threads and see how we RP here.
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Re: Arrancar Application
Wed Oct 03, 2012 8:57 pm
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