Mayura Didouji [Human]

Name: Mayura Didouji
Age: 17
Gender: Female


Personality: At the first meeting she may appear bored and or mean but she is actually very sweet. She doesn't talk much but is very passionate when she does. If she get angry she becomes sarcastic and/or ignores the person she is mad at.
Her mannerism is very respectful but she can become headstrong if pushed to the limit. Often appears absent minded and usually is... I blame genetics. To wrap it up in a nut shell... she always happy unless she gets involved in something that could get her killed.
Appearance:
Height: 5'6"
Weight:


Power Development Stage 1 Appearance: A white fire that wraps around her arms like a snake
Power Development Stage 1 Abilities: When used properly can cleanse ghosts. It can also be used to write in the air.


Background: On the day of her birth her father walked out with a another woman leaving her mother alone to care for her. Despite that the woman was strong for all of Mayura's childhood never showing a sign of weakness until she finally broke. On a very peaceful day Mayura's mother committed suicide by burning the house down while she was in it. Mayura was taken to the town orphanage and was adopted by a nice family.

Seven years later Mayura finally met her father and fell for the "I'm so sorry act". She went to live with him until he was shot and killed in a gang related crime. Old enough to live on her own she moved into a nice apartment and is still there unless her manager decides to kick her out... which he just might do. Learned about the white fire when she was 7 and uses that to get money.
Roleplay Sample: She raced out of the room, red hair flying like a flag behind her." I'm so late... please don't fire me!" She rounded the corner nearly bumping into a person and she turned her head apologizing. She rounded another corner and arrived in front of a bakery closing. An older man stood tapping his foot. He looked up at the red head and smiled." Your finally here..."

• Name [x]
  
• Appropriate Age [x]
  
• Gender [x]
  
• Appearance Present [x]
  
• Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  
• Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  
• 10 sentences for personality [o]
  
• History is of appropriate length [o]
  
• Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [x]
  
• Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  
• Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  
• Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  
• RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  
• RP Sample is 10 sentences [o]
  

Comments/Notes:

Well then... Personality is too short, is not 10 sentences. Same goes fro the RP Sample. That power needs hella more detail, I cant even understand whats meant to do. History is also a tad too short. Only 6-5 sentences?


Tier: 5-4 when fixed?

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