Ayane || The Ultimate Command [APPROVED 1-2+]

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Name: Ayane
Age: 18
Gender: Female


Personality:
Now Ayane USED to be a very kind hearted girl that loved absolutely everything in life. Now, things have changed for the worst as her Zanpakutō spirit was torn asunder by cruel experiments on her once dead corpse. fate, the cowboy dealer was removed from her soul and now Ayane is a very unstable girl with lots to get out of her system. Thats probably why she likes to kill so much.

At times, Ayane will literally kill someone out of sheer bored. Even asking her a question would cause her to flip a gun and blow holes throughout their system. She really hates the company of anybody making her seriously threatening but she can be very misleading when trying to get something she wants. A sudden change of personality, Ayane will stop trying to kill people and will ask them questions based on what she is after. This doesn't mean she won't blow the shit out of them afterwards but say she wanted to get into the gotei. She would ask a shinigami very nicely if they would let her in. If the answer was no, she'd move onto the next shinigami through their now blown apart body. if yes... she would probably kill them and leap on through their senkai gate anyway. There really isn't much else behind Ayane except for the fact that she LOVES to kill.

Theres something about Ayane and revolvers or anything cowboy themed. this is probably withdrawal symptoms of her old Zanpakutō spirit. All because Fate was taken from her, this doesn't mean she is weak. in fact, there are times where she appears more powerful through her violent nature. Ayane is the third Ultimate, The Command. You can;t disagree with this girl or you will lose a face or two.

Appearance:



Ayane wears a blend of many clothing styles. At times she would be found wearing this red dress to blend in better with people in the living world where she now lives. Ayane wouldn;t wan;t to scare people that much if she wore something out of the ordinary. It is wise to note Ayane is always carrying a pair of handcuffs so she can perform interesting feats of torture on people. She will even use this as a weapon so be wary.



The other attire she would tend to wear is this school uniform. She looks more and more devilish in this outfit as you can;t judge her as a school girl, but a murderer with a handgun up her skirt. Seriously, that red aura that just follows her is nothing to ignore. Ayane wears a red mini skirt and a white school shirt and red scarf. Standing in the middle of the classroom nobody could tell she was Ayane the ultimate Command.



Ayane's Command Spirit Appearance


All Commands appear for a single second before disappearing. There is no cooldown to the Commands. The summoned creatures cannot be touched as they are ethereal, however the attacks they fire can. This means the bullets are physical as well as the swords etc. Even the steed is technically physical. fate will always appear in the same pose as Ayane is in.

Power Development Stage 1 Appearance:

Ayane appears perfectly normal with no physical changes. She just sounds a little more like a murderer whenever she uses powers. Switching between Commands takes no time between attacks.

Power Development Stage 1 Abilities:

Command: Handgun

Ayane holds her hands out and pretends to fire a pistol by bending her fingers and holding her hands up in the respective pose. She can move the rest of her body and do this too so it looks like she's doing some crazy dance. When she clamps her finger down to pull an imaginary trigger, two men appear beside her envisioning the appearance of Fate. these two men are ghostly and perfectly see through like ghosts and they are both holding single Hanguns in their hand. When her fingers press down, the two men fire their handguns as reiatsu powers gheist bullets that feel just like being shot twice.

The left hand controls the left gun and the right controls the right.

From here, Ayane can spin herself around and pull her finger again, even her other hand to cause the two men to reappear in exactly the same pose and fire again. This doesn't mean she has to stop firing after one bullet. Ayane can fire as many times as her finger can close and outstretch. This can give her a really odd advantage as she slams her fist into someones chest and repeatedly pulls her finger to cause bullets to rain into their body.

Power Development Stage 2 Appearance:

Ayanes entire body emits a deathly red aura that feels incredibly menacing up close. Ayane tends to emit a small current around herself along with this red aura causing her hair to float a little. Not much else really happens here.

Power Development Stage 2 Abilities:

Command: Sword

Ayane cups her hands and swings at somebody as though she was holding a single handed sword in each hand. Suddenly the ghosts reappear as two men suddenly slice down onto the same location she swung but appear to the left and right of the target to do it in exactly the same pose. Ayanes punch isn't that lethal but being hit by their ghostly swords is just like being hit by any cutlass shaped weapon.

Ayane can always continue her attack by swinging her other hand in another movement creating a combo. By holding her hands in the right place, the Ghosts will actually block attacks. Her right hand controls the right ghost where the left controls her left ghost. She needs to swing both hands for both to appear, blocking with one and striking with the other.


Chi Powers:

Command Flux:

Ayane was never able to use one command combined with another. Now at any time during an attack, Ayane can cause one hand to use one command and the other to use another. This allows her to customise her attacks with her guns and swords at once. Fate appears in the same pose as normal but tends to hold only one weapon at a time even if it appears like he was holding two.

Awakened Appearance:

Command: Stead

Ayane doesn't have to take any pose for this to work. Upon using her chi her entire body starts to resonate more and more red aura. This then swirls into a beast, a horse at that. Ayane sits on this red ghost of a horse giving her access to her moves from a higher perspective. using Commands: Gun and Sword creates the ghostly figures of Fate at a distance now but she still needs to move her hands in the right direction.

Awakened Powers:

Ghostly Choke:

Ayanes aura is foul enough to cause people to choke if they are smothered by it too much. This includes the ghosts of fate as they are made of her red aura. it is wise to stay away from her red aura when she is like this as it messes up with breathing and eye sight..

Command: Charge

Ayane dashes forwards with her horse but as she does so, four ghostly images of fate appear, 2 either side of her and holding long pikes. As Ayane charges at her target, The stead grants her a pike to hold herself creating 5 pikes. Ayane will then dash for a short distance of around 8m before the ghosts vanish. These ghosts also being able to run at her steed's pace and never breaking formation.

Command: Volley

Ayane rears on her horse causing 4 ghosts to appear beside her, 2 each side and all holding muskets. They then fire as soon as the horses hooves hit the floor. Four bullets shoot forwards before the ghosts vanish. These appear like normal musket bullets but on impact cause a grenade-like detonation that leaves dents in the scenery.

Command: Dismiss and Recall

if Ayane wants to get off her horse and use her original powers up close she can dismiss the horse and fall through it turning it into her ghostly aura again. When she wants it back, she merely wills the aura to the stead shape again. Ayane has to be on her stead to use Charge and Volley though.


Fully Awakened Appearance:

The steed suddenly becomes massive as the aura flows into her horse at a huge rate also making Ayane look incredibly menacing. Once the horse is about 2 storey high its body morphs into a gigantic visage of Fate with a huge red glow. Ayane stands in front of this with that lovely smile as always. All of her before mentioned powers now have a new way of working. She doesn't even have to move.

Fully Awakened Powers:

All of the following have a few seconds of cool down depending on the attack. Fates actual body emits a gaseous aura that can choke those that standing within his image for too long. His weapons are all ghostly but do have physical presence when used. Ayane will not choke for being inside of this aura.

Command: Handgun

Ayane merely pretends to pull the trigger of a gun by squeezing her finger towards her palm. This causes the ghostly visage of Fate to pull out twin revolvers and spray the area she pointed at with 16 bullets before throwing the guns away into the sky. Each bullet is about the size of a large stone no bigger than 12cm in diameter. Handgun takes about 5 seconds to refresh.

Command: Sword

Ayane pretends to swing a sword. This causes the ghostly visage of Fate to pull out a cutlass and slam his blade down on the area Ayane aimed her attack in. Upon striking, A pulse of red aura is emitted like gas that can choke those within it if they don't move. Sword takes only 1 second to refresh.

Command: Charge

Ayane points at her target and yells Charge. This causes fate to pull a gigantic shield out appearing to be made of wood. This is obviously a ghostly image. He then crashes into his target, almost belly flopping onto the area she pointed at and flattening things.

Command: Volley:

Ayane can only use this version of Volley once in a single thread. Ashlei points to the sky and commands the word Volley. Fate leaps backwards and his aura is absorbed into the sky. Ayane tends to join him in the sky whilst this move goes on. The aura moulds into about 20 Muskets, 10 each side of Ayane. She then points at the location she aims for and pulls her pretend trigger. Ten muskets fire canon ball sized shots at the location and all spread the red pulse of aura momentarily.

Fate is dismissed automatically after this move is conducted and Ayane tends to faint as she can't control that much fire power for too long.



Background:

Ayane used to live her life away from her older sister until they met close to Ayane's eventful day. Where April was with her family most of the time, Ayane was a lost child at the age of 3. During a raid at a thieves guild that the family lived for, Ayane was hit by a nasty surprise as it all went up in flames while she slept. Struggling to even wake up from the crumbling debris around her, Ayane managed to fall out of a window and escape by crawling away slowly. At such a young age, this little girl managed to escape her death and fled unwillingly to a new location. An old man found her crawling through the streets and chose to adopt her as his daughter. From her, her name was Madeline Taptowel under the authority of Old Man Raikenkesh. This old man looked after her through her life until the age of 5 where she took a wander into the forest. Raikenkesh told her not to travel too far because of demons that lived within. The old man was very knowledgeable about these sorts of things which wasn't a surprise. He wore shinigami garbs.

Before even stepping out of the house, Madeline was given a lesson on Shinigami and hollows. After she knew what to look out for, she travelled into the woods to play around. After a while, she felt a sense of foreboding. Something was watching her and it made her feel uneasy. Her walk turned into a jog which quickly became a run. Soon, she was sprinting out of fear away from the safest place she could rely to be. The old man was out shopping in town now so going home would only provide shelter. Bursting through a thicket, Madeline appeared in a large clearing with a huge lake in the middle. She had never been here before nor had she been this close to an actual lake. She lived inside the house all the time and only recently started to go outside. So this is what is behind all those trees? Suddenly, something made her jump out of her skin as a short yell following by a loud crash into water could be heard a few yards away. The water next to her was now in the air with something just as scary standing next to it. A huge monster with a white mask stood with its back to Madeline. Then it turned round and spotted her. Quickly, she let out a scream and ran backwards as fast as she could before turning her weight to run forwards. Getting closer to the house, she realised the creature had stopped following and was more interested in something else. Was that a hollow? Madeline had a few questions but her young age caught up with her. Soon, she fell asleep in the middle of the woods up against a tree.

Waking up later, she found herself back home with the old man she now called father. She preferred to call him gramps but he didn't cater to the name too much. He warned her about going too far into the woods and gave little sympathy to her frightening experience. She had to learn that this world isn't as great as she had wanted it to be. Soon, she became 7 and the old man decided it would be best if she learned how to defend herself. The house they lived in was a small cottage but the dining room was also a part dojo. Madeline didn't want to learn any weapon combat mainly because she knew she couldn't hold a sword nor wield a pole arm. Instead, she just wanted to learn how to fight with her fists. Her tutor, the old man, was a very harsh man when it came to training and gave her the full punishment that meant to becoming a powerful warrior. the training started with simple reflexes to block and never dodge. He would throw a very fast punch and Madeline would attempt to smack it out of the way and lay her own into her stomach. This, took hundreds of tries to perfect. But soon, close to her 8th birthday she had managed to perfect a sequence that allowed her to block, strike, grab and throw which the old man didn't know she could do. Her fighting style became her own, and she thought like a wild girl.

News quickly spread about a girl exactly one year older than her had amazing strength and was literally a super hero. The old man saw this as an opportunity and took her to the home of this warrior. This place seemed so familiar to Madeline but she couldn't remember why. The old man walked into the main chambers and Madeline followed behind her. there, stood two people, the owner of the building and a girl. She was young and about a year older than she was. But, the fierce power that she was emitting made Madeline shiver in fear. Quickly, she ran out of the room and into the courtyard. She didn't want to fight something with an aura like that and the old man agreed. It didn't matter though because they declined his offer and sent him packing. Walking out of the courtyard the long way, Madeline spotted something among a set of flowers. A gravestone among roses sat against a wall a few yards away. Something on it caught her eye so she went to take a look. the old man was a bit resentful, but followed her over anyway. There, on the gravestone was a name: Ayane Redwood, died at the age of 3 during the fall of the first thieves guild. The main thing that made Madeline gasp was a picture on the grave. It was weird to have an image printed into stone but this one was awkwardly special and symbolised something. This picture showed Madeline at the age of three. Then the Old man stepped up to her and began to speak.

"well, looks like you finally found it. It has taken you a whole 4 years to understand who you truly are. I found you when you were just a baby and brought you into my home. There, i chose to name you as i had no idea at the time. When you were at the lake, i realised exactly who you were. Madeline... or should i say... Ayane Redwood. This is your true past and your true future."

Ayane had little to say but wanted to say it anyway.

"So that means that girl from before.... the one i was supposed to fight... she was..."

"yes... when you ran out of the room, i had a little chat with the owner here and he said you looked familiar. When he told me a girl died here 4 years ago, the day i found you, i realised exactly what had happened."

"but...but..."

"That girl you grew so scared of, is your sister"

Ayane quickly grew a face full of tears. She turned and ran away as fast as she could. The old man didn't bother to stop her because she needed to have some time to think. Raikenkesh returned home to find her in her room punching the wall till her fists bled. She had made a couple of dents and a lot of destroyed toys and ornaments lay scattered on the floor. However, the old man did not care for that, he knew she was up to something. Turning around, she raised her blood stained fist to him.

"If that is my sister and she has that much power, then I must become stronger. I want to be able to stand in front of her without showing a shred of fear. I want to defeat her in a fair fight"

Even though this wish wasn't an easy one to achieve, Raikenkesh helped her train for the next 9 years of her life until she joined high school. Now she was fifteen and was in the same class as a group of idiots and some bigger guys. She hadn't been around guys a great deal and didn't like them looking at her. The main reason they stared at her was to figure something out. Is she related to her? Nobody brought up the guts to say anything until a guy with orange hair randomly appeared one day. He wore the same clothing as Raikenkesh and held a large sword in his hand. He walked straight up to Ayane who was staring straight back at him.

"Hey you girl, what is up with your sister?"

"wha....what?"

"The girl in the year above you. You know, pink hair, good looks, always scaring the shit out of the guys"

"SHE'S HERE!!!"

Ayane quickly stood up and shot out of the room. Running as fast as she could, she met this supposed girl walking towards her that the man meant. She looked just like the girl all those years ago that scared her to death. As she ran, the girl gave no hint as to looking at Ayane nor caring that she was running straight up to her. As Ayane got closer, she knew there was no point in even trying. She intended to lay her fist into her face and send her flying backwards. But she knew that if she tried, she would just break her arm and might even lose it. So, she ran straight past. That day turned out to be the worst day of her life. She watched the April around school like a hawk making sure she didn't do anything strange. Ayane also wanted to know how she was so strong but she would have been better leaving it alone. one night when she finally hunted down Aprils home, she stood outside the door thinking about what to do next. Then suddenly from behind, a loud crash caught her off guard and within an instant, her face had struck the floor. Turning around, a small group of hollows had turned up. This wouldn't be much trouble for her seeing as she spent over nine years training herself.

She sprang back onto her feet and dashed into the first hollow laying her fist straight through it's mask. The Old man used stray hollows as training dummies for her so this was no new feat. Soon, the group was eliminated with crushed bones and trashed masks. but that wasn't the end of it. Soon, a giant creature crawled over a nearby building with huge fangs and giant pincers. An Adjuchas class hollow had appeared which Ayane had never encountered before. No matter how hard she tried, she couldn't injure the monster which now had her pinned up against Aprils house wall. Sadly, she wasn't even inside that night as she was busy fixing a mess with some people she knew. That night, Ayane was slain by this creature and her body was lost to the winds. Soon, she awoke in soul society. Suddenly bursting upwards and slamming her head against a wall, she figured out that she was dead and now lived in the scrum of this district. She lived the next few months of her life in agony and hunger without knowing a thing about the place. Hollows appeared to try and eat her again but she stopped them quickly and defended her new refuge. Later, Shinigami began to flock around the area to try and find somebody. A girl that had recently joined the shinigami academy and was destroying every opponent she faced. Walking outside, she found the somebody that made her heart stop. Standing outside before four men was April. She was a shinigami now? Ayane just watched behind a stall to see what was happening. April easily bludgered three of them before the fourth fell onto the stall Ayane was hiding behind. He noticed Ayane and grabbed her by the throat.

"Come any closer, and this girl will be seeing red"

But April gave no answer. The only thing going through the two girls minds was the day Ayane ran straight past her in high school. That may have been a while ago but its the longest the two had ever been near each other. Quickly, the man fell down with a sword through his chest, but as he fell, he cut the throat of Ayane who was still choking in his hands. Her Rukongai life was cut short. Then again, Just like before, She woke up randomly and slammed her head on the ceiling of a bunkbed. Looking around, she found herself in a shinigami barracks a whole five years later. For some reason, she was still at the age of fifteen and could still move around. Didn't she die? That's when April walked into the room and handed her a glass of milk. She looked very happy to see Ayane awake and explained everything. Ever since the start when they were only 7, April knew who Ayane was. When she was slain by the man, she couldn't just let that be the end and put a her soul back into her body via a mod soul pill. So Ayane's soul is within a replica of her old body. This body wont age and also holds unique powers. One of these includes something where April shoved her hand down Ayane's throat. Ayane was shocked at first and fainted soon after. Then, she awoke as a small puppy with white fur. April picked this toy out especially to be her plushie form.

So from that point, Ayane lived in a shoe box next to Aprils bed. However, being a Mod Soul did have its downsides. Ayane could never be spotted by any Shinigami other than those in her squad which means she could never leave the barracks without a guide or someone to provide her with an alibi. Soon, Ayane also realised she was never going to become stronger while stuck within a small puppy toy and being a mod soul. So, she took it up with her sister. After a long conversation, Ayane convinced April to take her to squad 12 and perform an experiment on her body. What this 2 year project did to Ayane, was remove the Mod Soul capabilities from her, and traded them over for Shinigami blood and genes. Some of these were taken out of April and copied so Ayane could use Shikai and Bankai like any other person.

So from then onwards, Ayane took to the streets of Soul Society as a Shinigami rather than a Mod Soul. Now having a Zanpakutō of her own, she seeks the path to greater power to be strong like her sister. However things didn't go so well after that. April disappeared from Ayane's sight and even though she tried to find her for a whole year, Ayane had not even found a clue as to where she could have gone. This sent her protective nature towards her sister spiralling out of control until she eventually grew ill from it. The 12th squad captain 'Rola karondai' took it upon himself to visit her while she was in squad 4 barracks being treated. He knew she had nobody to look out for her anymore and so he decided to act as a father figure towards her. She soon got attached to Rola and her illness faded for a few years until it striked again.

Ayane met a new recruit in her squad in the middle of the night where she really didn't expect to see the guy. he was very polite and kind towards her but she just thought he was like all the other guys that talked to her. However, he seemed much more caring and eventually, she agreed to help train him to get over his own past and give her something to forget about her sister. After training with him, the two went out for dinner but before they even ate anything, Poliro confessed to her. Being the girl she was, she ran away and hid but was found and the two talked it over. that was the day she fell in love with Poliro.

Soon after this, Ayane asked Rola to help with the training and he agreed happily. The two captains trained Poliro until he was able to perform bankai and Ayane took it upon herself to test it out for him with her own. However at a point where she would have died if she was hit, she suddenly grew ill again. the stress on her body and forgetting her sister caused her mind to recall the past events and spasm, causing her to fall to the ground. Poliro and Rola immediately took her to squad 4 where she lay in a coma for almost 2 weeks. Rola explained to Poliro her past and how she fell ill like this but nowhere near as bad. After a week, the two thought she had actually died from it, but the following week she woke up and walked into her barracks as though nothing had happened.

A good few years have passed since then and ayane grew as a promise to poliro. She wanted to be a girl that he would recognise and love more than anyone else and being a little kid wasn't going to get her anywhere with him. So, she asked Rola to help her out and using squad 12, She became the girl she is now, had her sword changed and made herself into a beautiful goddess. But then tragedy struck her.

Since Ayanes sister had disappeared yet again, Ayanes anxiety has been on a never before felt high. After staying with Poliro for some time, she ended up wounding her body mentally and couldn't cope with the stress of being both in love and in pain. Half way through battle she even fainted and could have died from it. It's lucky that she was taken to squad 4 quickly but soon afterwards, she never recovered and died of her mental illness. That was before Ashlei found out about her.

Ashlei, the cero espada, recovered Ayane's dead body and used it in many of her experiments and eventually came out as a member of the 'Hollow Children'. She had al of her powers stripped and given new ones as a human. Things started to ease up after that but her new personality was brushing off on the people around her as she frequently killed for a boost of morale. Now Ayane lives in an abandoned laboratory where she was experimented on along side the rest of the Hollow Children and lead by Miku Midknight of whom has no reason to live either.

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Comments/Notes: Only Frost can approve Fully Awakened Humans, so no FA
Tier: 2-1

I need to reapprove this at the previous tier due to Toxic (Faggot over there in the above post) did so. So... reapproved at 1-2+.

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