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Name: Ravage Selux
Age: Looks 11 Actually 4800
Gender:Male
Human Color: Pale White
Eye Color: Slate Grey/ Crimson Red
Height: Four Foot Eight
Weight: 102 Pounds

True Appearance:
||RAVAGE|| [APPROVED 1-3] RAVAGE

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Personality:
Soft-spoken: Unlike most of the new born demons that has seem to engulf the many realms of hell. Ravage has learn that those that boast of their power most likely have little to none to show. He finds it much more interesting to see what his enemies will make him out to be. Not only that but he finds it tedious to talk or make friends that argue, when alone his decisions will almost be resolute. He sees no use in arguing when he'll end up doing what he want in the end either way.
Manipulative: Ravage carries a very strong sense of strength around with him. Almost making any defenseless person feeling as if they would be safe around him. He doesn't know what it is about him, maybe it's the combination of his many personality traits that makes it easy for him to make others do what he wants. If he has too he will easily use others to get what he want.
Touching Pet-peeve:Ravage truly hates being touched by any being. He tolerates being touched by beings that could possibly kill him and even than barely retains his sanity when being touched. This is a good way to get into a fight with him. Everyone gets one warning and after that make your choice if you want to die...Than try to touch him.
Conflict Avoidance: Ravage tends to avoid conflict when he can, but this in no way states he's afraid to. Though he would prefer not to be touch by anyone in anyway. Most of the time in fights this happens atleast once before he goes berserk and destroys the person that touched him. All of his phobias mostly revolve around getting touched.
Solitude: Ravage appreciates the quietness that comes along with being alone. Usually finding him in the areas of darkness even during the daytime. It's a thing that he has found to be comforting for a long time.
Childish From Time to Time: Ravage tends to be childish from time to time. From having pointless thoughts to stealing someones ice cream or making someone cry. If he's desperate for amusement than he would obviously seek for some. Even in the slightest of things.

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History
Ravage the product of the many hatreds of the world and though many would consider him to be an evil entity because of his birth. He is actually much of the opposite. He lived a solitary life which most would rather die than live in. But he himself enjoyed the loneliness that followed him. It was the only way he could really hear the excuses he made to silence the pain in his non existent heart.

For a moment he was lost in his path, with a permanent look of depression placed on his face. It was almost horrible to see a kid like that in the demon realm. Human kids in the demon world ? Impossible. Many thought until they saw Ravage. Thinking that this was a freak accident and that they couldn't let the chance to devour a kid's soul pass by. But this would lead them to discover that Ravage was no human, that in fact he held demon blood in his veins. This was the start of the rumor ,the demon that held shadows to tear his opponents apart. He had become a feint rumor that for some part circled around the demon world.

Two thousand years of ruthless, savage fighting had hardened and honed the demons skills. Though this hadn't filled the hole that he felt. Why hadn't nothing worked so far. He trained intensively and gain strength above most demons. It was almost an insult that the demon king himself was spitting in his face, that he hadn't realized what was missing yet. Between these year several wars had occurred throughout demon world and he found himself defending against the opposite side and at the same time from the demon that sought to destroy him. Every war brought dramatic power to the demon making him stronger and stronger.

Later on he would hear rumors of the demon king being imprisoned he was quite late in hearing this. But still it affected him all the same. It was impossible to see a upside to this, with the demon king out of commission he expected alot of uprising and for a solitary demon like himself this meant he would be defending his home area more often than usual. How tedious he thought. A few demon rose up but for the most part they remained loyal to the demon king. He was impressed that this Touketsu had raised such an army.

As the time with on he begin to realize that he would never fill that hole that was created from his birth. Even if he was the physical manifestation of negative emotions produced from beings all around. He kept himself isolated from the world, choosing a area for himself that he keeps watch over with his shadow ability. 4800 years of life has been used to strengthen him in any way possible. If he can't fill the void in his being than he would rather live alone forever. With no conquests or dreams, only to enjoy the loneliness of life.
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Natural Abilities:

Demon Stamina: Like most demon he has impressive speed and strength than most humans or any other lesser species. Along with great durability to withstand powerful attacks and other blasts. Though more times than not he'll come out unscathed. It's still useful to have incredible strength when facing a great opponent.

Excellent Hand to Hand Combatant: Most believe him to be a weak close range combatant because of his extensive use of his shadows. But that not entirely sure, you sure to feel some pain if you expect to take him out with hand to hand combat. But still you want lead him to using his hands just through taunts.

Shadow Void: A way of traveling through the many dimensions of the worlds around him. Only allowing him to travel to the worlds that he 's left a piece of shadow in. It needs nothing more than small piece in a corner for him to teleport their and they usually stays for around a year or so.

Unique Abilities:

::Shadows::
His sole ability and the reason why he is feared. These shadows are directly connected to his beings. Appearing to be dark they can easily transform into many different shapes. Unlike many would think these shadows can defend him from solidified objects even the physical attacks. They can form into a large wall to several pursuing spikes towards his opponents. The boys ability even allows him to keep an eye of his surrounding area through his shadowy eyes and talk to comrades if he ever get any , through his shadow's mouth. Though they can only go so far from his body before reaching it's limit. Ravage's shadows can reach out at an maximum of 200 meters.

Most of the time the shadows are hidden in his body. But when he prepares for battle they can strike quickly without warning. His shadows can be deflected by especially strong metal but they can also be broken if he put more demonic energy into them. With his shadows the bigger the act he performs with them the more demonic energy he uses. The one thing you would notice most would be the sudden change of his grey eyes that turn crimson when his shadows is summoned. If used to much they involuntarily they go back into his body to regain strength. This is what makes Ravage the strong opponent he is. As the shadows can be damage by superior opponents they can be cut off, but it would grow back. Expectantly using more energy than to regrow them than if they hadn't.

Mukō Jōtai Appearance:

Spoiler:

Skin Color: Indigo/Black
Eye Color: Glowing Yellow
Height: Six Foot Five
Weight: 125 Pounds

Mukō Jōtai Ablities: During Muko Jotai the manipulation of his shadows become more extensive. Now be able of making detachable weapons from his shadows like lances, or knives ect. They're quicker and become quicker to react than before. Even going to so far to protect Ravage from attacks that he didn't even know were coming. With the gained ability to fly the shadow seem to flow below him like an ocean of darkness flowing towards his opponent. When this form show itself a rain of dark energy seem to hail down on his opponents as his yellow eyes show through the darkness that pursues his transformation. He becomes drastically more destructive in his form because of his way attack. He cooperates with his shadows to deliver quick devastating attack to his opponents being.

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Role Play Sample: Already Have One Up Here

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(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

Za Koa Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Spells/Summonings: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Jigoku Sokudo Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Sun 18 Sep 2011, 11:38

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Comments/Notes: OHGAWD. It's the shota from Hell... he's so adorableee. <33 But I have some problems.

How far can his shadows go? Since they can cause physical harm, can they get damaged as well? Limitless Shadows are an okay for me but there should be a weakness to it such as tiring out a little quicker when he uses more shadows.

Since we all know strong people has weaknesses somewhere in their hearts.

Tier: 2-1+ to 1-3 when fixed.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 08:23

Fixedd it bud. It should be better now.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 08:53

I approve of it. Alejandra has a similar ability, lol.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 09:27

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WOAH WOAH WOAH! Major party foul! Me no comprehend 50 miles.

On a more serious note, 50 mile-wide control over his shadows is tremendously OP. The thing about that is, he could level an entire city with them, and not even really need to be IN the city. So, I think 50 meters max for base should be fine for starters (50 meters is actually quite long for an ability). You can make the range longer in his later forms.

Also, I dont know if you know this or not, but he has no Shishi Modo, only Muko Jotai, and Shishi Modo is like Shikai, which comes before Muko Jotai. So, until this is fixed, moved to WIP.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 09:45

I know I took his Shish Modo out on purpose I sorta didn't want him to have one. Since he's a Demon I didn't see an absolute need for him to have a shikai type ability. So I just have his Mukoto. It's gonna still be reachable as if it was a bankai. And I changed the 50 to 20 so let me know what ya think.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 13:14

OVERRULED!

Whatever Gin just said is irrelevant as Alejandra is able to stretch out her own shadow across continents as long as there is light.
Approved for 1-3.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 14:12

Well tai, seeing as how there was an entire discussion about this earlier today, I overrule your overrule. 20 miles is still to much, as he can spread it out in every direction from his body. Either do what I said, or expect a deny.

Also, Tai, please get better reasons to overrule judgments. Please.

Fri 23 Sep 2011, 14:17

Brought back because of conviction from many other people who has complaints. Sigh.

People are wanting it in a number that are not miles or kilometers. Could you possibly do that? I'd rather see a quick change to something rather than a shitstorm of complaints.

Wed 28 Sep 2011, 07:49

Okay. I'm not understanding what you guys are looking for. You've confused me lol.

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