Amaya Nanashi, The Lavander Shinigami (Done)

Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:38 am

S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Amaya Nanashi
Gender: Female
Age: 210
Appearance: Amaya stands at 5,3’ with the weight of 132 on a scale but looking at her full figure, she would look to be around 115. The Change in numbers is purely based on the face that she really doesn’t show really any extra fat. Most of her weight is from her toned muscles. Alright, so her muscles are not bulky or anything but they are barely noticeable from a distance.

Her skin is a very fair flawless beside the fact of the burn on the left side of her neck. The burn scar reaches from the top of her neck down to her shoulder blade on the left side. Her burn reached down her back to her left shoulder blade around and up to her collarbone on the left side. Her burn also reached down her left arm to the end of her elbow, as it is a bit darker then her fair flawless skin.

Her hair is gorgeous Light lavender purple. For some reason this color stayed in her head even after her death but when she was human, just her under layers were light lavender. Therefore, when she woke up in this new world her hair changed to complete lavender purple. Her hair reaches all the way down to her waist. Some days her hair seems to get curly and others her hair is perfectly, flat as a board, straight. Most of the time her hair is straight as can be, which is excellent for Amaya as it will be easier to style it in the style she wants it for that day or time.

Amaya has many different styles that she could wear but she mainly wear four styles. Two, of the four styles, corresponds with her happy mood, one with her sad. The last of her hairstyles she wears is when she is not in the best of moods. When she is happy, she normally wears one of two main hairstyles. One is a simple ponytail that is normally secured with a long white ribbon that she ties into a bow as the ends always reaches to her shoulders. Her hair itself is in a high ponytail as the ends reached about an inch or two above her waist from being up takes some of the length away. She usually has her bangs parted to the left hanging them diagonally as move of the time they will cover her left eye and the left side of her neck from the front, which helps with her scar. Her other style is a simple rope braid where it is in one braid all the way down where at the end she ties and secures it with her ribbon as this hairstyles allows her hair to stay to her waist line. Her bangs are a big part of pulling off this style. She always parts them down the middle before pulling them behind her ears. She would then take some pins and pin the hair behind her ears to keep them out of her face. When Amaya is Angry or in a killing mood, she will pull her hair into an elegant messy bun at the top of her head as she included her bangs into the bun. By doing this, She did not have to worry about any hair getting into her face. When she is sad and depressed or whatever she will have it just plain down, she will have it brushed and everything she will not use her ribbon, which she will then tied her ribbon around her neck, just in case she would need it for a fight or mood change when and if, she remembers to. Her bangs were this style would be like her ponytail bang style to where the bangs will cover her left eye.

Amaya’s eyes range is shades from a deep trench ocean blue to an icy murderous blue. The Shade depends on her mood much like her hairstyle. For Amaya it is very rare to get her ticked off but it is somewhat easy to get her depressed. When she is happy, her eyes are two clear pools of sky blue water. If one were to look into their depths, they would easily get lost. Her eyes when she is happy just shine and brighten her looks and add to her bright personality. When it is time to battle or when the opportunity to allow her anger to run free. Her eyes lighten their shade to an Icy blue color; Her iris also will change to a bit darker color then that color around it. Her eyes in this mood tend to have a snake like feel to how they seem to watch their opponents’ every move. When she is sad, they changed to a deep trench ocean blue color. When they turn this color, it shows she saddens and her mood will show massively in this mood.

Amaya’s clothing isn’t much different then the normal usual uniform other then the fact that she cut into her shoulder material letting the skin be seen for many reasons. One reason is the fact of it allows her body to breathe, so she does not sweat so much when she is in battle or when she is not. Along with the slight change to her uniform, she fitted the torso more to her shape to help show her skinniness and for the fact that extra baggy material seems to get in her way sometimes so she made sure to slime down the sleeves as well some. Otherwise, her Uniform is the same in everything else

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:

There are many aspects to Amaya’s personality like how loyal she is to her squad and those she is stay loyal to, friends, squad etc. Amaya is the innocent kind of sweet that tends to get too attached to situations, certain people and such. She is the type that when she makes a promise she tends to keep it. She is the type of person that will move in front of an attack to save a friend or the type that will give up her friend to a foe if it is to save an other's life. Sometimes Amaya can be a mother figure or one of those personalities where everyone wants to flock to because of her gentle and kind natures.

There are also negative aspects of her personality such as she is the type of person that will move in front of an attack to save a friend or the type that will give up her friend to a foe if it is to save a mother’s life. She sometimes can blow things out of proportion

[*]Sometimes her loyalty to friends or squads can blind her judgment. She tends to get confused a lot and uncertain about situations of what she should do or whatever it may, be. Sometimes she tends to rush into things that she think she knows for sure or when it concerns a friend.

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: When Amaya was human she was the type of girl that was not very well educated. Sure, she went to high school but she never studied. She always hung out with the wrong crowd. She had learned how to fight hand to hand and how to use knives and such from the friends she uses to call family. Sure, they were a bunch of guys but they gave her a feeling that she could fit in and belonged, kind of like a family.

Her mother was a drunk that always bitched about her life even though she was a millionaire’s wife. Amaya barely got to see her father since he was always off on business trips. She has six older brothers that went to harbor and such, she was suppose to fill their shoes and follow in their footsteps but she was never that smart and never were into school. There was one friend she made that was her childhood love and grow to be that till she was in high school where she meet his group of friends and started calling them family.

Death was a very mean man because he did not allow her to die of old age, no he decided to killed her at a young age with a creature that no normal human was able to see. She was just heading to her family’s normal hang out when she caught a large black figure out of the corner of her eye in an alley. She looked down and ventured down to see nothing till she felt a large gust of hot breath. She had turned to find a frog like hollow looming over her. She did try to get away and somehow managed to keep from getting hurt until the frog-like hollow spit forth some acid that gave her the burn like scar on her left shoulder. This was supposedly the killing blow in the human’s books. However, in truth the last thing she saw before her vision faded were some figures, she would soon find them to be shimigami. She heard voices. A certain voice rang out over all the other voices. That voice belonged to the very shinigami that was there when she had died/

Amaya then woke up in a strange place but as for what happened, she did not know other then her shoulder hurting like hell. As her soul did not ascended to above, no it instead, went to a place called Rukongai. She did not know really what to do as she grew up in one of the poor sections and managed to make some friends. She managed to run some errands of an elderly couple who then allowed her to take residence in their home as she looked to be seventeen.

On the day where she ran, errands she saw some shimigami as she somehow remember the armband symbol one was wearing but she did nothing. She found out where they were and started working to save up enough to go to the academy. The folk she stayed with seemed happy with her decision but they were now like family.

Soon she made it to the academy, she was more of the underdog and no matter how much she failed and trying, she didn’t give up but kept trying harder and harder, becoming better and better soon near the end of her first year she went from the bottom of her class to the near top.

It seems like a good few years had passed when she then found Hebi in several dreams. In each dream, she found him crawling from her burn scar she had from when she died. It took months before she discovered her shikai After she found her blade that was proper for her in being light and flexible. It seemed since she discovered her shikai that things in the academy was a breeze and upon her second year in the academy she was recruited into division 2, the very division that those ho killed the hollow after her death was from. Therefore, from that day forward she was going to stay loyal to her squad that became the reasons she became a shimigami

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Heibi
Appearance: Amaya’s Zanpakuto spirit is name Hebi and is a considered male by the voice she heard. Hebi is the opposite of Amaya since when she is outgoing he is more trying to get her to think before attacking and when she is thinking he is the type wanting bloodshed and killing.

Hebi in his spirit form looks to be About eight though his age tends to change each time Amaya sees him whenever that happens. The form he tends to stay in is an eight-year-old form. A feather deep swamp green is his hair as it was slightly long enough for a seductive movement. His hair in general was slick and clean along with a polished look. His skin was very tan almost as if he stayed in the nude for three hours in a tanning bed tan. On various parts of his skin are patches of light green and black scales that were just like snakes scales. His eyes were huge as his eyes looked to be pure gold with large black slits with spots of white around the slits that give a child feel to them. Much like the snake Hebi is he does have a forked tongue and tends to carry his longer then normal beings do.

As for clothing, Hebi tends wear only a two-size long sleeve shirt that clearly covers his legs and arms. The thing that really shows he is a snake is the fact that his lower half can change from legs to a long snake tail that was a 4 feet long as this allowed him to get height when he needs it to speak to those taller then him.

　

Inner World: The inner world of her weapon is a large labyrinth of tunnels within the ground that a large creature can slither through. There are roots of the plants above but they are purple different shades and some how these roots lit the tunnels to who knows where.

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : Amaya has a normal looking katana only difference about it is the fact that it is about two inches longer then a normal katana. Her guard is circular in looks as open closer inspection her guard has snakes intertwining each other to form a pattern just like a chain link fence. Her hit color is lavender since it seems that is her hair and her zanpakuto spirit; at the end of the hilt is a chain that hangs down about six inches with a silver bell at the end.

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: when zanpakuto leaks small amounts of Heibi’s poision as this poision ranges from the smallest amount cause paralization, to the largest which causes illusions and death, but this only happens when someone is cut by the blade or the poision goes into a cut. The progress of the poision is slow and seem undetecable as it progess, slowly within the posts it takes. first they see things that seem to be of fears, emotions and such. Then it will progress were they lose control of their limbs, slowly not being able to even use them. it is a very slowly progessing poision that only amaya has the antidote.

PhatomTech: n/a

~~Release:~~Chijō o tabi, rabendā Heibi ( Travel through the earth, Lavender Snake Heibi
ShikaiDescription:Amaya's Shikai Ability is an Earth Manipulation type. Any part of her Shikai is capable of melding with the ground. When it has melded into the ground, she is capable of manipulating the earth by using techniques. These techniques can range from softening the ground, like quick sand, and all the way to moving the earth, creating objects from it and such. Her ability to manipulate earth is only possible as long as her Shikai is with the ground. If her Shikai is not with the ground, then it cannot manipulate the earth. The range of earth she can manipulate ranges for a 5-meter radius per rank in Zanpakuto Resonance.
ShikaiAbilities:Amaya's Shikai Ability is an Earth Manipulation type. Any part of her Shikai is capable of melding with the ground. When it has melded into the ground, she is capable of manipulating the earth by using techniques. These techniques can range from softening the ground, like quick sand, and all the way to moving the earth, creating objects from it and such. Her ability to manipulate earth is only possible as long as her Shikai is with the ground. If her Shikai is not with the ground, then it cannot manipulate the earth. The range of earth she can manipulate ranges for a 5-meter radius per rank in Zanpakuto Resonance.

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample: Time of day did not seem to matter for those who really have nothing that they need to do at the given time. Sure there was missions to do, training to get stronger to attempt to get to a higher ranking. Some of these were main priorities to those who wanted to gain respect. These were not priorities to one individual because these priorities were not the first thing on her mind. These will certainly be part of her day at some point but right now, the priority was to Awake and stay awake.

A pair to two sleepy blue eyes slowly opened then slowly closed several times. She yawned lightly before blinking faster only to pull the covers over her head purely from the warming light from the sun was shinning through the window in front of her, hurting her eyes. She stayed there for a few minutes, still like a statue on her side, the only movement was the inhaling and exhaling of air into and from her lungs that allowed her chest to rise and fall. It took her about five minutes before she sat up with her eyes, half closed. Amaya reached up her left arm stretching as a groan came along with the stretch. She looked around sighing as her right hand reached up touching her left shoulder where her burn scar was, this was a normal routine for her to feel the scar.

Silently she threw off the blankets while she got up from her bed. She folded her blankets neatly as her room really did not have much in it, as she tends to keep it that way. In a corner left of her window resting her zanpakuto leaning against the walls

“Hebi….”she whispered to herself. She got dressed making sure she had her uniform on right. She then took out her brush and two black ribbons. She held the ribbons in her mouth while she brushed her long lavender hair, which is the reason her squad calls her lavender most of the time instead of Amaya. Her hair reached to her waist when all the way down so it took her awhile to brush it smooth. Once she accomplished brushing all the rats and tangles in her hair, she brushed it into her usual ponytail. She removed one of the ribbons from her mouth before securing her ponytail with it. The Ribbons did their job well by securing the hair into its ponytail. She removed the last ribbon from her mouth, wrapping it around her neck, hiding most of the old burn scar that she had gotten from when she died.

Amaya took in some air and released it from her lungs. She then slowly stood up. She turned towards her zanpakuto. She lifted him up. The bell on the end sung its ringing song every time she moved her sword. She lightly took the blade before securing it safely to her belt, as she made sure it was easy to pull Hebi out and returning him to his sheath. “Well, lets see what today has in sort for us.” said Amaya to her zanpakuto as if it was an actual person that had been waiting for her to get ready so they could leave

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S K I L L S H E E T

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General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills

Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Sat Sep 17, 2011 8:29 pm

You discovered Shikai but you don't have anything for it? Putting it in WIP until fixed.

Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:26 pm

Alrighty I took care of that

Mon Sep 19, 2011 4:01 pm

Everything seems to be satisfactory with this app, but there is one thing, one small thing i need for you to go into further detail on.

when zanpakuto leaks small amounts of Heibi’s poision as this poision ranges from the smallest amount cause paralization, to the largest which causes illusions and death, but this only happens when someone is cut by the blade or the poision goes into a cut

1. Explain how the illusions are, if their full scale, that cannot be allowed. But if it's something like an hallucination, that starts to turn into a small-scale illusion over time, i'll be able to dig it.

2. Insta-death is not allowed, if they get cut by the poison, come up with a way they can counter it, or how long does it take until they reach a "near" death point. This way, it'll make it easier. My suggestion for how long it takes for the poisons to take effect, is too do it in posts. For example.

1 post= Small hallucinations and body weakening in the legs, arms, or abdomen

2 posts=Smaller hallucinations turning into bigger hallucinations akin to those of small-scale illusions. Body becomes dull, signs of exhaustion and small losses of breath.

3 posts= Hallucinations reach a illusion-ish state, where the opponent can no longer tell whats right from wrong, and the poison starts to effect their body on a large scale, thus, putting them closer to death.

If you do this, your app will be approved with a 2-2. For now....

Amaya Nanashi, The Lavander Shinigami (Done) Utwcarnivalphantasm01bd

Amaya Nanashi, The Lavander Shinigami (Done) Utwcarnivalphantasm01bd

GOOD LUCK!

Mon Sep 19, 2011 10:55 pm

Alright all checked and edited

Sat Oct 22, 2011 8:29 pm

Inactive WIP

Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:47 pm

Moved to inactive

Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:54 pm

Archived

Mon Jan 02, 2012 4:54 pm

Re-activated~

Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:01 pm

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Comments/Notes: Since this was posted before the no-Auto-Shikai rule to my knowledge, I'm approving her with Shikai.
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