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[WIP] Yaso Sasaki
Wed Sep 14, 2011 10:39 am
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General Information
General Information
Name: Yaso Sasaki
Age: 21, True Age, 415
Gender: Male
Affiliation: Lone Wolf
Overall Appearance
Personality: Very caring but doesn't usually show it and he can't stand death in general. If someone kills another person, he gets very defensive and attacks the person who killed the other person. If that person happens to be anyone he particularly cares about, his reishi starts to overflow and it does so somewhat like this. He usually avoids using his bow during fights, and prefers to just use his skills in Martial Arts, although usually this is not an option. He doesn't like to show his emotions to people he doesn't know.
Appearance: Yaso
Height: 5'6
Weight: 165 lb
Human Talents
He is a black belt in a few forms of Martial Arts.Quincy Tools and Techniques
Quincy Cross; Hollow Bait; Ginto; Hirenkyaku; Sanrei Glove; and he can barely use Ransōtengai. Quincy Bow
Type: BowAppearance: Black at the top and red at the bottom. They meet in the middle jaggedly.
Reishi Color: Bright Red
Background and RP Sample
Background: Yaso was born in a rather nice family. There was always food on the table and interesting things were always just a turn around the corner. However, interesting things don't always mean good things. When he was just ten, his mother was killed in a car accident. His father, not being able to cope with this, committed suicide only a year after, leaving no parents in the house and Child Services had not came to pick him up. So began his bouncing between foster homes and orphanages. However despite this, he always seemed to maintain a good attitude and exceptional grades. At age 15, his grandfather adopted him and told him about his quincy heritage and taught him how to manipulate and focus Reishi and gave him an ancient Quincy Cross that was passed down from over ten generations.
RP Sample:
The quincy sighed and got up from his rather uncomfortable bed. Focusing reiastsu for his bow, Yaso decided it was time to get some target practice. He had already neglected it for a few weeks. Grabbing a piece of Hollow Bait, he walked outside and went to the outskirts of town, where the barrier no longer affected the bait.
Snapping it quickly, a few weak hollow showed up within moments who were pierced by his Spirit Arrow immediately and dissipated. "Pfft, send more at me! I'll cut you all down!" More showed and more fell. A few minutes later, stronger hollows appeared and they took more precise aiming. Hitting them in the center of the mask, they disappeared as with the old and weak ones. One hollow in particular simply refused to be hit by his arrows, as though it was providing a distraction for the other weaker ones, though he simply discarded it as an idiotic thought; Hollows didn't work together. It was as simple as that. Harder and stronger hollows, Yaso quickly found himself having to use more and more strength to destroy the hollows in a single arrow. He reached his cap; how much energy he would use at max in a normal fight, and felt a bead of sweat ride down his face then said, "Goddamn Hollows! Won't stop coming!" He would not allow these hollows to survive. They were greedy little demons, and demons must die. Sighing to himself, he continued his relentless onslaught. Fueled by his natural Quincy hatred towards hollows, he took more power from his reserves. Quickly burning through wave after wave.
He said flatly to himself after the bait was exhausted slightly unnerved, "It wasn't horrible but it could improve..." He turned on his heel and walked back into the city and returned to his small shack, thinking of new ways to improve his marksmanship and power levels so it would be easier next time, and the next and the next until it took absolutely no effort to do it.
Skill Sheet
* = To use any of the Tsuineda-Related skill, you have to be born with them.
* = To use any of the Tsuineda-Related skill, you have to be born with them.
General Skills
- Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Racial Skills
- Marksmanship: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Gintou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Hirenkyaku: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
- Reiryoku Absorption & Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
*Tsuineda Technique:
*Kaunta-Atakku:
*Sukai-Kataki
*Jeet Kun Do:
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Re: [WIP] Yaso Sasaki
Thu Sep 15, 2011 10:32 am
Way way way way way way way way *breathes in* too short!
I certainly suggest you at least double a lot of what you've written to get a decent grade. If i were to approve this it wouldn't get higher than a 5-5 which is very low. Add detail to everything, explain it all.
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