Crispen Cronos

S H I N I G A M I


B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Crispen Cronos
Gender: Male
Age: 426, but looks like he's in his mid twenties
Appearance: (what they look like pics are welcomed)

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality: Crispen is a very aggressive person. Almost anything can piss him off, even when he's in a good mood. He likes things done his way and thinks that if someone does something another way, even if they are successful, it is not done right for the pure and simple fact that it could have gone wrong. When Crispen himself makes a mistake it is usually done in a way that could have been avoided if he had taken some caution. When someone else makes a mistake Crispen takes pleasure in it, usually, especially if that person has done something to annoy him. He is very vindictive. Crispen is also analytical and hypercritical. It's easy for him to point out other's faults but cannot admit his own. Most of his mistakes he seems to do on purpose either because he doesn't care or thinks he can handle a situation, which explains his arrogant attitude. He seems to fight more seriously when fighting stronger opponents. His moods can range from quiet and moody to warm and playful. It's often hard to tell what he's really thinking because he will typically fight for his own pride or justice.
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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background: As a human, Crispen had many public service jobs, which included police work, in forensics and enforcing the law, managerial positions, and even some laborious tasks. He was constantly held back because of his attitude and could have otherwise easily attained a position in power. He made a few friends and a few enemies. To his coworkers he seemed like a normal, typical person but that was just his work attitude. He tried to cover up his bad qualities while working on the job, but when talking to the boss or the higher ups, he would always lose his temper either to what he believed was their incompetence or someone's misgivings. He died in a plane crash on his trip to New Jersey.

When he entered the Soul Society he was a loner for a long time. He continually found himself facing hollows, so he had to learn how to defend himself. He faced a continuing battle that would have surely ended his life. If it were not for his Shinigami powers he would have been dead in a few months' time. His time spent at the academy was not wasted. He studied and trained every day. He learned to use kudo without the enchantments, but often found it more fun in battle to use them.
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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Neuria
Appearance: Neuria is a somewhat young girl. She has curly purple hair that runs all along her back. Her eyes are dark blue. She's about 5 foot 5. She wears a long black coat that goes down to her feet. Her hands are usually kept in her pockets. Neuria usually has a calm face, even when Crispen appears to be struggling with a task.

Inner World: The world looks like a mix between someone's inner thoughts and a void in space. It is a very dark place, with dark red clouds filling it. Bits of rocks drift around in what seems to be and endless space. The rocks that Crispen and Neuria use to stand on are about a meter in diameter. They form a near perfect sphere. In the background you can see stars and other astral phenomena. While the inner world may be dark, Crispen never has a hard time in seeing it. It's as if everything that he looks at gets some inner light that makes it more visible. The objects themselves don't glow, however, they're just more easily seen.

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : The sword's sheath is a bright green. On it are purple crescent moons. The sword's handle is green and the guard is a purple crescent moon.

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: The sword can slightly alter what the opponent sees, almost like a fire can change the view of things in its surroundings.

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Shikai Description: (Your character or your sword's new appearance)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample: Once while fighting a particularly tough hollow, Crispen believed he would die. The axe that he made was knocked out of his hand and was under the hollow's enormous foot. In a final act of desperation, Crispen screamed at the hollow, cursing him and all their kind. He promised that if he ever got the power to destroy them, he would. The hollow seemed to stay still for moment, looking at Crispen. The hollow began to laugh at him. In extreme anger, Crispen swung his fist at the hollow. The hollow knocked him back and began to torment Crispen. When the hollow was about to administer a finishing move, Crispen instinctively, almost innately, wrapped his hands around what would seem to be a sword hilt. The hollow seemed to back up instantly, afraid of what was happening to Crispen. The battle seemed to have froze, both combatants were staring at the new sword that entered the battle. The spiritual pressure emanating from Crispen was crushing the hollow. It only took two swings of his sword to kill the hollow. Several weeks later, Crispen entered the Soul Reaper Academy.

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S K I L L S H E E T

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General Skills
• Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills
• Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
• Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

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Comments/Notes: Alright man, your app looks great. The only thing that's missing is that you add an appearance. Right now we have no idea idea what your character looks like! Gotta fix that XP
Tier: N/A Till fixed

Moved to Inactive WIP.

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