Akuma Aisudoragon [Approved; 1-2]

GENETICS

Character Name: Akuma Aisudoragon

Character True Age: 419

Character Appearance Age: 21

Character Gender: Male

Current Tier: 1-2 Before Major Overhaul

Orientation: Cuatro Espada

Akuma despises the ex-Espada, especially Ashlei Clixx, because he feels they betrayed their own species by combining their forces with the demons to form Shadowfall. He firmly believes the Arrancar are the ultimate fighting force, so it makes sense for him to look down on Arrancar working with demons, whom he considers to be pathetic. Ever since the Espada joined forces with demons to form Shadowfall, Akuma has become a rogue Arrancar, waiting for his chance to destroy any and all Arrancar/Hollow's within that pathetic organization. However, due to a respect for certain powerful Arrancar, Akuma is willing to set aside his hatred in order to join Shadowfall again, so he can get the chance to slaughter more Shinigami.

Personality:

Akuma can be quite cold to those he deems unworthy of his attention. He believes he surpasses all in combat capabilities and intelligence, exept for those he serves aka the Espada. This gives him an air of arrogance. He has a soft side for those he believes has potential to be great. However, even if they seem to have potential, if they threaten those he is loyal to, he will fight to the death. This means that while he does respect those that are great, if they threaten the higher ranked Espada, he is willing to do everything in his power to destroy their very being (though first he'll want to torture them!).

He does not like having allies in battle because he believes they would just slow him down. If someone comes to his aid, especially someone from another organization (or a demon), Akuma is very likely to interrupt his current battle and go after his so-called 'ally' with such ferocity that it is better to just leave him be as far as combat goes. This usually leads to him being teamed up on, which he likes because then he "has more souls to torture", and it usually means he would be the star of the battle, and perhaps get the chance to show his power to his superiors. If he is helping an Espada in battle, he will use all of his powers to show off for the Espada. He mocks those he fights, even if he is losing, and is a very sarcastic individual in that regard. This also means he refuses to assist allies, even if they are near death, if he is not given permission to take complete control of the battle.

When in battle, he can be quite cruel, reveling in the pain and helplessness of his enemies, as Akuma especially finds enjoyment in injuring, slaughtering, and destroying friends of his opponent before their very eyes. He feels pleasure out of making his opponents suffer, sometimes going so far as to torture his enemies on the battlefield, despite the potential consequences of such actions, such as being taken by surprise by another opponent. Even though he can be quite careless because of his need to inflict pain, he is quite adept at predicting enemy movements. However, he is not a master at strategizing, instead relying on his own abilites to over power his enemies. His intelligence is slightly above average, as he isn't really a reader, but isn't stupid either as he has led a long life.

Due to the circumstances of Shadowfall forming, and Akuma's reaction to it, he has developed a taste for Arrancar blood. He now wishes to kill any and all Arrancar in Shadowfall, no matter what, and is willing to do pretty much anything to slaughter them. Though, they might need some torturing first, don't you think? Akuma certainly does. In his best dreams, he is slowly killing each and every Arrancar and Hollow in Shadowfall with every tool he can to make it as painful as physically possible. However, this doesn't apply to Arrancar ranked higher than him or in general (such as Akanade being ranked higher in the Hollow Monarch), as he does hold some degree of respect for those stronger or higher ranked than himself.

Akuma is a very instinctual person, preferring to rely on his 'gut feeling' than on other information. This tends to lead him down paths many others might not be willing to take, but it also means he is able to reap the rewards a more 'logical' man may miss out on. This is especially significant in combat, as this means Akuma is more prone to being able to unconsciously discover how an opponent's ability or abilities work instead of being stuck unable to figure anything out and ending up dead. He could be compared to Zaraki Kenpachi in this regard, as he prefers to use his own killer instinct to deduce things instead of being caught up on specific details, making him a very formidable for indeed. Akuma also possesses an extremely ferocious killer instinct, as he is able to frighten weaker beings by making even relatively simple actions, and is a very scary person as well, in general.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:

While in base form, this Arrancar is 5'11" tall and weighs 168 pounds. Akuma wears a white long-sleeved t-shirt underneath a white vest with black lining, both of which are relatively loose. Underneath his white long-sleeved shirt, Akuma wears a near-skin tight black shirt that has sleeves that extend past the cuffs of his overshirt. On his lower body, Akuma dons white pants that are loose, similar to kung-fu pants, as they allow quite a bit of freedom when it comes to movement. On both of his hands, he has white tape that covers the lower parts of his palm and hand, and extend all the way up his arms to his shoulders. Akuma has long, silky smooth black hair, long enough to extend to his waist. His facial features are relatively sharp, which gives him a handsome appearance to most people. He has extremely deep blue eyes that are piercing, making it appear as though he looks right into you or through you.

Bone Appearance:
On the back of his head there is a part of bone. It is usually hidden by hair, but when he uses Ressereccion, it becomes more visible, appearing to be a half circle attached to either side of his head.

Hollow Hole:
His Hollow hole is located on the left side of his ribs, hidden by his clothing.

Reitsu Colour:
His Reitsu color is an extremely dark black with an odd tint that makes all of his energy attacks resemble crude oil.

ZANPAKUTÔ

Zanpakutō Name:
Doragonzukurō, meaning "Dragons Claw"

Sealed Zanpakutô:
His Sealed Zanpakutō consists of two basic katana, with a few differences. The main difference is the length. These swords are about 4 feet long each, being much longer than normal katana. These blades dont have sheathes as they are summoned at will by Akuma. The handles are quite long, at about 18 inches long, he can easily fit both hands on either blades' handle. The blades themselves arent extraordinary in every way, just being longer versions of a normal katana blade, though due to being Zanpakutō, they possess high cutting power and incredible endurance for swords.

Racial Abilities:

Cero: Also known as the Hollow Flash, this is the signature energy-based technique of both Hollows and Arrancar alike. This technique involves charging spiritual energy at a specific point, and then unleashing it as a very powerful blast of energy. The attack power of a Cero depends on both the skill and energy levels of the user, and as such Akuma has a very powerful Cero indeed. Possessing above-captain level power, Akuma can really, really pack a punch with his Hollow Flash technique. Akuma has a much more concentrated Cero than many other Arrancar, which means it is both more powerful and faster moving than average, but also happens to be much smaller than average as well. However, this may be considered a good thing as it allows him to surprise opponents with it more often than perhaps someone who has a humongous Cero. Due to his energy normally being a pitch black that reflects light in the same way oil does, Akuma's Cero is of the same coloring. Also, while Akuma usually fires it from the tip of his index fingers, he also possesses the ability to fire them from the tips or edges of his Zanpakutō, giving him more chances to catch an opponent off guard.

Gran Rey Cero: There are two things absolutely forbidden to do within the confines of the Los Noches city-castle. The first forbidden action is for Espada ranked Cuatro and up to release their Ressureccion while inside Los Noches, while the second action is the use of the Gran Rey Cero only Espada have access to. Being part of the Espada, Akuma possesses access to the mighty Gran Rey Cero, making him very dangerous indeed. This version of the normal Cero technique is very much stronger than it, making it seem extraordinarily weak in comparison to this monster of a technique. It works by combining the blood of the user with their energy in order to create a much more powerful Cero. It is many times more powerful than a normal Cero, capable of disturbing the fabric of space. upon release, it seems to spin like a razor as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. Akuma's is especially powerful because it compresses much more than an average Arrancar's, and as such is an extraordinarily dangerous technique, noteworthy for being powerful enough to destroy all of Los Noches in a single attack. Akuma's is a very dark black, however due to its reality-distortion properties, seems to reflect light oddly, and thus appears to be multiple colors at the same time, similar to gasoline.

Cero Oscuras: Though the Gran Rey Cero is extremely powerful in its own right, the top ranking Espada, aka Cuatro and up, have access to an even more powerful technique. This technique, also known as the Black Hollow Flash, is so ridiculously powerful that it is fully capable of overcoming even highly-ranked Kidō spells, as well as destroying the vast majority of barriers or shields people are capable of producing, and is only furthered in strength by the fact that Akuma possesses both a level of spiritual energy that surpasses even that of Gotei Captains, as well as a very high skill in the use of the Cero technique, making it a very dangerous technique in his hands. This technique has been noted to essentially swallow up all light in the area, giving it the nickname of the 'Pitch Black Cero', and its sheer power is partially responsible for such a side effect. Akuma's Cero Oscuras is extraordinarily dark, to the point where it appears to be a vacuum, as while a normal Arrancar's spiritual energy color changes the hue of the Oscuras to match said energy, Akuma's is already black, and as such only serves it make it even darker. This technique has been noted to be able to wipe out even more than the Gran Rey can, and as it is very concentrated in power when Akuma uses it, that should come as no surprise.

RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:
Drako Lorde

Resereccion Release Phrase:
I am going to torture your soul for time immemorial!

Release Actions:
After saying the Ressureccion Release Phrase for himself, his entire body is covered in a bright blue glow as his body begins to morph into a more draconian-appearance. The energy is strong enough to cause massive winds centered from his body, as the sheer amount of energy is enough to make weak opponents quake in fear. After a few seconds, flashes of red can be seen inside the blue mass of energy, which foreshadows his ability to use fire in his Ressureccion form. After another few seconds, the energy disperses, and his new form is revealed to his opponents.

Resereccion Appearance:

His body has shifted into a half-drake, half-human appearence. His sword turned into 2 seperate blades. Grows horns out of his head, and gains white scales that cover his entire body. Armor covers his right arm, torso, and right leg. Also grows a snow white tail. A 3rd blade is attached to his left arm. He is now about 7'3" and weighs 342 pounds.

Resereccion Abilities:

Ice Bomb: Destruction: Akuma can create snowball-sized balls, made out of pure ice (and some reitsu), and can use them as offensive weapons. By infusing some explosive Spiritual power into the Ice, he can make them explode on contact, turning into giant explosions of ice. The explosion is extremely cold, going even below -150 degrees Celsius. It is also quite powerful, though it is more so in size, reaching a diameter of 50-60 meters. He can also plant them on the ground as mines, and by saying "Ice Bomb: Destruction", they will all implode at once.

Fire Bomb: Destruction: Akuma can create flaming energy spheres that possess a powerful destructive force. Usually, they would just blow up into flames when thrown at someone or something, but this attack is somewhat different. By infusing his own Reitsu into the center, he can make them explode into larger, more powerful, energy-based explosions, and can cause much more damage than just a normal fire ball, with the explosion itself reaching a size of about 50-60 meters. The heat is also reaching heights of 3000 degrees Fahrenheit. He can also plant them on the ground as mines, and by saying "Fire Bomb: Destruction", they will all implode at once.

Fusion Elemental Bomb: Destruction: This is a combination attack of his "Ice Bomb Destruction" and "Fire Bomb Destruction" attacks. By creating a Fire Bomb in his left hand, and an Ice bomb in his right hand (or the opposite), he can fuse them together to make a much more potent attack. The attack itself utilizes both elements quite effectively: when the explosion occurs, the ice freezes things in the center and causes damage, while the fire shoots out in every direction, creating a damaging wave of heat and energy fused together. The wave of energy extends to about 100 meters away from the center of the explosion, while the ice affects an area of 15 meters around the center of the explosion. If caught in the ice, you would feel like you are freezing to death and being burned alive at the same time.

Ice Armor: Akuma can manipulate his ice to cover his entire body and form a literal "Ice Armor" around his body. The ice is quite thick, being about 2-3 inches thick, and its quite durable as well as it is extremely hard. The ice is basically infused into his scales, meaning he can move his body quite easily, though he does suffer from a significant speed loss. Though, nothing to major. This ice armor lasts for 6 posts, or until it is destroyed.

Ice Bomb: Lance: By using his control over ice, Akuma can create a 9 foot long lance of ice. The lance is very sharp at its point, sharp enough to pierce most objects, and it is also much more durable than his normal ice, and when it hits something, it causes ice to form on that surface. Also, the spear can be spun in a circle rapidly to act as a shield. By inserting some of his own Reitsu into the Spear, he can make it quite volatile. When thrown, the spear explodes on impact into a large dome of freezing energy, being able to cover objects in a thick layer of ice when they are hit.

Fire Bomb: Lance: By manipulating fire using his specialized powers, he can create a spear made of pure energy and fire. The lance possesses a high amount of piercing power, even though it is made of fire, and can practically drill through a lot of objects. While the fire and heat does not actually affect Akuma, it can in fact be used to scorch, burn, and melt people and objects, and can be used quite devastatingly. He can insert s portion of spiritual energy into it and turn it into a projectile by throwing it, and then a large explosion would occur because of said spiritual energy. The explosion is made up of energy AND damaging fire, and can thus be used to scorch everything around the explosion center.

Fusion Elemental Bomb: Spear: By combining both his special fire and his dry ice manipulation, he can combine both (along with some spiritual energy) and create a highly powerful multiple elemental spear. The spear itself radiates both hot and cold temperatures, and appears to be an ice spear on fire. It can not only freeze objects but also burn them, as it can shoot out both fire and ice from its tip. The fire and ice appear to be streams, acting like a fire hose to douse objects and people in dry ice and rietsu-infused fire. Also, by adding in more spiritual energy into the spear, Akuma can make it highly volatile, and by throwing it, it can explode into a massive sphere of fire, ice, and spiritual energy. The ice energy spreads outwards, freezing basically anything it touches, while the fire energy stays in the center, forming a super-hot sphere of fiery energy, about 15 meters in diameter.

Ice Bomb: Torturous Gear: This is considered to be Akumas ultimate ability while in his Ressureccion form. By using his manipulation over dry ice, he can form is and change it to become not only a very durable suit of armor that covers his entire body, but also a large, round shield that he holds with his left hand. It also covers the main katana he uses with his right hand in this ice, basically doubling its attack power. The Ice Bomb: Torturous Gear is resistant to heat-based techniques/abilities, as it is extremely cold to the point of being able to withstand (most) fire without melting, however this does NOT mean the armor is invulnerable to fire. It can just withstand basic to advanced fire, however put in enough heat and Akuma can say goodbye to the Torturous gear. All of Akuma's ice-based techniques are enhanced, while fire-based techniques are weakened while this armor is active. This ability constantly sucks energy from Akuma at a moderate rate.

Fire Bomb: Torturous Gear: Considered to be Akuma's ultimate ability while in his Ressureccion form, Akuma's Fire Bomb: Torturous Gear is the opposing element opposite to his Ice Bomb: Torturous Gear technique. This ability is based around condensing super-heated spiritual energy-infused flames to cover his body and weapons to create an extremely powerful set of armor in order to help him out in combat. While Ice Bomb: Torturous Gear is mainly focused on defense, Fire Bomb: Torturous Gear is built solely for offense; when activated, these super-condensed flames coat both of Akuma's weapons as well as his entire body. Due to being very intense flames, this technique does in fact provide a good boost to Akuma's defense, however not in the "durability" sense. and more in the "don't hit me, I'm hotter than an oven" sense. The boost to his offense is much more considerable and effective than that to his defense; his weapons not only gain a huge amount of bonus cutting force, but also provide a powerful scorching side effect, one powerful enough to suck all of the moisture out of the air and help add mass-destruction force to his attacks. All of Akuma's fire-based techniques are enhanced, while ice-based techniques are weakened while this armor is active. This ability constantly sucks ability from Akuma at a moderate rate.

Fusion Elemental Bomb: Ultimate Torturous Gear: This is, truly, Akuma's ultimate Ressureccion ability, as it combines the powerful defensive bonus from his Ice Bomb: Torturous Gear with the advanced offensive bonus from his Fire Bomb: Torturous Gear technique, creating a much more powerful set of armor than either separate techniques. First, Akuma's body is covered in the very durable and dense dry ice from his Ice Bomb technique, though instead of gaining a shield, his body's armor is stronger than it normally is. The dry ice is then coated in a layer of highly intense flames created by Akuma, which, by the way, cannot melt his ice armor. The flames add even more cutting and destructive force to Akuma's weapons in this form than they do in the normal Fire Bomb: Torturous Gear technique. All element-based abilities are boosted by a moderate amount while this armor is on Akuma, especially Fusion Elemental techniques. However, due to being a fusion of both of the normal Torturous Gear techniques, this ability constantly saps a relatively large amount of energy from Akuma, and also slowly damages his body from the strain of keeping this armor active.

DUES EX RESSERECION

Dues Ex Name:
Dragonic Crystalis

Dues Ex Release Phrase:
I release you, oh mighty Frost Dragon! Join me, and inflict infinite Pain!

Dues Ex Release Actions:
Takes his blades and stabs himslef in the chest. Ice comes out of the wound, completely enveloping himself. A smog appears around him, which distorts his image. The smog is very, very cold at sub-zero temperatures. The transformation itself cant be seen because of the smog, which adds to the mysteriousness.

Dues Ex Appearance:

Turns into a full powered Ice Drake. His body is covered in super-hard scales, and his tail grows. His horns change, and develop, and spread down his spine. Goes from white to blue. He gets even bigger, at about 16 feet tall, and weighs close to 2 tons. Also, a sickle grows out of the end of his tail. His wings are huge, being larger than his body. He has a wingspan of 38 feet.

Dues Ex Abilities:

Decreased Speed: While in this gigantic draconian form, Akuma loses base speed due to the massive size of his body and the majorly increased mass, meaning while he is normally a speed-demon, that means nothing in this form. This isn't necessarily as bad as it sounds due to his strength and durability gaining a massive boost, but against speed-based opponents, he can't do as much as he normally could while in this form. This is one of his reasons to stay in his Ressureccion form while fighting fast opponents, but when it comes to bruisers, this is his favorite form he can take.

Flight: Now that he has wings, he can fly. He can fly quite fast, at about 200 miles per hour. When flying at max speed, he appears to be a flash. Can only fly about 10, 000 feet in the air, reaching less than 2 miles, which is due to his extremely heavy weight. Despite the high movement speed, he is slower than his normal average speed due to the added mass this form brings along with it.

Senses of the Dragon: With his new dragon body, he can see miles away. he can also "zoom in" on specific locations. He has also gained hearing that is about 10x more accurate than a normal humans hearing, able to hear wispers from almost a mile away. Can smell Shinigami from miles away. Each individual has his/her own unique smell to him. This attribute also adds to his reflexes, especially when it comes to his wings. If he thinks he is about to get hit, his wings can react extremely quickly and block the attack, which is good because his wings are pretty durable.

Draco Blizzard: Creates a huge blizzard about 2 miles in diameter. This blizzards creates hail that varies in size, from golfballs to SUV's. It enhances his powers 2 fold. This blizzard helps him blend in and can even make him move faster. This technique is automatic, as it activates as soon as Akuma enters his Deus Ex Ressureccion form, making it a passive ability. This ability is great for those who have trouble fighting ice opponents, though a downside is that other ice-users are more likely to be accustomed to it and even have the advantage of the terrain becoming an icy mess which could just end up assisting them in the future of the battle.

Enhanced Physical Strength and Durability: Akuma gains a huge boost to both his physical strength and his basic durability (and Hierro, as his reitsu levels increase exponentially in this form). He can easily toss around massive objects like nothing, and put a tremendous amount of force into his hits and blows, causing massive damage just by hitting opponents (though it's a little harder to hit opponents now due to his decreased overall speed). While in this dragon form, Akuma has large, dense, and extremely durable scales infused with not only spiritual energy but also his super-powered dry ice, meaning now he can take hits that would previously cripple him like a champ, able to walk away from normally-fatal wounds.

*While in this form, Akuma retains all abilities from his Resserreccion form, except about 2x larger and 3x stronger than they were before.

PAST

History:

Human Life
He was born in a small village about 2000 miles away from Karakura town. His family was very rich, but he didnt get to see much of his mother and father when he was a child. When he turned 12, his family went bankrupt and abandoned him on a street corner far away from his home. He ended up poor and living on the streets until he was 19. He didnt get to finish school, and always regretted not going back. He decided he was going to hunt down his parents and find out why they left him.
He realized he would need money to do this, so he stole the identification of a man he met in a subway, and got work at a cryogenics lab. When he turned 20, he robbed a bank and just barely escaped. However, the police got a picture of his face so he had to go into hiding. He hid out in the lab he worked at. After almost a year, the police traed him back to the lab. When they raided it, he fell into a cryogenics machine and froze to death.

Soul Life and Hollow Life

He stayed on Earth because he never got revenge on his parents. He developed a need to inflict pain and harm upon other beings, which increased the speed at which his chain detiorated. When he turned into a Hollow, he gained horns and his body covered itself in scales. Resembles his Ressereccion form. He wandered around looking for prey to kill and feast on. After realizing he wasnt growing any stronger, he decided to consume some of his fellow Hollows. He came upon a small group of Hollows that he joined, and later surprised them by eating them.

After consuming his brethren for long enough, him and the other Hollows evolved into a Menos Grande. He was stuck fighting all the other Hollows in order to control their new form. He wanted to torure and kill so badly that eventually he took control. Because he was now in control, his mask changed and started to look more dragon-esque, because of his own notable features.

He became furious with the fact that he had very few powers, with his Cero as the main one. He became so enraged, that he went on a rampage and consumed countless numbers of other Menos Grandes. After long enough, he began to change again, into a new form. This new form, Adjuchas, turned him into a dragon-like shape. He turned completely blue, grew giant horns, his body was covered in scales yet again, and he also grew a giant, spiked tale with a sickle at the end. He also developed new powers, such as High-Speed Regeneration. He became famous in Hueco Mundo because of all the Hollows he totured just for fun. After meeting some Cero Espada, he changed. He realized how powerful they were, and decided he wanted to serve them until he became as strong. This is about when he took on the form he has now.

Akuma joined the Espada, and immediately obtained the position of Sexta thanks to his power he possessed before joining. These were probably the best days of Akuma's life as an Arrancar, as he had free reign over torturing various people, humans, Shinigami, and even Hollows and Arrancar. However, this would all chance soon, as Ashlei Clixx was preparing something, Akuma's major cause of hatred towards her stems from this. Due to the weakening strength of the Espada, they decided to merge with the demon organization of Sinfall to form the more-powerful Shadowfall, a combination of Hueco Mundo and the Demon Worlds' resources and power. While this was a good strategic plan on the Espada's side, Akuma just saw it as Ashlei abandoning the Arrancar species to join forces with the filthy and disgusting demons of Sinfall. This is what makes Akuma want to hunt down all of the Arrancar in Shadowfall, and slaughter them. This is his current goal, and he'll do anything to reach it. Including joining K-World.

RP Sample:

As the sun faded, the Shinigami snapped awake. "What the hell? How long was I asleep? Well, better start training again....." He walked away from the large oak tree that had given him shade while he slept. As he walked into the empty clearing, he realized it was almost night fall. As the sun dimmed, he trained unrelentingly, always trying to hit harder, or run faster. He decided it was about time for him to practice his techniques some more, maybe even make them stronger. So he went to the area where he left his Zanpakutō, and picked it up. Walking back to the center of the clearing, he drew his azure blade from its ice-like sheath, commenting on how the sun made the blade glitter and sparkle like clear ice.

"Which technique shall I start with? Maybe I'll juss start with some basic jenjutsu techniques...." And so he he began to practice the sword style kenjutsu. As his blade whipped through the air at high speeds, causing slight breezes, he realized just how far he had come as a Shinigami. The he stopped and surveyed the area around him. He could sense something unknown to him.......but what? He eyed the leafy bushes on the outer rim of the clearing, the huge trees that loomed over him like guardians, but nothing seemed out of place. He then noticed a larger concentration of spiritual energy, and turned around. Unlike the other, smaller energy which just seemed malevolent in nature, this seemed like evil incarnate. "Its moving.....but what is it?" As it got closer, he realized just how large the energy was.

As he was surveying the trees at the far end of the clearing, a hulking black mass appeared. This monster looked to be 3 stories high, with a skull-like mask and a row of white spikes that jutted out of the area around its neck. It was so big, it appeared to be almost as the trees surrounding it. He knew what it was, for it couldnt be anything other. "Its a....Gillian class Menos. But what would one be doing here? Theres no way I can fight it......" Although he resented the idea of fleeing, he decided it would be the best course of action. However, although slow, the hulking Hollow attacked, sending a super powerful Cero at him as he tried to run. He then realized he wouldnt be able to escape. "If its a fight you want, then thats exactly what your'e gonna get!" He knew he wouldnt be able to fight it without releasing his full power, so he decided to release his Zanpakutō right then and there. With Hook Swords in hand, he flew into the sky. When he deemed himself high enough, Irikani flew down towards the Hollow, spinning in the air, appearing to be a drill. However, when he hit the Gillians head, it did little to nothing. Needing to reassess the enemy, he used his Ice Shield technique. "This wont stop him for long.......wait. what is that?" he noticed a small area underneath a tree that seemed to just be.....dead. Noticing droplets of a water-like substance, he glanced up at the tree and noticed something.....a small feline creature.........

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Eye of the Dragon: By making direct eye contact with his enemy, he can freeze their movements momentarily. However, if he loses eye contact the ability cancels out. This is mainly used when his opponent is stuck or can't escape at that moment. Or when they are charging a Shikai or Bankai. Can also be used to make the enemy see what he sees, confusing the opponent. Lasts for 2 posts.

Alright dude, this entire ability is a big no-no. You cannot just freeze an opponent entirely, its unfair unless the tier levels are way apart. (Ex:4 tier against a 1 tier.) Second, you cannot freeze them by looking at them. Looks are unavoidable and its a godmod. Sorry dude.

And illusions are also a big no-no, because they can easily be abused. Especially from eye techniques.

Frozen Touch: He an control his own body temperature, however he cant make it go above 100 degrees Farenheit. He can make his body temperature go down to around -20 degrees Farenheit. When his temperature is as low as it can go, he can freeze things he touches in a 1 inch layer of ice. Can be used on his weapon, making his basic attacks slightly stronger. Because this is his normal form, the ice is quite fragile compared to when he goes Ressereccion. He cant freeze anything with a large reitsu. Mainly used for torture.

As long as its only freezing one limb at a time, the ability should be fine. Of course it should be energy consuming, as every move is in on way or another. For the sake of keeping things fair, you cant freeze enemies a tier level higher than you.

Frost Regeneration: If injured, he can hold his hand above the injury, causing it to seal or reform. If he recreates major arteries, he can heal himself faster, meaning major injuries help heal smaller ones. Cant heal injuries too serious, such as entire limbs (can heal up to elbow or knee). When he leaves Resserreccion, some injuries remain.

The abillity seems fine as long as it can't heal the injuries in 2-3 posts time. It helps with regeneration, but doesn't completely regenerate. And like ive said before, it has to consume some type of energy. As all abilities do.

Resists fire, and can slice through most fire.

It cannot completely resist fire. Make sure you write that in. And no, it can't slice through fire.
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Ice Armor: Covers his entire body in harder-than-steel, 3 inch thick, Ice which lasts 2-3 posts, unless is destroyed. Protects him from weak, and mediocre Ceros and Shikais. If he gets the chance to charge this ability, he can make it even thicker and stronger. Usually only Shikais and Bankais can destroy it, however if the opponent is strong enough (multiple tiers higher, they can destroy it with a normal strike (if uncharged).

This ability really doesn't have a problem. Just that if you put armor on, it always causes a speed reduction on you. (Even if slight). Does it have a cool-down? Say if i break it, can you put it back up next post? And. Every ability costs some sort of energy. <----Yeah i sound like a broken record.

Edited. Anything else?

Im glad you checked my application and calmly told me what I need to fix. I love it when that happens ^_^

Still being worked on