Perseus Nobel
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Perseus Nobel
Sat Jul 02, 2011 1:55 pm
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General Information
Name: Perseus Nobel
Age: 200 but looks in his 20's
Gender: MALE
Overall Appearance
Personality:
Sexuality: He is openly gay and is not shy about it. Whenever
he sees a hot guy he just goes over there and tries to get a big piece of that
action even if the man is straight, but he does know his limits and stops immediately
when he knows the other guys isn’t gay.
Brains: He has a very large base of knowledge that was
basically installed into him when he was created. He is very creative and has
extremely good memory.
Prankster: He is well known for being very light hearted and
using his powers to pull pranks on people.
Appearance:
Height:6 feet
Weight:
Natural Abilities
Powers
Powers
Power Development Stage 1 Appearance: He looks the same
Power Development Stage 1 Abilities:
Hydrogen:
Perseus crates balls of fire that shoot out at the opponent.
Oxygen:
Perseus creates a vast area of oxygen that helps improve healing but is also
very explosive if flame or spark is introduced to it. Can corrode and oxidize
objects.
Carbon:
Perseus throws long super strong chains of carbon.
Benzene:
Creates a Hexagonal shield of air.
Diamond:
Creates spikes of super hard diamond that can be used as swords and other
weapons.
Power
Development Stage 2 Appearance:Perseus’ right cheek.
Power Development Stage 2 Abilities: Abilities in 1 are augmented.
Abilities
in 1 are augmented.
Static
Storm: With augmented electromagnetic powers Perseus can create extreme
discharges of electricity to cause damage and charge objects. Though normally
he can do this but in the second state he has an EXTREME amount of increase.
Titanium:
Perseus skin turns a grayish white as it is covered in a protective coating of
Titanium and titanium dioxide. This gives him increased defense and increases
his strength.
Background/Roleplay Sample
Background:
Creation:
Unlike other humans Perseus has no mother. In 2211 the Russian military was
preparing a special kind of weapon to fight things such as hollows if they were
attacked. The name of the project was Philosophers Stone. The aim was to create
a pseudo-human being that had the ability to live for centuries and had the
abilities to produce insane amounts of enriched uranium if the time came. This
is where Perseus came into existence. Perseus has no belly button because he
was made in a lab. The scientists made it so that his DNA could replicate its
own telomeres to keep the important parts of his DNA intact and safe from mutations
extending the amount of life. They also installed into his brain all of the knowledge
he needed to survive in the world because well he had no real parents. They
also gave him free will so that if they needed to let him be a “Normal” person
he could be a normal person. He was taken out of the lab and “activated” when
he was biologically 20 years old.
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Re: Perseus Nobel
Sat Jul 02, 2011 9:04 pm
Personality is fair.
>>>>Some of the attributes are combined awkwardly like Friendship/Kindness/Narcissism.
>>>>Having a reputation in schools as a start up is questionable because Perseus is made in a laboratory, been that way for years, then he goes to Karakura to open a jewelry store, then be that well known in schools? Do make an in-depth explanation about that.
History is questionable.
>>>>Why Karakura of all places?
>>>>Why the Russian government was getting sick of him in the first place?
Abilities are concerning.
>>>>Radiation? The only character with that is Radioactive, so you should ask Frost about it.
>>>>Super hard diamonds? Where are the weaknesses?
>>>>Hexagonal shield made by air? Realistically, that is pretty useless against anything unless you provided the velocity for the force against the mass and resistance force of the assault. Not to mention the penetration and displacement of the kinetic energy before becoming potential energy.
>>>>Titanium? How does it increase strength when all it did is increasing the durability by coating the skin?
>>>>Oxygen was rather useless because oxygen is the same air that we usually breathe 24/7 onward, why bother creating more?
>>>>Vacuum is real concerning as cutting off the air supply while causing expansion IN an object? That implies that it is an auto-hit measure.
>>>>Some of the attributes are combined awkwardly like Friendship/Kindness/Narcissism.
>>>>Having a reputation in schools as a start up is questionable because Perseus is made in a laboratory, been that way for years, then he goes to Karakura to open a jewelry store, then be that well known in schools? Do make an in-depth explanation about that.
History is questionable.
>>>>Why Karakura of all places?
>>>>Why the Russian government was getting sick of him in the first place?
Abilities are concerning.
>>>>Radiation? The only character with that is Radioactive, so you should ask Frost about it.
>>>>Super hard diamonds? Where are the weaknesses?
>>>>Hexagonal shield made by air? Realistically, that is pretty useless against anything unless you provided the velocity for the force against the mass and resistance force of the assault. Not to mention the penetration and displacement of the kinetic energy before becoming potential energy.
>>>>Titanium? How does it increase strength when all it did is increasing the durability by coating the skin?
>>>>Oxygen was rather useless because oxygen is the same air that we usually breathe 24/7 onward, why bother creating more?
>>>>Vacuum is real concerning as cutting off the air supply while causing expansion IN an object? That implies that it is an auto-hit measure.
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Re: Perseus Nobel
Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:43 pm
Name: Perseus Nobel
Age: 200 looks like he is in his 20’s
Gender: Male
Personality:
Sexuality: He is openly gay and is not shy about it. Whenever
he sees a hot guy he just goes over there and tries to get a big piece of that
action even if the man is straight, but he does know his limits and stops immediately
when he knows the other guys isn’t gay.
Brains: He has a very large base of knowledge that was
basically installed into him when he was created. He is very creative and has
extremely good memory.
Prankster: He is well known for being very light hearted and
using his powers to pull pranks on people.
(A picture or summary will do)
Height: 6 feet tall
Weight:
Powers
Fusion/Fission:
Perseus uses his control over electromagnetic forces to force atoms to change
into other atoms. The immense amount of energy released from the act is then
moved into Perseus’ body and is stored there or Perseus can transfer it into
other objects making them bombs. If the energy is not transferred Perseus can
cause the object to explode after its usefulness is over. He can also create
chemical compounds that don’t need energy to be released such as: salt, water,
rust, etc.
Hydrogen:
Perseus crates balls of fire that shoot out at the opponent.
HCl:
Perseus creates a corrosive mist of hydrochloric acid that can burn and corrode
objects and people.
Carbon:
Perseus throws long super strong chains of carbon.
Increased
resistance to Radioactivity, heat, cold and is immune to electrical discharges.
A red star forms on Perseus’ right cheek.
Power Development Stage 2 Abilities: Abilities in 1 are augmented.
Uranium:
Perseus creates a piece of highly refined Uranium that makes an area of intense
radioactivity that causes intense burns and death if over exposed. He can cause
the uranium to explode in a small nuclear explosion.
Titanium:
Perseus skin turns a grayish white as it is covered in a protective coating of
Titanium and titanium dioxide. This gives him increased defense and increases
his strength. It increases his strength because the titanium makes bonds to the actin and myocin in the muscle fibers increasing their strength and recoil.
Creation:
Unlike other humans Perseus has no mother. In 2211 the Russian military was
preparing a special kind of weapon to fight things such as hollows if they were
attacked. The name of the project was Philosophers Stone. The aim was to create
a pseudo-human being that had the ability to live for centuries and had the
abilities to produce insane amounts of enriched uranium if the time came. This
is where Perseus came into existence. Perseus has no belly button because he
was made in a lab. The scientists made it so that his DNA could replicate its
own telomeres to keep the important parts of his DNA intact and safe from mutations
extending the amount of life. They also installed into his brain all of the knowledge
he needed to survive in the world because well he had no real parents. They
also gave him free will so that if they needed to let him be a “Normal” person
he could be a normal person. He was taken out of the lab and “activated” when
he was biologically 20 years old.
Moving to
Karakura: 200 years later the Russian government was getting sick of Perseus
and wanted to get rid of him immediately without killing him. They gave Perseus
millions of dollars and told him to get out. Perseus look around the world and
saw that Karakura was home to many people that had special powers and decided
to move there and maybe open a store. With the money he bought a nice house in
the city and also opened up a Jewelry store in the city called C4. He also works for the karakura town highschool as a chemistry teacher and is very well liked by his students.
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