Hantaro Kusoraki

Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:06 am

S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Hantaro Kusoraki
Gender: Male
Age: 250
Appearance: Hantaro Kusoraki Trtr

A 5 years old kid, standing with the height of 3 foot 4 inches tall.His weight were 53 pounds.His brown hair were brushed down, almost covering both of his eyes.His eyes were silver/grey colours.He wears a silver shirt, that was fit enough to be used, for a kid.And a jeans, which are blue, also for kids.He has small hands and fingers, but had a strength of an adult to hold and lift a zanpakuto.
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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:

Fierce - Even though he was still a kid, he still was a fierce kid.He always fight with those who pisses him off and any of those who annoyed him.He also pick a fight with adult shinigamis' wihout a sword or a zanpakuto.

Kind - Even he is fierce, he still had shown a kind side to old peoples, mostly helping those who in need.He was also showing a kind side to girls/boys that are his age.

Fighter - He fights a lot and picks a lots of fights with most adults and teenagers.But mostly picking a fight to those who are older than him, not younger than him.

Brave - Because of his brave personality, he has no fear to anyone around.Even those who had weapons, zanpakuto or sword.He hasn't show any fear to Byakuya or Kenpachi despite of his bravery.

Lazy - He would usually slack off and starts being lazy when it comes to work, but not lazy when it comes to helping people that are in need.But helping people that AREN'T in need just makes him so lazy and starting to slack off when working or anything that doesn't make sense at all.

Gamblers and Smokers - These people just pisses him off.He hate both gamblers and smokers because if they start doing those unhealthy habits, their life is so ruined, money wasted and of course, health is critically damaged.Gambling can cause a huge problem.Getting into the jail when it comes to gamblings.That's why he hates both gamblers and smokers that doesn't have any sense of humor at all.

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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background:
His life on earth is non-existant.Since he wasn't born in earth, he was borned in Rukongai.His father existance is unknown, because his mother said that his father abandoned him and his mother ever since he was borned.Because he was borned in a poor family, his mother had a habit of gambling.His mother had the habit to gamble because his mother needed money for food and drinks in order to live peacefully with Hantaro.He was forced to beg for money because of his mother's gambling habit.Whenever he gets money after begging, his mother would force him to give them to her.When he refused, his mother would attack him, in a violent way.Hitting him as much as his mother can to get the money.He still refused to give his mother.His mother would took a chair and slams on him.He was badly injured.His mother stole the money away and continue to gamble afterwards.He had been suffer hundreds of years with this burden, he couldn't hold it much longer.

After couldn't hold the pain much longer, he decided to run away from home and not seeing his mother forever again.In Rukongai, he always picking a fight with adults and always wins every fight he goes.His spiritual pressure was so high, reaching to the lieutenant level.He was in an angry state, his eyes seems to be filled with anger, fighting with anyone that dares to fight against him.After a few days later being alone, he heard that his mother died under a mysterious circumstances.It was unknown what was it, he decided to continue his journey.

He was walking around the Rukongai, a shinigami male grabbed his hand quickly wihout warning.The 5 years old boy couldn't resist the anger, he decided to swing the shinigami around and slammed him onto the ground.He decided to visit his mother's funeral.He was only left an orphan, hoping to be adopted or not.He then found himself taken into the shino academy.His basic training was to know how to weild a simple wooden blade and swings it around.He doesn't want to weild a sword, he wanted to be a kido master one day.He decided to join the 13th division, as a member.

He was being a kido "Apprentice".Despite of his skills using kido in such a young age.

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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: N/A
Appearance: N/A
Inner World: N/A

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : N/A

Sealed Zanpakutô Abilities: N/A

PhatomTech: N/A

Other Powers/Abilties:

Immense Strength - He was able to fight hundreds of hollows himself, with a little difficulty only.Even a 5 years old kid would had this kind of strength is impossible for most of the people that was still young enough to have immense strength.

Quick Speed - Despite of his light, small body.His speed was fast enough to caught his enemy off guard with an extremely quick speed.He was able to attack his enemy from every direction.

Kido User - Because he joined the shino academy, he could already use kido spell easily, but needed the incantation to use it.He could use kido spell at such a young age, a 5 years old using kido.Also, using a kido might be easy, but depends what level of his kidou.

Immense Spiritual Power - In his normal state, his spiritual power reached the 3rd seat level.In his angry state, his spiritual power reached to lieutenant level.In his rage state, his spiritual power would reached the captain level.

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R P S A M P L E

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S K I L L S H E E T

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General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Racial Skills

Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:13 pm

Age is conflicting with lore.
>>>>250 earns you a spot as a seated officer if counting the average age of lieutenants.

>>>>If you have not read the new restriction, any new shinigami will have to go through the Shino Academy. The average age of the students are under age 100; any where above means you're out of luck unless you have a talent that overlooks the problem like Kenpachi's amazing fighting skills.

Personality needed more variation.
>>>>It seemed to leaned drastically to the Rage Fighter type, which is pretty flat as a character.

History is rather generic.
>>>>Born in a poor family.

>>>>Gambling parent provided reason for loathing/hateful attitude towards gamblers.

>>>>Abusive parent

>>>>Child leaves parent.

>>>>Child became orphaned.

>>>>Child doing extraordinary things before recruitment.

>>>>Child wanted to be great in something one day.

Powers are highly questionable.

>>>>Immense Strength? HUNDREDS of Hollows? Yet not mentioned in history?

>>>>Quick Speed? Able to attack his enemy from every direction? How can that be possible for someone like him? Not to consider him as a shino academy student.

>>>>Kidou User? Details! Details! I cannot make a solid brick without the good quality clay!

>>>>Immense Spiritual Pressure? It's common to have it raised when hyperactive like being pissed off or serious. But for something like this character, immense does not specify the power he has, he is more of a hardened soul with moderate spiritual pressure. When seeing the key words, "3rd Seat in normal state," "Lieutenant at angry state" and "Captain in rage state," that is when the plug is pulled as overpowered for a shino academy student.

Generally, it seemed to be empathized around the character being "a 5-year-old" despite him being an adult level of 250-year-old.
>>>>A 5 years old kid, standing with the height of 3 foot 4 inches tall.

>>>>Even though he was still a kid, he still was a fierce kid.

>>>>Despite of his skills using kido in such a young age.

>>>>Even a 5 years old kid would had this kind of strength is impossible for most of the people that was still young enough to have immense strength.

>>>>He could use kido spell at such a young age, a 5 years old using kido.

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Conclusion
"Needed more work. The tier will not be given until it is fixed."

Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:36 pm

~Moved to inactive W.I.P~

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Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:41 pm

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