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Teitoku
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Kimmi L'Arachel Mino Empty Re: Kimmi L'Arachel Mino

Thu Jun 30, 2011 4:12 am
I assume you want this checked?

Everything looks fine here, approved for 4-3 on a case of no real powers. I also assume you asked Akemi for using Selena in your history?




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Hayuko
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Kimmi L'Arachel Mino Empty Re: Kimmi L'Arachel Mino

Thu Jun 30, 2011 8:53 pm
White Tigers with red marks and Ligers with bloody fur form around enemy's in the tens. While kitties form and cuddle to Kimmi

In the tens? Or ten? Be more specific with the number. Also
What tier level are the tigers?


Tigers have lightning fangs and poison claws of miasma*

Every poison is different. Depending on how the poison works your tiger could either have it or not. And does the tigers lightning claw have any special effect? Is it ranged, or a simple melee?

freezing anything solid. After contact and freezing, she slaps with her right hand as its incased in a melting flame. slapping the frozen enemy melts the ice and the enemy.

Anything? Like if a cero came at you could just freeze it? Anything is alot of things so, you've got to be more specific.

Also, there has to be a tier limit to this. Like obviously your not going to freeze someone very strong like ketsu or shadin. Also as to melting an enemy.. Im not exactly sure how this abillity works. But im sure you can't just melt an enemy x.x


Silver Viper Claws: Claws of cursed silver and her own miasma. A cut to a lower demon or human or Shinigami could die quickly. The poison is almost always deadly. Easy to conteract but it moves very quickly. Can stop the flow with enough spiritual pressure.

-puts the breaks on the car- ERRRR.
Poison is a very controversial topic on the site. And in such, poison is not allowed unless under very certain circumstances. In this case, the poison seems to just kill off the other user. So its a big no no. The claws have to be just regular claws. SORRY DX


[/b]Kitty Cat Hell Summon: [i]Same as above just more powerful

There has to be some change in appearance or abillity, it can't just be the same. And please fix what i addressed earlier

After using she is left EXTREMELY VUNERABLE. THESE ARE LAST RESORTS!!

Undine - Water
Sylph - Wind
Efreet - Fire
Celsius - Must summon wind and water and combine them. (ICE)

Alright hold up. Right now im going to set some limitations. Your only allowed to summon one elemental spirit at a time. Therefore im sorry but for now, Celsius is gonna poof

Second. You need to write abillities and tier levels on these elementals. Just telling me their element is WAY to vague and can't be approved.

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Kimmi L'Arachel Mino Empty Re: Kimmi L'Arachel Mino

Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:36 pm
It looks much better now, the only things i want you to are.

-Once again The Tigers, Ligers, Kittens, how many can be summoned at a time? Is it ten for each species? (Which is way too many. So no) Or ten in total. Like 3 tigers, 3 Ligers 4 Kittens?

-Lets make the liger tier at 3-3 so people cant claim unfairness in a thread. (If they do, ill rip em to shreds)

-Your Tigers/Ligers can not have poison. Sorry X.x

-And know that the seduction skill can only work against npc weak humans, and not on actual characters. (Unless given consent by that player.... lol)


So fix that and your done.
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Kimmi L'Arachel Mino Empty Re: Kimmi L'Arachel Mino

Thu Jun 30, 2011 10:57 pm
~The Bearer Of Hell Re-Approves~

Tier: 2-3

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