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Shihôin Yoruichi
Shihôin Yoruichi
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 12:04 am
S H I N I G A M I


B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: Shihôin Yoruichi
Gender: Female
Age: 300+
Appearance:
Shihôin Yoruichi  Yoruic10
Cannon Description:
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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:
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B A C K G R O U N D

History/Background:
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Relationship History
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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Flash
Appearance: Shihôin Yoruichi  Light_10
Inner World: The inner world were flash resides is a rather rare place seemingly in and out of dimension's. Thunder cracks every were in the world tho is never seen the sky is constantly flashing with lightning. Small bubbles of places within Flash's mind float around the area. When these bubbles are popped the area changes to whatever was inside the bubble

Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance : It resembles a kodachi or wakizashi

Release: Let The Sky Brighten Come Forth FLASH!!

Shikai Description: First of all before summoning her shikai's power Shihôin Yoruichi holds the blade infront of her in both hand's. Once the release phrase is recited the blade will flash twice with a burning light blinding anyone but the holder. The holder will begin to see the blade become a ball of light and crawl up both hands. They will then stop becoming something that resembles Soi fong's shikai tho the blade is an inch smaller on each gauntlet. The gauntlets are blue and crackle when they are moved. The gauntlets and blade are enough to stop a zanpakuto just like soi fong's

Shikai Abilities: Tho it looks very much like soi fong's ability Shihôin Yoruichi's has the ability to cause a massive amount of pain. An example of this is cutting the neck even a nick is able to paralyze the whole neck or knee due to the amount of pain the wound unleshes whenever moved. A passive ability of the Flash Zanpakuto is that it enhances kido power tenfold

Bankai Description: Similar to the shikai appearance when the bankai is activated a blast of burning light strikes Shihôin Yoruichi from the sky when the power is needed. The light that is summoned can easily kill an opponent holding onto Shihôin Yoruichi. When the light disperses Shihôin Yoruichi's outfit becomes pure white . her skin releases small blasts of light every so often while her zanpakuto blade is now larger two larger blades on her hands.

Bankai Abilities:

The bankai greatly increases Shihôin Yoruichi speed and strength ten fold, The light courses through her body rapidly allowing for a vast healing boost factor. The bankai blades she hold's on her gauntlets now have not only the power to paralyze the area that is struck due to pain but call forth a light ball that homes in on the opponent's wound. The wound is seen giving off a discharge of light which seems to call the light bolt towards the wound. The ligh bolt is enough to easily tear through the body tho the bolts size depends on the size of the wound unlike the pain like paralysation

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay Sample:
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Item's
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Shihôin Yoruichi
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Sat Jun 11, 2011 9:56 pm
S K I L L S H E E T

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Cannon:

Custom:

Bakudo:

Hado:

Misc:

Unnamed:


General Skills
  • Durability: Advanced
  • General Speed: Master
  • Strength: Master
  • Weapon Skill: Advanced


Racial Skills
  • Hoho: Master
  • Kidou: Master
  • Zanjutsu: Advanced
  • Hakuda: Master


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"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."[

"Heart and Soul are connected, what is important is where is the heart."
Taichou
Taichou
神 Glorious Asian
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Joined : 2011-04-12
Posts : 831
Age : 27
Location : Human Realm

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Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:16 am
We really gotta mention this somewhere in the forum... Anyways, when you apply for a canon character, you gotta have an RP sample of them. So, since you're applying for Yoruichi, why not show us how you can RP with her in there?
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Sun Jun 12, 2011 2:11 pm
Finished


"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."[

"Heart and Soul are connected, what is important is where is the heart."

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Portaliya
Portaliya
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TOTM November 2011
Joined : 2011-03-31
Posts : 962
Age : 28
Location : England

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Sun Jun 12, 2011 3:56 pm
Application Checklist
  • Name [x]
  • Appropriate Age [x]
  • Gender [x]
  • Appearance Present [x]
  • Appearance Described in Appropriate Length OR Picture is Visible [x]
  • Appearance is Not Claimed [x]
  • 10 sentences for personality [o]
  • History is of appropriate length [x]
  • Powers are not Godmod/Overpowered [o]
  • Powers are described reasonably enough [o]
  • Application/RP Sample is not in First Person [x]
  • Skills are not filled in (Omit if a Hollow)[x]
  • RP Sample Present (Omit if this is not the first character) [x]
  • RP Sample is 10 sentences [x]


Comments/Notes:

Shunko-Wapu = A far advanced version of the already mighty Shunko, Unlike the Shunko which works by surrounding her back and arms with pressurized Kidō The Shunko-Wapu cover's her entire body and creates wing's of Pressurized Kido upon her back. This has made it so she has to wear specialized undergarments to avoid becoming naked within a battle leaving only her pants and bra on. Much like the original Shunko this technique can allow her to instantly neutralize an opponent's movement, apart from enhancing their arms and legs for battle. The Kidō itself can also be controlled and fired at opponents from her body, and can be used to create massive explosions. Not only this the special and pressurized kido acts not only outside of the body but inside aswell. The kido within acts like lightning manipulating and speeding up her cell''s allowing for a vast amount of speed to be utilized for her this means around 5x more than her normal speed. Not only that it seems to speed up the healing process greatly. In this form she can use the same techniques that can be used in shunko tho at a more advanced range.

Your grammar is off in this. Also, whats up with the near enough total strip? And.. as for healing process. WHAT HEALING PROCESS. Also, you word it like it enhances their arms and legs for battle..

Also, you should remove all the misc spells, as they are mostly unclassifed/non-canon Kido, and unnamed too.

As for the other Kidos, take Itto Kaso/Kuroitsugi out there. While its reasonable to say that Yourichi is a master at Kido, I doubt she would EVER use Kido as high as that.

Burst Wart : One of Yourichi's hidden and un-seen techniques. By utilzing her true speed she can literally Teleport in a way unlike many other's briefly leaving the dimension for a total of 0.1 nano second's the longer the distance the more spiritual energy it takes.

This is insane. 0.1 Nanosceonds? Not even SHADIN, -THE- Fastest on the site could go that fast.. 1 nanosecond is a billonith of a second. Sorry. BUT NO.

Personality is also extremely unreadable and it has no sentences.. just 2 big sentences..


Please fix this.


Tier: Up to moose, once this is fixed.




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Mon Jun 13, 2011 1:05 pm
Quote:
Shunko-Wapu = A far advanced version of the already mighty Shunko, Unlike the Shunko which works by surrounding her back and arms with pressurized Kidō The Shunko-Wapu cover's her entire body and creates wing's of Pressurized Kido upon her back. This has made it so she has to wear specialized undergarments to avoid becoming naked within a battle leaving only her pants and bra on. Much like the original Shunko this technique can allow her to instantly neutralize an opponent's movement, apart from enhancing their arms and legs for battle. The Kidō itself can also be controlled and fired at opponents from her body, and can be used to create massive explosions. Not only this the special and pressurized kido acts not only outside of the body but inside aswell. The kido within acts like lightning manipulating and speeding up her cell''s allowing for a vast amount of speed to be utilized for her this means around 5x more than her normal speed. Not only that it seems to speed up the healing process greatly. In this form she can use the same techniques that can be used in shunko tho at a more advanced range.

Edited


Your grammar is off in this. Also, whats up with the near enough total strip? And.. as for healing process. WHAT HEALING PROCESS. Also, you word it like it enhances their arms and legs for battle.. Removed + it does enhance arms and legs just like the original

Also, you should remove all the misc spells, as they are mostly unclassifed/non-canon Kido, and unnamed too. - Misc and unnamed are all cannon

As for the other Kidos, take Itto Kaso/Kuroitsugi out there. While its reasonable to say that Yourichi is a master at Kido, I doubt she would EVER use Kido as high as that. Removed

Quote:
Burst Wart : One of Yourichi's hidden and un-seen techniques. By utilzing her true speed she can literally Teleport in a way unlike many other's briefly leaving the dimension for a total of 0.1 nano second's the longer the distance the more spiritual energy it takes. Edited


This is insane. 0.1 Nanosceonds? Not even SHADIN, -THE- Fastest on the site could go that fast.. 1 nanosecond is a billonith of a second. Sorry. BUT NO. Edited

Personality is also extremely unreadable and it has no sentences.. just 2 big sentences.. Edited


Please fix this.


"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."[

"Heart and Soul are connected, what is important is where is the heart."
Shihôin Yoruichi
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Tue Jun 14, 2011 6:14 am
Bump


"Just like a person holding a sword trying to protect something. That maybe one's life, or place in society, or reputation, things that one loves, things that one believes; it matters not if it's good or bad, the will to 'protect it' does not change."[

"Heart and Soul are connected, what is important is where is the heart."
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