Kessho the Arrancar

GENETICS

Character Name:
Kessho

Character True Age:250

Character Appearance Age:
15

Character Gender:
Male

Orientation:
Under the Cero Espada

Personality:

Loyalty: Kessho is very loyal to those that have earned his loyalty. But his Loyalty does not come with out a price. You first have to prove to Kessho. That you are not a scared little Coward. Since Kessho hate's coward's and hate's to have to deal with them.

Shy: Kessho is unusually shy and quiet. When around women. This is because he is extremely shy and "innocent". Since he was not had much experience with women. But if Kessho is cool with you his shyness will not show up.

Laid back: Kessho is very uncomplaining and easy to get along with. He normally fades into the background, and doesn't annoy anyone. He usually does not care about thing's unless they have something to do with him. But he does love to jump into conversation's. Just so that he can talk. Since he loves to talk sometime's.

Bravery: Kessho is very brave. Putting his life on the line for him self and other's at time's. But Kessho only put's his life on the line when he think's the situation honestly deserve's it. And he will only put his life on the line for those who deserve it to. Since he does not think he should lose his life for a person who does not deserve his blood shed.

GENETIC LOOKS

Appearance:

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Bone Appearance:
Kessho's bone is over the his right arm. Right where his shoulder and torso connect.

Hollow Hole:
Kessho's hole is at the bottom of his stomach. Touching the topic of his pelvis bone

Reitsu Colour:
Purple

ZANPAKUTÔ

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Racial Abilities:

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RESSERECCION

Resereccion Name:
Shōton

Resereccion Release Phrase:
crystal swarm through my blood as i prepare for war
Release Actions:
Kessho will take his sword in his right hand and hold it. Having it go straight like the way his body is.

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SKILLS

(leave the skills alone until the application is approved. You can then go back and add them if you want to)

Skill Level: Hierro: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Pesquisa: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level: Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

PAST

History:
Kessho was born into the world to a average family. But his parent's did not want him because Kessho was not like most kid's even at birth. Kessho looked like a normal child but did not act like one. Kessho was wild an untamed as a child. So they took him to a monastery. And left him to be raised by monk's. And as a young child Kessho was not like most of the kid's there. He was different. And he really did not want to be a monk like most f the other kid's did. So while they spent most of there time practicing and studding the way of the monk.

Kessho was off getting into trouble. Even thought he was suppose to leave the monastery. Kessho found a way out. Where he would go to a small village. And even though he was not old enough. He would go into the bar and drink and gamble. But most of the time Kessho would get into fight's. Because he was cheating at gambling. And stealing stuff from the store. But most the time. Kessho found a way out of the trouble. Whether he promised to do something or told them a fake story.

But one day while Kessho was out in the city and away from the monastery. He tried to cheat a man in the city he had never met. In a game of card's. Since Kessho. Had found a deck of card's in the monastery one day that he fingered that a kid had got and the monk's had took away. And so Kessho took them. Because they looked just like the one's they used at the bar. And so Kessho took the card with him. The next time he went to the village to go gambling. He had decided that he was going to hide the card's in the sleeve of his close. Since they where not like the long baggy robe's that they had to where at the monastery.

Because the first time he went to the city he managed to find and steel some close. And find a quick way to make a little money so that he could gamble. He mainly just looked after people's stuff while they went place's shined people show's and other little thing's . TO get his money. Getting the money and new close was not the hard part. Learning where to hide it at the monastery was the hard part. Since the monk's went thew there room's every day to make sure there room's where clean and everything was in the right place.

Bone Appearance: Can you describe this more? Cause that doesn't give me an idea what it looks like.

Abilities:

Zanji will shoots a small ball of purple resta that act's like gravity from his hand and what ever the ball' hit's that's tier is lower than Zanji's will be thrown back. at a high force and speed of about 120 MPH

This is alright, but too fast. I'd say it just throws them rather than stupidly fast.

Note if your Tier is lower than Zanji he is able to change the Pressure of your attack but he is not able to completely able to stop it. Just weaken the force of the attack.

i don't like that mainly because your altering the opponent which is God mod. Please remove that part, the rest is fine and a nice idea.

Zanji Creates a gravitational field that smashes the opponents' body to the ground. This is used to prevent opponents from counterattacking. This only work's if the target's tier is lower than Zanji's. But not it only work's for a post after that target will be able to get up.

i presume that when this is used, a strong enough character could stand up through this. Also, I wouldn't say it lasts for an entire post because that hinders movement and the opponents ability to dodge or parry.

is a larger and stronger form of Reis and will hit those that are hit by it with a force and speed of about 500 MPH. this attack is able to work on a person 1 Tier above Zanji's. If any higher the attack may be able to be deflected if timed right.

You have worded that weirdly. I see its stronger and that, but reword it. Also, this is too fast I think.

This is a very Devastatingly destructive beam of gravity that can pulverize large areas. Zanji can control this attack with his arm, and often uses it to drive a circle around himself. It is also used as a bigger version of Gravirei. And everything within the circle beside's Zanji is smashed to the ground. But does not work if your Tier is higher than Zanji's

What is the gravirei? Also, what exactly is this move because from what i've read, I presume its a long beam that can alter its direction like a cero.

A double-layered gravitational sphere. The outer sphere prevents the opponent from escaping, while the inner sphere draws all matter within the outer sphere inside. This sphere is the perfect Arena for Zanji. once in it the target is not able to see because it is pitch black and can be very hard for them to move because of the intense pressure in the sphere. The sphere has about a 15M radius

This sounds strangely similar to Tosen kaname's Bankai. A sphere that renders inside movement. It also renders their vision and... well its tosens Bankai. get rid of it.

Zanji is also able to summon wolf's of all shape and size's to fight for him. These Wolf's also have the ability where if they touch you and your tier is lower than Zanji's your weight will increase by about 3x' what you way at first.

now were heading into Starrk and izuru territory. You havent stated the size, speed, power of the wolf or wolves and how many there are. Also, increasing the weight when in contact is god mod. if the wolf just sat on someones foot it would cause them to collapse, then their entire weight would be crushed because the thing is sitting on them. i don't think the summoning of wolves should be included or at least these factors are taken into consideration.

Finally, your history is a tough read. he was looked after by wolves is believable, but some kids randomly decided to try and capture him? he also managed to kill one of them and suddenly the village wanted him dead? Also your description of going through from human to hollow and arrancar is so short.

ahrived