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Jeff just Jeff
Jeff just Jeff
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Joined : 2011-05-15
Posts : 102

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Wed Jun 08, 2011 9:10 am
S H I N I G A M I

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name:Jeff Shunki

Gender:Male

Age:1000 looks 25

Appearance: lieutenant of squad 12 Jeff Shunki The_Sword

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P E R S O N A L I T Y

Personality:Jeff is a friendly individual to his comrades, and sometimes even his enemies. Jeff is usually quite layed back and relaxed even in battle. Jeff loves all of his comrades and whenever they are injured he takes them off the battle field immediately to whomever is nursing at the time however if he is injured he pushes on. He loves to drink and have fun to an extent and usually after a great victory you find him tipsy or just completely drunk. When Jeff is on a serious job such as a Hollow attack he becomes more serious then most would think was possible for him.

Jeff is a respected and friendly leader whom excepts mistakes as a growing process and does not mind them to much. Jeff was picked for his division for 2 reasons 1 hes one of the most intellectual captains they have and 2 he loves research. Jeff usually is quite relaxed around his soldiers but when they're in danger hes not as friendly as some think of him as and he will do anything to get them out of danger. Something most people don't realize is how much Jeff loves to research things such as poisons what will happen in certain circumstances against different zanpokutos et cetra. He is quite an extraordinary person.



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B A C K G R O U N D

Jeff was a smart guy in the 1400s who loved to hang out his friends tanner, Jess, and Franky. He was a tall guy standing at around 6 foot 7 and this helped him intimidate anyone messing with his friends. One day his village was attacked and 1 of his friends would have to die because there wasn't enough room to hide them all. Jeff ran out and got killed.However he was happy because his friends lived.

When Jeff died he went to the soul society and for a while he was happy until he heard of these things called soul reapers and he immediately wanted to be one. Jeff joined the soul academy and passed after a few years there. Jeff jumped from squad to squad eventually becoming a seated soul reaper. He worked his way up the ranks in squad 12 and even fixed his zanpokutos abilitys with poison. He was liked quite well by his subordinates and leaders alike and this helped him greatly.

Jeff is a great trainer even by captain or lieutenant standards. He is considered the pinnacle of training hard by many of his comrades he even has open challenges to test out his skills against his squad thought astonishingly no one has been injured. Jeff eventually worked his way up to lieutenant with nothing but hard work and discipline, thought you wouldn't think that if you met him. Jeff still to this day in many peoples mind is the hardest working soul reaper there is.




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Zanpakutô Spirit Name: Zanjen
Appearance:
A long blade that i about 4 feet in length and a dusty gray color.
[b]Inner World: a science lab

[b]Sealed Zanpakutô Apperance :
lieutenant of squad 12 Jeff Shunki The_Sword

Sealed
Zanpakutô Abilities:
Jeff can secrete a poison from holes in his sword by pressing a button the poison paralyzes whatever limb the poison can enter the blood through a post after the poison enters they cant move that limb for 2 post.

Release: (What you have to say in order to release into Shikai. Try to be original please!)

Shikai Description: (Your character or your sword's new appearance)

Shikai Abilities: (What are the abilities your Shikai has? Do not overpower your shikai.)


Bankai Description: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

Bankai Abilities: (This does not apply until you learn Bankai)

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R P S A M P L E

Roleplay
Sample:Jeff was on patrol outside the seretai wear he had been hearing noises for a few weeks and he wanted to investigate so he walked out to take a look. It had been 2 hours and he had heard nothing. He tryed to detect spiritual pressure but could not feel anything. he waited and waited nothing. As patrol was about to end he felt a strange spititual pressure he went and found a high leveled adjuchas feasting on human the adjuchas stopped and looked at him. "Bad bad whatever im afraid you must die" Jeff said while drawing his sword. The adjuchas jumped out at him oh no you don't with a slash Jeff put a nonfatal but painful injury in the adjuchas."I will not prolong your suffering" and with that Jeff killed it. "What a boring battle time to head back suppose. Jeff reported this to the head captain and with that the night was over for him or so most thought "time for some research".



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S K I L L S H E E T

{Please do not fill out the following until your character has a tier}

General Skills

  • Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner


Racial Skills

  • Hoho: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Kidou: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Zanjutsu: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
  • Hakuda: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
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M A G I
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Joined : 2011-03-01
Posts : 2181
Age : 27
Location : United Kingdom

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Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:08 pm
DENIED and moved to Denied Applications



EDIT:


Alright, seems you have changed what was told.



The below are the following problems with the app, please check this~

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1000

Age. I've heard this is too old so please change, 100 - 300 would be fine.

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Jeff jumped from squad to squad eventually becoming a soul
reaper in squad 12. He worked his way up the ranks in squad 12 and even fixed his
zanpokutos abilitys with poison.


Here you've also meant being in Squad 12, repeat, No one can be in squad 12 until there app is approved off and they apply and are accepted within a squad.


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Jeff is a respected and friendly leader whom excepts
mistakes as a growing process and does not mind them to much. Jeff was
picked for his division for 2 reasons

You've also mentioned squad within this part of the personality. Please change.


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Comments/Notes: Explained in the above.

Tier: 3+3 once fixed





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M A G I
M A G I
Satan's Spawn
Joined : 2011-03-01
Posts : 2181
Age : 27
Location : United Kingdom

Member Info
Platinum Points:
lieutenant of squad 12 Jeff Shunki Left_bar_bleue0/0lieutenant of squad 12 Jeff Shunki Empty_bar_bleue  (0/0)
Tiers:
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Wed Jun 08, 2011 3:53 pm
Moved to Archived Character Apps due to multiple post. Original has been moved to Accepted.




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