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Jellal Fernandes
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General Information

Name: Lyon Bastia

Appearance Age: 18-19

True Age: 347
Gender: Male

Overall Appearance

Personality:
On top, most would consider Lyon’s personality to be very laid back
and friendly. He is almost always polite, and will still and listen to
just about anyone. In fact, many find him almost eerily easy to talk to.
The boy nods and smiles in all the right places, and often has just the
right thing to say to another’s problems.
Due to his history of
constantly living on the move as a child, Lyon has lost a lot of his
ability to connect with others on a deeper then a “politely friendly”
level. There is always the knowledge that no matter how nice someone is,
he will not be around long enough for it to matter. With so much practice at meeting new people he has become an
expert at knowing what people want to hear.Of course this isn’t fully true. Deep down he is a rather
thoughtful person who enjoys the tiny pleasures of others. He’s happier
watching happy interactions between his friends then jumping right in
the middle of things, only piping in when talked to directly.
Appearance: Lyon Bastia Lyon
Height: 164 cm
Weight: 70kg

Zanpakuto (Sealed) Description

Zanpakuto Name: Danshaku (男爵 Baron)

Zanpakuto Spirit: Lyon Bastia Anime-6 ( Credits to the owner)
Zanpakuto World: Cold iron field.
Sealed Zanpakuto Appearance: Lyon Bastia Reverse_Blade_Katana_Blue (Credits to the owner)
Release Phrase:Sorera o tsubusu ( それらを潰す Crush them)

Zanpakotu (Shikai) Description

Shikai Appearance:
Lyon Bastia Istockphoto_3892584-knight-iron-gloves-on-wooden-table (Credits to the owner)

Shikai Abilities:
The Zanpaktou weigh about 50+ KG but when used by Lyon , it is as light as a feather.

Power boost: Enhanced strength , enhanced speed , enhanced durability , enhanced evasiveness , enhanced stamina and enhanced defense.Enhanced spiritual power

Iron Dragon's Scales
(鉄龍の鱗 Tetsuryū no Uroko): Lyon covers part of his body (or the entirety of it) with steel scales
to dramatically increase his offense and defense. These scales are
strong enough to shatter bone, and resilient against regular flames.
This scale is much more harder than normal iron.

Iron Dragon's Roar
(鉄竜の咆哮 Tetsuryū no Hōkō): It releases shards of metal to shred his opponents
body.The shards are released from the user's Shikai.

Iron Dragon's Club
(鉄竜棍 Tetsuryūkon): He
transforms his arm or leg into a large steel club, increasing punching
and kicking power. He can also create multiple smaller clubs from the
end of the original, hitting many enemies at once.

Iron Dragon's Sword
(鉄竜剣 Tetsuryūken): Similar to
Iron Dragon's Club, he transforms his arm or leg into a large steel
blade. The sword can also function like a chainsaw,
effectively increasing its damage.

Iron Dragon's Lance: Demon Logs
(鉄竜槍 鬼薪 Tetsuryūsō: Kishin):Lyon extends one arm towards his target's direction, with the fingers
outstretched which he rapidly fires several iron spears at the enemy
multiple times.

Zanpakotu (Bankai) Description

Bankai Appearance:Basutābaron (バスターバロン Buster Baron) Lyon Bastia Buster_baron01 Lyon Bastia Buster_baron02

Buster Baron, a gigantic knight-like robot 57 m high with a weight of 550 tonnes, that attacks primarily with its fists. Its left and right shoulders, however, can be inserted with up to six shinigami or vizard or Arrancar or Quincy or Human.One
modification is its ability to be converted into a makeshift rocket. It
is also equipped with two knuckle dusters.The movement of Buster Baron is according to the user's movement.If Buster Baron is destroyed , it returns to its sealed state and Buster Baron is unusable for a while but its Shikai is usable.

(Credits to the owner and the wiki)

Bankai Abilities: If a shinigami was to be in Buster Baron , Buster Baron is able to use
the shinigami's Shikai/ Shikai and Bankai. If it were to be a vizard and
Arrancer , Buster Baron is allowed to use the hollow mask and
resurreccion. If a Quincy , Buster Baron can use the Quincy's power.


Power boost: Enhanced strength , enhanced speed , enhanced
durability , enhanced evasiveness , enhanced stamina and enhanced
defense.Enhanced spiritual power

Enhanced Shikai Abilities: All its Shikai abilities will be enhanced to another higher level.

Karma Demon: Iron Spiral (
業魔・鉄螺線形 Gōma Tetsu Rasen): Lyon uses his spiritual energy to
transform his legs into a giant drill. The size of it depends on the length of his legs.


Hollow Mask and Inner Hollow

(I do not own any of the below.Credits to the wiki and owner)
Inner Hollow Description:
He is an average height, lean built person with tan skin, black
eyes, and spiky rose-colored hair. He always wears a scarf that is
detailed with white scales. He has a scar on the right side of his neck that is visible in the few instances he does not wear his scarf.Hollow Lyon's outfit mainly consists of a black waistcoat with gold
trimmings over his chest with no shirt underneath, short white trousers
that go down to his knees, a wide black wristband on his left wrist and
sandals along with his scarf. He has also been known to wear a rolled up
comforter strapped across his back, though he rarely carries it in
battle.
Inner Hollow Personality:Hollow Lyon has a carefree and reckless nature, and, despite his constant
brawls with the other vizard, is a fiercely loyal and
protective friend. He thinks things through in a straightforward manner
that usually involves taking things "head on". Even when faced with
obvious hostility or previous grudges, he rarely holds a grudge or
negative feelings towards an enemy, usually seeing the good in them.He constantly tries to prove his strength to others. Due to his continuous desire for battles,he develops and later shows
great wit in battle, quickly identifying his opponent's weaknesses and
forming strategies to block the plans of his enemies. At times, he even
defeats enemies with just his wit and trickery without throwing a punch. He also seems to be very stubborn, hardly ever admitting defeat.

Hollow Mask Appearance:Lyon Bastia Vizard_Masks_Set-1

( I do not own any of the above. Credits to the wiki and owner.)
Hollow Powers:

Stronger attacks: He is able to use his Shikai and Bankai abilities in his hollow and it is stronger than before.

Bala:Unlike some Arrancar and Vizard, Lyon can fire his Bala at a faster rate.

Cero:Like all Vizard, Arrancar and Hollow , Lyon gains the ability to fire cero from his fingertips. His cero is greyish in color.

Mask Shielding: The mask can protect Lyon from any kind of attacks. The mask minimize the damage that will occur on Lyon.

Sonido: While using the mask , Lyon gains the ability to use Sonido at a faster speed.

Power boost: Enhanced strength , enhanced speed , enhanced
durability , enhanced evasiveness , enhanced stamina and enhanced
defense.Enhanced spiritual power

Hyper-speed Regeneration:This form shows the ability to instantly regenerate any wound and even a missing limb.

Resurreccion Appearance:

Lyon Bastia White_Iron_Dragon_by_AironShiroi (Credits to the owner)

Resurreccion Abilities:

Power boost: Enhanced strength , enhanced speed , enhanced
durability , enhanced evasiveness , enhanced stamina and enhanced
defense, Enhanced spiritual power

Cero: Lyon can fire cero from his mouth and finger tips. It is more destructive and powerful than before.

Hyper Speed Combat: In his resureccion , he fights in a very fast rate. He is able to create after images of him to confuse his enemy.

Stronger attacks: He is able to use his Shikai and Bankai abilities in his resurreccion and it is stronger than before.

Steel Armor: His wings , head and arms are made from iron.

Enhanced Hollow ability: His hollow ability is enhanced to a higher level.His hollow abilities became stronger than ever.

Shinigami Skill Level- Kidou: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Shinigami Skill Level- Swordsmanship: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Sonido: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Hollow Skill Level- Cero/Bala: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master
Skill Level- Hand-to-Hand: Beginner/Adept/Advanced/Master

Background/Roleplay Sample


Background:
~ Human Arc~
Lyon was born in a normal family. He was born on 27th of January and was the 3rd in the family.His mother works as a manager in a company while his father is an iron smith.He wanted to follow his father's footstep. He goes to school at a nearby school when he was a kid. His parents are always busy so he always walks to school. Few years later , he was 16. He learned about iron smith from his father but off course he went to high school. Not long he mastered about iron smith. Seeing his parents were always busy , he moved to his uncle at a normal town. It was always quiet and it is very soothing and relaxing. There was a high school nearby so he school there.One day , he was just reading the newspaper. Suddenly , he saw a post about there was always killing every week.He suspects there was a killer. The next day , he saw someone dead at his school gate. He saw a big footprint on the dead man. Lyon decided to investigate this. Few days later , he discovered nothing. He decided to learn about swords smith. He did fully master swords smith. Suddenly , coming from no where , he heard someone coming. Then the footsteps became bigger and bigger and louder and louder. Lyon checked and he saw nothing. Then the footsteps he saw was approaching him so he decided to run. Then he saw the shadow of the "thing".The shadow became bigger and bigger. Lyon ran as fast as he can. Then he saw the legs and hands of the "thing". Later , the "thing" was known as a hollow. He had read about this. It is when a soul who did not go to the other side. It needs to be purified by a shinigami. The hollow scratched Lyon's back. Lyon lost a lot of blood and leaving a trail of blood.Lyon was about to die but he tried to lived on. He later fell and the hollow is in front of him. Lyon closed his eyes and the hollow pierced him. Lyon died and suddenly a person in a black shihakusho came and killed the hollow and brought Lyon to the Soul Society.

~Vizard Arc~
At the soul society, he thanked the Shinigami for saving him. He lived there for a long time. After a few years , he heard someone talking about the Vizard Corps. It is a group for Vizard. Lyon asked them about Vizard. They said that Vizard are Shinigami-Holllow Hybrid which also known as a Shinigami with Hollow DNA in their soul. Then , the Shinigami who saved Lyon gave Lyon Hollow DNA.Lyon then injected the Hollow DNA into his soul.It was painful but Lyon withstand the pain and seemingly survived.After that , Lyon became a Vizard. Then , Lyon realized that there was another person in him, which was his hollow. Lyon asked who he is and he replied that he is the hollow him. Not long they came to an understanding. Lyon trained his Vizard powers and seemingly to become more powerful.He is able to use his resureccion perfectly too. Since he had learned about iron when he was alive , part of his resureccion is made from iron.Then , he joined the Gotei 13. He was placed into a Division and trained his Shikai. He master his Shikai in few years and decided to train his Bankai. His hollow side helped him train his Bankai and Lyon master it with ease.He mastered his Bankai almost 2 years.Both of his Shikai and Bankai are made from iron and Lyon had made some abilities for his Shikai and Bankai.He wanted to join the Vizard Corps but he needs permission from the leader. Now , Lyon just wanders what will happen to him in the future.

Role Play Sample:(4th Character)


Last edited by Sekima Hiwatari on Wed Jun 08, 2011 7:54 am; edited 4 times in total


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Shikai Abilities:
The Zanpaktou can create anything made from iron.


Mask Shielding: The mask can protect Lyon from any kind of attacks. The mask minimize the damage that will occur on Lyon but the Mask will break.

Mask Regeneration: If the mask were to break , it will regenerate itself in no time.


Steel Armor: His wings , head and arms are made from iron so it can protect Lyon from any kind of attacks.




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The above are the things you'll have to look through, To start off with, "The Zanpakuto can create anything made from iron" This is a little vague so could you perhaps describe in more detail, i.e, You can make anything from metal? If this is then what's the maximum size you can make?


Second, This. If the mask were to break, you put, it will regenerate itself in no time. That's not explained at all. You'd have to put a post cool down. I'd say around about 4 posts. Because if it were to regenerate straight away it's like saying he can't take any attacks whatsoever.


With Steel armor, this is like saying that nothing can hit Lyon. You will have to put in something like a higher tier can get through that armor, because they could.




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Wed Jun 08, 2011 6:57 am
This application is amock with little descriptions and god modding. Please fix what i have denoted below.



Inner world: You need to describe it. I have no clue wtf that actually is.

Zanpakuto Spirit: Describe them! I have no idea who the shit they are or what they do!

Shikai: What are these shards on his body? How big are they? can they move? how are they used?

Describe what dragons roar actually does please. It releases shards? how big are they? how fast? what actually are you releasing? where are they released from?

Those spears he can shoot, how big are they? what do they look like? how fast? recharge time? how are they fired? Where from exactly and how is this possible?

I dont understand how a punch can be harder when covered in scales? if he is wearing gauntlets already, his punches would already be harder? Isn't that just logic?

Bankai: As good as having a picture is for a bankai, I don't know how big this guy now is. Will he stand taller or roughly the same size? Does it make him heavier or wider etc?


a gigantic knight-like robot 57 m high with a weight of 550 tonnes, that attacks primarily with its fists. Its left and right shoulders, however, can be inserted with up to six shinigami or vizard or Arrancar or Quincy or Human.

now i see what sizes he has! Why isnt that in appearance? anyway, Wtf is this ability? Does he spawn a giant robot or something because i presume so? That certainly needs describing And what is this about inserting people into it? That doesn't make enough sense.


If a shinigami was to be in Buster Baron , Buster Baron is able to use
the shinigami's Shikai/ Shikai and Bankai. If it were to be a vizard and
Arrancer , Buster Baron is allowed to use the hollow mask and
resurreccion. If a Quincy , Buster Baron can use the Quincy's power.

Remove that. You cannot copy another characters powers.


Where Lyon claps his hands
together above his head then swipes down a gigantic sword which
destroys a huge area; even if the sword does not hit, the resulting
wide-spread tremor affecting the general area is enough to incapacitate
all else nearby.

he claps and makes a big explosion pretty much. Thats cool and all, but your not going to be ridding a huge crater in the ground using this. reword it to avoid misunderstanding. I don't even understand what he is doing. Does a sword just appear out of nowhere? if so, what does it look like?

What the hell is the drill as well? how big is it? how do his legs just become a drill? Thats plain odd, explain better

hollow mask: You don't choose how much control you have over your mask until your tier is assigned and you fill out the skill sheet. That shows how much control you have.

Your bala = fuck that shit. You can't change how heavy it is, you just put more reitsu into it. Also, 100 at a time is rubbish. Remove that number. its alright saying you can fire it fast, but don't say your better than most cause that just makes me think your stuck up and stubborn.

Again with the cero, you don't just say its wider and more destructive. Your tier determines its strength matched with the skill sheet.

by the way, your mask can't just not break, then when it does, be fully replenished later for 4 posts. Masks are there that match your reitsu, meaning yes it can break but it can also be rebuilt by reitsu. At least i think thats how it works. When your out of reitsu, the mask will break until you can;t hold it no longer.

You can't instantly regenerate. That is a hollow trait, and a mask does not give that power. if ichigo was injured with his mask active, it wouldn't regenerate. However if he was in full hollow form, he was a hollow so he could. there is a difference.

Resserecion: Again, instant regen is a big no no. Lower it so you regenerate OVER TIME not bam im back bro!

You state his armour can defend any attack except higher tier. Well take that off now. yes you can have the armour, but it cant defend ANY attack if the person is weaker than you. You can say it defends more than skin would, but not completely for any ability.
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