A cry of a hollow.

There hadn't been many hollows around this area in a while, this meant any shinigami on Hollow duty were pretty much free to do anything, and as we know most shinigami love the human world and the food it provides.
This boy didn't care either way, he just wanted a fight.
It wasn't long since he had graduated from the shino academy and already he had been sent on partial hollow duty for a week.

His name? Kenrai, and right now he was sitting on a bench waiting for atleast SOMETHING to happen. He wasn't in any form of gigai which meant no humans could see them unless of course they could see spirits but it looked like that he wouldn't see any one who could do that today. He simply watched the humans get on with their lives.

Someone was here? This boy could sense it. This alerted him to look around all though of course he didn't try the sky. Jumping up from the bench he soon jumped behind him before carefully scoping the town for this strange presence that he could feel.

"Who's there.."

He said in a bold strong voice, His blood-lusted red coloured eyes scoped the area once again before stopping, the people whom lived within Karakura couldn't see him, they just went on doing what they were doing...But something was going to happen sooner or later.

"Come out now, Or I'll fuckin' drag you out!"

With this he unsheathed his Zanpakuto with a soft growl, defensive stance on as he awaited for a attack to happen.

{Alright: I've spoken this out with Paco and he asked for any grammer or spelling errors he made. So I shall do this at every post to help him out.

Good points: You observed what my character was wearing, his thoughts e.t.c (y) As well as describing what your character was doing and it's thoughts.

Spelling errors: The first free sentences are fine! ^^ Remember the spelling for Hueco Mundo is the C instead of a K. In the sentence 'Some Kind' replace that with 'A strange looking boy' As Some kind doesn't make sense :3 Before Curiosity make sure to place a " ' s " On the end to show it belongs to Paco, so Paco's Curiosity.

Well done and Keep it up! ^_^ }

{You've started allowing Paco to observe Kenrai and how he's different from the others, Seems like you're closely observing my posts and adding that detail so good job (y) I can't really pick up any grammar errors other than the sentence 'It was even stranger that the peoples around him' You don't need the s at the end of Peoples :3 Also, near the end replace come with 'calm' and quiet and the last word should be replaced with anything. Other than, great! ^^}