Gomon Kokoro

Sat Jun 04, 2011 3:36 pm

[ D E M O N T E M P L A T E ]

+ B A S I C I N F O +

Name: Gomon Kokoro
Age: Truly, about 1200 years old, looks no older than 25
Gender:Male

Shifter Appearance:

Younger Form:

In Gomons younger form he looks about 14-15, a rather young individual. His hair his rather short and black with a little bit of a spike to it. His eyes glare a dark brown at anyone near him as he thinks of ways to destroy them later. They can seem rather innocent or serious depending. Some say if you look into his eyes you can hear souls screaming for help but in reality they probably are. Gomon is a tan-peachy colored, in this form. He also stands about 5 foot 9 and weights 136 pounds, and has a rather nice amount of musical while keeping his thinner form.
　
He wears looser clothing in this form. Its usually a black tank top and some kind of sweat pants. When he’s going out to the store or something hell wear a pair of skinny jeans or shorts with some kind of t-shirt or undershirt with a over buttons up t-shirt with a collar.

Adult:

In Gomons Older form he stands about 6 foot 3 and 160 pounds. He looks about 24 in this appearance, even thought its just ten years older then the other its still has a major difference. His facial features look more mature and man like then his teen aged form. His hair seems slightly shorter than it was before. He has a nice thin scar on his chin. Many other demons say this was Gomons true human form and his younger was his child form. But that is simply not true, this is just one of his favorite forms.
　
Gomon wears more fancy formal wear in this one. A nice black tux blue instead of white. He also has a black tie on it, which is just reasonable. During times he doesn’t feel so formal hell wear just the undershirt without the tie and it slightly unbuttoned being half tugged into his pants half not.

True Human Form:

Now this is where Gomons true form comes into play. In this form he stands about 6 feet and weights about 155 pounds. Now that isn’t the good part. He is rather tan and has several large scars over his face and body. You can tell them by the darker tone of skin. His hair is short and darker then the void in space. He has three different colored feathers tied to his hair, yellow, red, and blue. Gomons eyes are the color of the blood that stains a white dress.
　
In his true form he prefers to wear leather. Tight leather jeans, a white dress shirt tugged in and a nice leather jacket covering it. Other times its fairly normal. Black dress pants, black jacket and a red under shirt. He will wear a variety of different things.

True Appearance:
　

True Form:

In Gomons true form the only that changes from his real appearance is the face he has razor sharp teeth that are stained with despair. He grows re horn from the top of his head and bat wings, some people call him the tradional demon. His eyes glow a bright blood red no matter how bright it is, you can tell they are glowing brighter than the sun itself. He gains slightly sharper nails to claw your eyes out and so forth.

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+ P E R S O N A L I T Y +

Personality:
　
Sneaky: Gomon can be rather sneaky from time to time. If he wants something he will eventually take it from you. But that’s only the minor side, but truly in his head he is thinking of the best time and place to take you away and give you a couple of deep gashes, and how to do it. He‘ll follow you around in a quiet manner while acting like a normal person, making it seem totally normal to have someone walk behind you. Sometimes he may even pass you but really get behind you later.
　
Torturous: Gomon loves watching the people suffer, from almost anything. He gets a thrill out of it, in fact. He loves it so much he actually smiles and finds it humorous. Gomon will commence his own tortures. His will last the longest out of ever last bustards in hell. Gomon will slowly scrap off your skin, pluck ever last hair from your body, rip out ever last vine, break every bone, cut off every body piece, jab needles into you, poison you, anything he can do to you he certainly will.
　
Fun: Behind his darker sides you can have fun and be easy going with him. Although just be careful with your nasty rude remarks and jokes towards him, or he will defiantly hunt you. Gomon likes to run around and have fun with what ever people he meets, that he hasn’t murdered yet. He’ll play video games, sports, work out, shop almost anything you wanna do he’s up for it.
　
Lustful: Behind the scenes Gomon is basically a whore. He will fuck almost anything near him that is living, excluding animals and plants, and so forth. He could careless if your male, female, trap, tranny, he’ll most likely fuck yah. He has no problem just killing you afterwards anyways so just listen to him for a bit. Hell lets girls flirt and gag over him, and guys that fall for him, hell torture them a bit just because he finds it rather fun.

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+ B A C K G R O U N D +

History
　
Gomon was born, guess what, a human. Yes a weak little human with no powers at all. The gum at the bottom of your shoe, the one ex stalker girlfriend that wont leave you the fuck alone because you went for the chick with the bigger tits, yes that’s how shitty the human race is compared to the chain of life. Gomon was born human to human parents, who lived in a normal human home, in a normal human society. I know humans are so boring and no one wants to live like one. The humans are the bottom of the food chain for the rest of the races. Gomon was the child who was picked on at school, like any other weak normal human who was just another tack in the wall. Gomon and his normal family couldn’t really do much about it, like any other normal human family could.
　
Gomon after he aged to become a successful male he was managed to be tied down in his own home and was tortured. It left him the scars all over his body, and their was nothing for anyone to do for him at the hospital. But what happened next was the deal of souls. The lord of hell managed to make a deal with him, in exchange for his services and his human life, he could continue his life and get revenge on the person that tortured the life out of him. Gomon agreed without hesitation. His wish was granted, the life of a demon.
　
Gomon left his human life behind him and transformed his normal appearance into that of a young boy, about the age of 15. Soon after he left his human life he tracked the man down in days. Gomon slide his hand behind the mans color and pulled him into the depths of hell. Down there, the torture began. He used a katana to put non-lethal gashes in the mans body. He let the mans body heal form the gashes that cried the red tears from the veins that Gomon placed on him. Then he pulled out his guns. The mans weapon of choice was dual pistols, so the idea clicked, why not torture the man with the very weapon that tortured him. Gomon shot him in every possible place with the medic demons there to heal him so he could do it again. He got the rush of his life doing that to him. He kept healing him so he could test him limits and powers of a demon, and used him more or less as a tool for training.
　
Over time the 9^th circle recruited him. He tortured even his fellow members, not caring about the consequences, as he saw it the more torture he himself receives it makes him stronger. So Gomon got some torture for not obeying orders to spare someone’s life or anything like that, he just tortured them until their body was nothing. At that stage he raised through the rank none the less. The demons feared him for his torture intent and how power he had become already. People refused to even go near him in fear to get tortured. Gomon always picks one demon to be his training subject for torture and after that one dies he finds a new one to torture and toy with.

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+ P O W E R S +

Natural Abilities: He is able to shape shift between his human forms and his demon form.Kage Chōkyō-shi, Bōru Shi, flight, and eyes that can see in the dark.
Gomon has the ability to control the air currents. He can make them as big, small, fast, hot, cold, and the direction they flow at. Although the one trick is the currents always have to go back and around Gomon to complete the cycle.

Unique Abilities:
Imps: http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t2618-the-imps#13850
Dark Imps: http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t2619-the-dark-imps
Dome Of Pure Darkness: http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t1948-dome-of-pure-darkness
　
Cocolich: http://bleachplatinumhearts.forumotion.com/t2621-cacolich
And all the other ones Raen created, that will be useable by me with the approite teir.
　
Hellpain (in customs)
Underworld Rain (in customs)

Shishi Mōdo Appearance: Gomons shishi form is not much different from his true form. It is rather more devil like though. The horns go into a curl to a sharp point and he gains the devil like tail. His wings become larger and a second pair grows in, they become red, his nails become longer and they become red. His scars start to show more brightly and look like they are black on his skin.

Shishi Mōdo Abilities:
In this mod Gomon gains the ability move air were ever he pleases while making a gap with air. In that space there is no drag and there natural resitance making anyone in it able to move to as far as their bodies will let them. He also has the ability to let fire appear around him in small patches the size of baseballs and throw them.

Satsugai Tsūru:
　
Dual Hell Pistols: These pistols fire off a deadly bullet that is almost alive. Once your hit by it, it will start to eat you and move its self though what ever it hits until it gets to the main source of the beings life EX: The brain, the heart, the lung.
　
Hell Katana: This katana has the habit of almost making something more painful than it really is. It has a ridged blade that grinds and cuts almost anything it hit.
　
Hell Dust: A special dust that is sharp as a sealed zanpakuto but as small as dust. If you inhale it, be prepared for bleeding.
　
Dark Ring: A ring that has the ability to cover a field of 200 feet in darkness by converting all light into darkness.
　
Mute Whistle: A small whistle in the shape of a skull that once blown can knock out the foes hearing for 2 posts. It only works if the person is close enough to hear a normal talking voice.
Hells Whip: A whip forged from tortured souls. The whip has razor sharp arrancar bone teeth on it. It has the ability to turn a normal hollow into an arrancar by breaking their mask but consumes their soul and mask making the whip stronger and sharper.

Mukō Jōtai Appearance:
Gomons new appearance is much different. His nails are longer, his hair goes to his waist, and his eyes are brighter then bright. He now has a tail that splits into three ends that act like Cerberus. He now has 3 sets of large black bat wings on his back. Half his body is pure black while the other looks somewhat red and scaly. His feet became more like a raptors crossed with a eagles.

Mukō Jōtai Ablities:
Gomon now as the ability to create large storms by changing the type of pressure the air currents have, as well as the pressure around them. Upon entering this state his reitsu makes a thick black mist that smells like blood. After that a large wind kicks up and it exposes his final form. He can make the currents explode and make a divesting explosion up to 300 feet big. The fire can some become larger and more dense able to break bones and is the size of a volley ball.

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+R P S A M P L E +

Role Play Sample:
　
Gomon looked up from his bed. The window in his room along with everything else that was their everyday. The poor soul in the corner was still there, he smirked and laughed. His body gazed around looking for something to do. It swung around the bed stretching. Gomon allowed his body to stand up slowly as he turned into the teenage form he likes so much. His rudies gazed at the soul in the corner before walking closer to it. The poor soul shivered as he pulled out the whip. Gomon wrapped the whip around its neck and started moving it back and forth like a saw. He laughed as he loved the look in the unfortunate souls eyes. He couldn’t get enough of it, so he stopped. He licked the whip before kicking the soul under his bed and locking the window and the door on his way out.
　
Gomon took his stroll down his kitchen to fetch himself some food. Today was a normal day in hell, the screams of people in the distance and murderous war cries and cracked through every corner of hell. It was almost like the rooster that wakes up the farmers in the old days, but much more pleasing to hear. Gomon poured himself the coffee and grinned as he gently sipped it before he opened up his opened his vortex to the human realm. The walk was fairly short, he still sipped his coffee. Somehow something went wrong with his vortex this morning, he ended up in the mall. Gomon shrugged it off and laughed lightly as he sipped he kept sipping.
　
Gomon lifted his head as he saw some people eating out. But one person stood out. A female with bone on the back of her neck. Gomon knew he wasn’t allowed to do anything to this arrancar but temptation was too great to resist. His body started to speed walk towards him quickly. Soon enough he meet up with the girl at a small ally. His mind trolled with thoughts of torture. Gomon stepped towards he before japing his blade into her side and taking his whistle out and blew it. Nothing was going to hear her screams now. He soon enough tortured her to death and left her in a dumpster.

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+ S K I L L S H E E T +

(DO NOT FILL THESE OUT UNTIL TIER IS GIVEN!!!!)

Racial Skills

Za Koa Manipulation: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Spells/Summonings: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Jigoku Sokudo Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Akuma Kyōdo: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

General Skills

Durability: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
General Speed: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Strength: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner
Weapon Skill: Master/Advanced/Adept/Beginner

Sat Jun 04, 2011 7:57 pm

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Comments/Notes: Everything is good here, but for that natural ablity Air Current control. Right. Is it only usable outside? Can it be used in every place? Can it be used during lets say, a hurricane? How long does the change last? More detail to most of your ablities would be nice. An d your equipment, the hell pistols. Can they be resisted by anything? Is there a way to stop them?

Tier: 2-2 When dat stuff is fixed.

Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:46 pm

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